Sikander-Shanaya SS : Dangerous Ishq [Chapter 14 - pg 28] - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Loved it Neha awesome update
Well Shanaya & Diki FB was really nice
Finally love has changed a beast into man
Siki fought for his love ... but now situation is complicated
Neha ka plan kaamyaab hua
Good she put through correct face of those people in front of her parents
She too had no way out
Par ab Shanaya aur Siki ka kya hoga
I am curious for that
& hope inka plan shadi se pehle bahar na aa jaaye
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

glad you loved it di
plan pata chalta hai ya nahi, ye padh lijiye!
Ab aage kya hoga ye jaldi hi pata chalega
stay tuned!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu

nice update

pehle mere fav part pr comment
mujhe lga hi tha vik aur neha wale scene me neha ne pakka kand kia hoga
and I love the hindi movie scene between Mr. rawte and vikram
jitna paisa chahiye bhar lo aur meri beti ki zindagi se dafa ho jao type ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
but neha ne scene kafi achcha lagaya...
Maa na ban ne ka pasa jaise hi feka vivaan ki family jhat se fas gyi
fasana bhi tha... hope mr. rawte realised k wo kya krne jaa rhe the
mujhe lga tha ye natak hi hoga but mujhe ye nhi lga tha k arjun bhi isme shamil hoga
now comes to sikander part...
so sikander dono taraf se ghir chuka tha
ek taraf jahaan already arjun uske piche lga hua tha
dusri taraf usne sultan ko bhi apna dushman bana lia
kehte hai naa mohabbat aur jung me sab zayaz hai...sikander ne to prove kr dia
sikandaer ki mohabbat dekh li lets see ab wo jung me aage kya krta hai ๐Ÿ˜Š

glad you loved the update di
haan ab papa maan nahi rahe the to kuch to kana hi padta na manane ke liye, isliye bhai-behen ne milkar khel racha!
Sikander kya karta hai ye dekhna aur bhi interesting hoga!
stay tuned!

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Posted: 9 years ago
I've always admired the character Neha, Vikram and then the sibling bond Arjun/Neha share. However in this update Neha's character disappointed me a lot. She doesn't seem to be taking life seriously and is pretty immature at times, [even though her childishness use to be one of the things I loved the most]. Her interactions with Arjun and Vikram are adorable, only these two scenarios really got me:
- Her refusal to listen to Shanaya. Is she even Shanaya's friend? It is agreed that Neha hero worships her own brother but she's being a first class hypocrite on not listening to Shanaya. I think it was really unlike Neha to not realise that Shan isn't happy with the marriage. A marriage isn't a child's play that Neha diminishes the value of love in a marriage to an act that will happen later, if not in the beginning. Not expected of Neha, really. I mean by looking at her will to marry Vikram and the extents she went to claim her love - that's completely our Neha. But the woman who was speaking to Shanaya was certainly not our Neha. I understand you want to forward the plot so as to Shanaya's thoughts get suppressed in order to build the climax, my advice would be that Neha would be ready to listen to Shanaya and give her all the help she needs because Neha gives respect to a woman's feelings more than anything, just that circumstances don't allow Neha and Shan to communicate.

- This wasn't too bad at all but I think I would like to see Neha taking independent decisions and being rock solid rather than leaving everything on Arjun's shoulders. The Neha you have painted for us is someone who's fierce and aggressively independent - I really want to see her streak.


- Shanaya, why is she keeping shut! If she loves Sikandar *if she did* she'll go any extent to get her love and not be a weakling in front of anybody! Arrey she's our Sherni Shanaya!


Okay and I COMPLETELY LOVED Vikram, the most sensible and "man" out of all the characters. Standing next to his woman all the time, being the perfect gentleman making sure truth triumphs all at every moment of his life <3 His unbiased nature is what makes him the most brilliant <3 You've always sketched Vikram too well!

And then the sister having her brother's back! The unfailing brother support from Arjun was fantastic! And also the parents' anger on her lies because they depend more on the deal... that was good.

Though I would have liked to see a visibly shaken Neha on understanding that for her parents' the deal meant much more than her own happiness.

OMG, I can't believe this SS is close to biting dust! Sigh, it has been one fantastic journey <3

Good going girl... looking forward to the next update.

Btw did I mention that I LOVE the Neha Vik jodi? Just super cute!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it Neha awesome update
Finally vikram and Neha got married
Ab aage kya hoga ye dekhna hai
I am waiting for Shanaya and Arjun marriage
Uske baad kya hoga
Mr. Rawte kabhi nahi samjhenge
Shanaya kya karegi ab
Well marriage rituals were written beautifully
Waiting to know more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mindblowing update
Ab sik shanaya ka kya hoga...?
Keep updating
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing Update Chutki..!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I Loved How you described each and every feelings and scenes.
I too didn't like how Neha refused to listen to Shanaya. I mean she is the only best friend Shanaya has, if she won't listen to her then whom? I understand you're doing this on a purpose but as Shree says, Being the woman that Neha is she should've listened and helped Shan, rather than saying to love her brother and give him a chance.

