ARIYA SS ZID Tere pyar ki part 11 on page 34 14/11 - Page 19

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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏 👍🏼 Arjun
ARIYA 😳
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Originally posted by: Taif.aru14

itna mahine baad update dene k liye apko hazar hazar dhanyabad... Par agar aage v yeisa kuch kia na to khair nahi.. JEP ki tarha tym 2 tym update chahiye is story ka


sorry dear itna late karne k liye actually ye joint story hai n kashu apni studies k sath busy rehti hai .so thoda time lag jata hai . but hum jaldi dene ka try karenge
thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
part 11



arjun apni window k side khada hai. uske chahere par smile hai. wo smile satisfaction ki smile hai.

ar - yakeen nahi hota shona ne mujhe hug kiya . usne wo sab kaha matlab mai uski life mai kuch place rakhta hu, kuch khas place. akhir mera pyar rang laya. ha wo mujhe pyar nahi karti par kuch to hu mai uske liye.mere liye yahi kafi hai

wo bar bar bas riya or uske hug k bare mai soch raha hai. uske kano mai riya ki awaj gunj rahi hai ki pls aage se aisa mat karna

scene shift

riya 's home

riya apni balcony mai khadi hai.or asman ki taraf dekh rahi hai.

ri - aakhir mujhe wo insan mil hi gaya jise mai apna saccha dost keh sakti hu. jiske kandhe par sar rakh kar apni pareshani share kar sakti hu. wo meri rids ka bhai hai. or mera saccha dost, i know mummy papa aap hi ne bhagwan se kehkar use mere pas bheja hai . wo ek angel hai hai na,

she smile.

next day

sunday

riya so kar uthti hai or use yad aata hai ki kal firing k dauran arjun ko chotien ayi hai. or dr ne use kuch precautions lene ko kaha hai

ri - ohh no aaj sunday hai , wo pagal kuch ulta seedha na kha le warna jakhm par infactions ho jayenge, mujhe jana hoga,

or wo jaldi se ready hokar arjun k ghar pahuchti hai ,wo abhi tak so raha hai,

ri door knock karti hai, arjun ki eyes half open hai n half close, wo abhi bhi neend mai hai.aise hi door open karta hai.

ar - shona, abhi to hum watar park mai the ab tum door par kaise
or ye dress kab badal liya

ri move her head in disbelief

ri - arjunnn

arjun apni eyes rub karta hai

ar - omg shona tum to sach mai ho.

ri - haa mai sach mai hu or ab mujhe side do warna samjhe ya samjhau

ar - wow shona mera samjhe ya samjhau tumhare muh se kitna sweet sound kar raha hai.

ri glare him

ar - mai aata hu tum baitho
or arjun apne room ki taraf bhagta hai. or riya use aisa dekh kar smile karti hai.

kuch der bad

ar - sorry ghar aaj bhi failaa

or wo apne room ko dekhta hai pura clean n arranged hai

ar - shona tumne kiya how sweet

ri - chalo ab jaldi breakfast kar lo ,medicine leni hai

ar - wow breakfast bhi ready,waise tumne bataya nahi tum aaj subah subah kaise

ri - subah . 11 baj rahi hai. or tumhe mujhse problem hai to chali jaun

ar - kya shona tum bhi mera bas chale to tumhe pura din samne bitha kar ghurta rahu

or wo apni chin k niche hand rakh kar use stare karta hai, ri uske cheek par lightly slap karti hai

ri - chalo breakfast karo.

dono breakfast karte hai n ri use medicine deti hai.

ar - dekho shona mai tumhari bat man raha hu na to tumhe bhi manni hogi

ri - kaisi bat

ar - tumhe mere sath game khelna hoga ,mai bore ho raha hu.

he pout n ri smile

ri - ok.par hum khelenge kya

ar - carom

or wo dono carom start karte hai, riya jeet jati hai to khushi se dance karne lagti hai. arjun ko pehle ashchrya hota hai fir wo use aisa carefree dekh kar usme lost ho jata hai, riya ko lagta hai ye usne kya kiya to wo embraced hokar baith jati hai.

ar - tum haste hue bahut cute lagti ho. aaj second time tumhe itna khush or care free dekha

ri - second time

ar- ha maine first time tumhe park mai dekha bilkul aaj ki tarah ccarefree or bahut khush.rids bhi tumhare sath thi. fir etf mai dekha tum koi or hi thi.aisa q shona

ri - chodo wo sab ,chalo rest karo

ri apni jagah se uthti hai par arjun uska hath pakad leta hai or use apne pas bitha leta hai.dono wall se tik kar baithe hai. dono mai se koi kuch nahi bol raha. riya intzar kar rahi hai kaise shuru kare or arjun soch raha hai ki kahi usne kuch galat to nahi kiya.

finally riya bolti hai

ri - mere papa mumbai police mai the. or mummy house wife. rids mujhse 6 sal choti hai. humari family happy family thi.par ek din sab kuch lut gaya.

mai 18 sal ki thi college ke second year mai thi. mai school teacher banna chahti thi. ek simple or happy life jeena chahti thi. par ek din mai apni friend k sath project ka saman lene market gayi thi.waha achanak kinhi do gang k bich danga shuru ho gaya. log idhar udhar bhagne lage. hum dono bhi dar kar chup gaye. or fir police aayi or firing start hui.us firing mai mere papa

or wo arjun k kandhe par sar rakh kar rone lagti hai arjun bhi use rone deta hai. fir kuch der mai

ri - maine apne samne papa ko marte dekha hai arjun. us din se mummy bhi bimar rehne lagi. isiliye papa ki naukri join nahi kar payi. earning ka koi or sadhan nahi tha ,or papa ki saving bhi jyada nahi thi.majburi mai mujhe apni padai chodkar papa ki job join karni padi. kyuki papa onduty shahed hue the to mujhe job mil gaya. fir do sal bad mummy bhi bimar rehte rhte chali gayi. rids ko maine apni bacchi ki tarah pala hai. or tumne jo carefree ladki dekhi thi wo rids ki behan thi jo har haal mai khush rehna chahti thi par ye riya koi hai or ise aisa is society ne banaya hai.

ar - matlab

tbc by mini di

precap - ariya conversation continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
hay meri kismat! Itne intezar k baad sirf itna sa update? Btw, nyc update.. Aage se long update chahiye.. Aur plz pm me yaar..
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update
cont soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice update
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
Hawww...
Ariya happy abt their relationship progress...
Oh god...poor riya...
Pls continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
finally got update after longtime
awe arjun was so happy that riya hugged him 😉
knowing he have special place in riya's life made arjun really happy 😃
even riya was really happy after longtime she got someone with whom she can share her problem happiness 😃
loll arjun was dreaming abt riya 😉
just love the way riya taking care of arjun 🤗
wow riya for a moment behave so carefree arjun just lost in her 😉
poor riya saw he dad died in front of her 🥺
after that their life was so tough 😭
continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
oye iska update kaha he? Agar aj raat k andar update nahi mila na to dekh lena...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 10:-

Awsome update ..

Arjun n Ritz bonding is so cute..

Riya missed him..even worried for him..

Precap is interesting..

Thanks for pm..

N sorry for late comments..

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