Arakshi TS: Pehli Dhadkan (Part2 - Page 3)

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Mishthi_Shivsai

@Mishthi_Shivsai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Lovely start.😊😛

Perfectly etched words to portray the emotions beautifully.👏👏

The gradual changes of arjun from hesitations to slow realisations and finally confession make it easier for us to accept his changed form.😃

Choice of song and title of the stor are very apt.😊 The poetic lines are superb given that they depicts the inner turmoils of the lead pair so nicely.

End is awesome as well. All together its a sweet story to be cherished for a long time.

Edited by utsha - 10 years ago

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Ritikanfly

@Ritikanfly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Nice beautiful updt arjun n sakshi pov lovely sakshi on uc n got shot arjun n etf worried arjun accepting his love fr sakshi

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

@VindhyaMounika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Desirable_Star
Diii...yipppieee...i m first
I m glad that u upadated...was missing u and your stories
Coming to update...It was Really very sweeettt update...really loved it❤️
U presented every bit of it so nicely...Arjun's hesitation...Saki's feelings...Arjun's confession...everything was superb👏👏

Diii...waiting for other updates...MISSED U SO MUCH🤗

Hai Divi.
Even I am glad reading your reply.
Even I missed u lottt...
Hopefully my other updates will be soon.
Miss u. Love u.

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

@VindhyaMounika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: utsha
Lovely start.😊😛

Perfectly etched words to portray the emotions beautifully.👏👏

The gradual changes of arjun from hesitations to slow realisations and finally confession make it easier for us to accept his changed form.😃

Choice of song and title of the stor are very apt.😊The poetic lines are superb given that they depicts the inner turmoils of the lead pair so nicely.

End is awesome as well. All together its a sweet story to be cherished for a long time.

Thank u. That is so sweet of you.
Coz until I read ur comment I didn't realize that my story was that good.
Thank u so much.