FF. Ariya - The love saga part 11 on page 41 30/11

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Ariya - the love saga
Prologue

Pyar ,ishq love ye sab bas shabd hi to the mere liye jinka mai aksar majak banaya karta tha.. Par tumse mila to maine in shabdo ko jana hi nahi balki jiya bhi hai. Har jasbat jiya maine tumhari wajah se bhatak hi to raha tha bematlab bemaksad sa is duniya ki bheed mai tumne mujhe rasta diya.tum or mai alag kaha hai.ek hi to hai hum..wada karo mai rahu na rahu.tum rahogi mere liye humare liye.tum muskuraogi par hasi humari hogi. Saanse tum logi par jiyenge hum dono. Ab arjun or riya alag kaha ab hum ariya hai.or humesha rahenge.hai na. Promise me riya tum meri jaan ka khayal rakhogi.
I promise you arjun..hum jiyenge.ek dusre k liye ek dusre k sath.ha hum arjun or riya nahi ariya hai .or mai is nam mai hi nahi is duniya mai bhi arjun or riya ko alag nhi hone dungi. Hum sath jiyenge sath mai hasenge. Na hum harenge na hi humara pyar. Hum akhiri saans tak sath honge. Tum isse aage na kuch bologe na sochoge.
Bus hum or hum na mai na tum.na arjun na riya bas
ARIYA



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Here is character sketch
Arjun Rawte - same as show but after riya's death he close last gate of his heart .he don't believe in love any more..he think love only give pain .n whom he love always leave him. but inside his heart he is craving for riya always..recently he meet a girl who is Riya's lookalike
Sameer ayesha shree chotu Lisa sakshi riya same as show
Riya singhaniya - A mysterious girl .look alike of riya. Always wear black dress. Never smile . smart daring n fearless girl. She herself choose lonely and smileless life..
Viren singhaniya - riya's father n new business man in Mumbai. He possessed mysterious eyes..very calm ..love riya a lot .he want her to be happy .
Kanika singhaniy KANU - she is Riya's mother n a house wife. Love her husband n riya alot.want her to get her happiness.

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Oye hoye! Kya baat he! Wah wah! Jaldi update karo, nyc start.. Interestinggg..
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Interesting prologue and nice CS
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Amzng cs nd prolouge mini didu
ab aap jaldi updt kijiyeh
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Part 1




location a deserted jungle
Ek ladka Jo bahut ghayal hai ek ladki ki god mai sir rakh kar leta hai. Aisa lag raha hai shayad jinda bhi na bache. Ladki use pakad ke baithi hui hai.or khub jor se roye ja rahi hai.usne black lehnga pehna hai.
Gi - ye sab meri wajah se hua hai.mai aayi hi q tumhari jindgi mai .na mai aati na hi ye sab hota.mujhe unki baat nahi maanni chahiye thi.
Uske ansu ladke k gal par girte hai .Ladka hosh mai aata hai.
Boy - shh..aisa mat bolo. Tumse hi to meri jindgi jindgi thi.tumhi to is tute dil ka sukun thi.ek tum hi to ho jise mujhe kabhi nahi choda.
Uski ankhe fir kamjori se band hone lagti hai or WO past mai kho jata hai.
Past
Ak admi khali sunsan sadak par yuhi chala ja raha hai.use kuch nhi pata kaha ja raha hai.kaha Jana hai.
Boy - akhir meri hi jindgi q aisi hai.q itna sab mere hi sath hua.jise bhi chaha wo mujhse dur chala gaya.or mai har baar is duniya mai apne akelepan or tute dil ke sath reh gaya. Ek Sapna kya dekha aayi baba ne mujhe thukara diya.u paraya kar diya jaise mai kabhi unka kuch tha hi nahi. Fir bhi mai sambhla apna Sapna pura kiya is desh ki sewa ka majburon ki madad ka unhe nyay dilwane ka. Isi raah par mujhe bhai se badkar dost mila.laga jindgi fir muskurane lagi.fir mujhe mera pehla pyar roshni mili laga jindgi puri ho gayi.ek pariwar tha mera bhi mai sam or roshni. Fir ek burai se ladne ka kya faisla liya .meri duniya hi ujad di us rakshas ne.us din sirf patni ka rishta hi nahi khoya dost bhi kho diya.ek bar fir mera pariwar
Mujhse chin gaya. Mai bas badla lene ko hi to jee raha tha..jo meri jindgi mai pyar khushiyan nahi thi to maine in sab se nata tod hi to diya tha .fir q aayi wo ek nayi ummed nayi jindgi bankar.q mujhe hasaya.q mere bajan dil ko jan di.q kaha ke meri jeet hogi. Is duniya mai kai logo ko jitane wala ye arjun apni hi jindgi ki har jung hara hai. Use bhi kho diya.q ayi wo jab mujhe chodkar jana hi tha.wo bhi sabki tarah jhuti or selfish thi..sabka socha ek mera hi nahi kaise jiyunga uske bina .kaise kategi ye jindgi bin uske. Kuch nahi hai ye pyar .bas ek shabd hai.jo sirf dard deta hai.kam se kam sik se nafrat mujhe jinda to rakhti hai.par unse pyar mujhe har pal marta hai.looking at sky
Bahut manti thi na dono tumhe.kaha ho tum bolo aisa kya bura kiya jo mujhe humesha ye dard or tanhaiyan mili.agar tum such mai ho to kya Laura sakte ho mera pyar.nahi na qki tum ho hi nahi.ha ha ha
Itne mai ek Badi haweli se ek ladki nikalti hai.usne black lehnga chili pehna hai.neck touch dupatta hai.hathon mai black chudiyan.kano mai silver denglers or uski slim waist mai silver waist chain hai.or pairon mai payal.uski ankho mai ansu hai or chehre par udasi.par galo par dekho to lagta hai uski smile bahut pyari hogi dimple smile. Wo jungle ki taraf jati hai ek gana gate hue.arjun ka dhyan uski taraf jata hai
WO gaaa rahi hai

