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Posted: 9 years ago
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|Sneak-Peak| for part 2


Mere hote huey tuney kisi aur ko mera kamra de diya..thats not fair...

Ar-abey yaar..meri baat samajhne ki koshish kar..sabkuch itna jaldi ho gaya ke..main tujhe

Saahil-bhool gaya...huh...sab samajhta hu main...zaalim duniya...dost to paraye honge ab huh...


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Ar-aa ahemm...tum..kuch karti kyun nahi...

Riya-soch rahi hu aloo bechne ka business strt karu...great idea?

coughh coughh

Ar-mera matlab..studies se tha...continue kr sakti ho agr tum chaho to...


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sahil-shak tha pehle mujhe..magar ab thora yakeen aney laga hai...zaroor uss Comissioner ne na mere dost ko fasaya hua hai...apni pagal beti se shaadi karvaakey...

Sameer-oye..kuch bhi bolta hai na tu...

Sahil-shart lagalo...Arjun ke liye main jaan de du...phir is pagal ko pagal saabit krna koi aam baat nahi hai...


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Ar-sirr...apne mujhe bulaya?

Commissioner-yeah...sit...arjun...main chahta hu ke...tum aur riya...honeymoon pe jao...tickets book karva diye hai maine...

Ar-jii?



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Riya-main koi kathputhli nahi hu jab mann kiya shaadi karvaadi...aur ab yeh..honeymoon...

Ar-Riya.. listen to me

She pushed him with anger taking over her...

Ri-I was right...tum...tum bilkul waise hee ho...jaisa maine socha tha...papa ke chamchey...pet dog

Ar-riyaa..

He pulled her towards him with strong hold...while she winced in pain...both of them were in rage...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Loll shahil called riya pagal
Uff riya's dad book ticket for ariya's honeymoon
Once again riya misunderstood Arjun
Poor Arjun baap beti ke bich phasgaya
Continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Awww laddoo Mar dala teaser se
Ab teaser hi aise hai toh update kaise hoga???
Jadi update Dona
Jyada intezaar mat karwaana
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
What a part yaar...
Alfaz nahi hai mere pass...
Bht bht bht bht achhi starting hai...
Just loved it...
Itne saare fanfic padhne ke baad...itni saaei stories favourite hone ke baad..phir unhi stories ko baar baar padhne ke baad...finally ye likhi hai yaar tumhe...
Pehle ye batao kahan thi tum...mujhe tumhara hi intazar tha dear...
I love u sooo much...
Plzzz pm me...or add me...plzzz
Plzz continue soon...
Kya teaser hai uaar...
Kamal dhamal malamal..
Itna qatil likhti kahan se hi tummm...
Ab nahi hota wait plzzz jaldi nxt part update karo...
Edited by ramshaasrar - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Uff bechara arj
phas gya shadi krke
ek tarf ri
ek tarf sahil
phir smeer
comm ko kon bhul skta hai
aage kya hone wala hai awesm teaser waiting for updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Laddoo aur kitni wait karna padega
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27



Part 2


From past one hour he has been trying to fix things up...but to his luck...which never supported him..its all leading to...a bizarre...

He saw his friend who was in full clothes now...standing not at all facing him...and on other side his 1 day old😆newly wedded wife..who was facing other side..both were adamant on their stands...

Sameer coughed as kaka got the tray with glasses of cold water...Arjun took the glass and gulped hard the water in one go...

kaka-beta khana laga du?bohot der ho rahi hai...

lSaahil-nahi kaka...der to ho hee gayi hai...zaalim duniya aur ab paraye dost..ab to jana hee banta hai yahan se...

Sameer-(in mind)nautanki sala...

Arjun-Sahil...plzz...for god sake..meri baat sunega tu...main

Sah-ab sunne samajhne ko kuch baki hai...apna vada tora hai tune..heart breaker hai tu...sach mein...mere hote huey tu kaise kisiko mera kamra de sakta hai..pichle saalon se rehta aya hu yaha main..apna basera basaya hai yahanpe maine..aur aaj aise hee uthake kisi bhi de diya

Riya-excuse me?main..

