Arjun SS: The Forgotten Tale - Page 2

Originally posted by: laila1994

unres...

Prologue seems really interesting.

Girl's nervousness, tiredness, anxiety...everything was written beautifully.

Thank you there for liking it! Hope you'd know run to update DTK!!

Also this update reminded me of black swan movie😳

I had loved Black Swan to the core!!

I will follow this story just coz of two reasons first it is paranormal/psychological story & second, coz it's written by you😃

That is some serious flattery!!😳😳😳

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PS. Thanks Shanaya for forcing this lazy lady to write this story.😊

I'm not lazy...I'm the QUEEN of lazy!!!😆

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

That was fantastic Shivani😃
the way you have portrayed every feeling of the woman was brilliant 👍🏼.
Specially the feeling when you are not satisfied with a thing what others see is the best in you.

This coming from you surely means a lot to me! Indeed when you are not satisfied with your work you keep pinning excuses to make sure you pull out the best in you!!

Well you couldnt trust me as reader as I can ditch you anytime with the story. Still I am reading as the genres are my fav, paranormal and thriller 😉!

Its all cool...I have tendency of doing that way too often...hence won't blame you there!!

Sorry for that in advance 😔!

Its all cool!

Thanks for the PM and Do continue yeah!

Thanks!!

Originally posted by: -TomNJerry-

wow, what a brilliant start! 👏 ... like I was reading pages off a book

Oh TJ!! Mere Abhimanyu ki mutual lover! Thank you so much dear! It feels so nice reading from you! Hope you are scribbling away something at the moment!!

loved the pace, setting and the flow ... totally gripping ... your writing is so fluent
the choice of words brings your writing alive!

Thank you! I am just trying to ape you dear!!😃😃

you have so well captured ... Avantika's anxiety, excitement, nervousness, happiness and fear all coupled together as she prepares to hold up on the stage ... living her lifelong dream in front of 20 000 odd people

I have faced that once so it was kind of a personal thing there...yes there wasn't 20000 odd people to dance to still it takes away a hell lot out of you!

her trance is broken as a mystery caller calls ... his/her lines seem to be conveying a lot ... guess we will have to wait and see how much the words actually weigh out ...

Yup...there you gotta wait!

but aaah, the entry of this hooded monster ... is like her darkest nightmare come true
already feeling sad ... for hers is going to be an abridged forgotten tale forever!!!

True that! An abridged forgotten tale is in making!!


I donno if Avantika Kapoor is totally fictitious or there is some character relevance! ... haven't ever watch Arjun so donno ...

Avantika Kapoor is my creation here although i'd put up known face for her!!

but please keep writing, Selfie ... I'd love to read more!! 🤗

Thank you my TJ!!!!!

Originally posted by: Riya.S.007

Interesting... very interesting


YOU ARE BACK !!!!

Yes I am BACK!!😆

Please now isko thik se update krna meri maa... dnt leave it hanging in middle

FYI I've updated SD! Its you who is missing out!!😉

I need dictionary update to praise your writing. though its impossible to guess yet doing it...hopefully etf will come in next update to solve case.

Thank you there!!


update soon


PS misshumptydumpty here ??!!!!

Yup Ankie is here!!

Originally posted by: kunchu

There you start it

wah kya start hai

the way you have detailed the bale with all those emotional conflicts... just wow

and Avanitka.. Well I am already loking forward for it, you know why

the climax... what was that??

jaldi update karo, esp SD

waiting waiting

Originally posted by: Meself

Oh TJ!! Mere Abhimanyu ki mutual lover! Thank you so much dear! It feels so nice reading from you! Hope you are scribbling away something at the moment!!

awww selfie, my partner in crime 🤗 ... i already have a weird feeling that we are lost souls getting united on IF 😆 ... i thought i'd just take a seat back and enjoy your beautiful work! ... but its just getting impossible to say no to you 😳 so as soon as i get some time i will try to scribble off something

Thank you! I am just trying to ape you dear!!😃😃

selfie, tum bhi naa... yeh kya tha, you are being too modest!! ... no ji i am just a scribbler...more precisely i am a just fluke scribbler, whereas you are a seasoned writer !!!

I have faced that once so it was kind of a personal thing there...yes there wasn't 20000 odd people to dance to still it takes away a hell lot out of you!

writing based on personal experience gives an extra edge and flavor to the writing! ... hoped all went well for you?

Yup...there you gotta wait!

True that! An abridged forgotten tale is in making!!

Avantika Kapoor is my creation here although i'd put up known face for her!!

Thank you my TJ!!!!!

you have me waiting on the wings!

signing off as

your TJ 😆

Originally posted by: Meself

Thank you there for liking it! Hope you'd now run to update DTK!!

Not until you update this one😉