ariya ff MUKAMMAL PYAAR KI(updated chapter 4 on page38..7/9) - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you very much everyone who liked and commented on the previous chapter
it means a lot to me
scroll down for chapter 3...
Edited by Mafruhanowrin - 10 years ago
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CHAPTER : 3






here's the next chapter guys sorry for late was not in condition of giving update...
enjoy...



Arjun thought to iss ladki ka nam riya hai...suddenly a unexpected
thought peeps in his mind..."kitna sweet nam hai bilcul iss ki tarha..."
crap... kya soch raha hai arjun tu..tere dimag thikane pe to hai with that arjun again scolded himself


then arjun left that room and called his one friend named karan who was a doctor and told him to come home immediately


after finishing the call he slumped on the sofa and closed his eyes
arjun was really tired that day...not physically actually mentally

he drifted into the morning memory...


~Flash back of that morning started~

He was going to etf office in his suv suddenly he notice a couple in bike
they'd smiley face
they were looking really happy together
unknowingly that scene brought a slight smile on his face


as the scene reminded him his pasts one beautiful memory
that smile vanished abruptly when the same beautiful past turned as a dreadful nightmare

the past which once was the reason of his smile
reason of his living...his reason to breathe
and gave him the blissful feeling of the world

but now the reason of his sadness and aversion

the past which still burns him from inside
the past which he always gives him immense pain

it was a such past which took away two most important relation from his life

he always try to get rid of that past but it never allow him to live peacefully...It kept haunting him

so without any moment he furiously drive towards etf office

for sure his mood was totally off after remembering all this(so guys that the reason behind arjuns foul mood)

~Flash back of that morning ends~

he stand up from sofa and with most hatred said"ye sab kuch uske wajese huya...na vo mere jindegi mai aati aur na ye sab I hate you...
his words remain incomplete as the door bell rang
arjun open the door


his friend karan was standing there
arjun welcomed him...karan barked"kya welcome kar raha hai
sale...mera nind kharab kar diya

achha khasa khara hai mere samne phir
akhair aisa kya pahar tut para tere sar pe itni rat ko jo...


cutting him in mid arjun said pahar nahi ladki tut padha hai...
karans eyes popped out hearing this


he start stammering...and somehow said ladki tut pada hai...vo bhi tere jaise akru ke sar par...bechari ladki...badnasibi uski aur koyi achha admi nahi mili usko tere jaise khadus hi mili...
and he started laughing madly holding his stomach...hehehehehe


arjun gives him deadly glare and said aab tera laughing session khatam ho gaya hai to jara check karega ki kya hua hai uss ladki ko... in mind"riya ko"


karan somehow controlled his laughter and said par ye bata vo ladki tujhe mila kaha see...arjun told him everything then karan said hmm...waise sach mai azib hai yaar vo ladki itni rat ko waha akele kar kya rahi thi...aur usse tere hi car mili thi takrane ko


he shook his head like prudent person and said teasingly "kuch to gadbad hai...kahi tera hi intezar to nahi kar rahi thi ha..."


arjun barked tera dimag thikane pe to hai ya pura satak gaya... aur ab tu jara chup rah...karan said okay okay sorry yaar
ab kuch bhi nahi bolunga...chal dikha uss ladki ko


arjun take him to his bed room and showed him unconscious riya
seeing her karan said wow yaar ye ladki to bohot khubsurat hai...
hayee...mai fida ho gaya iss par


arjun don't know why he didn't like that karan praised her and said all that

karen checked her and said don't worry yaar shock aur stress ke wajese ye behosh hai aaj rat soone de kal subha tak hosh aajayegi

arjun rolled his eyes and barked"agar ye bedroom mai soyegi to mai kaha sounga...sofe pe ha...

karan said false dreamily style aaree wah kitna samajh dar ho gaya hai tu...ye huya na samajhdari wali bat

arjun shook head frustratedly looks at riya and muttered"huh...ye ladki mere ghar mai aake mujhe aapne hi bedroom se out kar diya
bas iss ko jaldi hosh aaye aur mujhe chut kara mile iss musibat se"

and karan was busy in checking out riya then he commented"sharif khandan ki ladki lagti hai then just casually said pata nahi iss ki nam kya hoga
"Riya"...arjun unknowingly said lost in some thought

karan look mischievously towards arjun and said Oooh...nam bhi pata hai acp sab ko ha...

