# T2 ARIYA FF JINDGI EK PAHELI - ATEET KE PANNE.Part 54 on pg 95 22/9 - Page 45

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kashvi19

Its really awesome update di

I am speechless
Riya ne arjun ke liye khud ko itni chot di
Uska dard uski takleef bahut acche se likha apne
Arjun ko hosh aa gya wow
Anurag vinay ayi baba arjun or jiya k pyar ko admire kar rahe the
Ishu riya k liye pareshan hai .
Usne ri ko bahut acche se handle kiya
Omg matlab riya ne arjun ko chod diya or isiliye rosh ko jiya bana kar bheja
Ab kya hoga
Pls update soon
Can't wait for next part
Thanks for pm


Thanks dear
I am really glad u lyk it
Hmm ri arj k liye kuch bhi kar sakti h n arj bhi
Ishu is great friend , n know her very well
Ab ri ne kya choda ye next part mai pata chalega
Kya hoga ye to waqt batayega
Will continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Darlingladdu

Waw what an update

Awesome.
Pyar mai inshan apne se jtada dusro ki chinta karta hai.
Chot agar pyar ko lage toh dil til til rota hai.
Thanks for the PM
LOVE
LADDU


Thanks dear
Bilkul sahi kaha pyar aisa hi hota hai
N I am really glad to see u after a long time
Hope u are fine n doing well

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neelpari

Amazing update

What riya sacrifice for arjun
poor ariya face a lot
Arjun also feel pain for riya
Ishu is really great friend
Update soon


Thanks dear
To know catch up next part
Yup ishu great friend
Will continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vishakha..

awesome loved it...
thanx for pm and sorry for late comment


Thanks dear
Its ok dear I can understand
No need of sorry😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aashi24

awesome update
anu n tani dono ghar nhi ja pa the
rishu mandir me prayer krte hai n ri coal PR chalti hai
n ma uski prayer accept karti hai
I hope ri arjun ko na chode
now arjun is fine n ri know that
when arjun hear about ri he feel very sad
n all admir ariya love
anu don't know that his riya is Arjun's jiya
jab use pta chalega tb kya hoga
ishita is really a very good friend
tani knows about ri burn leg
waiting for next part
thanks for pm


Thanks dear
Hmm ri did it for her arme and ma accept his prayer
Ab kya hoga ye next part mai
Kya hoga ye to waqt batayega
Hmm tani come to know
Let see what happened next
Will continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kashvi19

Di I know mai bahut jyada greedy ho rahi hu par pls pls pls jaldi update de do na

Mujhe wait nahi ho raha riya ne kya choda arjun k liye .

Hope usne arjun ko hi na choda ho. Jiske chances mujhe high lag rahe hai

Pls pls pls update soon


Awww its not greedy mujhe bahut accha laga
Okie baby mai abhi bas de rahi hu next part
Will continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Updating...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ajuswa19pm

di!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤗

m so so so sorry m late ae
but loved the part!
i believe riya k deep
feelings bohoot ache se portrait karna zaroori
tha😳 kyunki love is about devotion n i so
loved it! well penned di! love u post soonish!😳


Its okie dear I can understand
Thanks really mehnat safal hui
Updating...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 51



tani open ri's bandage and get shocked. Tani look at riya face shocked n riya closed her eyes tightly n fearly .

Ta - riyu ye sab ..ye kya hai .ye to burn marks hai kisi accident se lagi chot nahi. Ye kaise hua.itne burn marks. Anu

Ri hold her hand n plead her

Ri - Bhabhi plz bhaiyu ko kuch mat boliye plz Bhabhi ruk jaiye

Ta - par beta ye kaise hua .anu ko batana to padega hi. Itna jal gaya hai.

Ri - no Bhabhi plz

Ta - ok but pehle tumhe batana hoga ye sab kya hai.or sab sach .kya Jo mai soch rahi hu wahi sahi hai.

Tani fold her hand n give her look n riya tearily nod in yes

Ta - riyu mujhe sab kuch janna hai sab kuch samjhi tum ryt now

Ri - hmm batati hu Bhabhi

She tell tani all thing from starting to till now .tani has tears in her eyes.she hug riya

Ta - riyu kya aaj k jamane mai bhi koi aisa or itna pyar kar sakta hai

Ri - Bhabhi pyar to pyar hi hota hai.or mera dil har saans k sath use hi chahta hai or uski khushiyan mangta hai. Mai to bas itna hi janti hu.

Ta - but tum anu ko bata do .

Ri - Bhabhi

N she tell her something. N tani clear her tears

Ta - thik hai riyu mai anu ko kuch nahi bataungi . par ye burn hai ise bandage se bandna thik nahi maine cream laga di hai tum ise khula chodna hoga.

Ri - par bhaiyu

Ta - mai sambhal lungi. Hum unhe keh denge silencer se jal gaya.

Ri - hmm..

Ta - riyu mai humesha tumhare sath hu har condition mai.

