THE BROKEN ANGEL - AN ARIYA SS updated page 6 - 16.10.15 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
superb update
so now rawte families feeling guilty for whatever they did to riya 😡 😡
samjun were more guilty for hurting riya & Aisha 😡 😡
noe they want them back
lets see what Aisha & riya will do?
that bitch radha want to aks forgiveness from riya just to save karan 😡 😡
what a selfish bitch 😡 😡
waiting for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
awesome updates
so now rawte family feeling guilty about whatever they did too riya 😡😡😡
and both samjun have hurt riya and aisha very badly
and now they want them back in their lives
and arjun thinking whether they will be welcome their
or stones thrown on them
what he think they will do with them
and that radha wants riya to forgave her only for karan's life
how selfish she is
and glad you didn't make riya weak
anshe will not forgave them easily
ab aayega maza
update next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Amazing
Can't wait for Ariya to meet and riya punishment
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24

Helowww all

Sorry yaar itne dino se update nai ki

Iss liye 2 chapters update kar rahi hoon

Hope u all like it

N haan do comment iske baad riya ki entry 30 ke upar comments aane kai baad

SORRY FOR NO PMs

CHAPTER ...

Next day all people of family reach BANDRA-ORPHANAGE AND OLD AGE SHELTER

The place now serves as a safety shelter for the people of the city. It has been divided into sections - medical aides and safe house for new born /toddlers and elderly people. The last 8 years have been hell for everyone in bandra - many lost their lives in protecting the land while others suffered from the lack of resources. We are doing the very best we can do to survive in the harsh circumstances but everyone has to pay a price.

OLD MAN -IT is the price we are paying for trusting the wrong people

RADHA could not control himself any longer: We get it that we made a mistake but we are here to make amends about it

OLD MAN: Mistake? The entire people of this place is paying for a crime they never committed baisa- people lost their lives, we lost our Raoji- our protector, your friend who considered you as an elder brother see around you and tell me what you see - do you see a protected place or are you blind to the ruins?

SR: I apologise on her behalf we all are stuck by the magnamity of our misdeeds and we would like to offer our assistance in any way possible

From other side a group of childrens came towards them...

Elderly man sees the royal family's faces: Meet Angel's Vanar Sena - they keep an eye on our people and keep them protected from a distance. They are all trained and many more are in training as well

Rawatji: But they are mere kids

Elderly man: When one has to rely on their own self for protection of the home then no one is a kid everyone is a soldier

A couple of men rush a young man into the medical area where two women were all prepared for the emergency. One of them a fair skinned woman took the man's hand to check for the pulse and started to apply the paste on him when the man screamed: It burns

Woman: I know it burns but you will get through it. You are a brave soldier and soldiers are not scared of pain. See we are all there with you. She then asks her peer to get her the herbal drink and makes the man drink it after which the man falls asleep. See to it he sleeps for the next couple of hours- wake him up later and re-apply the paste and feed him the drink. This time the Gods were with us but we need to be prepared

Man: Ji Baisa

Elderly man: Thank god we have her with us. She will be able to help the young fellow

Sameer stared at the woman long and hard but then was given a rough shake by Arjun who was staring at him angrily making him realise his folly

SAM: Please forgive me but where are doctors for that matter? Why aren't they here helping out?

Elderly man: Son dr. vaidya passed away couple of years back

Next Chapter

(main riya ki sis ka naam change kar rahe hoon its ratan so don't get confused...)

Ratan came in holding a young fellow's hand while chatting with him excitedly: Dada Bhai do you think I will learn martial arts one day?

The young man was none other than SHIV who loved Ratan dearly as she was the youngest and the light of their lives

shiv: Yes sis you will become an accomplished person one day after you are fully trained and then you can assist us

Ratan: Yayyy... where is everyone else? When will diii come back?