arjun barked aapna bakwas bandh kar aur dafa ho yaha se
karan dramatically said huh...aapna kam nikalwake vaga raha he mujhe
arjun said "oyee aapna drama bandh kar ab ye samjha ya samjhau..."


karan defeatedly said samhajh gaya bap..please ab aapna ye samjho ya samjhau wala dialogue aapne pas hi rakh...


then karan bid arjun bye and went from there

after closing the door arjun felt really sleepy but he'd no choice except sleeping in sofa he angrily glared the sofa like he's gonna burn it with his eyes(ab iss mai bechara sofe ki kya galti hai... 🤣 )
then after changing his clothes he took the sofa and slept there

next morning arjuns was sleeping with some uncomfortableness yet peacefully
his sleep broke hearing someones scream
it was so loud that hearing that sudden scream he fell down from sofa
(poor arjun...😆)"ouch"...arjun rubbed his head
he put his hand on his ear and thought itni subha subha kon mere ghar mai aise pagalo ki tarha chilla raha hai...


suddenly he remembered about riya
oh..shit kahi uss ladki ko matlab riya ko hosh to nahi aagayi he thought
arjun murmured angrily" par ye chilla kyu rahi hai..."

he went near bed room first he knocked but no response so he opened the door and just tried peep inside...suddenly a pillow hit his head...what the hell...murmuring that angrily arjun look inside
and saw riya was preparing to throw another pillow towards him
somehow he avoided that pillow


arjun went inside the room and asked mera sar phod ne ka irada hai ye sab kya...he couldn't finish
"ouch" he screamed holding his stomach as riya kicked him there
arjun thought hissing in pain"maine kya socha aur ye kya nikli... karate
kick marti hai..."


to add his surprise riya was again preparing to give him a tight punch
arjun shockingly saw all this and again thought"ye bilkul bhi aabla nari nahi hai..."


this time arjun able to avoid the punch
he hold riyas hand... twisted it to her back and pulled her towards him...

riya was not ready for this sudden pull she banged with arjuns broad hard chest...a sudden electricity run through their body by the touch of each other... they were very close to each other they could feel each others warm breathe

riya looks up to arjun somewhat angrily...she directly look in his eyes and about to say something but she can't able to say anything as she's spell bound by those deep black eyes

arjun at first wanna avoid the eye lock wanna act according to his mind not to his heart but that time his heart wasn't listening to his mind something was attracting him towards her at last being defeated by his heart he looked in her eyes as he looked he's mesmerized... her eyes were speaking volume and he just keep looking in her eyes

after so much year arjun was having the same feeling which has
turned into hatred many before which he avoided always and thought will never happen to him in life again

or could say he had closed the door of his heart intentionally
and didn't open for anyone after that dreadful past...

Somewhere else Fred was gathering information about that girl of the photo
but he couldn't find much
only he knows now that that girls name is "Riya Mukherjee"

To be continued...


hope this chapter is up to the mark
If want PM then don't forget to give your likes and comments all good and bad reviews are welcome


~Rizz~


Edited by Mafruhanowrin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update👏👏
loved it😆😆
continue soon😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
brilliant update
riya kick arjun hahahaha
poor arjun
wao karan is awesome
alwayz irritate arjun
but loved it
continue soon
thnx for pm
in advance
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update dii...loved it...arjun-karan convo along with arjun's pov was funny...riya ne karate skills ajmaya arjun per...cont soon dii
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Posted: 10 years ago
mind blowing chapter
uff karan tease arjun 😉
somewhat arjun didn't like karan praised riya jealous boy 😆
ups arjun got punch from riya 🤣
arjun comment on riya ye abla nari nahi hai quite funny 🤣
awe ariya close encounter 😳
who is that fred & why he is looking for riya? 😕
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyyy Rizz
that was awesome sweetheart😳
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love arjun & karan talk...


ha ha ha riya & arjun fight...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update ridz
karan arjun was rly funny
hahaha riya just kick arjun
arjun thinking riya as a aabla nari
long way to go my boy
love the update
thanks for pm
plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb
love it
cont soon
thnx for pm

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