Originally posted by: IArmageddonI
I've always admired the character Neha, Vikram and then the sibling bond Arjun/Neha share. However in this update Neha's character disappointed me a lot. She doesn't seem to be taking life seriously and is pretty immature at times, [even though her childishness use to be one of the things I loved the most]. Her interactions with Arjun and Vikram are adorable, only these two scenarios really got me:
- Her refusal to listen to Shanaya. Is she even Shanaya's friend? It is agreed that Neha hero worships her own brother but she's being a first class hypocrite on not listening to Shanaya. I think it was really unlike Neha to not realise that Shan isn't happy with the marriage. A marriage isn't a child's play that Neha diminishes the value of love in a marriage to an act that will happen later, if not in the beginning. Not expected of Neha, really. I mean by looking at her will to marry Vikram and the extents she went to claim her love - that's completely our Neha. But the woman who was speaking to Shanaya was certainly not our Neha. I understand you want to forward the plot so as to Shanaya's thoughts get suppressed in order to build the climax, my advice would be that Neha would be ready to listen to Shanaya and give her all the help she needs because Neha gives respect to a woman's feelings more than anything, just that circumstances don't allow Neha and Shan to communicate.
All I'd say is wait for the next part, I'm sure you'll know the reasons clearly!๐
- This wasn't too bad at all but I think I would like to see Neha taking independent decisions and being rock solid rather than leaving everything on Arjun's shoulders. The Neha you have painted for us is someone who's fierce and aggressively independent - I really want to see her streak.
You'll see it soon!๐
- Shanaya, why is she keeping shut! If she loves Sikandar *if she did* she'll go any extent to get her love and not be a weakling in front of anybody! Arrey she's our Sherni Shanaya!
Sherni abhi plan bana rahi hai, she'll be back with a bang!๐
Okay and I COMPLETELY LOVED Vikram, the most sensible and "man" out of all the characters. Standing next to his woman all the time, being the perfect gentleman making sure truth triumphs all at every moment of his life <3 His unbiased nature is what makes him the most brilliant <3 You've always sketched Vikram too well!
Yes! I love him too! He is the dream boy every girl would like to have as a partner!๐ณ
And then the sister having her brother's back! The unfailing brother support from Arjun was fantastic! And also the parents' anger on her lies because they depend more on the deal... that was good.
I'm glad you liked it!๐
Though I would have liked to see a visibly shaken Neha on understanding that for her parents' the deal meant much more than her own happiness.
OMG, I can't believe this SS is close to biting dust! Sigh, it has been one fantastic journey <3
Yes dear, all goo things have to end at some point of time! But don't worry, to end is to begin, there will be a new beginning, definitely!๐
Good going girl... looking forward to the next update.
Btw did I mention that I LOVE the Neha Vik jodi? Just super cute!! Aww, thanks a lot!
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