FF: TUJH PE DIL QURBAAN - II [COMPLETED]

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: Angel_Arya
Awesome
Nice concept

Well-written

I always like the subjects you choose to write on,Di😊

And I am quite late

I loved this concept

Beautifully written Aisha-Sameer bonding

The office scene

The party

Really enjoyed reading

Sorry for being late

Thanks for the pm

Conti soon😊

Thanks Dear Angel

glad you liked it

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Love the fun moments of the team..Bechara Shree..Apni BFF se kuch keh bhi nahi sakta..warna Arjun ke paas complaint jayegi..😆
So the details which Sam has..Arjun doesn't know about it..Is it..?
Samsha moments were sweet..They understand each other so well.
Jiju-Saali were also fun..their dialogues were..🤣
What was that at the end..who did it..??? Maybe the ones who were behind that Vayu..😕
It was a nice update.😊
Waiting for the next part..cont soon.
sorry for late commenting..thanks for the pm.

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Swara85
Love the fun moments of the team..Bechara Shree..Apni BFF se kuch keh bhi nahi sakta..warna Arjun ke paas complaint jayegi..😆
So the details which Sam has..Arjun doesn't know about it..Is it..?
Samsha moments were sweet..They understand each other so well.
Jiju-Saali were also fun..their dialogues were..🤣
What was that at the end..who did it..??? Maybe the ones who were behind that Vayu..😕
It was a nice update.😊
Waiting for the next part..cont soon.
sorry for late commenting..thanks for the pm.

Thanks Swara dear

that is obvious swara wahi kar sakte hai

& Arjun doesn't know about this dear

stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Awesome start Di

loved it

a confidential file at Sam's place! well the story itself starts from a case.. nice!😃

team's banters' were nice!😆

IG gave a special responsibility to Sam!

very true..system me gaddaro ki kami nahi he! unki wajah se sabko takleef hoti he!😡

Saleem gonaa help them in the case! 😊

SaSha at Aisha's home.. Anu-Sam too good.. 🤣

SaSha.. romantic convo!😳 so adorable!❤️

Ariya's 6th anniversary! wow!😃

Party was nice! all enjoyed their time! good!😃

now what happened at Sam's place.. ransacked..😲

was it by the people who wanted those confidential documents?? hope that is safe!🤔

do continu soon😊

thanks for pm

p.s. - sorry for late reply!

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
Awesome start Di
loved it
a confidential file at Sam's place! well the story itself starts from a case.. nice!😃
team's banters' were nice!😆
IG gave a special responsibility to Sam!
very true..system me gaddaro ki kami nahi he! unki wajah se sabko takleef hoti he!😡
Saleem gonaa help them in the case! 😊
SaSha at Aisha's home.. Anu-Sam too good.. 🤣
SaSha.. romantic convo!😳 so adorable!❤️
Ariya's 6th anniversary! wow!😃
Party was nice! all enjoyed their time! good!😃
now what happened at Sam's place.. ransacked..😲
was it by the people who wanted those confidential documents?? hope that is safe!🤔
do continu soon😊
thanks for pm
p.s. - sorry for late reply!

Thanks Neha dear

Glad yu liked it

Sam ke hote secret Docs ko kuch ho sakta hai 😊

it is just a start abhi to bhut kuch baki hai 😉

Stay tuned & keep commenting 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

IMPORTANT NOTE

Dear Readers,

I know you all must be mad at me for not updating this FF for so long but before I could proceed further I am giving you all a small glimpse of Season 1 which is necessary. In this Story during a case Sameer meets Aisha who is brave, Patriotic & also a Practical person. He looking at Aisha's skills invites her to Join ETF & she accepts it too. Gradually they came closer during the case proceedings & Sameer starts feeling for her but never dares to express as his past was bitter he had very bad experience in the name Love

During the case Aisha gets injured & Sameer realizes & while talking to Arjun & Riya they Aisha came to know bout his real feelings & she too says yes to him. In between Aisha parents were looking an apt math for her but the alliance that approaches his parents was a famous Terrorist . Aisha & Sameer secretly nab him in the name of Marriage & finally case gets closed. After that Aisha & Sameer get married & have a daughter Aarohi fighting again with crime 😊

So you will get the Part 2 soon may be a week more hope you all enjoy this FF 😊