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Megha32

@Megha32

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Wonderful os
loved sakshi roshni empowered characters
arjun was such a cheapster
but roshni got him on path
superb work

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Awsumm Goldie! Love You Lots..❤️❤️ Arjun is such a cassanova!! Accha hua ki Roshni left him.. Ab he will get to know her importance. Beautifully Written..❤️❤️ Thanx fr pm..

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Tia khan

@tiakhan98

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

lovely part dear
dear plz ariya pe koi os karo plz
thanks for pm

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 36

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awesome os di

loved it

an interesting issue taken up

beautifully written

thankx for pm

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

A very sensitive issue dear... truly... but nice os...

True.. some woman like Roshni are required... but I don't know why in reality some woman commit suicide... and the ugly truth is that not every 3rd girl in the married couple's life is like Sakshi...

Saksh and Roshni... amazingly written characters... none of them would give up their self respect... and what Roshni did was amazing dear... hats off... one needs guts to do this... she deserves to find the lost Roshni in her...

And Sakshi... am glad that she too slapped Arjun... but you know in our society there are some women who purposely are in the relationship in spite of knowing the truth... not many are like Sakshi... that's why I liked the fact the way you portrayed the 3rd girl..

BUt you know Gold dear the main problem why rich wives can't leave their husbands... especially if they have a child or expecting... then the husband can file a case in the court against the wife and say that she wouldn't be able to support her child on her own... then the wife would have to prove that not only does she have enough bank balance but also a regular income that would be sufficient for house, medical, education, child care...

Also about the place where she would be living... if she fails in any one of the categories then she has to remain with her husband... at this point of time the parents or brother or sister comes to rescue if they can show the court that they are economically sufficient to provide such...

Life often gets cruel dear... and the path afterwards is difficult... but I liked what you wrote... at least here the husband got a fit punishment...

I applaud Roshni once again...

Keep writing :)

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I forgot to say: " Roshni Arjun Suryakant Rawte.. is naam main shayad asli roshni kahin gum ho gayi thi ab main use dhoondne jaa rahi hoon arjun aur mujhe yakeen main main usse bahut jald milungi .." this was my favourite dialogue in this OS😃

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI
What a spoiled characterless Arjuna
I never thought of if some one can portray Arjuna in this way
Nice thought rimi n goldie di
Love the way both women handle the situation
And dealt with the lusty and greedy Arjuna
He really don't care of anyone in his life and shamelessly feeling proud of his thousands love affairs
Over all very nice mixture of Arni and arakshi
Thanks goldie di

THanks Dear Shivi

glad u liked it

jearks like this need a whip 😉

love u lots 🤗

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: virmanfan013
thats really an awesome os goldi..
really different n unique idea..i really loved it..
keep writing like this always
thanks for them pm
take care

Thanks Shivali dear

glad u loved it 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome OS
just loved it

Thanks Aarohi 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: chulbuliannu
mazaa aa gya 👏
mana k arjun ko choti umer me hi sab kuch khud sambhalna pada
but uska ye matlab nhi k use apne alwa koi dikhai hi naa de
iss story me arjun kaminepan me sabse aage
btao apni anniversary pr dusri ladki k sath flirt kr rha hai hadd ho gyi
lo arjun k to dono hatho me ladoo sakshi ussi ki firm me job krne aa gyi
arjun kamina rosh ko badnaam kr rha hai k usne arjun se paiso k liye shadi ki
bechari rosh kitni khushi k sath office aayi thi k wo arjun ko surprise degi
pr wo shocked ho gyi sakshi aur arjun ko restaurant me dekh kr
roshni ne dimag ka use kia aur sabse pehle arjun ki asliyan sakshi ko btai
aur ye bhi keh dia k ye sakshi ki marzi hai wo chahe to yakin kare ya naa kare
but luckily sakshi ko arjun ka sach pta chal gya...
and climax was good...arjun pura besharm hai...use apne kiye me bilkul bhi pachtava nhi hai
high society me chalta hai keh kr chut jana chahta hai...
but jo rosh ne reply dia awesome...thappad to banta tha bande ko
then rosh ne arjun ko bta dia k arjun dad ban ne wala hai
aur aa gya arjun apni asliyat pr... ab bacche k liye use rosh chahiye...
dono ladkyon se use accha sabak sikhaya