hume tumse pyar kitna, ye hum nahi jante
magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina
hume tumse pyar kitna, ye hum nahi jante
magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina
hume tumse pyar
Arjun bhi uska picha karta hai
suna gam judayi ka, uthate hai log
jane zindagi kaise, bitate hai log
din bhi yaha to lage, baras ke smman
hume intzar kitna, ye hum nahi jante
magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina
hume tumse pyar
Arjun ko rosh or riya ki death had aati hai or uske bad unki yad mai bitaya ek ek pal

tumhe koi aur dekhe to jalta hai dil
badi mushkilo se phir sambhlata hai dil
Arjun ko hostage case or groom murder case mai unlogo ka riya par flat hona yad ata hai
kya kya jatan karte hai, tumhe kya pata
ye dil beqarar kitna, ye hum nahi jante
Arjun ko riya ko goli lagna yad aata hai

magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina
hume tumse pyar kitna, ye hum nahi jante
magar ji nahi sakte tumhare bina
hume tumse .

Arjun apne khayalon or riya ki yad se bahar aata hai to use waha koi nahi dikhta.par use aisa lagta hai jaise riya uske bahut pas thi..

Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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Amazing updt didu
so emotional
aapne toh mujhe rula diya
can easily feel arjun's pain
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Awesome, Amazing! Next part super jaldi..
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emotional one
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Part 2




