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arjun a cricketer
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Originally posted by: SanaHolic

loved the prologue..
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part 1

Location : city hospital

A guy was sitting outside ICU looking very pale , he was wearing groom's dress the traditional sherwani but he was looking totally pale & in shock , his cream sherwani was covered in blood , he was totally blank , his eyes glassy...

On the other side a guy was sitting in the hospitals garden staring at the ground, he don't have guts to even face himself his heart is breaking every moment, he can't see his brother in that condition not at all but he can't let him that way too everything is destroyed, it's a mess & here he is standing don't know from where to begin to make everything alright or is it even in his hand to do so, the girl who was his best friend , his world , is lying lifeless in the hospital bed & the girl he love( his thoughts were broken by a girls voice )

Girl : how is she ???????

guy: I don't know ...the doctors hadn't said anything till now... I don't know what to do ??

girl : don't do anything plss , do some mercy on us & don't do anything as if you guys hadn't already done enough , it'll be so kind of you guys

guy said Swaraa ( with so much pain & remorse)

swara : don't start again Mr Sanskar Rawte but listen to me very carefully , if anything happened to my di ,I'll forget everything & the last bit of humanity in me will be dead ,and then you can't even imagine what will happen to you & your family

sanskar : it's your family too ( he was uncertain himself , it was not a statement but a question )

swara : yeah sure if it is na then this would have never happened

saying so she left from there leaving a broken looking sanskar behind...

outside the hospital

the other guy was still sitting looking totally broken , he was lost in deep thoughts...

A girl was running in a room laughing loudly & showing her tongue to a guy

Girl yelling u can't catch me

It is ur maximum speed

Ur running like a tortoise

And the guy suddenly maximized his speed , he caught hold of the girl & started tickling her & both were laughing badly

Then suddenly scene shifted

The girl was crying & saying I know it, thanks for being truthful...

The guy was shaken out of his dream land by his shouting brother...

Sanskar : bhaiii , aap theek toh hai na , bhai talk to me damn it

Guy : hmm, sanskar riya...

Sanskar : bhai , bhabi ko kuch nhi hoga , hum sab hai na unkey sath

Guy :yeh sab meri wajah se huya hai sanskar sirf meri wajah se , na mein unki baat manta na yeh sab kbhi hota...

Sanskar : bhai unhone humein dhoka diya na ki humne unhe , unhone sab kuch tabah kr diya bhai pr hum yahi se ek nayi shurwaat krenge , apna jahan banayenge inn tute huye tukro ko sametkr apna aashiya banayenge , mana ab kbhi bhi sab kuch pehle jaisa nhi hoga pr unki khushi aur unka pyaar lauta ne k liye hum itna toh kr hi skte hai na...

Guy : hmmm , aur yeh mera wada hai tujhse , riya se , swara se aur khud se jb tk mein unki life fir se khushiyo se na bhar du , yeh Arjun Suryakant Rawte chain se nhi baithega...

Sanskar : mein appke sath hu bhai , hum dono mil kr yeh sab theek krenge manzil ka toh pta nhi kb milegi pr iss safar mein meine aapk sath hu...

There talk was interrupted, when they saw the doc coming out of the ICU both rush to him

Arjun : doc ab riya kaisi hai ?? is she alright ?? usse kuch hua toh nhi ?? she is fine right ?? aap bol kyu nhi rahe answer me damn it...

Sanskar : calm down bhai let doc speak first ...

Doc : dekhiye we're so sorry Mr Rawte But hum aapke bache ko nhi bcha skey , because of the bullet & Mrs Rawte is fine but still under observation , we can't say anything about her till tomm morning , take care & stay strong ( saying so the doc left )

Leaving a totally broken Arjun & Sanskar trying to Handel his brother but don't know how to, he couldn't find the words to console him, he didn't know what to do cry or laugh at his fate ...

After sometime it was night , when Swara enter the hospital

Swara : ( rudly ) you guys can leave from here , I'll stay here with diii

Arjun : no , I won't leave riya alone, I would stay here with her

Swara : see , Mr Rawte I have no time to see your melodrama & u r saying as u already hadn't left her alone , so kindly leave us alone & in peace for now & get lost...

Arjun : Swara plss trust me

Swara : never ever again in my life & there is no such a word for me when I'm dealing with you guys

Arjun : swara , it's about riya's security

Swara : that's why I'm asking you guys to leave for once & all, I don't trust my di with you ..

Arjun : u mean , I could harm riya

Swara : I don't mean , I know

Sanskar : bhai , lets go plss ( sanskar drag arjun away from there knowing that only one could stay there at night & there is no way on hell swara is letting them stay with riya after what happened & could he blame her for this , the answer was a big no , the brothers reached the Rawte mansion in sometime & retired to their rooms not sparing a glance at anyone

There rooms were eating them live & suffocating them like they were continuously stabbed at the heart , yet thy couldn't do anything to save themselves ...

Edited by angelariya - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing
Continue soon
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