Ar-okay enough yaar...pichle ek ghantey se isi baat pe behes kar rahe hai hum...meri baat samajhne ki koshish kar...yeh sab itne achanak se ho gaya hai...I didnt gt time...maine to apni family ko bhi nahi bataya ab tk kuch phir..

Sah-ha ha bol na..complete kar sentence..main to family bhi nahi hu..huh..

Ar-tu mere liye family se barkar hai yaar..do I need to explain now?plzz...

Sahil looked at his friend's face who looked drained and tired...finally he was convinced for the sake of his friend...he stared at Riya who glared at her and then bak to arjun...

Sah-acha theek hai..tu kehta hai too...maan leta hu...

ar-ahh thank god

Sah-lekin...mera kamra...perfect hona chahiye..kuch ulta pulta hua na to...

ar-kuch nahi hoga..hmm...chal tu mere kamre mein shift ho ja aur main...

Sah-haa chalo mujhe woh room poora khali chahiye...phir apna samaan dalvata hu kaka chaliye...waise hee bohot der ho rahi hai..bhook ke maare choohe daur rhe hai mere pet mein..pata hai...shehh

Sahil left with kaka while Sameer made some excuse sensing the tension between the newly weds...

Arjun took another glass of water and sipped it...when saw kaka shifting his things on this room...he choked on the water and coughed hard...

ar-kkkaka yeh kya kar rahe ho aap...mera samaan

at-beta Sahil bhayiya hee keh rahe hai ab to aap isi kamre mein rahoge to...

He closed his eyes cursing his fate and hearing the footsteps..he made an image in his mind with closed eyes...she was there infront of him...all ready to pounce on...


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At night after Sahil left for bed he sneaked out of the room and shifted on the couch in living room...he switched off the lights and finally could take a breath of relief...

Ar-kya din agaye mere..apne hee ghar mein choron ki tarah so raha hu...sahi kaha hai kisine..kuch bhi karo aur maro..magar shaadi mat karna...

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Sahil-waah kaka kya naashta banaya dil khush kar dia...lovely paranthas...tu lega?

He was all ready for hospital..dressed in his jeans and a grey shirt revealing first few buttons open..hair gelled up and he was fixing his watch when saw her climbing down the stairs...

His eyes were fixed on her...she was looking so pure in white...a long white kurti along with jeans..and those green bangles on her hand..and the red vermilion...made his heart skip a beat...
While he was busy at staring atul noticed this and his expressions changed to angry one...He coughed hard bringing Mr Rawte back to earth getting that toothy grin from his friend...

She fidgeted with her dupatta and settled on one of the chairs...Sahil was not keen on wishing her morning while mr husband could hardly gather courage to do so...though he was staring glances...

Riya-aa ahem..kaka kuch light sa milega khaane ko...woh main itna heavy breakfast to karti nahi...

Sahil-kaka aur do paranthey lana mere liye...

Riya stared at this guy who was busy in relishing that oily food...she scrunched her nose and munched on her plain toast...

Ar-aa ahem...

sah-kya hua...khaasi kaise ho gayi...raat ko ac ka tem zyada low tha kya...ya phir mere balcony ki taaza hawa raas nahi ayii...

Riya-lagta hai ise zukaam ho gaya bahar raat guzaarne ki wajah se...ahh main kya karu..meri galti thori hai..isey hee itna sense hona chahiye ke apne stupid bhukkar friend ko samjhae...

Ar-wohh...riya..main soch raha tha ke..tum ghar pe bore ho jati hogi na?too..kuch karti kyun nahi?

Riya-hmm soch rai hu aloo bechne ka business suru kar du..waise bhi aajkal logon ko kuch zyada hee pasand a rahe hai na..dozen ke hisaab se...

Sahil almost choked on his food.. her munching the toast with a sly grin...sensing things wld get out of hand..arjun continued...

Ar-ah nahi mera matlab studies se tha..tum agar chaho..to...parh sakti ho agey...thinkk abt it...
kaka main nikalta hu...getting late..se yaa

Ri-huh..parhayi...ab woh sab karkey fayeda bhi kya hoga..jo hona tha woh ho hee chuka hai and Iam stuck here...