Arjun ghar laut jata hai.
Next day etf office
Dead body missing case
Ar - mujhe James gonsalvis par shak hai.uska kuch to lena dena hai is case mai.
Ra - ohh come on rawte hum bina saboot kuch nhi kar sakte.
Sak - arjun WO log to tushar se kitna pyar karte the.
Ar - sarcastically smile.pyar nam ki koi cheej nhi sakshi .ye ek emotion hai jiske naam par kuch log apni asliyat bhi chupate hai.sys
Or wo waha se chala jata hai.
Kuch der mai
Sak - ye wo tatto hai Jo us foreigner k hath par tha
Ay - I can find this.
After some investigation they come to know his name is rockey n he lives in modern village.
All reach modern village but rockey mar jata hai.arjun ko lagta hai in sab k piche bhi sik hai. Or wo rockey k ghar ko tahas nahas kar deta hai.
Ar - sik wahi hai in sab k piche
Ra - ruk jao arjun hum etf k officers hai.or kis sik ki bat kar rahe ho tum kya tumne kabhi dekha hai.kya tum sab ne dekha hai sik ko.or maine bhi nahi dekha.tum hawa k picha kar rahe ho rawte.
Tum sik ko roshni ki maut ka jimmedar mante ho na .mai tumhare gusse ko manta hu. Tumhari jid or gusse ne li hai roshni ki jaan.
Arj breakdown on his knee n start crying. N rathod left house. Ayekshi look at him emotionally.
At night in arjun cabin
Arjun couch par baitha hai uski ankhe band hai or hath mai roshni ki file hai. Wo roshni ko miss kar raha hai.
Itne mai sakshi ati hai.use arjun ko aise dekh kar bura lagta hai.or wo use console karke chali jati hai. Arjun ko or bura lagne lagta hai. WO etf premises se bahar aata hai or unknowingly usi haweli k pas wale jungle mai chala jata hai.
Wo apne knee par baith kar khub rota hai.tension gusse or rone ki wajah se uska sir bhari hota hai.itne nai use mehsus hota hai ki kuch soft fingers uske balon ko sehla rahi hai.usme uski taraf dekhne ki bhi takat nahi wo ek tarence mai hai. Kuch hi sec mai wo ladki wahi ped k niche chabutre par baithi hai or uski god mai arjun ka sir hai.or uske hath uske balon ko sahla rahe hai.arjun ko thakawat ki wajah se neend aa jati hai.us ladki k ansu arjun par gir rahe hai
Agli subah arjun uthta hai or dekhta hai waha koi nahi hai uske aas pas aag jal rahi hai Jo ab bujhne hi wali hai.use garmahat mehsus hoti hai.
Ar - ye kya tha kaun thi wo.mujhe thik se to yad nhi bas itna pata hai usne black dress pehni thi.wo mere balo ko sehla rahi thi.or uski chudiyon ki awaj se aisa lag raha tha jaise wo mujhe console kar rahi ho. Aj ki subah kitni shant hai .mere dil ko itna sukun q wo bhi kal ke incident k bad.or mujhe laga wo bhi ro rahi thi. Ek min ye mujhme se Jo khushboo aa rahi hai ye to wahi perfume hai Jo riya use karti thi.next sec tu bhi na arjun riya bhi tujhe chod kar chalk gayi.ab wo bhi nahi ayegi. Par q mujhe kal laga k wo hi thi.or ye aag bhi mujhe is thand mai garmahat dene k liye .Maine nhi jalai to kya usine.to ab wo kaha hai.
Kahi ye sab mera waham to nhi.
Or wo chala jata hai.par uske dil mai.ek sukun hai.
At etf office.
Wo log fir james k ghar mate hai or unhe waha nadem Khan ki lead milti hai..etf waha pahuchti hai par koi use puchtach k dauran goli mar deta hai
Or arjun par bhi aim karta hai. Par wo bach jata hai.
Next day
Ar - mujhpar kisne aim kiya kuch pata chala.
Ai - Sir Vikas wo Mumbai ka jana mana sharp shooter hai. Jo contract killer hai.
Itne mai chotu
Ch - sir wo Vikas wo city hospital mai admit hai.buri tarah ghayal hai.
Sabhi city hospital pahuchte hai.
Vikas bed par leta hai.buri tarah ghayal hai.
Ar - kiske kehne par mujh par aim kiya tha.
Vi - pata nahi sir hum to paiso k liye kam karte hai. Mujhe ek letter or paise mile the.apko marne k liye.
Ar - shree ayeaha iske ghar ki talashi lo or phone bhi check karo.
Ra - ho sakta hai tum jhoot bol rahe ho.
Vi - nhi sir mujhe marna nhi hai.or waise bhi ab mai ye kam chod dunga.ap log mujhe arrest kar lijiye.
Ai - itna badlaw achanak kaise.
Vi - kal rat sir par attack karke mai ghar ja kar so gaya .rat mai kisi ne mujh par blanket dal kar mujhe bahut mara .or utha utha kar patka or fir khud hi hospital mai admit karwaya.or ye chit chod gaya.sir mujhe chaho to fansi dilwa do par uske hatho nhi marna mujhe.
Sam silp leta hai or jor se padta hai
Acp arjun rawte par aim kiya na.ab iski saja to milni hi thi. Agar unhe ek kharonch bhi ayi na to tum soch bhi sakte tumhara wo hal hoga.
Sak - kaun ho sakta hai jise arjun par ek kharonch bhi bardash nhi.
Ai - Jo bhi hai bahut powerful hai.ya ek se jyada qki iski halat bahut kharab hai.
Vi - nhi wo ek hi tha.I am sure
Sh - itna powerful.sir reception se pata chala ise kal koi bahar paiso k sath chod gaya.kaun tha kaha se aya kaha gaya kuch pata nhi.Ise choda bhi aisi jagah jaha cam nhi the .fir call karke jagah batai or Ise admit karne or hume call karne ko kaha.
Ar - or WO phone call
Sh - sir yhi pas k pco se aya.rat thi kisi ne kuch nhi dekha. Jaise wo hawa mai gayab ho gaya.
Ar - WO Jo koi bhi tha hum tak iski info pahuchana chahta tha shayad iske ghar kuch mile.
At night.
Arjun fir wahi pahuchta hai.us ped k pass aag jal rahi hai. Chabutre par ghanss bichi hui hai.or wahi perfume ki smell hai.
Arjun wahi baith jata hai. Or use kab neend aa jati hai pata nhi.
Agli subah use apne kapdo se wahi fragrance aati hai jaise kisi ne use hug kiya ho.uski shirt aj bhi thodi gili hai.jaise koi puri rat roya ho.
Arjun mv q aata hu mai yaha roj.WO ladlki kaun thi or wo jisne Vikas ko mara. Par mera dil jane q bahut sukun mai hai.
Roj etf se yaha ana or rat wahi ped k niche sona uska routine ban gaya hai.WO puri rat sota rehta hai. Jab hi jagta hai jab koi emergency call ata hai.or wo jab jagta hai use apni body par wahi fragrance or uski shirt gili milti hai. Par wo adhi rat ko bhi jage par use aspas koi nhi milta kya koi itni jaldi gayab ho sakta hai impossible. Qki aspas koi hideout nhi.usne sab check kiya uske alawa koi foot mark nhi.par roj aag jalti hai or ghas bilkul bed sheet ki tarah bichi hoti hai .
Par ajkal uska dil ajeb sa shant hai or jaise uski bhi life hai.WO yaha aisa khicha chala ata hai jaise koi uska intjar kar raha hai.

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