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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
nice concept
waiting 4 update
thanx dear 4 another ARIYA story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Thank u for this story dost...u r awesome...do cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutenamu

Thank u for this story dost...u r awesome...do cont soon


your most welcome my dear cutipie but the credit goes to you for sharing such an awesome concept
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey guys here is the cs & first part too , i'm telling you guys in advance that it'll be emotional... here i present the cs , so enjoy aur kisi ko agar rula diya ho toh advance mein sorry...
character sketch
acp sameer rathod : chief of etf a very brave & loyal officer and hat crime & criminals , had two sis rosh & riya love them a lot but due to some mu create by rosh he started hating riya & threw her out of house too

acp arjun rawte : second in command of etf , the super cop , a very good loyal & strict officer was best buddy of sameer & rosh but due to sam's behaviour with riya , he broke his friendship with him , loves riya madly & can do anything for her


shreekant sen : tech expert of etf & best buddy of riya , and the only person who knows about ariya's relationship .


roshni rathod : sis of riya & sameer loved them both too much but something change her , she knows that riya loves arjun but she starts feeling for him too & create mu b/w family & riya . and make sameer throw her out of the house

riya rathod : she is an undercover agent & the best one in her field, she & arjun both loves eachother lot . and she loves her family a lot & misses them too, she knows all about rosh's doing but still cares for her , presently is in an extremely dangerous mission


chotu : commando of etf & best buddy of shree

aisha : encounter specialist & senior inspector of etf and has some feelings for rathod



sakshi : crime journalist & a part of etf , and loves chotu


liza : forensic expert of etf & bff of shree & riya was not in contact with them for long and came in contact of shree after joining etf


mr dhamsing rathod : sameer , rosh & riya's dad . love his three child similarly but hates riya now because of mu created by rosh


mrs avantika rathod : riya's mom & step mom of sameer & rosh but her three childrens are equal for her , and loves them all but hate riya presently because of mu created by rosh


scroll down for
first part

Edited by stutisinghania - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
riya should not forgive rathod 😡 😡
im so surprise how riya mom can hate her own daughter disgusting 😡 😡
all happen bcoz of that bitch kamini roshni 😡 😡 😡
but love arjun that still trust riya & love her madly ❤️ ❤️
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
part 1

