RAISHA ARIYA SS - AB KE BARAS. part 6 on pg 23 21/9 - Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5





Next day

arjun is sleeping peacefully in his room.suddenly he hear sound coming from fm.

Rj - hello mumbai this is your fav rj banjee or aj hai date 18 or sath mai raksha bandhan bhi hai aaj

To sabse pehle un sab listeners ko rj banjee ki taraf se happy wala birthday jinka bhi aaj birthday hai.

Or unke liye ye special song. N he play a song .

This thing made arjun jump on his bed.

Ar - ohh no aaj raksha bandhan hai or rakhi bhi.

He stood up from his bed and take his cloths n rush to bathroom.

Scene shift

Rathod house

Sam is standing infront of a window n poen his wallet from which he take out a picture .it shows three small kid .a boy of 10 year , a girl of 8 year and a cute little boy of 4 year.

A tear drop from his eyes n fall on pic. He immediately rub tear drop from pic. He kiss pic n again put it in wallet.

Riya see it as she come for some work to his room .his room door is open.she is going to knock but see that he is starring at a pic n his
tear drop also.

She leave from there to room.
She has also tear in her eyes.she call some one.

Ri - hello

Os..

Ri - tumhe pata hai wo aaj bhi unhe bahut miss karte hai. Aaj unke chahere par wo dard or ankho mai nami thi

Os ...

Ri - tum chinta mat karo mai unka pura khayal rakhungi.

Os..


Ri - mmm tum thik ho.

Os...


Ri - hmmm..bye

She cut call n thinking some thing .

Scene shift

Mandir

Arjun come to mandir in white kurta n black jeans

Ar - pundit ji mujhe puja karwani hai.

Pa - koi khas awsar k liye beta

Ar - haa aaj meri di ka birthday hai . aap unke liye puja kijiye .wo jahan bhi ho khush ho .

Pu - ye samagri ki suchi hai le aaiye baki taiyyari mai karta hu.

Ar - ok.

After some time he bring ingredients ordered by pundit ji.

pu - le aye beta

Ar - ha ye lijiye punditji.or puja shuru kijiye.

Punditji start puja.n arjun sit in this.

Pu - beta jinke liye puja kar rahe hai unka nam

Ar - soumya ra..soumya.

Pu - or apse unka rishta

Ar - wo meri badi behan thi ..hai.

punditji complete puja n give prasad to arjun.arjun after puja sit on temple stairs.

Fb

One 8 year boy is running in his home. N a girl is running behind him.

Gi - arjun arjun ruk jao. Mujhe tang mat karo .

Ar - somu di pakdo mujhe ..

So - arjun ruk jao .or Ye kapde pehno.warna mai bat nahi karungi tumse.

He stop and she make him dress

Ar - di ye new dress q pehna rahi ho. Birthday to aapka hai na.

So - qki aaj rakhi bhi hai.aaj mera birthday or rakhi sath aye hai.

Ar - to rakhi par new dress q

So - offo qki mai tumhe or bhaisa ko rakhi bandhungi na.or tum dono meri raksha ka wachan doge.bolo karoge na meri raksha

He take his toy gun

Ar - ha di jisne bhi apko harm karne ki koshish ki use mai nahi chodunga.dhaye dhaye

He act as shooting

So - aww mera Chote. I luv you

Ar - I luv you too Di .mai humesha apke sath rahunga or apki raksha karunga .

She kiss his forehead .n both smile

Fb end

Ar - sorry somu di apka Chote apka sath nahi de paya apki raksha nahi kar paya.

His eyes are wet.


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rathore house

Riya come to sam room.

Ri - sir

Sam - haa riya bolo

Ri -happy raksha bandhan sir

Sam - thanku same to you.

Ri - aap rakhi nahi bandhwayenge .apko behen nahi hai.

Sam -hai par ab wo humare sath nahi hai.

Ri - to kaha hai.

Sam - bahut dur.

Ri - Jo dil mai hote hai na wo dur kaha hote hai .wo to sabse pas hote hai.bas ankhe band kar lo or mulakat ho gayi.

She said with cute dimple smile.

sam - tumhara koi bhai hai

Ri - I am single child. par mai had sal kisi special ko rakhi bandhti hu .par is sal WO mere satj nahi hai.

N she get upset

Sam - are abhi to tumne kaha -Jo dil mai hote hai na wo dur kaha hote hai .wo to sabse pas hote hai.bas ankhe band kar lo or mulakat ho gayi. To fir ye udasi q.


Ri - haa ye bhi hai. Chaliye.

Sam - kahan

Ri - mai na apko kidnap kar rahi hu acp rathore sir. Ab chaliye bhi

Sam smile at her. Both sit in car n she drive till an orphanage

Sam - orphanage .hum yaha q aye hai.

Ri - meri bua kehti hai jab man udas ho to unke sath khushiyan bantni chahiye jinhe humse jyada dukh hai. Or rishton ko khone ka gum in bacchon se jyada kaun janega.


