ARIYA TS: IT'S YOUR RIGHT completed on 6/12/15

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IT'S YOUR RIGHT
Arjun entered in their bedroom late in night. He was in study discussing something with his Baba. They were finalising the details. They lost the track of time while working.
When they were done.He just wanted to throw himself on bed and surrender himself to much needed sleep cuddling his beautiful wife😉. Sleeping on bed reminded him the conversation he had with Riya. She literally have threatened him to not sleep on couch.
*FLASHBACK WEEK AGO*
" Arjun beta kya hua, tu thik to haina, aise garden pakad ke kyo baitha hai" his mother asked him when they were sitting on dining table for breakfast when she noticed him massaging his neck.
He glanced at his right to meet Riya's eyes who was also waiting for his answer" Nahi Aai, I'm okay...kuch nahi hua" he answered quickly and left the spot saying he was getting late for his office.
When in night he was getting ready for bed, he saw Riya coming towards him with hot water bag in her hands.
He was surprised. Without giving him any chance to speak she dragged him towards bed and made him sit on it.
Then she gently placed bag on his neck to remove his pain.
"Riya , . Iski koi jaroorat nahi hai. I'm fine" He said trying to get up.
She pulled him back and replied in stern tone, "Chup chap yeha pe baithye".😡
When she was done she left room to keep hot water bag at it's place.
When she returned she saw him sleeping on couch.
She snatched away blanket and pillow from his sleeping form, and kept on bed.
"Riya, ye kya kar rahi ho please mujhe sone do meri kal important meeting hai." He said in sleepy tone.🥱
"To maine kab mana kiya?" She replied.
"To mera blanket aur pillow de do wapis" he said not wanting to argue.😲
"Wo to aapko nahi milne wala..Agar sona hai to bed pe aake sojao warna sari rath jagte raho..."she replied getting on bed.😛
His sleep vanished away at her statement and he sat with jerk on his place.🤢
"Kya kaha tumne?" He asked not believing his ears.😕
"Wahi jo aapne sunna" she replied laying down.😊
"Are you sure? I mean mai yeha thik hu. Mai bed pe sounga to won't it be uncomfortable?" he asked hesistantly.😆
"Mai janti hu aap kitne thik ho...Wo neck and back pain to aapki badhti age ki wajah se tha na"she said sarcastically.😡😆
"Chupchap yeha aake so jayie...Koi jaroorat nahi hai waha uncomfortably sone ki...I'm sure about it... Bed bahot bada hai so we will be comfortable... Aur hum pati patni ha ito ek bed share kar sakte hai na aap us tarf so jana aur mai is taraf.."👏
"Par.." He asked still unsure about her decision.
Irritated with his behaviour she sat up on bed and said,"Jab humne tay kar liya hai ki hum ye rishta nibhayenge to ab aapko kya problem hai? Pati ho aap mera ye sirf aapka haq hai Arjun... "😳
He was astonished with her reply. yes they have decided to continue this forced relationship now willingly but he only was giving her time to adjust with everything. He didn't wanted her to feel uncomfortable around him. Was she ready to take one step ahead in their relationship? Was she really wanted to give his husbandly right to him? Was she ready for their this much close proximity?😳
He was questioning himself.Riya frowned seeing him lost. She kind of had idea what he was thinking. She herself was confused with her decision but when in morning she noticed him noticed his discomfort. She decided to do this. After doing this now she was actually feeling happy.😊
"Ab aap aarahe ho ya mai Aai ko bata du😉?" She asked finally using her strong weapon.
After listening her telling this to his mother he replied quickly getting up from place and getting on bed at the side where she have placed his pillow" nahi Aai ko kuch mat batana... Mai so raha hu bed pe." 😆
He was not ready for yet another crazy drama by his mother.
Riya laughed seeing him this way.😆
"Good night Arjun!" She said laying back and closing her eyes.😊
"Good night Riya!" He replied back smiling for the happy turns their relationship taking.😊
They both went to sleep having small smile on their lips.
*Flashback ends*
Smiling at the memory he joined her in bed where she was sleeping peacefully. As if sensing his presence she turned around in her sleep and hugged him. This was new improvement in this week, she used to hug him in her sleep, now he has been her favourite teddy.😳
Securing her in his arms he dropped affectionate kiss on her hairs and mumbled good night to her sleeping form.
With that he closed his eyes and surrender himself to sleep with the last thought of their happy future with them always being close to each other.😊
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This was the first part of this two shot guys.
Second part depend on your response.😊
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Very beautiful.. :)
Ariya's relation is improving...
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