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HEy guyzz i m writing second time first one was a disaster as i couldn't complete it .i know u must be thinking i couldn't complete my first writing and i started this but sorry for that i forgor that story so this is a new instead of that one. plzz let me know how i wrote and constructive critisism is always welcome.
. i m doin some changes in characters.here's the character sketch :-
ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE:
He is the hot headed cop while solving cases. Sameer is his best friend knows him from a long time. he loves his parents and his team a lot. Has a good relationship with commissioner sir. it takes a lot of efforts to impress him.
MR SURYAKANT RAWTE :
Arjun's dad. loves his son a lot. Encouraged him to do his best for becoming the best police officer of the nation. Lives with his wife and son in Rawte Mansion. Family comes before everything for him.
MRS ANJALI SURYAKANT RAWTE :
Mother of Arjun. Wants to get him married.She is very kind & caring & is trying to manaofy his son for marriage. She is the head of an NGO & is very selfless.
SAMEER DAM SINGH RATHOD :
Head of ETF. Is the best chief any team can have. Best friend of Arjun. Is a very jovial person & is married to Ayesha.
AYESHA SAMEER RATHOD :
Seniior inspector in ETF . She is the wife of Sameer & is the best friend of Choree & liza.
SHREEKANT SEN AKA SHREE :
THE techie guy of ETF. He is intelligent and loving. Is confused with his relationship with Liza. best friend of Chotu and Aisha.
Chandrakant Patil AKA CHOTU :
EX-commando and a senior officer at ETF. he has a big size in structure as well as heart. cannot see his loved ones sad. he is the best friend of shree and liza . he is dating Chaya ; his 11:30 wali.
Liza D'cruz:
She is the forensic doctor of ETF& provides vital clues.she is a very active girl and loves to tease Shree a lot. Loves Shree but hasn't confessed. Aisha and Chotu are her best friends. Can go any lengths to save them. best friend of Sakshi .
DR. SAKSHI ANAND KAPOOR :
She is a very gorgeous charming beautiful girl , but dosent wants to live. is alive only to take the revenge of her nani and her child's death.She hasn't completed her degree but treats poor patients for free. is a very intelligent. talented doctor but couldn't complete her studies because of no money & is searching for a job to complete her masters. Will fall in love with a brooding hot cop none other than our ACP ARJUN. She is best friend of liza.
The area is of a jungle through which a not frequently used road passes. A girl of around 22 yrs is running for her life. it is an empty road & is dark except for the faint light coming from the moon. the sound of her bangles is becoming more and more clear.she is wearing a full sleeves top on a jeans & her face is covered with a scarf except for her eyes. some goons7-8 in number are following her she is running out of breath. she hides herself behind one of the trees and removes her bangles and throws it on the opposite side into the jungle. one of the goons hears the sound ;
Goon 1; arey suno uss ladki ki payal ki awaaz uss taraf gayi hai.
Goon 2: thik hai chalo chalte hai.
as soon as the goons go inside the jungle she makes her way to the high way . meanwhile in the jungle
Goon 2 : oye yahan par toh sirf usski chudiyan hai . woh hume chakme de kar bhag gayi .
Goon 3 ; kya? chalo dhoondo usse . usska milna bohot zaroori hai. tabtak mai boss ko phone kata hoon.
Goon 3; hello boss. woh ladki hume chakma de kar bhag gayi .
Boss ; kya?? kitne nikkamme ho tum log woh sifr ek laddki thi aur tum 8 log fir bhi use pakad nahi paaye. jao usepakdo . use leke bina vapas math aana varna...
goon 3 : samajh gaye boss. and he cuts the call .
goon 4 ; arey dekho woh rahi ladki chalo usse pakadte hain. & they start running again after her.
on the highway she sees an SuV standing and nearby there's a tea stall where there are two men engaged in chatting . she sees an opportunity and the dicky of suv is open so she quitely slips into it.
man: Sam , yar aaj phir maa mujhe shaadi ka lecture suna gayi. tu samjha ns yaar maa ko woh teri baat maan jayegi.
Sam : abey saale samajhne ki zaroorat tujhe hai . dekh tu vaise bhi settled hai ETF mai naukri karta hai aur har ladki aake tere par marti hai. kahi aisa na ho tu jaisi ladki ko dhoond raha ho use dhoondte dhoondte teri shaadi ki umar nikal jaaye . vaise bhi tu 26 ka ho chuka hai. ab nahi karega toh kab karega???
arjun ; abey tu mera dost hai ki dushman?/ mai tujhe iss problem ka solution pooch raha hoon aur tu mujhe wohi maa ka lecture suna raha hai. lagta hai ayesha ko kehna padega ki tumhari sasuma se thode din ki rahat mile saara bharas mere pe nikalraha hai & he chuckled . sam glares.
