Ariya story *do jism aik jaan* teaser of part 11 updated 09july no pm - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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riya ne toh samjun ko jhatka hi de dia
ab sik ka case cbi n etf mil ke solve krenge
that too from cbi premises
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hope apko sai se pckg dy paon

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Ab sab ko ek sath kaam karna padega...

Waooo ab bhot maza ayega. ...

Roj...roj...ne ye naye tamase dekhne ko milenge. ...

Arjun or aisha dono ek sath kese rehne PAYenge ye soch ne wali baat he...

Aisha or Sam ki to nikalkal padi...

Aisha ab roz Sam ko dekhe gi. ...

Ariya ka khuch karo yaar...

Dono karib kab lavo gi. ...

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Thanx

Hope so apko bhi jhatke milte rahen.

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riya ne toh samjun ko jhatka hi de dia
ab sik ka case cbi n etf mil ke solve krenge
that too from cbi premises
waiting for more

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i think i am new to this story i will comment afater reading...all parts..and thoda time lagega
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I am waiting dear,,


Originally posted by: SATRISHI

i think i am new to this story i will comment afater reading...all parts..and thoda time lagega

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 9(a)


11:15am

Sb suv mei beithy hain
Suv chala arjun raha hai sath us rathore,
Pichy shree, riya or chotu hain
Riya on call with aaisha

Riya:"aaisha tum sb ko office mei bola lo hum sb aa rahe hain."

Aaisha:"hum sb aa rahe hain means?"
Riya:"mai or p0ri ETF team aa rahe hain, aa k sb batati hun."
Aaisha:"ok mai sb ko bata dyti hun sb office mei hi hain conf.room mei bolati hun"

Riya:"or han 2 cabin bhi tyar krwa lo"

Aaisha:"cabin tyar hone mei tu 3 se 5 din lag jayen gye or cabin chahiye kis k lye?"

Riya:"rathore sir or arjun conf.room mei tu nai beithy rahen gye? Un k lye cabin tu chahiyen na. Zeyada batun mei time barbad mat karo kam par lag jao"

Aaisha:"ok mem" call end

Rathore:"cabin q riya?"
Riya:"sir ap 2no..." rathore cut her.

Rathore:"share kar len gye na cabin cheifs and 2nd in commands" he winked at her and arjun gives him angry glare.

Arjun:"mai ne us k sath share nai krna 😡 "
Choreeya hansne lagte hain arjun glare krta hai.

Rathore:"or mai ne tumhe riya k sath share nai krne don ga cabin"
Arjun:"q mai riya k sath room share q nai kr sakta?" arjun ne back view mirror riya ko dekhte howe kaha.

Rathore:"rawte room nai 😃 cabin share krna hai wo bhi sirf sik k pakry jane tak 😉 😉, or mai ne tumhe is lye cabin share nai krne dyna hai q k tum har wqt isy danty raho gye"

Shree:"nai sir samjhate rahen gye" he wink at riya and riya is blushing like hell or ye sb arjun ne dekha.

Rathore:"han han shree woi" and laugh

Ariya p.o.v
*aj kafi dino bad rathore ko ayse dekha, kash ye hamesha aysa hi ho jaye*
P.o.v end

After 15 mins.

11:45am

In front of cbi building
Riya:"aaiye sir"
Sb riya k pechy chalte hain.

Scrty gard:"gud m0rng mem"

Riya:"gud m0rng uncle hows u?"
S.gard:"i am fine mem what about you"
Riya:"i am aik dam rocking, meet ETF team ab ye yahin kam kare gi," wo rathore ka pas jati hai,
"he is sameer rathore cheif of ETF, arjun rawte second in command, chotu commando and he is shree u knw vry wel."

S.gard"jai hind sir gud m0rng"
Samjun in shock wo jxt sir hilate hain.

Shree:"ab in ko pata lagy ga k apne undr mei kam krne waln k sath kaise paish aana chahiye" he whishper in chotu ear.

Riya:"aaiye sir"
Wo lift ka botton push krti hai after 30 sec lift ka door open hota hai,
Sb lift mei khare hote hai.
Wahan aik 22 years old boy lift controler hota hai.

Boy:"gud m0rng mem"

Riya:"gud m0rng rahul hows u?" she asking with smile.
Rahul:"me fine mem thanx for asking"
Riya:"pleasure is al mine nd u knw na its my duty"
Tabi door open hota hai or sb lift se bahr ate hain.
ETF waly hairan hai k ye kaisi cheif hai jis k andaz se lagta hi nai hai k ye cheif hai cheif bhi wo jis k naam se mujrim darte hain.

Peon:"gud m0rng"
Riya:"gud m0rng ramu kaka sb ne coffee pe li?" with dimple wali smile.

R.kaka:"nai beta u knw na ap k aane se pehly koi nai peeta"

Riya:"tu thek aj chai sb k lye or aj se 3 cup or add kr lijye ga"
R.kaka:"ji beta thek hai"

Chotu:"aik cheif or itna pyar se bat or riya chai ye kb howa?" in shock

Riya:"mai aysi hi hun chotu, mai nai chahti k mere pechy koi mujhy akro kharoos saro kahen., or chai jb mai khush hoti hun tu sb mil kr chai peety hain."
Wo c.r ka door open krti hai sb us k pechy c.r mei aate hain.

CBI.TEAM:"gud m0rng mem and ETF team"



Edited by Ariyabestessfan - 9 years ago

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