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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
Awesome OS

Glad u liked it pari 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015
gabbu...mai train me thi .. jibh mat dikho 😡

i have read the entire OS b4 u 🤢

gm...superb os!
firstly sameer aisha in the same pitiful state...
aisha k dialogs ...bilkul pagal hai ...
then sameer's helpful nature...
rosh-arjun ...hehe...atey sath drooling...lol...
rain dance superb...i love that song too...its beautiful...

then them getting caught...facing angry parents...
and then the turn..of events...
sameer realising his feelings after hearing about aisha's marriage...
and then the unique proposal..

i loved it!

Thanks Dear ishi

glad u liked it

keep loving my work 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: laila1994
unres...
Lovely OS goldie.
Sam-Ayesha equation was very well written from mere strangers, to friends & then something more special ( I won't term it as love).😊
this story was more close to reality than a fiction...I don't know how's concept it was But I must say story came out naturally.😃
The little scene you added of Arni was a treat for me.😃

Thanks Laila dear

glad u liked it

well your 2nd comment on my work 😉

well I like being natural & it was my concept dear

keep commenting & dont be lazy 😉

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ...anika...
awesome and beautiful OS.
loved it a lot...
loved Raesha's equation...
thanks for the pm...

Thanks Anika dear 😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: KReyAS
nyc one

Thanks Kreya dear 😊

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Rumpa Majumder (tani)

@tani.m

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

wonderfull os
m totally lovin d story
thanks for the pm

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: tani.m
wonderfull os
m totally lovin d story
thanks for the pm

Thanks Tani dear

glad u liked it keep loving my work 😊

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Awesomely written story goldie..

first the meeting of the two strangers in a socially acclaimed bride-groom meet and their non-tolerating attitude was depicted brilliantly...

then Ayesha's journey to her dreams and in turn becoming friends with the earlier met stranger...

then the special moment...when both felt the need of the other...

the transformation was splendid...i loved the overall OS...

the initial hesitation turning into a formal talk and then informal hug...brilliant...

you nailed it girl..😳

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Megha32

@Megha32

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Fabulous story
loved this raesha story

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible
Awesomely written story goldie..

first the meeting of the two strangers in a socially acclaimed bride-groom meet and their non-tolerating attitude was depicted brilliantly...

then Ayesha's journey to her dreams and in turn becoming friends with the earlier met stranger...

then the special moment...when both felt the need of the other...

the transformation was splendid...i loved the overall OS...

the initial hesitation turning into a formal talk and then informal hug...brilliant...

you nailed it girl..😳

Thanks Rimi dear

Glad u liked it

yes I wanted it to be natural & simple

love u lots & keep loving my work like this 😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago