ariya ff MUKAMMAL PYAAR KI(updated chapter 4 on page38..7/9) - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71
hey guys
thank you so much
who liked and commented on my story
actually I'm sick
but still I'm posting the first part of the story
hope you all like it...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
so guys here is the first part
enjoy...


Chapter :1





At late night a suv stops near etf office


a handsome dashing man come out from it and banged his hand on


bonnet of the car frustratedly then he Marched into the office


suddenly someone calls him from behind "arjun sir"


yes it's none other than our super cop arjun


arjun turned back and barked kya hai shree ( bechara shree arjun ka


aawaj sunke itna dar gaya ki usko yaad nahi aaraha tha usne arjun ko


pukara kyun tha) arjun again barked ab bolo ge bhi ya nahi


shree mumbled somehow vo sir mujhe nind aarahi hai(lol..dar ke mare


bechara anab shanab bak raha hai)


arjun glared him and said angrily to mujhe ye bata ne ke liye roka tumne hah..


shree ka to bura hal ho gaya gulping down his saliva he said no no sir I

mean...vo..mai..vo..bhul gaya


and fearly added sorry sir arjun glared him once more move inside the


office shree murmured bach gaya tu to aaj shree beta without wasting


any moment he run away from there like saving his precious


life(he..he..he ab aur karta bhi kya bechara shree iss liye bhag shree beta apni jan bacha ke bhag)


arjun take his sit in conference room he is in deep thought


at that time sameer come there and he shouted what the hell rawte


tum aapne aap ko samajh te kya ho ha... jo jee mai aaye tum hamesha


vo karte ho aaj to had hi hogaya aagar vo aadmi mar jata to cutting him

in mid arjun said lakin mara to nahi na


sameer angrily said tum kabhi nahi sudhar sakte rawte mere apne


chief ka kahe ka ulta kare bagair tumhe chain nahi aata


arjun mockingly said oh...mai to bhul hi gaya tha ap etf chief hai "sir"


stretching the word sir


taking his gun from table arjun leave the conference room


and sameer keep looking on that way where arjun left with some frustration and anger


arjun get on his suv fuming in anger and start it


he is in very bad mood and just thinking about what had happened that day

~Flashback starts~


It was a normal day in etf all were chatting in conference room


after sometime sameer and arjun came all wished them good morning


sameer wished the same arjun just nodeed then both leave to their cabin


few minutes later sameer come to the conference room seeing him in


serious mood chotu whispered lo aagaya shanti mai vangh dalne


shree heard that and said aabbe marwayega kya Mr dammit se chup rai


sameer barked on both of them guys concentrate


both shree and chotu meekly said sorry sir


then sameer said we have a case so be ready guys


On the crime spot :

there was a dead body in middle of the road shree


said sir yaha pe kal rat ko kisine mahesh nam ka ek aadmi ko dekha tha


sameer asked him to kaha hai vo shree pointed to a man and said vo


raha sir sameer went near him and ask him to bolo kal itni rat ko tum yaha Kay kar rahe the


mahesh answered rudely mai jaha pe bhi rahu isse apko koyi matlab nahi


sameer press his lips together to control his anger


and asked again achhe tarike se puch raha hu bata de warna hume aur


bhi tarika aata hai samjha...


but the man mahesh was too arrogant he didn't reply


arjun saw all that he was not in good mood that day and after all this


his anger was on top he marched towards mahesh and hold him by


neck and started shaking him and shout bol jo pucha hai bol...


the man mahesh start coughing and said somehow bata ta hu sab chod dijiye mujhe


sameer shout on arjun rawte kya kar rahe ho ye chod do usko mar jaye ga ye


but he didn't listen any thing


so sameer order him to leave mahesh arjun angrily leave that man


then mahesh said everything to etf and also admitted that he was
behind that murder

~Flashback end~


arjun was thinking about what increased his anger today some past


memory was behind that anger


all his thought broken suddenly when he heard a loud scream of someone


he immediately stopped his car and got down from suv again in angry


mood murmuring yehi bacha tha aaj ke liye


it was too dark and cold outside somehow he managed to see that


a girl is lying on the road that increased his anger more he muttered I hate girls


suddenly he also noticed someone is standing a little away from that girl...


arjun thought kon hai ye dono???


far away form there a man is reading a letter suddenly he screamed loudly...


he starts breaking all the things of the room


and said kyu chali gayi tum...aisa nahi karna chahiye tha tumhe


iska anjam achha nahi hoga tumhare liye...he tears that letter in many small pieces


tum jaha pe bhi ho mai tumhe dhund nikalun ga...he smirked evily


mai aaraha hu tumhare pas aaraha hu jan...hahahaha...he started laughing like a maniac...

to be continued...

so first chapter is done
how was it...please tell me
give your likes and comments
as I told you who will do both likes and comments I'll PM only those from next chapter
and if I won't get enough likes and comments I'll not continue this ff


~Rizz~


Edited by Mafruhanowrin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
fabulous update👏
written brilliantly😊
continue soon😉
Edited by whitelily - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Awsum update yaar...!!!!!
Bahot acha hai...
Bechara shrreee...😆
Arjun kitna rude hai... Akru kahi ka...
Cont sooonn Rizzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Superb
Why is Arjun angry?
Who is this girl and other man?
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
Posted: 10 years ago
#77
sorry for being late...
awesome prologue.. !!!
loved it.. !!
update soon.. !
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Nice...

Kon he vo ladka. ..? Or sayad vo riya ko khojne ki baat kar raha tha...

Kya rishta he Uska riya se...
Edited by rvss - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Awesome update dii...loved it...do con't soon thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
hey didu awesome update
just loved it
omg shree is so much scared of arjun
and shree's and arjun's part at the beginning was funny
then in conference room
samjun both of them can't never change
and arjun in foul mood
aur tb usse riya mili
hey bhagwan humari riya ko iss akdu rawte se bachana
aur who was the guy that was following riya ???
and who was the guy who sounds evil too me
and y he is finding riya ???
and wht is his relation with riya ??

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