OS: One Last Goodbye! - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
its different one..


but really ossam.

life after death... mera bechara Sammy... 😭


har time usko hi kyu takleef hoti hai...akela rehna padta hai??😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Awwwsssmmm OS
Loved it
It was Amazing...
Very Wonderfully Written
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Heli Di..!! U deserve Jhappies for this yaara!! šŸ¤—šŸ¤— U wrote it so beautifully!!! ā¤ļø I litreally felt soo moved! 😭 Riya, Ayesha, Sakshi, Liza, Chotu! And Finally our Aeda too found his peace wid His Roshni..ā¤ļø Beautiful! Heart went out to Shree And Sameer! 😭 Thanxx fr the pm!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Finally, there comes somebody who has dared to kill him.
Nobody had done it till date, not even Sikandar.
Well, it was a great one.
The happily ever after was the best part.
Liked it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
love it
awesome OS
n thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
wow di...
its awesome and mind blowing didu...
just loved it..
do continue soon...
and thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
u killed him 😲😲 😭😭
beautifully written Helna šŸ‘šŸ¼
than man deserves peace... and and that is possible only when his Roshni is there with him... now he will live... "happily ever after..."
very nice os. but don't u dare try this kind of end for our Arjun in any of your ongoing or upcoming ff samjhi !! 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Ouch Di..kya bolu samajh nahi aa raha..
3 POV'S
From writing pov : Brilliant and beautiful.

From my pov.. Why did you do this..?😭 I can't see anything happening to Arjun.😭

From Arjun's pov..: Thank you for doing this..šŸ¤—At least now he'll be in peace and happy..
Now you see I have mixed feelings all at the same time..Aap ko jo pov accha lage wo rakh lena.
Thanks for pm.
Edited by Swara85 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
My dear Kunchu,

In a word, exquisite.

Unbelievably sensitive,and written with a sureness of touch that totally eschews maudlin grief and lamentations.

This is the best way for Arjun to go, to be at peace at long last with his Roshni and the ETF gang that had gone before him, from Riya onwards.

The only ones I feel sorry for are Rathod, now abandoned to a lifetime of loneliness, and to a lesser extent Shree. That is why they say that no one should mourn for the dead, only for those left behind.

I would write more, but my knee has not recovered easily from the surgery, and it stiffens painfully if I sit at the laptop for more than 15 minutes.

Warmest good wishes for 2015 to bring you good health, peace of mind, and a lot of fulfillment, literary and otherwise.

Affectionately,

Shyamala Aunty



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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
As I said already, it was a sad and poignant one but then there is one solace. He found peace and solace finally. atleast his love and life with Roshni got an eternal ethereal chance to be relived! 😭

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