ARAKSHI: Whispers of Unknown Feelings-2nd part updated - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Awesome start divisha 😊
Love to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for all the comments and likes to this story...so here i present the first part of the story...hope u all will like it...

1st Part

At College,

She was waiting since half an hour but it seems like ages. A girl came from behind and called her very sweetly,"Hiii Aisha".

Aisha(turning back and with same sweetness):-Hiii Shweta.

Shweta:-Kiska wait kar rahi ho???

Aisha:-Mere Shining star ka.

Shweta went from there while Aisha was standing at the college gate only. After few minutes Shweta again came there but this time with someone beside her.

Shweta:-Yeh raha Shining Star.

Aisha turned to find Sameer standing there with Shweta.

Aisha(sarcastically):-Mai chamkte huye taare ki baat kar rahi hoon tootte huye taare ki nahi

Just then Arjun entered the College.

Aisha(happily):-There he is...MY SHINING STAR.

Arjun(with same happiness):-Kaisi hai MERI JAAN??...

Sameer:-Woh toh thik hai par tu nahi rehne waala.

Arjun:-Kyu???

Aisha:-Shyamal sir tera wait kar rahe hai...jaldi jaaa.

Arjun went to Sir's office asked for permission to enter.

Arjun:-Sir aap kuch kahe isse phele mai kuch bolu...may I???

Sir:-Jaldi bolo...

Arjun(dramatically):-Sir mai aaj ghar se time pe nikla tha par aadhe raste jaa kar ruk gaya...kyunki maine road ki side pe kaali billi dekhi.

Sir:-Phir

Arjun(continuingly):-Maine billi ko dekha...billi ne mujhe dekha...phir hum dono ne ek dusre ko ek saath dekha.

Sir(listening carefully):-Phir kya hua???
Arjun(relaxing his shoulders):-Phir kya...billi bhaag gayi...(again dramaticallly)...par mai wahase nahi gaya kyunki mujhe aapki baat yaad aagayi ki agar billi rasta kaatt jaaye toh phir uss raste se jaana nahi chahiye warna accha kuch bura hota hai...maine intezaar kiya...thodhi der baad ek aadmi wahase guzra uske baad hi mai gaya...ab aap batayie maine kuch galat kiya...agar kiya toh I am ready for the punishment...

Sir:-Nahi Arjun...tumne jo kiya thik kiya...tum jaa sakte ho...tum bohut samajhdaar ho Arjun...

Arjun went out from the cabin not before having a victory smile and saying"Kuch naya bataiye sir".

Sameer and Aisha were waiting for him outside and one look at Arjun's face told them that Shyamal sir was clean bold.

Arjun(mischievous smile):-Meri isss hassi ke peeche ka raaz SAMJHE YA SAMJHAU??...

Sameer:-Bhai samajh gaye...tu firse andhvishwaas ki game khel ke aaya hai...kyu karta hai aisa??

Arjun:-Yeh sab mujhe bhi nahi pasand...par yaar sir mere peeche hi padhe rehte hai...woh hume padhate bhi nahi phir bhi unhe mujhse problem hai...

Aisha(saying in between):-Leave this Arjun.

As she was about to say something more, a girl came and hugged Sameer.

Arjun(slowly to Aisha):-Lo aagayi Sam ki deewani... Mahira .

Mahira(jumping with joy):-Sameer subah subah tumhari shakal dekh li ab mera din bohut accha jayega.

Arjun:-Abhi jab aayi tab kisi aur ki shakal dekhi nahi??

Mahira:-Dekhi par notice nahi ki na...

Arjun(again to Aisha):-Aisa bhi hota hai??

Aisha(to Arjun):-Mujhe kya pata??...(to herself)...bohut accha jayega tera din...CHIPKALI.

Aisha went to other side of Arjun. A boy was coming with coke in his hand. Aisha put her leg in between the way of that boy. Boy lost the balance and all coke splashed out on Mahira.

Aisha and Arjun started laughing and Sameer was trying his best to control his laughter while Mahira who was frustrated by all this went to washroom to clean herself properly. Aisha also went from there with her other friends.

Arjun(controlling his laughter):-Isska matlab tu samjha ya mai samjhau???

Sameer(confused):-Kya bol raha hai???

Arjun(while walking with Sameer):-Yeh sab jo abhi hua...uska matlab ki koi tera chehra dekhle toh usska din accha nahi kharab jaata hai...teri shakal hi bekaar hai.

Sameer glared Arjun at this and Arjun ran from there. Both were running in the corridor when suddenly Arjun twisted. A boy was standing with a flower there. Arjun took that flower and with a full turn he came directly on his knees.

In front of him was standing a girl with lower head. He was lost for sometime. The girl wore a beautiful blue anarkali with few accessories. She was looking like an angel came down from heaven. Arjun's trance was broken by a comment.

Boy(sarcastically):-Wow Arjun...what a proposal...issiliye tu rockstar hai college ka...well done.