SHIV: She is on her way. Now I need you to go back to Kakisa as it is time for your afternoon nap. Alright I will come to get you later one- now go

Ratan leaves after hugging her brother and shiv calls out for a public gathering at the square

Lakhan escorted the family to the square where an old man was thrown down on a raised platform (where they performed public executions) the man was blind-folded and as soon as the fold was taken off - he turned pale white with sweat beads forming on his forehead. He was terrified looking at the angry glares he received from the crowd

A feminine voice cold and hard rang out: Our very own Parvat Das was caught red-handed with the dealers today. People of Bandra one of our very own betrayed us -tricked us and destroyed our trust. Because of him our people got injured and many died because he had been selling our sisters in return of a few gold coins. So I ask you people to decide his fate - His life will not be spared for he is responsible for a lot of deaths of our dear and loved ones. Your decision will be the last and will be followed as per angel's orders so make your decision

The crowd threw stones at the man a chorus rang: caught him, caught him. Took him to the police

A woman dressed in white clothes came - she acknowledged the crowd's response and calmly said: Do you have anything you wish to tell us Parvat Das before the will of the people is done?

Parvat Das stared into the cold eyes of his death and softly said: I'm sorry

The woman took ordered to take him to the police station with proofs. The crowd rang praises while the woman softly whispered looking at the head: I'm sorry too.

The woman then took her leave and so did the others. Parvat Das was an advisor to Rao Mamrakh and the knowledge of his treason was a big blow to everyone - it was because of his treason dr. Vaidya had passed away while trying to protect as many innocents he could

ARJUN was stunned not at seeing a public execution at the hands of a woman rather it was her technique was so efficient. He was in awe of the executioner when Lakhan is told to bring the guests to a special meeting area

The family along with Lakhan enter the place once more but this time they are directed towards the dungeons - an open area was built surrounded by plants and trees. As they all reach the place Ratan is found frolicking around with rabbits while the woman who had treated the injured man kept an eye out for the youngest sister

Naina Bai took one look at the woman when recognition hit her hard - she had grown into a beautiful woman and was carrying out her duties well. She was an accomplished healer and the way she was taking care of the youngest child of Hansa meant that she had good maternal instincts as well. SHIV came out with another young boy who looked much older than his age both of them still dressed in their attire their eyes went straight at Ratan and then at the woman watching her and finally at the guests

NEXT CHAPTERS - RIYA ENTRY ND SHOCKS ON THE WAY FOR ALL FAMILY MEMBERS

ARJUN WITH THE GREATEST SHOCK...

ND WILL THE ANGEL(RIYA) WILL GET READY TO HELP THEM?

ARIYA ND SASHA CONVO'S ND

2 CONDITIONS FOR WHOM ND BY WHOM?

THE SECRET ADMIRER???

THE BIGGEST SECRET BEHIND KARAN's CONDITION????

Link behind a big game?? Is it riya??

Arjun's step brother other than karan? A trap?

Who's the killer of hansa bai , mother of riya???

Ariya's flashbacks...

Mission to sort out starts.

Nd ARJUN's final dicisions.

NEW CHARACTERS...

TO HELP OR TO TRAP???

RIYA REACION FOR DECISION?

TO KNOW STAY TUNED TO THE STORY...

DO COMMENT .

I WILL BE WAITING...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Awesome update dear...
Precap sounds great and scary as well...
Amazing...
Love it...
Continue soon...
Waiting for riya entry...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Aisa precap deke readers ko tension se chair se neeche giraana hai kya..😆 Its really interesting and different.. waiting for next part... PM if possible...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
fantastic update
and precap seems interesting plus scary too
aap hum readers ko itna tension kyu de rahe ho ???
and plss update the next part soon
as we can't bear the suspense for long
so update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
awesome update
loved riya's place
waiting for shocks n family reaction
precap is very interesting
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
It's mind blowing updt sheen
Loved it very much
It's super
Loved the entire
Who is that woman
Does she is Riya
Eagerly waiting to read
Please do continue soon
Edited by jeharshu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30


Next part--

Yes the girl standing in the room is none other than the riya
The angel..