Ri hug her n thanks her.

Just then ishu come

Ish - kya batien ho rahi hai nanad Bhabhi mai.

N she see ri's open bandage n look at them shocked. Tani come forward n hold ishu's ears

Is - didu dard ho raha hai..aauchhh chodo na didu

Ta - didu haa.tune bhi itni badi bat chupai mujhse. U to har Choti se Choti bat mujhe batati hai.

Ish - sorry didu but riyu meri bff hai. Or bff k secret kaise open kar sakti hu.

Tani hug ishu

Tani - I am so proud of you ishu. Humesha apna har rishta puri imandari se nibhana.

Scene shift

Arjun is in Mumbai hospital

Dr is checking arjun . ayi n baba impatiently wait for arjun report n arjun impatiently wait for all to get over so that he can talk his riya. He is really very worried after hearing that she walk on burning coal.


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Present scene

Sak - omg riya kya yahi reason tha ki tumne roshni ko jiya bana kar bhej diya.

Ariya look at each other

Sh - ri tu sach mai burning coal par chali thi

Ri - hmm

Ch - aaiga ri tujhe dard nahi hua

Ri - no mujhe us waqt kuch feel nahi ho raha tha.siwaye is bat ke ki mera arme operation theatre mai jindgi or maut k bich jhul raha hai.

She has tears in her eyes remembering that night n Arjun's condition. Arjun clear her tears n nod his head in denial. She hug him.all look at them emotionally

Kar - come on guys hum sab yahi hai.

Ariya separate from each other

Ai - fir kya hua tumne kya kiya ?? Ye to sach mai bahut ajeeb mod liya tum dono ki jindgiyon ne.

Ri - kabhi kabhi waqt hume kuch aisa karne ko majbur kar deta hai Jo humne kabhi socha nahi hota hai.

Sam - aisa kya kiya riya tumne.kya tumne sach mai isiliye arjun ko choda.kya mannat mangi thi tumne us din or kya choda tha tumne

Ri - us din main kya manga or kya choda. Batati hu..

Fb

Ish - riyu tune kya kiya kal jaldi bata mujhe bahut tension ho rahi hai. Kahi tune arjun ko to nahi choda

Ri - chod diya use maine ishu chod diya maine use uske liye.

Ish - par riyu tu kaise reh payegi or usse bhi badkar wo kaise reh payega tere Nina

Ri start crying n ishu try to console her

Ri - pata hai ishu jab pundit ji ne kaha ki kuch pane k liye kuch khona hoga or wo bhi ajeej .to mai sihar gayi thi dar ke mare ki mai kya kru .fir mere aage mere armi ka hasta hua chahera fir uska wo hospital mai bed par leta bejan chahera aa gaya.

She continue

Ri - to maine socha usse or apni family se pyara to mujhe kuch nahi. Par uske bina mai kaise reh sakti hu or WO kaise reh sakega mere bina.agar wo Bach bhi gaya to mere bina nahi jee payega or agar jiyega bhi to jinda lash bankar.or uske bina meri jindgi bhi kahan jindgi hoti. Use chodne se better to mai bhi uske sath mar jati. Isiliye nahi chod payi use ishu nahi chod payi.

She hug her more tightly n cry n ishu let her cry.

After some mins she separate her n properly make her sit on bed n lovingly crease her shoulder

Ish - tune sahi kiya teddy bilkul sahi kiya. Par tune aisa kya manga. Or tune aisa q kaha ki tune use chod diya

Ri - ha maine use chod diya par teen month ke liye. Or use hi nahi maine apni har khushi chod di in teen month ke liye. Maine apni jindgi chod di teen month ke liye.

Ish - teddy mai samjhi nahi .tu kya bol rahi hai

Ri - ishu maine kal ma se manga ki agar mera arme thik ho gaya to mai teen month tak apni life nahi jiyungi bas katungi .apni sari khushi or pasand chod dungi.aisa kuch nahi karungi Jo mujhe khushi dega. Maine in teen month k liye arme , music , apni sari pasand chod di .khane se lekar pehanne tak.

Ish - kyaa?? Par riyu next week tera pehla rock concert hai. Teri puri jindgi ka Sapna

Ri - par mera koi bhi Sapna mere arme se badkar nahi hai. Uske liye mai jindgi chod sakti hu .to apni jindgi ke 3 mon kaun si badi bat hai. Par mai use nahi chod payi.nahi dekh sakti thi use ek jinda lash ki jindgi jeete . nahi jee sakti uske bina..

Ishu hug him n both cry..

Scene shift

Arjun all check up done n Dr give him his phone.he dail her no.but she don't pick his call

Ar - ye jiya mera phone q nahi utha rahi .kya hua wo thik to hai na .pehle to usne wo kam kiya or ab phone nhi receive kiya

He get tensed

Here

Ri is looking at her phone helplessly .many time his name flash on her screen n she forward her hand but she back her hand immediately

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