Case SS - Devil Returns Part 12 pg 34 30/07/15 - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome parts
Ending is superb
Riya is disgusting
How could she treat sakshi like that
Thank God etf arrive at time
Liza is really brave
Arjun caring for sakshi wow
Bechari sakshi fas gayi
Like Samsha scenes
Superb
Loved it
Con your remaining stories
Waiting for updates

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow, fabulous ending dear...
kya riya ne ithne dhattiya kaam kaise kiya sakshi ke sath ??
she is really stronger(FBI agent Haina...)
and samishas scene is superb
cant say Liza's Part awesome..
A strong and perfect ETF Member..
and This Is Really Ladies Leading Story
The difference in Other one The finally's Riya marne wali part
i felt shocked...
aurath ki kabaliyath per kabhi shak hona nahi chahiye...
iski end adhoora rahgayi arjun show ki tharah...
once again
superb ending
thanks for the Pm
and sorry for Late...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Haha..Choreeza are shocked to know Sakshi is a Fbi agent.. And Joseph and Jack jaise faces..nice.!
Riya-Shivani-Aisha ka convo accha tha..! Ye Riya bhi na..sach mein bewakoof hai..A-S ko gaddari karne ko bol rhi hai..Sakshi ki jaan ki dhamki de kar..I wasn't shocked with Sakshi's behaviour beacause I was very sure YOU will have something planned..
😉And wo pin mein knife ka idea accha tha..! Lekin ye plan kya kar rhe hai..?
Riya-Jagga scene was also very nice..I was enjoying Riya's halath..20% hisssa nahi toh tata bye bye..hehe..
😆!
Haila..
😲! Riya ne Jagga ko maar diya..ye expected nahi tha..

Wah wah..! Girls power zindabaad..
😎I really like it when you don't show Girls like bechari types instead you give them the whole plot..🤗
A-S-S ne sab ko maar giraya..very nice.Hehe A-S bhi Sakshi ki sach jaan ke shocked ho gyi..😆
Oh damn..! Riya ko pata lag gya ki Samjun pehle hi nikal gye..Ab kya?
Blue film..? Riya is...
🤬 Itna gusssa aa rha hai na mujhe..But Sakshi gave a good fight...
Baraati aa gya..yeah..
😃!Woah..! Liza helicopter mein kaise aa gyi..? ye toh surprise tha..But I liked that part..Liza bhi kuch lam nahi hai..!😎
Are yaar..Instead of running from the ship Sam is asking questions..that was funny..😆
*claps* *claps* *claps* Teeno ladkiyon ne Riya ko shoot kar diya and Arjun's ka dialogue just after that..👏

Aww..! Sakshi ne FBI join karne mana kiya..! Everyone is so happy..Kisiko promotion mil gya and salary increase bhi ho gyi.And Arakshi part at the end was so fun reading..
😆
Poor Sakshi..🤣

I just loved this update..
👏The best part of the whole story..Kya ending rakhi hai..Sachi re maaza aa gya..! And the best part about this update was the action sequences between the girls..It was planned well and top of it written well.
Overall I loved this story.!
👍🏼
Thanks for pms..Please aise Case stories aur likhna..

And ha baaki stories pe bhi jaldi comment karungi.!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu



glad you like the update
Riya k liye no comments 😲
Itni solid villian banai aur tum uske bare comment hi nhi krna chah rhi ho
le meri mehnat waste ... are..aapki mehnat waste nahi huyi.. comment karte waqt kuch nahi soojha ki kya kahu isliye nahi likha.. chalo keh deti hu.. ek dum mast villain thi.. Mogambo ko bhi piche rakh diya usne! bahot hi interesting thi.. blue movie real me dekhni thi.. kamini😡 kaise itna neeche gir sakti he wo??😡😡 uski mout bahot mast thi.. charo girls ne 6 goliya maar di.. superb!👏 R.I.P.😉😆
yup kabiliyat pr kabhi shaq nhi krna chahiye...wrna aurat riya jaisi khatarnak ho skti hai..to sakshi jaisi chalak, aisha jaisi double gamer, aur shivani jaisi intelligent very true!
great tumhe plan psnd hai...mujhe post krte whqt lg rha tha kuch gadbad naa ho jaye
kuch chutt naa jaye
samjun and FBI to supporting system the...but aisa supporting system agar wo nhi aate to kuch aur hi ho jata...
ab arjun itni asani se sakshi ko kaise chod deta...galti sakshi ki hai k usne arjun pr trust kia
epiliogue...😲😲😲 usme kya likhungi...Raisha ke bacche, Arakshi ki aage ki story.. Shriza aur Chotu ke bare me.. Shivani ka bhi thoda kuch likh sakte he.. itne point kafi hai ya aur du?😉
sab kuch to khatam kr dia bahot kuch baki he.. likhiye!😊

