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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Areesha566

Sorry guys meine poora update likha par mera cell off ho gaya aur poora update delet 😭 😭 😭

oh no that's to bad now how long we need to wait 😭 😭 😭
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uptate on page 17
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Eagerly waiting
Please update karona dear
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Please update karona dear
Eagerly waiting to read
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Please update karona dear
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I loved this concept very much
Please continue soon
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updating in 2 hours or so 😊
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Originally posted by: Areesha566

updating in 2 hours or so 😊


Thanks dear
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thank you all who liked and commented on my story and i am really very sorry i couldn't update earliar, persnol reasons

plz wait some more time, update is coming
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recape:
no case was reported
liza was on off
shretu turned ETF Conference Room into playground
sameer scolded them



now read further 😊
PART 2



after pouring his anger out on shretu, sameer left the room angrily


shree made faces and mutters
under his breath in slow voice


'kharoos, akdu, sadu dusht rawan,
hunh har waqt bas ghussa karte
hain mujhe par'


but it was audioble enough for
chotu to hear


and chotu just smiled at his childlike
behavior


shree: hunh mein shararti? Mein?
Mein mastiyaan karta hoon, aur
bichari liza se larta hoon?
hunh bichari my foot...said shree to
chotu grumbling


jabse woh child trafficking case
mein liza ko sir ko bachate hoye
chot lagi, tabse sir liza ki extra care
karne lage hain..he streched word
"extra" a bit too extra


aur liza madam, woh toh ab bas sirf
sir ka hi naam japti rehti hai,
rathore sir yeh rathore sir woh..ab
toh madam ne sir ko "bhai" bulana
bhi shuru kar diya..


aur toh aur ab toh sir roz ussey pick
or drop karne jate hain, hame toh
kabhi lift ke liye pocha bhi nahi..


said shree with a ting of jealousy,
anger and maybe a little hurt


chotu laughed aloud hearing that
and said


chotu:shree rathore sir theek kehte
hain, tu waqi mein ek bacha hai, aur
abhi bhi tu bache jaise hi behave
kar raha hai..


shree opened his mouth as wide as
he could, he
couldn't digest what chotu said


chotu:kia? Ab yeh bichara wala
look dena bund kar, i know you
very well..chotu said closing shree's
opened mouth.,


tu keh raha hai rathore sir ko
hamari fikar nahi hai, woh sirf liza
ki care karte hain..


par tu shayad bhool gaya ke woh
rathore sir hi thay jinhon ne tera
khayal rakha jab toh buri tarha
injured tha..


tere pas raat bhar hospital mein
rahe qk tere parents out of city thy
aur mein mission pe..


shree tried to reason with chotu but
stoped remembring sameer's
pained and concern face when
doctor told him shree won't be able
to work as his right arm was injured
badly..


kuch yaad aya?asked chotu


shree looked aside guiltly


chotu:aur jab mein undercover
mission pe tha tab sir ne meri
family ka khayal rakha aur mera
pending paperwork complete kia..


shree remembers thoes days very
well, sameer too was a little injured
and had a fever, but he didn't let
shree work because of his injuries
and managed everything alone..


chotu:tum hi batao tumne dekha
hai department mein kisi senior ko
joh apne jouniors ki itni care karta
ho? Unke hisse ka kaam karta ho?
asked chotu to shree who was
trying to blink back his tears..


chotu patted shree's back and
wiped his tears


chotu:rahi baat liza ki., toh shree
jab hume chot lagti hai ya hum kisi
case ki wajah se disturb hote hain
tab humare pas hamari family hoti
hai, hume support karne ke liye.,
humara khayal rakhne ke liye..


par liza., he paused for a moment
then speaks


uss bichari ke pas aiesa
koyi nahi joh usse sambhale, uski
care kare, uska dard bante..said
chotu emotionally


isi wajah se sir uska khayal rakhte
hain, ek bhai ki tarha..


shree:haan chotu tu theek kehta
hai..mein waaqi mei ek idiot hoon Itni si baat bhi mujhe samjh nahi
aayi..he said sadly


par iska yeh matlab nahi i'll forgot
that liza is my jaani dushman.. He
said angrily and irritatidly


poor chotu just banged his hand on
his forehead


shree:and rathore sir hamesha
mujhe hi daantte hain, sab work
mujhse karwate hain aur mere
software and gadgets upgradation
ke liye kitna tung karte hain, kitna
plead karta hoon ussy churail ki seva karta hoon tab kahin jaa ke
upgrade milta hai...he said grumpily


"yeh kabhi nahi sudhre ga"
thought chotu and sigh


chotu:acha baba chal kuch khaate
hain bohot bhook lagi hai


shree:abey moote kitna khayega?
tera pait hai ya koowan (well)?abhi
do ghante pehle hi toh khaya tha..