She was just the same very beautiful...
Her eyes always have the volume and face always with her dimpled smile now standing in the corner of the room with her best friend
Mrs ayesha rathore now only ayu of angel..
With an angry expression plastered on her face


Radha- riya beta kaise ho, dekho mujhe pata hai tum thik hi hoge
But mai yahan tumse maafi mangne aaye noon
Plz hamaare sath ghar chalo...

Ri- Mrs rawte plz aapko agar apna ye drama Karna hai to plz I don't have time to waste it, I have much more better work other than this

Sr ( suryakant)- beta plz..

Ri- Mr rawte aap mujhe plz kyo bol rahe hai aap itne bade businessman hai
Aap mujh jaise ladke Jo aap ki wife ka aapse doore ka kaaran this, jiski shakal tak dekhna nahi chahte the aap..to ye sab kya..

Riya was cut by Mrs naina rawte her ranimaa
Nr- beta aap hamse nahi milenge.???

Ri- ranimaa

She touched her feet and take blessing from her
Nr- plz beta apna faisla soch samajh kar lijiyega
Aapke faisle par karan ki poore zindagi nirbhar Marti hai...

A- riya plz
Hamare saath ghar chalo, sab mere galti hai Maine tumpe kabhi bharosa nahi kiya, tumhe galat samjha, plz mai jaanta hoon ye aasan nahi hai but plz forgive me...

Ri- Mr rawte I think aapko kisine bataya nahi ki sirf ek maafi maangne SE mere mare hue baba wapas nahi aayenge, ya phir aap unhe hame vapas kar sakte hai?? Boliye..
U know hame aapke shakal bhi nahi dekhne
Ghin aate hai hame apne aap SE ki hamne aapse pyaar kaise kiya?? Itna pyaar ki aapke har BAAT aankh band karke maante Gaye, apne aap SE bhi jyada chaha aapko but hame badle mai kya mila
?????????
Har ladke ka khwaab hota hai ki uska pati kaisa hoga, jab vo apne ghar SE uske ghar jaayege to sab swagat kaise karenge, uska pati uspe kitna vishwas aur pyaar karega but
Mere to pati nai hi mujhe shaadi Kai pehle din hi ghar SE baahar nikaal diya, mujhe jab sabne galat samjha mujhe lagta tha mera pati mera pyaar mujhe samjhega but meri kosmart bhi dekhiye jisnai mujhe sabse pehle sab rishto SE alag kar diya vo mere pati hi the..

U know how it feels jab kisi baap ki beti ki shaadi kal hi hue ho , aur agle din hi use uske sasural waale ghar SE bahar nikaal de...pata hai kya hota hai unka mar jaate hai vo... Suna aapne mar jaate hai vo..jaise mere baaba chale Gaye...
Ham Sab KO chodkar..
Us bhai ka kya hota hai jaante hai, vo samay aur apne age SE pehle mature ho jata hai, aur bas apne dii aur bhai beheno KO khush rakhne mai madad Marta hai...
Kaise mai uske bade behen hokar bhi use ye kaam karne SE ROK nahi paate...
Apne aap KO 24 ghante jaan SE maarne ka khayal aata rehta hai Jo mai chahkar bhi poora nahi kar sakte..

I just hate u Mr rawte just hate u so much with bottom of my heart...

Saying this she leaves leading behind a broken arjun, cursing himself for all his deeds by which he break his angel, his roya




In Night-------------
One woman- plz haar mat maano abhi to ye sab shuru hua hai, abhi to hame is raaate par bahut himmat aur chalake SE aage badhna hai taaki kisi KO iss BAAT ki bhanak bhi naa ho.. Thik hai

Second woman- thik hai ham poore koshish karenge aur apne manzil paa kar rahenge...
Ham chalte hai...


To be continued...

Precap- new character- sakshi anand
Neice of Mrs radha naina , who always tries to be very close to arjun
Hate riya .

Shreekant sen- best friend of riya and ayesha.
Loves both. Hates arjun. Always support riya.


Edited by syndeyshine00 - 9 years ago

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