replied in bold italics!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
annu di... i love you... ye abtak ka best tha :-D
For a change, i loved Ria's character.. villain hi sahi..atleast abla nari nehi thi...
Climax to zabardast tha...*claps*
Sakshi too didnt give up ... applauds to her too...
Ria...hadh hai...khud aurat hoke...aisa soch bhi kaise sakti hai..
Girls super rocking...
Ria... bapree..marne wali hai... aur phir bhi usko file ki padi hai..

Liza helicoper me...sab shocked...
Sam... isko to mai hi mar dungi..kitna sawal puchta hai...
Arjun sakshi.. ek dusre se achi wali dushmani nikal rhe h..hehehe
but yes..isme characters jaise the..kash show pe hote...

team work awesome tha...
loved it...

plz wrire mire lije this... love u loads!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Creeerch

*panting* sholly sholly me phirse late

Wow didu kia awesome and dhansu part tha 😃 Girls rock

Riya was an cop before but her self trust, over confidence and arrogence let her down

Finally the evil came to an end

Hailla sakshi was with FBI

Wow team got promotion

Sakshi joined ETF as Research Anslysist permanently

Finally Samisha going to honeymoon

Uff is arjun ka kia karein?? Why Update soon he soo arrogant??

It's high time he reliese his love and confess his feelings

Please didu ek chuka sa Epilouge dedo jisme inn dono ka kuch ho jaye

Thanks for pm

Please request maan kar ek or update dedo *puppy eyes*
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NainaSM

issse kahate he superbbb dhasu amazing awesome jhakss

kyaaa baat he mazaaa aa gaya
riyaa ki kyaa band bajaaayi
ETF FBI superbbb
samjun ne bhi perfect moves
riyaa ne bohot koshish ki sakshi shivani aur aishaa ko fasane ki
lekin girls se panga mehngaa paddha
last was superb
itnaaa badhiya update
arakshi shreeza raisha scene superb
lovely


glad you like the final part
Riya ne bhi full on competition dia tha ETF and fbi ko
samjun ne to kuch kia hi nhi 😲😲😲 bas wahaan pahuch gye
one again thanks for comment
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sairam175

Awesome parts

Ending is superb
Riya is disgusting
How could she treat sakshi like that
Thank God etf arrive at time
Liza is really brave
Arjun caring for sakshi wow
Bechari sakshi fas gayi
Like Samsha scenes
Superb
Loved it
Con your remaining stories
Waiting for updates

glad you like the update
glad you hate this riya...matlab meri writing skills itni bhi buri nhi hai...
bhai villian wo aisa nhi karegi to kaun karega
liza nhi sari girls kafi brave thi...ye full on girls story hai...
glad you like all the character
don't worry aaj hi do stories update karungi

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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm pt
riya is so bad
how can she
sakshi she is d star
all r fine
thnx fr pm
update nxt pt soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
riya is so disgusting😡😡...but really her character is very strong...👏
ETF ki takkar ki villain thi riya
riyaa😡😡...sakshi ke itni ghatiya harkat kaise kar sakti hai😡😡
sakshi is so brave😃😃
finally riya is dead 😃😃
each n every detail was described perfectly👏👏
aurat ki kabiliyat par sach main shaq nhi karna chahiye
bechari sakshi fas gayi...love that scene😆
love sasha scenes😃
really love women power😃
love it
thanx for the pm
sorry for late comment
isse acchi end iss story ho hi sakti😃
awesome ending😊


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