sanjeevni hospital , Mumbai
outside OT
a totaly broken arjun was crying bitterly . his condition was miserable . he was just praying god to keep his life , his reason to live , his love safe. he was just praying almighty to keep her safe at any cost. he had become oblivious to the surrounding only her face , her cute dimple smile , her twinkling eyes , her cute child like antics were playing in his mind . he felt a hand on his solder & turn around to see an equally broken shree
shree : arjun sir humari rii ko kuch nhi hoga woh aise hume chodkr nhi jaa skti , kabhi nhi jaa skti usne humse promise kiya tha na ki woh humara piccha itni jaldi nhi chodegi
arjun : haa shree , voh nhi jaa skti ,pr shree mein usse nhi baccha paya , agar mujhe pta hota ki voh itna dangerous mission akele handle kr rhi hai , toh mein kabhi usse aise akele nhi jaane deta , sab mere galti hai , mujhe uski baat manihi nahi chahiye thi
shree : arjun sir , aapki koi galti nhi hai , plss sambhaliye apne aapko , aur humari rii ko kuch nhi hoga kuch bhi nhi
arjun : haa , kuch nhi hoga usse , voh mujhe chodkr nhi ja sakti
the whole etf team with riya's parents & rosh were standing behind them & they were shocked to see arjun in such a broken state , arjun's whit shirt has totally became red because of riya's blood & he just forgot that the team was also present there
sameer : haa , juno voh hume chod kr nhi jaa skti , voh apne bhai se door nhi reh skti , voh muje chod kr kabhi nhi jaayegi ( here team was shocked too know riya is sameer's sis )
arjun : juno nhi mr rathod , it's arjun for you , aur ab yaad aarhi hai apni behen ki tumhe tab kya hua tha jab aadhi raat ko tumne ghar se bahar nikal diya tha usse tab kaha tha yeh bhai , aur ek saal se voh kaha hai , kaisi hai jaanne ki koshish bhi nhi ki tumne , tab tumhe yaad nhi aaya voh tumhari behen hai
sameer : arjun pta hai mujhse bahut badi galti ho gayi rosh par yakeen krke pta hai mujhe meine bahut galat kiya parplss mujhe mere riyu se door mat kr plsss
arjun : tere nhi sirf mere riya hai voh aur kya kaha tha tune usse ki tera usse koi nata nhi hai na phir ab kya hua . sirf tere aur rosh ki wajah se mere riya ki yeh halat hai , aur mein tujhe warn kr raha hu ki door reh usse
mein nhi chahta ki tum logo ki wajah se usse fir kuch ho ... so just stay away from her
sameer : arjun...
arjun : plsss , chala ja yaha se mein request krta hu just go away from my riya
sameer can't say anything more as he know how stubborn arjun is , so he just went a little bit away from there & sat on a bench defeated . he wass feeling very much guilty & failed as a brother . he was not able to differentiate b/w truth & lie , and because of his one wrong decision his lil sis is here fighting from death , and the moments he spend with riya come flashing in his mind when first time he went to hospital to see her then how she hold his finger while sleeping & then how she used to copy him , how he was a super hero for her , best brother in the world , her role model , how she can't hear anything against him , how much she loves him & whenever she got scared or afraid of something she will always come running to him & hug him tight as he will protect her from every evil , he just smile at that thought but suddenly the image of her being shot in front of him came flashing in his mind and how she looked at him . it just killed him there at that moment itself & now he is sitting here helpless watching her condition getting worse . and also the state of his bff whom he had never ever seen this much broken & his own sis fighting from death just because of his one small mistake
flash back & wht happened few hours back
riya was working on an extremely dangerous mission & she have destroyed the whole business of a famous underworld don known as devil
and that mission was transferred to etf by comm but he forgot to tell them about riya. and etf suspected riya as one of the member of the gang except arjun & shree who know about her . but sameer & other members don't know anything about her , and arjun & shree were telling sam about riya being innocent but he don't believe them as he had thrown her out of house & it's been one year & there was no proof against her . so they has to leave her but rosh saw her here in mumbai & she was shocked to see her here & went to her , and one of the goons saw rosh with riya talking na shouting on her , so , he informed his boss & his boss told him to kidnap rosh . so , they can finish riya using rosh . rathod thought riya kidnap rosh because of the mu created by rosh , he was going to arrest riya but a phone call come from his agents telling him rosh location . so , he went there with whole etf team to save rosh & here riya's agent also inform her about this , so she also went to that place when she reach that place she saw the whole etf team engaged in fighting with the goons and one goon was going to shoot rosh , riya went towards him & kicked the gun away from him & started fighting with him , she told rosh to go away but rosh was to terrified to even move a bit & as riya's concentration was towards rosh one goon hit her head hard with an iron rod riya look at the goon in front of her there were standing two goons laughing at her evily . so the world known undercover cop , the best one in her field whom no one hass ever seen rr or we say riya rathod games end today saying so he shoot riya near her heart this was fo destroying our buisness and he was about to shoot her again but they hear two gun shot & both the goon fall down & see saw samjun behind them arjun just rush toward her & hug her tightly begging her to keep her eyes open but she can't . she also saww sam & rosh saying so but after that all blank & arjun scoop her in his arms & took her to his suv & drove to the hospital like a maniac & after him was another suv consisting of the remainig members of etf & in way rosh told rathod everything ( will reveal ti latter poora suspense aaj hi thora na end krna hai 😉 ) and his guiltiness knew no bounds
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so , presently they are at hospital . praying for his sis welfare , and he know he has lost her faith in him , he had lost his place in her life . and he knew it too if something happens to her today he can't live anymore . and he knew he can't live with the burdden of his sis death on him . he just can't & the thought of her being no more is sucking the whole life out of him... just that the moment he saw the doctor coming out of OT...

so how was it ???????
precap : how is riya now ????
were the doctors able to save her ??
and a shock for all


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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
nice..continue this..hope riya will b fine..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
The update was jst awsum...
Riya critical...
Shree & arjun's conv was touching...
Sam regretted...
Tht Rosh...
Hpe she will be okii
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Cliff hanger.
Kyu...???
Awsm update dr.
Feeling bad 4 Riya and Arjun.
Kaisa family hai Riya ki? Hope she will nt 4give them easily. They don't deserve her.
Hope Riya is out of danger.
Plz forcus little more about ariya and their romance.
Update sn. (All stories)
Tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Nice update dear...
This rosh 😡 ...
I will kill her...
Hope riya get well soon... 😭
Poor arjun 😭
Sam thune us Rosh khi baath sunke riya kho adhi rath ghar se nikaalaa 😡
Akhir aisa kya khar diya iss rosh madam ne khi riya khi maa kho bhi usey nafrat hai... 😕 ..
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

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