ArAkshi FF: Tere Ishq Mein part 6 Pg(22) updated! - Page 13

Created

Last reply

Replies

150

Views

25.6k

Users

26

Likes

224

Frequent Posters

Devilicious thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI

Awesome update

Sorry for short comment ...
Replying so many PMs


thanks..
it's ok dear i can understnd the pressure of so many pm's to handle at a time huh!
aimen.naseer thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago

hmm...nice update..

read all pending parts in one go...I really like the update
cases was nice. update the next part soon!
SaraaShah thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update rami.
loved the part!
thanks for the pm
continue soon
Arakshiya_58 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
Awsomeee update dear!!!!
Loved it !!!!!
Arakshi scene ws superrbbb...
So robbery case is solved...like teamsss effortt!!!!
Con.ssoonn!!!

Sorry for late was busy with exammzz!!!!
Devilicious thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

Awsomeee update dear!!!!
Loved it !!!!!
Arakshi scene ws superrbbb...
So robbery case is solved...like teamsss effortt!!!!
Con.ssoonn!!!

Sorry for late was busy with exammzz!!!!

Thank u dear...
will try to cont soon!
SaraaShah thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
Raaammmiii
when we are gonna have the next update???
plsss update it soon
Devilicious thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -lisana-

Raaammmiii

when we are gonna have the next update???
plsss update it soon

am in way to complete the next chapter right now..
as once i'll complete it..i will post it today!
Devilicious thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
Heya guys...

Back with the update again...actually wanna say that posting this part now and maybe i can be late on the next update as my schools have been started..sorry for that by the way wanna say u one imprtant thing that when i started the story many pplz liked it and i know that maybe it was not much good as it should be. and am not getting much response as it should have to get maqsad ye hai ke aisa na ho that mein yeh ff bhi discont kr dun(By God aisa na hi ho)...By the way the time had arrived to which i am gonna start the flasback story...so after next more 2 chapters the story will go to flashback where ya owl will gonna know about naina and karan clearly...so no more bak bak...


let's have a look on the update!


(Banner credit goes to myself😆)

Chapter 5


AT ETF's headquarters:

it was about 5pm of the day.The sky was blue, the air was crisp and the sun was shining gloriously... shree was sad today. everyone asked him for the reason of getting sad but he didn't answerd. sakshi looked for shree..but didn't get in the office.



she went to chottu and asked him" Chottu yeh shree aaj nazar nahi aa raha? aaj office nahi aaya kya?". "subha se mooh phulla ker bahir garden mein betha hua hai..kisi ko kuch batata bhi nai" said chottu. She smiled."Arry tum kyun hans rahi ho?" asked chottu.'Abhi ayi" replied sakshi with smile and went outside in garden.



After reaching the garden sakshi begins to search him by calling his name but no one was there to reply. she finally reached to a place wher she found shree sitting on the bench sadly. she go to him and sit beside him." Shree aaj tumhe kya ho gaya hai? subha se tumhe dhoond rahi hoon aur tum ho ke yaha..akele bethe hue ho..." saaid sakshi but he still didn't spoke anything.



she smiled and bring out a packed gift from his purse singing the birth day song"Happy birthday to you happy birhtday you dear shree...happy birthday to you..." he surprisely looked at her and the gift and smiled..."Tumhe yaad tha?"he asked happily..."Of course yaar tum mere itne ache dost ho..aur tumhari birthday mein kabhi bhooli hun kya?.." said sakshi."sakshi you know hamesha ki tarha aaj bhi sab se pehle tum ne hi mujhe wish kiya hai" said shree.."Acha bs bs ab itna emotional mat ho..."said sakshi and hugged him.



Later..



Sakshi was holding a glass of cutting chai and was going to arjun's cabin. she knock the door and then open it!
"Arjun dekho mein tuhmare liye"...she stopped as she saw he was not there..



she move aroung while saying "Ye arjun kahan chala gaya.." suddenly her eyes move on the cupboard and then down on the drawer...which was little opened because of a diary/book was there which was not letting the drawer to close it properly..