She left the table with Sahil finally finishing his breakfast with a happy grin...seeing her leaving barely eating anything he fnd it weird...

Sahil-nai...arjun ne shaadi ki...iss ladki se...kuch to jhol lag raha hai mujhe..itni asani se chorunga nahi iss muddey ko main...arjun.. mere dost namak khaya hai tera maine...ab karz chuka ke rahunga..iss shaaadi ka raaz to nikalna hee hoga mjhe ab...

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Ar-yaar har ek din nayi musibat..tang a chuka hu...

sameer-do din mein yeh haal Rawte...not bad...

He massaged his temples when Sameer passed the steaming mug of coffee to him

Sam-u alright?

ar-nahi...bas marney hee wala hu...

Sam-problem kya hai..subah se itna chira hua hai...biwi ne room se nikal diya kya

Ar-yeah...infact woh prob nahi hai...

Sam-phir?tere uss nikamme dost Sahil ne phirse jhagra kiya

ar-Comissioner...

Sam-kya?

Ar-pata nahi khaas dushmani hai ya pyar uneh mujhse..pehle bulaake beti thama di..aur ab...puri tarah se khoon karvane ki planning...full proof plan...

Sam-abey kya bakwaas kiye ja rha hai?


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Riya was scanning the channels on tv in living room...she was hell bored and tv was also doing no good to her...she spotted sahil coming out of kitchen looking all drained with sweat...

Ri-yeh koi kaam vaam bhi karta hai ya phir...aghh mujhe kya hai...

She again gt back to tv screen when sahil settled on the couch...she found a glass of milkshake on the centre table which kaka kept...

Ri-yyyeh...

kaka-beta pee lo...sahil bhaiya ne banaya hai...

Ri-thnk u but..main nahi peeti...

Sah-pee lo...low calorie hai yeh...waise bhi iss rate mein khaogi to loug bolenge ACP Rawte ki biwi ka wazan kum ho gaya..

Her mouth was left open..this guy's guts...

ri-huh main nahi peeti...

The shake looked tempting indeed...and aftr havng nthng for breakfast she was hungry also..so she picked it up and it did tasted nice...

sahil was keeping an eye at her from distance and when she finally picked the glass he finished his second one...

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Sam-kya honeymoon?tickets..tu pehla damaad hoga is dharti ka jisey khud sasur ne tickets diye honge honeymoon pe jaane ke

Ar-tujhe hasi a rahi hai...band baj rahi hai meri..

Sam- honeymoon pe hee jaha hai...sanyaas pe nahi...chill...sinfact I think its a great idea..Riya khush ho jayegi teri prob solved

ar-right...sanyaas pe jana bhi better option hota...aur yehjo teri sweet si shant si Riya hai na...bas dikhne mein hee itti si hai...jwalamukhi ki trh fat ti hai mere saamne ...uska gussa

Sam-to ab..kya karega tu?Sir ko to mana bhi nahi kar paega...

Ar-pata nahi...aag mein koodna to hai... bass...darr hai jal na jau...

Sam-best of luck Wink

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At night dinner was set on table and three of them were silently busy...when arjun wiped his mouth and felt it was time to jump on fire😆😉
he noticed her taking her meal slowly...

ar-a Sahil...tu chamber mein nahi gaya apne aaj?(Sahil is a dentist by profession😆
has his own chamber)

Sah-arey kaha...woh meri bekaaran assistant bola hua tha ajaye aaj lekin nahi...2 din aur extend kar li leave apni...mushkil tabhi khol paunga chamber main warna patients ko handle kaun karega...

ar-ohh...aaa main soch raha tha ke mere absence mein tu to rahega yahan kaka ke saath...ghar akela to nahi chorke ja sakta...

Sah-kyun kahi ja raha hai tu?phirse koi conference...

Riya was done with her food and was drinking water...

ar-nai woh...hum dono ko jana hai...honeymoon pe

He blurted it out without giving the duo enough time to digest what he meant...Sahil left the fork on his plate while Riya was still in shock...

Sah-kya kaha tune?honey..moon?kiska..

ar-ab main ja raha hu obviously mera hai ...aurr

She got up startling everyone and left with heavy steps towards her room...

