Arakshi FF: Intezaar [Updt - pg 39, 20 March] - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
It was a nice updates.
Its true Arjun will take time but atleast he should tell Sakshi about his feelings.
Sam is indeed a friend.He is right, Arjun chose and now he should stick to it.
The best part was Sakshi and her patience.
Sakshi care for him and Arjun's Pov was well written.
Waiting for the next part..cont soon.
Thanks for pms.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92





~Five~



"Hello?!" He spoke into the phone lazily.


"H-Hello, A-Arjun..." A panic-ridden voice spoke back.


Arjun immediately knew who it was. He would have recognised that voice even in his

sleep. What caught him off guard was the way her voice shook. Sitting up straighter on the

couch, he spoke calmly,


"Priya, kya hua??"


"A-A-Arjun...m-m..." Her speech was not at all clear. She kept taking deep breaths as if

trying to calm down, as if she was having a panic attack.


"Shh, shhh Priya, calm down. Kya hua?? Tum kaha ho?" He was already getting up, ready

to take the car keys and head to wherever the hell she was. But, all he heard from the

other end was shaky breathing and crying. She was on the verge of complete breakdown.


"Ar-Arjun!" She let out a gut-wrenching sob.


His insides turned cold.


He knew with sudden finality that this would be the last time he'd speak with her.


Arjun woke up, drenched in his own sweat. A cold, tingling feeling ran down his spine - as if

someone poured ice cold water on him. Sitting up on the couch that became his bed since

marriage, he ran a frantic, slightly shaking hand through his hair. Placing both his elbows

on his knees and head bowed down - he took deep calming breaths.


He only thought of moving on from his past and only slightly started to put in some effort -

the most dreaded day of his life came back in a nightmare, staring him in the eye - daring

him to move on.


With the pulse on the side of his head throbbing dangerously fast, he got up, getting ready

for his morning run.


His eyes determinedly avoided the sleeping form on the bed.


~oOo~


Arjun was the man to avoid at all costs that day. Even Sameer got the wind of his mood

and tried his best to not get on his wrong side. No one dared to speak directly to him. No

one dared to talk about anything but the case they were working on.


As the hours passed, he buried himself in work. He knew nothing but his work. His mind

raced to solve the case on hand, thinking both like a criminal and a cop. He did not let it

wander anywhere else. The work gave him an escape route from the reality and the

stabbing pain in his heart.


He and Sameer were the only ones left in the office. It was almost eight in the evening.


"Tu ghar chele jaa Sam. I will be staying a bit longer. I already informed security" Arjun

spoke, his eyebrows pulled together as he went over the victim's file for the nth time that

day. Two whole minutes passed by before he realised that his friend did not respond.

Finally looking up, he found Sameer gazing at the floor, a faraway look in his eyes.


"Sam?"


"Hmm?" He hummed his eyes still fixed on the floor at his feet.


"Kya soch raha hain? Meine kaha tu ghar chele jaa"


Sameer's eyes finally landed on him, sadness flickered through them before he quickly

masked it, "Nahi mein bhi rukh tha hoon..." He tried to sound casual but Arjun knew better.


"Mein thik hoon Sam" The words spilled out of his mouth before he could stop them. He

regretted saying those words out loud immediately. Because, one - he was anything but

alright, and two - It was like an open invitation for his friend to talk and lay down his view

on his behaviour since morning.


Arjun was certainly not in the frame of mind for a talk at the moment.


"Arjun tune security ko inform kardiya ki tu rukh raha hain...aur...aur Sakshi ko??"

Sameer's tone of voice was hesitant, like he was afraid Arjun would blow up at any

moment. He was not wrong in his thinking.


Arjun was, in fact, at the verge of a breakdown.


But, instead of completely losing it like Sameer expected, he took a deep breath and stood

up.


"You are right. I should head home"


Sameer looked at him in surprise before shaking his head and walked to him. Stopping him

in his track, Sameer spoke guardedly,


"I-I am not saying you should head home. Bus itna kar, Sakshi ko inform kar do. Arjun...if

you need some time off...that's...I can understand that" He paused thinking and continued

a second later, "How about we go out for a couple of drinks...it's been a while...let's..."


"Sam, thanks but really I should head home"


With that said, Arjun slowly headed home. He knew Sameer more or less guessed what

was bothering him, and was trying to be the friend in need he has always been. But, tonight

Arjun didn't want to talk his way through the pain and anger, tonight he just wanted to

ignore it.


However, as soon as he reached home and saw his wife anxious, irritated and at the verge

of tears, he knew he should have taken up Sameer's offer and blown off some of that

steam.


Because what happened next was not something he had seen coming.



SIX



Edited by Aukview - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93


Phew!!


Intense?!


Well, expect more in the next update!! 😉


Hope you liked this one guys!! I am eagerly waiting to read your opinions on the chap...


And remember, if you'd like a PM...comment away!! 😊



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Edited by Aukview - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
res/unres...

yiiippeee...me first...
awsomeee again...really loving it...whats wrong with priya...sad that he again came in tha mood...sam is really good friend...having bad feeling...saki ka ka hoga???con soonnn...
Edited by Arakshiya_58 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Intensity building up indeed
what was wrong with Priya?
amd then whats going to happen?
why do i get a feel that he is abt to blow his fuse on her
continue soon
and yes read before PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Brilliantly Written
What's gonna happen...?????
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part eagerly...
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Omg
What happened to priya
Arjun past
Sameer so nice always support and guide arjun
Arjun confused
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
Arjun ka past uska peecha chodega tabhi vo aage badega na? What happened to Priya?

Arjun just wanted to be alone. But Sam. He is such a sweetheart. He knew Arjun itni aasaani se kuch bataane waala nahi tho he just wanted to be with him & asked Arjun to inform Sakshi that he would be late

I hope Sakshi is fine.

P.N. Please send me pm. Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
Great. Perhaps Sakshi in her worry and anxiety for Arjun will want to know what kept him late. And given the mood Arjun is in he will let out his frustration on her and also tell her the truth. Sameer is trying to help as much as he can. Please continue soon. Waiting. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
This on was early I guess... Yayyy... Very good..
Very intense.. Full of emotions and the way you portrayed them is like.. hatts of to you girl..
That dream.. God.. I got scared.. I thought it's Sakshi than Priya and I was like "ahh"
Arjun avoiding sakhsi... Umm a bit hurting but, am eager to know what's gonna happen next...
The last para, the last two lines.. Ufff I thought there is more but pata Chala it's finish.. Grrr
The way sameer tried to help his buddy was something soo nice.,
An Amaizng update.. I guess it's indeed an advanced version..


And yaa forgot to tell you in the pm.. Send me busy request.. Actually am new on if soo.. :P


Waiting for next one..
Tc..

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