ariya ff JAHAN PE BASERA HO part 8 on pg 18 4 jul - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Ritikanfly

nice awesome start its kind of serious n very much secretive kou bahut badaa Banat hai bahut saare twist n turn aane wale hain m feeling nervous n excited waiting for next update soon


same opinion kashu its seems interesting
i m looking forward to it
do update soon
n thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
awesome update.
thanks for PM..
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Shree apni seat se uthta hai or rathore k pas jaakar uske kandhe par haath rakhta hai.

Sh - sir

Ra - janta hu tumne sab pata kar liya shree. Bulkil arjun bante jaa rahe ho.

Sh - sir par ye sab kya

Ra- mujhe bhi thik se kuch pata nahi .ab wahi jaa kar kuch pata chalega


( shree is tech exp so he has police database access being a part of honourable department)

Sh - hmm. Sir aap thik hai.

Ra - kya batau shree mai kaisa hu. Kabhi socha nahi tha ye din bhi dekhna hoga. Aaj pehli bar kisi case k liye jate waqt mujhe ghabrahat ho rahi hai.

Sh - sir abhi kuch nhi pata to negative q sochna positive bhi ho sakta hai.

Ra - kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai arjun ka bhoot tumme aa gaya hai. Shree

Both smile lightly and take their seat. Its night time so all sleep on their seat. But sleep are far away from two person eyes n that is samree.

But actually they are human n obviously not arjun so they got tired n sleep overtook them.

Next morning


At 8:00 am , Indore Station

Sabhi apna apne luggage k sath train se utarte hai. Tabhi unhe waha insp sinha milte hai.

In- salute them. Jai hind

All - jaihind

In - sir I am insp rajeev sinha. Mai hi wo case handle kar raha hu.

Sam - hmm. I am sameer rathod etf chief n introduce all .

In - sir aap logon ko kaun nahi janta. Its our pleasure ki aap logon k sath kam karne ko milega

Sam - I want case details asap

In - yes sir .or Maine ap sabka arrangement karwa diya hai chale sir.

Sam - nahi hum sab Basera mai rukenge

In - basera??

Sam - ha. Hum Basera mai rukenge. Tum sabhi fact or details le kar wahi pahucho

Ins - yes sir. sir ye apki SUV ki keys hai.

Ra - OK. Team let's go.

Kuch der mai sabhi log Basera k samne khade hai.

Sabhi uski khubsurati dekh kar bas kho jate hai. Fir andar jate hai.

Waha do couple khade hai.or ek young girl.
Tabhi unme se ek man( wahi Jo dig se bat kar raha tha)

Man - sameer tum aa gaye beta.

Tabhi unki wife ( wahi lady jo door knock ki thi.) Roti hui aati hai

La - sameer beta ab tum hi kuch kar sakte ho. Hum haar gaye hai beta har taraf se.

Sam ki abkho mai bhi lightly ansu hai

Sam - aap log chinta mat kijiye mai sach pata laga kar hi rahunga. WO mere bhi kuch lagte hai.

All get shocked seeing sameer so emotional for victim. Is he/ her has any relation to sameer .who are these people.
Alot of ques in their mind but all know they have to wait.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
suspense suspense suspense
uff curiosity badti hi ja rahi he meri
sam ka kya rishta he in logo se
kon he ye log
arjun wo kaha he
do continue dear
n thanks 4 pm in advance
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
nice update..
continue soon..
thanks for PM in advance..
why was Sam emotional? where is Arjun?
reveal the suspense soon.
Edited by spatika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
part b / c updated .n part c thodi der mai bas

friends mai abhi pm nhi kar paungi. I don't know kya problem hai par pms sent nhi ho rahe .hope you understand. n who want PMS later plz sent buddy request. or haa pls comment fast .

thanks .

PS - guys who is reading this one pls give your feedbacks. it encourage us a lot. I don't tell that you only praise if you feel you give suggestion to. I know I am new here n don't know many of you . but I also put my effort. if you think I am OK then pls let me know.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
part c/c

unres

I promise you it will give you shock. or apna dil tham kar baithiyega.



Part c/ c

Tabhi insp sinha aate hai.

In - sir aapne Jo details mangwai thi mai wo le kar aya hu.

Sam become rathore again( he he ye itne bhayanak mahol mai mera joke hai..)

Matlab wo cop mode mai aa jata hai.

Sam - OK. Let me see.

Sam mai crime scene dekhna chahuga.

Police ne only crime scene yani us room ko hi seal kiya hai .baki ghar mai log reh rahe hai.

Sam jaldi se us room ki taraf jata hai.or waha statue ban kar khada ho jata hai.

Baki team bhi use follow karti hai par wo log kuch piche hai qki sam super speed se gaya hai. Sabhi log sam ko dekhte hai or shocked ho jate hai. Unhone apne chief ko aisa kabhi nhi dekha. He is very professional. Fir aaj kya hua

Par agle hi pal jab unki nahar sam se hat kar us room par padti hai to wo bhi usi condition mai hai jisme sam hai .

Kisi k bhi muh se kuch nahi nikal raha kya bolna hai. Sabhi log shocked stunned or freezeed khade hai.

Fir kuch der mai sak

Sak - arjun??

Ch - ri??

Yes guys basera is house of arjun and riya. Us rat jo couple so rahe the they were ariya
Dig se milne gaye man suryakant rawte the arjun's papa
N Jo lady puja karke room knock karti hai wo arjun ki ma hai.

Sabhi hairan hai kisi ne nhi socha unhe ek din acp arjun ko victim k roop mai milenge. Chores aisakli ne nhi socha tha jinse unhone itna kuch seekha hai ki wo aaj best cop hai aaj unhe apne mentor ka case handle karna hogs.or sam Jo barso se apne bestie ka intjar kar raha tha use nhi pata tha uska intzar aise khatam hoga.


TBC...

Kaisa hai plz tell me.
Edited by kashvi19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
shocking emotional full on thriller update ariya victim???????? kyon ??? Kaise???? etf shocked Sam n shree trying to compose themselves a age kya hoga waiting for updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
awesome thrilling suspense...
ariya are victims...
what happened to them..
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
I knew it ki woh ariya hi hai...yeye I was right...
but Aisa kaise ho sakta hai...no idea..
update soon

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