Arjun got up from his knees. He actually don't know how to react and one look at girls face told him that she is not liking the things going around her. Arjun gave back that flower to the boy saying "Yeh le pakad apna phool".

Arjun(stammering):-I I am...ss.

Sameer punched Arjun from back so that he can speak properly.

Arjun:-I am really sorry...maine aapko dekha nahi...sorrry...

The girl went from there as quickly as she could and Arjun called her many times but she didn't gave a glance at him.

Sameer(hitting Arjun):-Abe yeh kya kiya tune??

Arjun(helplessely):-Maine kya kiya Sam??...maine usko propose nahi kiya...mai toh usse pheli baar mila hu.

Sameer:-Pata hai mujhe...I think she is new admission aur uske expressions dekh ke lag raha tha yeh jo bhi hua woh uske liye ragging se bhi ganda tha.

Arjun and Sameer went from there for their class. While on the other hand, the girl was really embarrassed by what happened few minutes ago. A girl who saw everything was standing with her friends and commented looking at her.

Girl:-Yaar tumhe pata hai abhi Arjun ne iss ladki ko propose kiya...isme aisa hai kya??...aur yeh wahase aise hi aagayi agar mai hoti na toh itna accha proposal waste nahi jaane deti..

Now the girl was at the verge of crying. This was enough for her. Firstly she was really nervous today as its her first day in college. Now that incident happened with her. She ran from there to go to "Information Office".

Girl(controlling herself):-Suniye mai new admission hu...mujhe kuch bhi nahi pata college ke baare mei..Kya aap bata sakte hai ki meri class kounsi hai???

She gave a file in which there is all information about her. As the man sitting on the chair took the file her name was written there in capital letters "SAKSHI ANAND".

Man:-Dekhiya Mam humare paas aur bhi kaam hai...ek kaam kijiye (giving her a photo)..yeh beech mei jo ladki hai na usske paas jaiye yeh aapko sab bata degi.

The man put that photo inside her file and gave it to her. Sakshi protested but it was of no use. She looked at the photo and her eyes captured three friends standing together. The boys who were standing at the side made her remember something but she ignored it for time being and went to find that girl. The girl's name was written behind the photo "Aisha".

She went from there and to her luck she found Aisha standing with her friends.

Sakshi:-Aisha Ji.

[This time maine Arjun aur Sakshi ko pehle hi mila diya...taaki meri first story ki tarah aap logo ko der tak wait na karna padhe😆]

Here i end the 1st part...sorry for any mistakes...hope u all liked it...plsss do comment...

Precap:-All characters in the same class.



Edited by Desirable_Star - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Lovely update divisha
I read very few stories on this forum and in most of them had all characters belong to ETF:-) :-)
Here is something different
I really loved the plot will college ki masti and all
Hayyee arjun is so smart
How easily he escaped from his teachers wrath hehehe
Nice dear
Thanks for the pm:-) :-) and continue soon:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
awesome update...
Just loved it...
Samjun,ayesha sakshi in same class...
Plz plz plz continue soon... 😃
nd thanx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Res/Unres "me late:- pouty face"
Anyways the update is totally mood changing princess!!!👏
Another time finding words for ur update! Sab to use kar liye!! Ab kya!! anyways the update I can say WONDERFUL!!! Loving this full on masti and dhamaal!!!😆😉 Oohhh... Our hero and Aisha just kamaal and dhamaal!!!🥳 how she handled mahira and arjun handled that sir!!!!😆😆😆 maza aa gaya!!! And that Sam as Aisha said toota hua Tara!!!🤣 no but truly love his character too!! 😳 simple and awesome!!! And finally one of the best scene you know which one is that right!!! on a very first day arjun on knees that too in front of sakshi!!! Love that scene!! The awesome reaction!!!!😳😳 Bichari saki!!!! the characters are well portrayed!! 👏 and now all are in same class... maza aayega!! Want more and more "greedy me"😛😛 plzz con.sooonnn!!!! LOVE YOU PRINCESS!!!!! 🤗
Edited by Arakshiya_58 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Awesome part
Arjun fool his sir
Aisha prank is nice on mahira
Arjun is really lover boy In this story
Sakshi scared
Arakshi first meet is superb
Con soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
arjun Sam Aisha good
Aisha hate Sam
samjun cool
sakshi do entry karte Hi proposal
sakshi ko Aisha ko dhundhna he
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Supperbbb
Loved Arjun-Ayesha-Sam bonding Sooo Lovely
Loved Arakshi first meet
Awww Sakshi have to face embarrassment but Arjun didn't do it purposely
Let's see what happens next
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
nice update
arjun ne toh sixer maar de pehle din sakshi ko propose 😉😆
aisha jealous of mahira and uss bechari pe saara coke gira de 😆
sakshi also in same class as arjun nice
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Good going story
Love to see arjun in play ful mood
Waiting to continue

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