SAm : ye sab chod. tu ek kaam karna tu uss ladki se kehde ki tu kisi aur se pyaar karta hai.
ARJUn ; sam tu pagal hai kya? ek toh mai jhoot nahi bolunga upar se pata nahimom kaisi ladki utha ke laayi use ye tak pata hai ki main konse school mai padhta tha. kyakya harkate karta tha. aur chipkali ki tarah chipak rahi hai.
suddenly they hear some noise and see goons looking for someone. one of the goon recognises them , abey ye policewale hai bhaag yaha se. another goon says yaha se khali hath bhage toh boss hame mar denge . ek kaam karo apne hathyar taiyar rakho hum vaha jaake chai pee te hai aur idhar udhar nazar rakhte hai jahan kahi bhi vo nazar aye use pair pe goli maar dena aur do log use leke bhaago aur baki uss policewale se ladte hai. they agree to the plan.
meanwhile Arjun & Sameer look at each other they understand the plan . Sameer gets up and starts walking towards the tea stall and orders the chai wala to make another tea.while Arjun follows the goons eyes and tries to locate some hidden person.
when suddenly one of the goons sees the girl & fires towards her but she in her fear bands down and bullets btushes past her without huting her. the Acps try to run towards the girl to save her but are surrounded by remaining goon. Arjun looks at Sam & nods hi head acknowledging him .
he leaves sam to manage those goons and runs towards the person. the goons are looking for her and she is going round and round of the suv . sam who has knocked one goon down sees the girl and shoots her she just stands up the bullet hits her leg and she screams in pain . Sam who had now knocked out all the goons was reaching towards the girl. Arjun reaches her before sameer and wraps his hand around her waist helping her get up when he looks at the girl he fogets his surroundings wow i am not able to see her face but she is still beautiful he thought while she shut her eyes tightly when she feels a foreign hand around her wiast she curls his hand into fist and is about to hit him when Sameer notices her and stops her from hitting him.
sammer: Ruko vo policewala hai. as soon as she hears this she looks at him sees him looking her she struggles to move tries to release hes grip from her waist but he dosen't budge a bit,
hearing sameer'svoice he comesout of his trance and lifts the girl up.
arjun: zyada hilo mat warna chot aur lag badh jayegi . she stops struggling . raat kaafi ho gayi hai aur tumhe chot bhi bohot lagi hai. ek kaam karo humare saath chalo hum tumhe chod he tries to help her but she stops him by showing her hand. Both are really amused by her behaviour but looking at the scarf draped they undersatnd that she is a muslim girl. she tries to walk by holding Arjun's strong biceps for support but is unable to and starts fainting Arjun lifts her up in his arms and makes her sit in the backseat of SUV and Sameer sprinkles water on her and she slowly gains consciousness. Sameer asks Arjun if he knows any hospital nearby as he dosen't but he also is unkown in this area when she notices them, she understands that they do not know this area
Arjun: ohno tumhara toh bohot khoon beh raha hai ... he becomes tensed. She just looks at him and small smile is formed on her face but is not noticeable to them because of her scarf.
Girl: chinta mat karo . yeh toh achha hua ki tum policewale ho varna tum toh darr hi jaate yeh khoon dekh kar. dont worry mai ek doctor hu aur yaha se 15 min ki doori par mera chota sa hospital hai aap mujhe waha chod dijiye. he nods and his face shows a bit of relief. Sameer looks at him and smirks .
Arjun: vaise ek baat poochu?
she nods.
Arjun: tumhe kaise pata ki mai ek policewala hu?
Girl : tum mazak kar rahe ho kya?? arey tumhare saamne hi toh tumhare dost ne mujhe bataya.
apne dost ka shukriyada karo isske wajah se aaj tum bach gaye. Arjun gives a bemused expression.
Arjun & Sameer : huh..!!!!
Girl : arey aur nahi toh kya warna mai tumhe itna zor se ghusa maarne wali thi ki tum behosh ho jaaa aaah... she hisses in pain
Both Arjun & Sam couldn't help but laugh .
Sameer: tumhe dekhkar lagta nahi hai ki tumhe bullet lagi hai...!!!!!!!!!! aur zyada hilo mat varna tumhe aur dard hoga aur ise aur chinta..!!!!!!!!!!! he said looking at Arjun. Arjun glares at him.
she smiles a bit but then her eyes show confusion for last lline of Sameer.
Arjun: waise voh log kaun the aur tumhare peeche kyun pade the???
thts it i will surely try to update it tommorrow
big thanks if u r reading this hope u like it
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