chotu:arey woh toh kab ka hazam
(digest) ho gaya,chal na plz bohot
bhook lagi hai..he pleaded


shree took a deep sigh and said ok


chotu happily hugged or in shriza'
language crushed him tightly


shree:chotu chotu leave me
moote,your crushing me


chotu immediately loose his hold
and saw a badly panting shree


chotu:am sorry yaar, really sorry


shree:kamine kis janam ka badla
nikal raha tha mujhse?kitni zor se
dabaya, haaye poori body ke nut
bolts hil gaye..he said adjusting his
specks and creasing his arms


shree:abhi toh meri shadi bhi nahi
hoyi aur meri koyi girlfriend bhi
nahi hai..


agar mujhe kuch ho jata toh apne
mom dad ka ikloota beta hoon,
who would then gave them
happiness of grandchildrens?


aur phir bhabi ko teri harkatoon ki
report ko deta?bol..said shree with
naughty glint in eyes and wicked
smile on lips


chotu:teri bhabi,mujhe tung?ka ka
kia bol raha hai tu? mujhe toh k ku
kuch samajh nahi araha.. he
stammers


shree:hmmm sunday, departmental
store 11:30 ko kisi ko chup chupke
dekhna, kuch yaad aya?


soch raha hoon iss sunday bhabi se
jaa kar milu, ek minute iss se bhi
acha q na bari maa ke sath jaa kar
bhabi se unka tere liye hath
maange..acha idea hai na?
teased shree


chotu:dekh shree tu aisa kuch nahi
karega, meri baat sun shreee..he
screamed as shree dialed his aayi's
number


shree:haan hello bari maa woh,


but he couldn't complete it as chotu
snatched his phone


chotu:haan aayi woh aj hum juldi
ghar aayenge toh ap khana ready
rakhna ok, haan shree bhi sath
mein aaye ga,liza o bhi call karke pooch loonga, nahi sameer sir ka
pata nahi unse poch kar phone


karta hoon..ok aayi bey..he cut the call and leave shree's mouth which


was till now covered with chotu's
palm


aaah... yelled shree as chotu twisted his ear


chotu:bus itna sa aaah, abhi toh aur
bara wala aaah nikle ga tere moun (mouth)
se..

saying that he ran after shree and chased him all over the ETF's building forgeting where they were


all officers and staffs were laughing at there antics


but when they saw sameer, they rush back to their cubicals leaving shretu with their game


sometime back at sameer's cabin


he was reading a file but couldn't concentrat as he was angry, very angry


but shretu wasn't the cause behind his anger, it was his
past which was now again haunting him


he threw the file on table and got up from his seat and
spoke to him self pacing up and fro


sameer:Damn it ek dead end, ek tara behen hi thi joh meri madad kar sakti thi par ab woh umeed bhi khatam


kisi ne arjun ke pohonchne se pehle hi unka murder kar diya

ab kia karun? how will i find her?


hehe frustratedly punch the wall in anger,not caring the pain which shoots up in his already wounded hand


how can he,the pain in his heart was far more grater than that


uch pata nahi chala woh wahan se kahan chakli gayi, kita dhoonda ussey par no use...


he slump down on ground and bury his head is palms and cried his heart out


his body was shaking badly due to sobs and guilt


sameer: i am sorry really very sorry,please forgive me


i am a faliure, i failed you, us..
you were my responsibility and i failed in my responsibility to protect you


i am sorry, i am sorry,i am sorry


he wept saying sorry until his trance was broken by his cell's ringtone


he checked caller's id, it was from liza


a genuine smile broke on his lips seeing name flashing


he quickly wiped his tears, made his voice jovial and pick her call., before he could even say hello, he hears liza's voice which was sounding worried


liza: bhai are you okay? apko kuch hoa toh nahi na?
why aren't you speaking? for GOD sake speak up Damn it
yelled liza


sameer: shhh bacha calm down, i am okay.. why are you sounding so worried? everything okay na?
now it was time for sameer to panic


liza cryingly: bhai i i saw a dream, i saw you were hurt and crying


sameer was shock hearing that, here he was crying and there she sensed it


his grandmother used to say

" zaruri nahi joh rishte khoon se jure hoon sirf wohi hamari takleef aue pareshani mehsoos karien, kabhi kabhi injaan log hame hamare apno se behter samjhte hain"


and sameer had seen this, not once but twise
first was his brother like friend arjun and second is liza


his trace broke by the sound of liza's sobs


he got panic and tried to mae er understands that he is fine


finally liza stopped crying and e took a sig of relief


sameer: waise liza e baat batao why were you sleeping at this odd time? tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai na?


