ariya ff MUKAMMAL PYAAR KI(updated chapter 4 on page38..7/9)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey everyone I'm Rijvi for the first time I'm writing a ff on my favorite couple ariya I'm really worst writer so please bear with me...so here is the prologue:

*MUKAMMAL PYAAR KI*

It is a late night of winter,there is chilling cold everywhere

one beautiful girl wearing a pink short dress is walking aimlessly on street

so much engrossed in her thoughts as if biting cold has no effect on her,she

is thinking who is she, where she should go and where she is but there is

no answer of her questions she can't remember anything...she stop abruptly

when she see a man is following her she feel scared and start running, she

don't know what to do now she is feeling helpless,suddenly she bumped

into a car and due to stress fainted on the road...one man comes out from the

car angrily thinking that" bas ab yehi bacha tha aaj ke liye"when he looks at

that unconscious girl he becomes more angry and mutters slowly "I hate girls"...


that's it I don't know how it is so figure cross
please give likes and comments as your comments will decide that I will continue this ff or not

~Rizz~


[CHARACTER SKETCH in page no:6]
[pictures of characters in page no:7,8,9]

(if anyone want PM then buddy me)

(guys there are some readers who commented on story but didn't like the prologue and some readers like the prologue but didn't comment so if you guys want PM then you have to do both likes and comments)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yipee me first🥳🥳
Hey rizz😊...
it's wonderful prolouge dear
loved it to core
it's awesome nd flawless
it's damn interesting
please do continue soon
eagerly waiting to read more
nd thanks for the pm dear
Edited by jeharshu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey dear 😊😊 😊😊

rizz di 😛 😛 😛 😛

nyc prologue 😆😆 😆😆

really awesome 👏👏👏👏

so i think ...
woh ladki riya hai na..???

n woh ladka arjun hai...???

am i right...???

plzz do cont soon di

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anamkhan126

hey dear😊


rizz di😛

nyc prologue😆

really awesome👏

so i think ...
woh ladki riya hai na..???

n woh ladka arjun hai...???

am i right...???

plzz do cont soon di


hey dear
ab vo dono kon hai ye to aage ki update mai hi pata chalega 😉
glad you liked it and will try to update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome prologue 👍🏼
and it's perfect rizz😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow.
Amazing yet intriguing update.
Continue soonish.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...anika...

Wow.
Amazing yet intriguing update.
Continue soonish.
Thanks for the pm.


thanks di and will continue soon 😊
Edited by Mafruhanowrin - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: whitelily

awesome prologue👍🏼

and it's perfect rizz😊


thanks Shami dear... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: zubiya92

Awesome concept
Cont soon


thanks for liking di
Will continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting. continue soon. Thanks for pm.

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