Sah-awaaz kiye bina kuch hota nahi...ek min.. tu bata...tu iske saath jana chahta hai I mean

ar-yaar...tu khana kha...main baad mein baat karta hu...

Sah-huh...ab to Rathod se baat karni paregi...


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She felt like strangling him hard..how can he even think of going to honeymoon with her?yeah he was dreaming on to romance...and lead a happy go lucky life...heights of insaneness...

she heard the noise of door and knw he was there...

Riya-jao yahan se

ar-riyaa...listen to me

Ri-maine kaha na jao..gussa arha hai mjhe...main kuch kar dungi to...

ar-meri baat sun lo..phir jo bolna hai

She turned around facing him with red shot eyes...tears forming in them...she was angry with rage building inside her...and to some extent he felt she was hurt..but why?did he hurt her?

ar-Riyaa...

Ri-just shut up...aur kuch bolne ki zarurat nahi hai tumhe...

ar-maine kuch nahi kiya..tumhare dad...woh chahte hai ke hum honeymoon...I mean iss trip pe jae..unohne khud tickets book karvae aur mere haat mein thama diya...main kaise mana karta uneh?

Ri-huh right...

ar-see..i can understnd...but..tum khud socho aur kya option hai mere paas...woh tumhare dad hai aur

Ri-main koi kathputhli nahi hu jab man kiya shaadi karvaadi...aur ab yeh..honeymoon...

Ar-Riya listen to me

She pushed him with anger taking over her...

Ri-I was right...tum...tum bilkul waise hee ho...jaisa maine socha tha...papa ke chamchey...pet dog

Ar-riyaa...

He pulled her towards him with strong hold...while she winced in pain...both of them were in rage...she tried to get out of his hold while his grip tightened...for first time she was seeing him in such a mood...his nostrils flared and he was trying his best to control him...

Ri-leave me...ahh...

Ar-dubara aise tone mein mujhse baat mat karna...samjhi

He left her and banged his fist on the wall startling her...

Ar-iss baap beti ki larai mein main shaheed ho jaunga...

He banged the door hard...she fell on the bed crying on her fate...

Ri-I wish you were here mumma...I miss you...uneh kabhi meri khushi ki nahi pari..bas wohi kartey hai jo uneh sahi lagta hai...I hate him...


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Sam-tum pagal ho kya?...raat ke 12 baje yeh bakwaas karne ke liye phone kiya mujhe

Sah-to aur kya karta...ek tum hee ho jisey insab ke baare mein pata hai...kuch galat hai..main janta hu arjun ko...ajeeb hai yh sb

Sam-ajeeb tera dimaag hai...ab ja aur so jaa...sar mat kha mera...

Sah-khaunga..atleast tab tak jabtak puri sachai na pata chaley mjhe

Sam-abey kya sachai yaar...

Sah-shak tha pehle mujhe..magar ab thora yakeen aney laga hai...zaroor uss Commisioner ne na mere dost ko fasaya hua hai...apni pagal beti se shaadi karvaakey...

Sam-oye..kuch bhi bolta hai na tu...

Sahil-shart lagalo...arjun ke liye main jaan de du...phir is pagal ko pagal saabit krna koi aam baat nahi hai...

Sameer-abey?phone kaat diya...kabhi kabhi shak hota hai mujhe...Rawte ka dost hee hai yeh ya..shit..I need sleep man...


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Iam done with finals so can update now :) 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Wow its really nice update
Poor arjun I feel pity on him
Sahil riya ki war mai arj pis gaya
Sahil is such a cute n true friend
Riya is also right at her place
But what is secreat
Waiting to know
Update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Wow yar
Its good
I lovd it
Conti bt thz time s0on

And
Vivah ko bhi agye barhao chanda
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
loll sahil is so drama king 🤣
riya & sahil in war 😆
poor arjun is in trap between riya & her dad
even Sameer not helping him what kind of friend he is? 😡
but I don't like arjun tolerating riya's idiotic behavior
once again hearing honeymoon riya accuse arjun 😡
wow sahil trying to find the truth abt ariya's married 👏
he know riya's dad trap arjun with riya hope sahil will help arjun
continue plz

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