ariya ff MUKAMMAL PYAAR KI(updated chapter 4 on page38..7/9) - Page 13

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hey guys I'm back with the next chapter
enjoy...


CHAPTER:2



The man come out of darkness and go near the the unconscious girl (aare wohi aadmi jo uss ladki se thora dur khara tha)


he tried to touch her...arjun notice all this at first he didn't take it


seriously he thought that man maybe know the girl..."I shouldn't


interfere in anyone's personal matter" arjun thought(khud ko kya samjha rahe ho acp sahab sidhe


sidhe kyu nahi kah dete ladki ki mamle mai nahi padhna tumhešŸ˜†)


so arjun was going back in his suv but then he heard that girl murmuring


something in unconscious state...


she was saying something like "help"hearing that he turned back


immediately his mind is now in full cop mode who has the


responsibility of insure the safety of all civilians


the man was still there and trying to touch the girl again and again


when he tried to touch her face someone hold his hand it's none other than arjun...


arjun asked the man kon ho tum aur ye ladki kon hai


that man replied tujhse matlab...aabe kon hai tu aapni jan bachana


chata hai to fut yaha se...


now arjun understood everything that the man is nothing but a one roadside goon and his intention is not good


arjun just smirked and said yaha se bhagna kisko chahiye ye to abhi


pata chal jayega...saying this he punched on that man's face


that goon landed on ground and was hissing in pain holding his


face(hmm...ab hamare hero se panga lega to yehi hoga na... šŸ˜‰)


arjun goes near the man hold his collar and said ab agar apni shakal puri tarha nahi


bigarna chata hai to dafa ho ja yeha se...


the goon understood that he has provoked the wrong person it's better


to run away from there...(bara jaldi hi samhaj gaya bachhu warna aaj to


tera kima hi ban jata... šŸ˜†)


after all this arjun finally looks at the girl she is still unconscious... he


noticed that the girl is wearing a short dress arjun murmured "aagar


aisi chote kapre pahnen ke itni rat ko nikle gi to gunde to piche parega hi na"


he went to his suv and bring a water bottle and sprinkle water on her face


but the girl was not waking up so he shake her little and said "hello


miss please uthiye" but no effect


now he was in big dilemma that what should do he was thinking who


was that girl and what was she doing alone in such silent road


after thinking a lot he decided to take her with him to his home


but he was hesitating whether he should touch that girl or not..but


finding no other option he picked her up in his arms(aww...how lucky the girl is...)


somehow he managed to open the door of the suv and lied her down on back seat


he comes to the driving seat and started the suv...after 20 minutes he


reached to his home he opened the lock of the door of the


house then again picked the girl in his arms and move inside the house


he told the watchman to park the suv and give the keys to him... arjuns


house was submerged in darkness..as no one was in his home...


he went to his bed room and put her slowly on bed


now for the first time he see her face clearly...she looks so innocent,


pure like a baby...her face was little sweaty... her hair is messy and coming on her face... he


hesitated little then tucked the hair behind her ear looking


her cheeks he guessed she has dimpled smile... a smile which can bring


smile to anyone's face...but at that moment her face is showing some fear...


he doesn't know why he wanted to touch her face...he wanted to know


why she is feared...like he wants to remove all her sorrow...and like he


just always want to see a heart melting smile on her face


he came out of his thought when he heard door bell ring arjun


went towards the door and opened it the watchman standing there


he said sab maine gari park kar di hai ye rahi chabi...taking the keys


arjun closed the door... he come to his bed room again and look at the


girl and muttered what the hell ye kya ho raha hai mujhe.. apne aap pe


control rakhna hoga mujhe... he frustratedly move his finger in his hair"I can't feel attraction for any damn girl"


"NEVER"he roared...


he angrily fist his hand...then he started leaving the room to call a


doctor as the girl is not coming to her sense


suddenly he noticed something in her neck...he goes near and saw



there is a tattoo...something is written in it and and he read what is written in middle of that tattoo...


then arjun slowly whispered..."RIYA"


arjun thought to kya iss ladki ka nam riya hai...


somewhere else one guy is talking in phone...his face was


showing evilness someone said from the other side of the phone"sir


apko yaha aana hi hoga warna bohot bara loss ho jayega and our


company can't afford it" the guy screamed frustratedly ok fine and


angrily broke the phone then he turned back and said to bol kam kar payega...


one man named Fred standing there he said I'll try my best but you


have to give me money as much I want...


that guy stopped him and said jo mangega usse dugna dunga


par aagar kam nahi hua to...saying this he just put something in the


table which is in front of him...Fred fearly saw there is a gun he said in


shaken voice no no your work will be done I promise


the guy just smirked seeing Freds state and said to ye tere liye hi achha


hoga... bhul na mat Rehan Malik kya kar sakta hai...Fred fearly nodded


and hurriedly left from there(so guys now you all got it na that this guy is Rehan Malik)


then rehan take one picture from table and start cressing the


pic and said kyu dur chali gayi tum mujhse kyu??? then he paused for


some moments and took a sharp breathe and added bas thore din aur jan


Phir mai tumhe aapne aapse kabhi dur nahi hone dunga...


he roared "KISI BHI KIMAT PE NAHI...TUM SHIRF AUR SHIRF MERE
HO...SHIRF MERE"

to be continued...
done with the second chapter
hope it was not that bad
please leave your likes and comments
aur ha mujhe lamba wala comments chahiye...
itni si kripa kijiye mujh par guys apni likes aur comments dono hi dijiyega...


~Rizz~



Edited by Mafruhanowrin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
yipee me first to comment🄳
wow didu
thank god you updated
and that too after mine & divi di's request
love you lot didu
but itna chotu sa update tha
and yeh arjun idiot pehle riya ko uss unknown goon k sath chor kr ja rha tha
idiot kahi ka but thank god , his cop mind work at right time
and sach mein uss goon ka kima banjata
and aww arjun took riya at his home
how sweet , waiting to see for ariya's love story
and i was right this reyaan guy was evil
or yeh reyan kis ladki ki baat kr rha tha
kahi riya toh nhi ???
aur riya aur iss reyaan ka kya relation hai ???
didu nxt prt jaldi update krdena
waiting...
Edited by stutisinghania - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update di...
Just loved it...
Loved ariya scenes
Eagerly waiting for next part
Plzzz do cont soon...
N thanks for pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Full too filmy
Lage raho šŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
fantabulous updatešŸ‘šŸ‘
written beautifullyšŸ‘šŸ¼
continue soonšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Waiting for the part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow Rizz awsum update yaar...
i luved it...
arjun and his genious mind...
par pehle riya ko godown main le gaya phir apne ghar main...
par ye reeyan ka angle kya hai yaar????????
cont soonšŸ˜‰

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