She put the glass on the table and walk toward the cupboard. she sit on her feets and begins to open the drawer...as she open the drawer she found a diary inside it. "ye kya hai" she said..



She moved her hand to it and pick the diary. she open it's first page... her eyes move on a name written "Arjun Suryakant Rawte" she had a litlle smile on her face. then she move her eyes on a picture pasted above the name . it was of Arjun's picture with a smiling face...a very different pcture which had an attractive look and his eyes was shining with happiness... " Kya ye wohi arjun tha..jo ab hai" she thought in her mind. "Kya baat hai ACP sahab...kabhi ap bhi hansa karte thy...sach mein...yaeen nai hota ap ki yeh tasveer dekh ke.." she was talking to herself...



She was about to turn the next page suddenly she heard the noise of footsteps. as someone is coming at the way where she was. she immediately close the diary and put in the drawer and close it!
she get up and run to open the door but before she can...arjun open the door and came inside. He got stunned seeing sakshi in his cabin.
"Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho sakshi?" he asked astonishedly ..."Ab...wo...wo.." she looked here and there. Seeing the glass of cutting chai said "Chai".."Chai? asked arjun...



"wo...mein...mein tumhare liye chai laayi thi" said sakshi."aur ab tak yehin ho?" asked arjun."nai bs ja rahi thi" said sakshi.."To jao" he said rudely..she quietly went out.



Shree and chottu were playing game on the computer while sakshi come to them and sit making sad face..."Arry sakshi tumhe kya ho gaya...i mean itni sad kyun lag rahi ho?" asked shree...Sakshi begins to cry making sad face like li'l babies..."ek minute ek minute i know ye kyun ro rahi hai' asked chottu.."Kyun?" asked shree.."pyaar mein dil tut gaya hoga bechari ka hai na?" said chottu watching at sakshi's face...she hit her hand on chottu's shoulder and said " What nonsense"...Both laugh (shree and chottu)..."Tum log na..kabhi nahi samjho ge" saying this she get up and turn her face to move ahead..




Both shree and chottu also get up and asked her to stay there. they said sorry to her and asked her the reason for being sad..she was still quite...
shree: sakshi...kahi tumhe arjun sir ne to.. sakshi nodded her head."Arry but hua kya hai mujhe bhi to kuch batao.."said chottu..."lekin kyun?" asked shree...



sakshi: wo mein arjun ke cabin mein ussy chai dene gayi thi...aur waha mujhe drawer mein ek diary mili jis pe arjun ka naam aur tasweer thi. mene arjun ki aahat suni aur bahi aany lagi to aagy wo tha...bs...us ne mujhe daant diya... she said while making sad face...




shree: sakshi..tum ne arjun sir ki personal diary ko haath kyun lagaya...agar unhe pata chal jata toh wo aur bhi gussa hote. aur arjun sir ke cabin mein unki gair mojoodgi mein koi bhi aaye to wo bohat gussa karte hain.



sakshi: lekin sochne wali baat hai shree...aakhir us diary mein tha kya?
chottu: Of course arjun sir ki ab tak ki life ka safar...



sakshi smiled ad said " wow...phir to us diary ko zaroor padhna chahiye"..'Oye..us diary ko choone ki bhi himmat mat kerna warna jaan se jao gi"said shree..."arry fikar not shree...us diary ko to mein haasil kar ke hi rahun gi.." said sakshi while smiling. "But kese?" asked chottu..."Tum log bas dekhte jao guys..."No sakshi...i'm warning you...buri tarha phaso gi.." said shree worriedly.."Shree...i said na...don't worry...agar 1 hafte mein wo diary mere haath mein na hui..to be shak mera naam badal dena...just one week..." said sakshi confidently.