Then Neha, although I love her. But I too found her a bit childish here spcly where her marriage and Vik was concerned. Though Vik emerged as a winner here, as I love love love the sensibility and matureness he has.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Loved Arjun and his unfalling support to Neha ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ and Mr. Rawte, the less said the better! ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก All he is concerned about is his reputation.

Loved The Marathi Rituals. You described them beautifully..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ And The First Night was lovely too! Neha really is desperate! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Now let's see what unfolds.
Thanx for pm. Continue Soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

I've always admired the character Neha, Vikram and then the sibling bond Arjun/Neha share. However in this update Neha's character disappointed me a lot. She doesn't seem to be taking life seriously and is pretty immature at times, [even though her childishness use to be one of the things I loved the most]. Her interactions with Arjun and Vikram are adorable, only these two scenarios really got me:

- Her refusal to listen to Shanaya. Is she even Shanaya's friend? It is agreed that Neha hero worships her own brother but she's being a first class hypocrite on not listening to Shanaya. I think it was really unlike Neha to not realise that Shan isn't happy with the marriage. A marriage isn't a child's play that Neha diminishes the value of love in a marriage to an act that will happen later, if not in the beginning. Not expected of Neha, really. I mean by looking at her will to marry Vikram and the extents she went to claim her love - that's completely our Neha. But the woman who was speaking to Shanaya was certainly not our Neha. I understand you want to forward the plot so as to Shanaya's thoughts get suppressed in order to build the climax, my advice would be that Neha would be ready to listen to Shanaya and give her all the help she needs because Neha gives respect to a woman's feelings more than anything, just that circumstances don't allow Neha and Shan to communicate.

All I'd say is wait for the next part, I'm sure you'll know the reasons clearly!๐Ÿ˜‰

- This wasn't too bad at all but I think I would like to see Neha taking independent decisions and being rock solid rather than leaving everything on Arjun's shoulders. The Neha you have painted for us is someone who's fierce and aggressively independent - I really want to see her streak.

You'll see it soon!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

- Shanaya, why is she keeping shut! If she loves Sikandar *if she did* she'll go any extent to get her love and not be a weakling in front of anybody! Arrey she's our Sherni Shanaya!

Sherni abhi plan bana rahi hai, she'll be back with a bang!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Okay and I COMPLETELY LOVED Vikram, the most sensible and "man" out of all the characters. Standing next to his woman all the time, being the perfect gentleman making sure truth triumphs all at every moment of his life <3 His unbiased nature is what makes him the most brilliant <3 You've always sketched Vikram too well!
Yes! I love him too! He is the dream boy every girl would like to have as a partner!๐Ÿ˜ณ

And then the sister having her brother's back! The unfailing brother support from Arjun was fantastic! And also the parents' anger on her lies because they depend more on the deal... that was good.

I'm glad you liked it!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Though I would have liked to see a visibly shaken Neha on understanding that for her parents' the deal meant much more than her own happiness.

OMG, I can't believe this SS is close to biting dust! Sigh, it has been one fantastic journey <3

Yes dear, all goo things have to end at some point of time! But don't worry, to end is to begin, there will be a new beginning, definitely!๐Ÿ˜‰

Good going girl... looking forward to the next update.

Btw did I mention that I LOVE the Neha Vik jodi? Just super cute!! Aww, thanks a lot!

I'm really glad to read your comment, I can't tell you how much this comment means to me!!
Thanks a lot once again๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Stay tuned for next part!

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

Loved it Neha awesome update
Finally vikram and Neha got married
Ab aage kya hoga ye dekhna hai
I am waiting for Shanaya and Arjun marriage
Uske baad kya hoga
Mr. Rawte kabhi nahi samjhenge
Shanaya kya karegi ab
Well marriage rituals were written beautifully
Waiting to know more
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon ๐Ÿ˜Š

Glad you loved the update di
Stay tuned to know what's next, ShanJun ki shaadi.. I'm zipped!๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Enchantress.

Amazing Update Chutki..!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I Loved How you described each and every feelings and scenes.

I too didn't like how Neha refused to listen to Shanaya. I mean she is the only best friend Shanaya has, if she won't listen to her then whom? I understand you're doing this on a purpose but as Shree says, Being the woman that Neha is she should've listened and helped Shan, rather than saying to love her brother and give him a chance.

Wait for the next part, everything happens for a reason!๐Ÿ˜Š

Then Neha, although I love her. But I too found her a bit childish here spcly where her marriage and Vik was concerned. Though Vik emerged as a winner here, as I love love love the sensibility and matureness he has.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

I'm glad you loved him!๐Ÿ˜ณ

Loved Arjun and his unfalling support to Neha ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ and Mr. Rawte, the less said the better! ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก All he is concerned about is his reputation.

You're yet to see it more!๐Ÿ˜‰

Loved The Marathi Rituals. You described them beautifully..๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ And The First Night was lovely too! Neha really is desperate! ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Glad you loved it!๐Ÿ˜ƒHaan ab desperate hona to banta hai, samne jab itna se*y banda khada ho to koun resist karega?๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†Aur waise bhi ab to shaadi bhi ho gayi hai, rokne ka koi reason bhi nahi hai!๐Ÿ˜†

Now let's see what unfolds.
Thanx for pm. Continue Soon.

Thanks a lot di
stay tuned for next update๐Ÿ˜Š

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