Both enter in orphanage n spent time with children. It really sooth Sam's pain n he start enjoying with children.

Ri MV kaha tha na apse unhe udas nahi rehne dungi. Riya apna wada kabhi nahi todti.

She smile n shout

Ri - are pinky mai bhi to khel rahi hu bhul gayi kya.

N she also join them in game.

Scene shift

Aisha is sitting in balcony. Remembering her bro.

Suddenly his phone come.

Ai - Bhaiya kaise hai.

Adi - ek dum accha hu. Meri bacchi kaisi hai.

Ai - fine Bhaiya or bhabhi kaise hai.I miss both of u

Rak - mai bhi acchi hu. Or tumhe khub miss kar rahi hu


Adi - tumhari rakhi mil gayi hai or maine bandy bhi li.


Ai - Bhaiya plz jaldi se aa jaiye na apke bina man nahi lagta yaha

Adi - haa beta mai koshish mai hu transfer ki.

Rak - or apna khayal rahna.riya se bat hui

Ai - haa bhabhi subah hi hui. Kali bhi theek hai.

N they talk n cut call.

After that arjun come there

Ar - hello di.happy raksha bandhan

Ai - same to you. Are tumne rakhi nahi bandhi

Ar - meri di bahut dur hai mujhse . wo mujhe rakhi nahi bandh sakti.par mai har sal unki taraf ki rakhi khareed leta hu.or bandh leta hu.

Ai - ohh..lao mai bandh deti hu.

Ar - sach

Ai - hmm..

Aisha tie rakhi on arjun hand.

Ai - sweet to hai nahi

Arjun foreword prasad to bar n Aisha feed him he too feed her

Ai - prasad

Ar - haa mai mandir gaya tha.

Then she go to meet suraj n niti to convince them for take her to their boss.

Here samri return home.arj already there

Sam - Chote tu.

Arj hug him

Ar - happy raksha bandhan bro

Sam - tujhe bhi Chote.

N arjun tie a rakhi on which sam is written. N arjun rakhi has arjun written on it.

Sam look at it n goes into flashback

Fb

Saumya is sitting in temple of their house n shouting

So - bhaisa Chote jaldi aao na.

Sam - aa rahe hai somu itni bhi kya jaldi hai.

Ar - jaldi hai na bro mujhe bhuk lagi hai.jab tak di rakhi nahi bandhengi mai kuch nahi kha sakta .or jab tak di apko rakhi nahi bandhengi tab tak mujhe nahi bandhengi.

He pout n sam lightly hit on his shoulder

Sam - bhukkad kahi ka

Ar - bro ap us piddi chipkali ki tarah mujhe bhukkad mat boliye

He pout n sam - somu smile at him.

So - chalo jaldi baitho dono or rakhi bandhwao.

Ar - wow meri rakhi par arjun n bro ki rakhi par sam likha hai.Di apne khud likha

So - haa ye special rakhi maine khud design ki hai mere special bhaiyo k liye. Or humesha aisi hi rakhi bandhungi dono ko.

Trio enjoy their moment n hall echo with their laugh. Their parents look at their love n smile

Fb end

Sam hug arjun tightly . both have tear in their eyes.

Riya also look at them .

TBC...


One surprise. Arisha finish their case. Samsha at same place. Will they meet or hit miss .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Lovely update
thnx for the pm
Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Awesome di...

lajavaab...

loved it...

continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
must say superb story concept
awesomely written
greatly shown every emotions
i also hav tears in my eyes
bt still didnt know who is somu
wht happened in their past
eagerly waiting for next update
luv it dr
THANKS FOR PM
plz plzzz plz update next soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
happy raksha bandhan di
n no need of sorry really like siblings bond
arjun miss her sister its her birthday n rakhi too
sam also miss his sister so much
riya talk with whom is it arjun
arjun Aisha moment nice
she tie rakhi on his hand on behalf of his sister
I am confused about all relations sam with riya m arjun with Aisha
but samjun somu fb so sweet
arjun was really sweet n cute kid
but last moment of samjun made me emotional
pls update soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
nice update
its rakhi festival n arjun's di b'day
arjun remember childhood memory n his di
ri plan to chearup Sam n both go to orphanage n enjoy
Aisha talk his bhai n bhabhi
n miss them n riya
Aisha tie rakhi in arjun's arm n both investigate
Sam n arjun hug each other n miss her sis
thanks for pm
waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
very nice
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
Superb update
Poor Samjun missing their sister on rakhi
Sam was crying seeing their childhood pic
Wow riya made Sam smile she took him to orphanage
On the other hand Aisha tied rakhi to Arjun
I have feeling that it's Arjun with whom riya was talking on phone & its ariya's plan to bring Sasha together
Wow samjun tied rakhi to each other
Continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update.
continue soon..
thanks for PM..

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