Case SS : Missing Chapter 6 updated - 09/04/2015 Pg : 14

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Loved it Sneha

Awesome update

Loved Sameer concern & his awkwardness

it was well written & justified 😊

Case details were nice but all at close ends

FBS were too cute dear

specially the second one bhook lagi hai 😆

Arjuns POV was also nice 👏

yes Sam is really an Ullu no doubt 😆

lets see what happens next

& how they go further in this case

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 33

Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Awesome update dear

loved it

team trying to search how Aisha was being kidnapped.n by whom

Aisha is confused by everyone's concern!

Asiha already contacted her father.. interesting!

the flashbacks of SaSha were very nice.. beautifully written

Aisha cursing Sam was really funny n Sam enjoying it.. I too enjoyed it!!

Sam is too worried for Aisha but can't express it.. yet the team knows it all!

Arjun wants to knock sense into his 'ullu buddy'.. haha!!

Sam went to meet Aisha early in the morning.. Sakshi is surprized..

last para was beautifully written.. Aisha doesn't have patience.. true!

do continu soon

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Ayesha already contacted her father
Flashback was Amazing...
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Awesome update

Loved it

FB's were cute

Arjun feeling bad for Sam

Aisha spoke to her dad

Interesting

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#95

awesome update..

still they don't have any clue..

sam lost thinking about aayesha..

plz continue soon

thanks 4 pm

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#96

awesome update sneha..
finally some investigative moves..van mil gaya..but koi faida nehi...another dead end..
aisha spoke to her dad...good...😃
sakshi is covering up 😛😛😛
then comes the fbs...nice ones again...😊😊
Sam subah subah hi pohuch gaya aisha ko dekhne..😛😛😛

continue soon...😊😊

Edited by rimi_invisible - 10 years ago

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#97

firstly, Don't start expecting much by seeing my comment. I am not a regular reader of this wonderful story of yours. just read it for the first time today n I really don't know when I will read the next chap.

Secondly, The prologue is very much interesting.

It is not a new concept but coming it from you surely made it special.

Everything was written with utmost care. I am glad that you did not make any OTT expressions.

I am actually surprised by your improvement in writing skill.

you are doing a great job. Keep it up girl.👍🏼

Edited by laila1994 - 10 years ago