It was 10PM of night everyone was in their way. the light's of headquarter was almost off..but aisha,chottu,rathore,arjun and sakshi was decorating the garden for shree's birthday party.sakshi looked at all as they were busy in decoration.them...she smile while looking at him and suddenly she had a thought in mind to go inside..she quietly went inside and steps toward arjun's cabin and looked around.."Shukar hai...arjun nahi hai..." said sakshi.she slowly push the door and went inside quitely...she on the other lights of the cabin and steps toward the cupboard she sit on her feets and open the door slowly looking here and there (if some come there..)




fter opening the door she looked at it and didn't find anything."arry...wo diary kahan gayi?" she asked herself..she watch all the cabin but didn't get it!. she then open the cabin's door but it was locked. she take off the pin from her hairs and open the locker of the cupboard. she looked inside it but still didn't find it..."kahan ja sakti hai..." she again said to herself..she close the cupboard and went out from his cabin.




Suddenly her phone rang..she picked the call and it was aisha on the other side."Sakshi kahan ho tum? jaldi aao.."said aisha."h...haan mein bs aa rahi hoon" said sakshi and hurriedly go to the garden...




the preparations for the short birthday party was done now! ...Sakshi call shree, he was asleep. he open his eyes and move his hand to grab the phone. he pick the call and speak up"Hello??" but no response came from the other side and agan said "Hello??"




suddenly sakshi speak up" Hello? shree...tum jaldi se headquarters aa jao rathore sir ne sab ko immediately abhi bulaya hai"..he looked at the wall clock and it was striking 12pm..."raat ke baara baj rahe hain sakshi...aur iss waqt kya zaroori kaam aan pada jo rathore sir ne abhi sab ko headquarters bulaya hai??"."wo sab mujhe nahi pata bs tum abhi jaldi se headquarters pohncho" said sakshi.."acha mein aata hoom" said shree and get up to get ready saying " ajeeb musibat hai".




At the headquarters:




Shree finally reached the headquaters and was about to come inside. everyone was ready to surprise him..he opened the door and everyone was wishing him by dancing, laughing, blowing whistles and singing etc...he was in complete shock...one by one all of them hugged him and wished him. he hardly managed to whisper...After a little...shree makes a wish and blow the candle...and cut the cake..all enjoyed the party!




Precap:

arjun saves sakshi from a women who was about to give balli of sakshi to be immortal...




Ok so done!

Hope you all like it..
PS: Gusy if u are not liking the story them do tell me i'll stop it here...bcoz i'm not getting much response...which disappointed me so much.. :(
Mahaali2905 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
wow amazing
wonderful update love it
kea baat hai sakshi n chor gr8
please stop nai karna okkk
waing 4 next and thanks for pm...

Mahaali2905 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
and awesome banner
and take your time hum wait karein ge next update ka
plz es story ko discontinue karne ka sochna bhi nahi...

Related Topics

Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: VindhyaMounika

1 years ago

Arakshi SS: Chance By Kismat - Part 17 Updated (Page 5)

Arakshi SS: Chance By Kismat Prologue, Part 1 and 2 Part 3: Arjun kneeled before lifeless Sakshi, who didn’t even blink from past 5minutes. She...

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: Navyasree08

3 years ago

Hamari adhuri kahani ( arakshi fan fiction) part 13 on page 17

Hey all iam Navya , this is my first fan fiction, iam so obsessed of our beloved arakshi ,i almost read all ffs of arakshi ,now I thought of...

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima

5 months ago

Ariya/ETF OS: Shubho Noboborsho – Ishq aur Investigation

Shubho Noboborsho – Ishq aur Investigation Prologue Mumbai’s April air carried with it a heady mix of warm breeze, blooming gulmohar trees, and...

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: muskan760

8 years ago

The Wait (Ariya FF) Part-44 Updated (Page-88)

Hey guys I'm here with the prologue of my Ariya story, though the title hasn't been yet decided but i hope you will enjoy it. Prologue :Life is

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima

5 months ago

Ariya SS: Bandhan – A Tale of Shadows and Sunshine {Part 4, P.6}

Prologue The night was heavy. As if the air itself carried the weight of unspoken truths and unfinished emotions. A storm was brewing—not...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".