|| Arjun SS: Woh Humsafar Tha..|| [Part 10 Pg 37 And 38] - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Devika's heart-wrenching screams echoed into the room.. "Aai aap mujhe chhodkar kyun chali gayin? Aapke alava mera aur koi nhi hai.. Kyun Aai Kyun? Kyun Apni Devika ko chhodkar chali gayin aap??" Devika cried. Suryaknat stood there, silently witnessing her pain as his eyes felt moist too. How Can ppl say that they can understand other's grief? How can he understand the pain and grief of the gurl who lost her mother, Her only source of happiness after her father. How can he understand her pain of losing the only loved one she had? Never! Neither can he nor can any1one else.. Never!
10 Days Later..
Geeta's Last Rites had been done peacefully and genuninely by Devika as they had no son. Suryakant had attented each and every funeral ceremonies, to make up for the mistake that he had committed before.. Though Devika wud appear as very calm and composed infront of others. But Suryakant knew she used to break down and cry her heart out during the night. Losing her mother had indeed been a
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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setback for her. Suryakant walked into the room and found Devika sitting by Geeta's bed and sobbing.. He cudnt see the young girl in such suffering.. He walked upto her, and lovingly kept a hand on her forehead. Devika lukd up.. "Kaka.." She broke down leaning onto his arm. "Bas Bas Meri Bacchi.. Nahi Rote. Aise roti rahogi toh tumhari tabiyat kharaab ho jaayegi beta.." Suryakant consoled her as he gently caressed her forehead.. "Kaka mera aai ke alava iss duniya me koi nhi hai.." Devika weeped bitterly. "Kisne kaha tumhara koi nhi hai? Main hunn na beta? Tum meri beti jaisi ho.. Amit aur bhabhi se vaada kiya tha maine ki tumhara khyaal rakhunga.. Ab se tum meri zimmedaari ho beta." Suryakant assured her.."Main us vaade ko zaroor poora karunga.. Tum mere saath aaj Mumbai chalogi.." Suryakant replied. "Kaka? Mumbai?" Devika asked, unsure. "Haan Mumbai, Mere Saath! Mere Ghar." Suryakant replied.
TBC
Precap- Will Devika Move To Mumbai? And Arjun-Suryakant's Conversation..
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update Di 😃
loved it 🤗
Aratrika se Arjun kuch bhi nahi chupa sakta😎😉😆
loved his concern for his dad!❤️
Devika.. such a caring daughter.. hats off to her.. she takes care of her mom so nicely.. ekdum sanskaari bacchi he😉
Arjun needs one like her.. they both gonna be a perfect match!!❤️
SK is sad that he couldn't be with his friend in his last time.. but he was there with Geeta n to support Devika! 👏
loved the way u wrote end of Geeta👏😭
I loved his n Devika's bonding.. really nice😳
oh.. to ye vada kiya tha ki Devika aur Arjun ki shaadi ek-dusre se karenge..😊
eagerly waiting to know reaction of Vidisha, Arjun n Aratrika.. 😈
its gonna be loads of fun👍🏼
do continu soon
thanks for pm
Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
*unres*
awesome and amazing update.
Loved it.
Aratrika is such a sweet heart...
Chutkiyo mein jaan gayi Arjun ki pareshaani...
Arjun shared his problem about his father feeling about the death of his father's best friend.
Aratrika consoled him and said that everything nice will happen.
Wow..
Devika is such a loveable girl.. She is taking care of her ailing mother by making paintings and selling them so that she can afford for her medicines.
Introduction of Devika is really nice.
Aww...
Geeta aunty suffering from severe TB... Devika is crying and asking her Aai not to worry.
Finally,Suryakant uncle visited them.. Both Devika and Geeta aunty were happy. Geeta aunty said that Devika's father remembered him in his last days. Suryakant uncle felt guilty.
Days passed by and Geeta aunty's condition has started deteriorating.
She makes Suryakant uncle remember the promise Devika's father made to him.
Suryakant uncle wants Devika to be Arjun's wife and Rawte household's bahu.
OMG..
Geeta aunty died.. Devika is broken from inside. She is upset and has no one to call her own.
Suryakant uncle wants to take Devika to Mumbai.
Hmm...
Precap is interesting.
Continue sooonish..
Thanks for the pm.
Edited by ...anika... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it.. Thanks for pm.. Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
unresd my comment on pg 14
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it Shanu love u lots 🤗
Awesome update
Hmm Suryakant cared for his friend a lot 😊
poor geeta ..I really feel bad for her 😭
Her TB was incurable
Finally she died giving devika responsibilty to Suryakant 😭
Suryakant decides to bring devika along with her 😊
as she was really broken after her mothers death
both friends promise the marriage of arjun & devika
Lets see aage kya hota hai
will she come along or not ?
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awwwsssmmm Update
Wonderfully Written
Poor Devika she lost her mother
Her pain is unimaginable..
Will Arjun agree for marriage...???
Waiting for next part
Cont Sooon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unresd my comment on pg14.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I won't lie! I felt the chapter was a bit rushed! You could've explored Devika a bit more! That way it would build the crescendo for its finale more strongly! Nevertheless I loved her introduction! An artist who is engrossed in her newest masterpiece is always a lovable sight. I loved her little gestures when it came to her mother! She was the dutiful daughter there but alas she could do absolutely nothing to lessen the pain of her mother. That was quite daft!

Next the thing that I loved was the fact that even though this chapter was introductory rite for Devika you did not leave Aratrika and Arjun! Their friendship and the mutual understanding that flows so strongly was shown...even if it were in glimpses and bits! Undoubtedly Aratrika is a great friend and a strong shoulder for Arjun to rely on; but she is asking too much in return with those demands not being cloaked in certainty!


What touched me the most was perhaps Suryakant's concern for Geeta! He very well knew that nothing can be done to save her so he instead chose to save what he had promised! But the aftermath of it all is very unclear. On one side there is Vidisha, Maya and Aratrika who are sure that life will meander to their plans. On other side we have Suryakant and his age long promise and on the third front a clueless Arjun and Devika! The proceedings doesn't look too simple and sweet. Instead its like a one-way ticket to complications!


Nevertheless, the upcoming installments are going to be worth the moolah! Continue soon!
Edited by Meself - 10 years ago

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