liza: jee bhai woh bas subha se friends ke saath masti then shopping so i was feeling a little tired


sameer: okay bacha you tack care of your self, i need to check kahin tumhare speaky sen ne office ko phirse playgrond toh nahi bana dia


liza: phirse matlab?


sameer told her earlier incidents and liza laughed hearing that


liza: aw poor specky sen bichara, bhai q appne ussey itna daanta?


hmm someone is taking a little too much interest in our technical head..said sameer with a wide grin


liza blushed heavilly hearing that and said: bhai aisa kuch nahi hai okay accha ab mein rakhti hoon beylove you take care


sameer: bey apna khayal rakhna an cut the call


he was feeling very light after talking to liza,
he checked time and thought


'hmm kafi dair ho gayi hai, ab shayad hi koi case report ho aur koi pending work bhi nahi hai, i should call it a day"


with that he march out from cabin, he was going to enter in cabin when he heared shree and chotu's convo


he at first was surprise the way shree was talking but when he heared chotu' talk he felt he is the luckiest guy on earth who have this wonderful team


he was going back but stopped in his tracks when he hears shree's comments for liza


and that arosre the naughty and wicked sam inside him,
he recorded shree's convo


sameer's p.o.v: al aayega maza jab ya recordind liza sunegi ang grinned thinking about that


then he heared shree teasing chotu about someone from department store in chotu's locilty


he was surprised to here that,he thinks


"pyaar waaki insan ko kia se kia bana deta hai,jis chotu se criminals darte hain woh khud ek larki se baat kaene se darte hai"


then he saw chotu chasing shree in whole office, he saw them running,teasing,fighting and giglging with a beautiful smile on lips


sameer's p.o.v: kitna lucky hoon mein joh mujhe itni khoobsurat family mili joh har haalat mein mera sath dete hain


musurane ki wajah tum hoo
gungunane ki wajah tum ho
jiyaa jayena jayena jayena
o re piya re

jiyaa jayena jayena jeyena
o re piya re


liza jaisi piyaari behen mili joh hamesha mere chehre pe
muskan laane ki koshish karti rehti hai,
mujhe ajj bhi woh din ache se yaad hai jis din liza ne mujhe bhai kaha.


dil ne dua ki kash yeh waqt yahin tham jaye



o re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa
hi sake toh umar bhar tham jaa
jiya jayena jayena jayena
o re piye re



phir mila shree, pagal kahin ka.. har waqt bas masti mazak
lekin jab baat kaam i ho toh he's always alert


dhoop aaye toh chaanv tum lana
khushiyoon ki barish mein
bheeg sang jaana


shree ke roop mei mujhe ek chota bhai mila joh mujhe kitne nick names dete hai, mujhe kharoos adu raawan bulata hai par agar koi aur mujhe bura bole toh uss se lar parta hai
he's always there to stand by my side in thick and thin


dhoop ayye toh, chaanv tum lana
khushiyoon ki barish mein
bheeg sabg jaana

jiyaa jayena jayna jayena
o re piya re


then comes chotu, commondo of ETF
big body with baby's heart
he's the support system for ETF, liza, shree and me
he is always their when you need him


joh mile ussme kaat lenge hum
thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum



he can do anything for his friends, family and country
when i am away, i know he can manage everything well
he thought me the true meaning of responsibility


joh mile ussme kaat lenge hum
thodi ushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum

jiyaa jayena jayena jayena
ore piya re



yeh hai meri second family who loves and respects me from bottom of their hearts


he took a deep satisfied sigh and smiles


maa babasa se promise kiya hai tumhe liye bine ghar nahi jaounga and i know jab tak meri team mere sath hai tab tak nothing bad can happen..i promise you i will find you, at any cost


he saves shree from chotu's clutches and called it a day and went to chotu's home for dinner at his request



at the same time
mumbai chhatrapati shivaji international airport


a beautiful young lady walked out from airport and was waiting to load her luggage in taxi when her geze fell on a couple not very distance from her taxi
husband was busy in loading their luggage and wife annoying him


finally husband finished his task and move towards his lovely wife grinning but wife had sense his moves and quickly seated inside taxi


husband: yahan toh bach gayi,ghar chlo phor batata hoon muje tung karne ka natija.. he also took his seat and zoomed out


girl eyes were moistened seening the ove betwwn them
she quicky prayed to Almighty for them


girl: agar uss din apne muje nahi chora hota toh shayed humari bhi ek hoobsurat duniya hoti


she jerked back to world when taxi driver asked: chalien madam?


girl: jee bhayiya


she took her seat and their taxi moved out from the permisses of airport



musurane i wajah tum ho
gungunane ki wajaah tum ho

jiyaa jayena jayena jayena
o re piya re

jiyaa jayena jayena jayena
o re piye re


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