Arakshi -1S- Dil to Pagal Hai!

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Happy Ramadan Dears!!😛


This one is for'E-Shh...', her Api, Papa, Mama, Chacha, Chachi, Maama, maami, three generations back and forth, friends here and there, etc.,😉


In this -1S- Arjun is normal (Very) person.😆

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And I hope here after I don't have to bear the tag that I'm giving short updates!🤣

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Posted: 11 years ago
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In person-

I just don't like you

In the dream-

I don't like anything but you

Where there is no hesitation in you

About others eyes

The difference between

the dream i see

in the day and the one i see

In the night is just that

The flowers

twinkle as the stars.

K-..


Kindly know that not every hesitation is the real hesitation.


Dil To Pagal Hai! (At least for a minute)


The music stopped.

"You have one minute!"

"Thank you, ma'am!"

She ran out and stood before him.

Her eyes fell on the clock, 'Ten seconds passed??...', she turned to him, "Tell me Arjun!"

She was panting.

Flash Back #1 :

20 seconds back- Inside the room.


"Ma'am please, just 5 minutes, ma'am!"

"5- minutes?"

"At least 3- minutes, please!"

"No-Way!!"

"I've to go ma'am," Sakshi said and started moving toward the door.

"You have one minute from now!"

The first 10 seconds:

She ran toward the entrance as her heart was pounding fast in excitation.

He has come for her!

She ran fast.

Perhaps with some gift.

Hah, who needs gifts? A smile, a word, a look...

After all he has come to see her at the correct time. God, the ma'am! Is there any rule for the train to come at the right time? Is there any rule for the students to fill the bus right now?

'You have one minute!'

She saw him standing there with empty hands.

No gifts?

Perhaps in his pockets.

She approached him and said, "Tell me Arjun!"

Flash back #1 ends here.


F.B#2:

The previous day- At the gates.


He was standing before the closed gates of 'Nandhana Kalashetra'.

"No use, sir. They won't allow you in today. They are practicing now. Come tomorrow, when they are going you'll be allowed in with the parents who are coming for the send off," the security said.

"Pakka?"

"Pakka!"

A flash back inside the F.B#2 [Shall we call it #2.a?]

F.B#2.a:

Geetee called him that morning and informed him that the train tickets were confirmed and the Kalashethra troop was going in the train the next day.

"Will you tell her before she leaves?"

His friend asked him teasingly.

"Before the train leaves, I'll, I bet!"

He cut the call.

F.B#2.a ends here.

Back to F.B#2:

After the first attempt of his, failed at the gates of Kalashetra, he decided to return home to think a better way to tell her.

'It should be different', he decided.

'Somewhat special, no matter, if it's different,' he concluded.

He took his bike and moved.

F.B#2 ends here.

Present-

The next 10 seconds.

She looked him eagerly, "Tell me Arjun!"

He cleared his throat once and looked her.

She smiled cheerfully.

"Do you have a flask? You might have one," he started.

"Did you come here to ask that?"

"It seems you have one," he muttered and said, "Nope. Just to say-"he put his hands in his pockets nervously.

"Yes?"

She raised her eyebrows questioningly as her eyes went to the clock unknowingly.

"Actu-"

F.B#3:

The previous day.

He took his bike and moved from the Kalashetra gates as his mind was thinking how he could tell his love to her.

As he decided, he thought to propose her with a special gift.

He moved toward a gift shop.

He stopped near the shop, when a thought hit his mind.

He needed to give her something useful, no matter whether it was a special one or not, he decided.

Right. What can I buy? She is going for a trip. Erm... A flask? How about a flask?

He looked up at the street lamp near the shop and went to a reverie right away.

"A gift for you," he said proudly.

"What's this?" she smiled.

"See,"

"A flask! Beautiful!" her eyes widened.

"Not before you!" he smiled.

"Thanks," she blushed.

"I love you!"

"Thanks!"

He moved the bike to a shop for the ugly flask.

'What if she has a flask already?'

He clutched the brakes hard and earned some glares, but nothing mattered then.

Then my flask would seem as a burden, right?

A man crossed him and said, "Side, please!"

F.B#3 ends here.

Present-

The next 10 seconds.

He grinned at her and took his hands out of his pockets then he announced, "Sorry, I didn't buy the chocolates,"

"So what?"

He thought, without anything how could he say it?

"You know, I was-" he stopped and saw the crowd around briefly.

Her face changed, she was getting angry.

"I don't have much time, Arjun!" her voice raised and few people turned toward them.

But he was going back to a flash back without informing.

F.B#4:

The previous day-

A man crossed him and said, "Side, please!"

He stared the man, but could not understand his words.

From his hand motions, he could understand that he was telling him to go to the side of the road.

He got down from the bike.

Now, what can I do?

Hand bag? Scarf?...Well...Nail polish?

He rejected all of them as he could not decide in which color he could buy them, or size...or how!

The man came back a few seconds later and complained, "You are still standing in the way."

After a moment, the man came to his side and took the bike from him. He put the stand to the bike and approached him.

Now he took his hand and walked him to the bike.

"Now, go back to the reverie," he suggested and Arjun nodded obediently.

The man left.

Gifts like cards, chocolates are always good and won't hurt you; at least the possibility is less.

Oh, chocolates!

She can't refuse them.

Wonderful!

He sat on the bike and moved to buy some chocolates for her.

F.B #4 ends here.

Present-

'God, just 30 seconds more!'

It seemed, she did not get a word from him still, that could compensate the separation ahead, let alone some looks or a smile.

He once saw the clock as she did.

"Actually, I was going to come to the station," he said and his gaze went to the bus standing at one side as the girls were getting on it.

For a change, they both went to flashbacks.

First we'll see the flash back for him (Solely for the continuation purpose!)

F.B#5: For him:

The previous day.

He was going to buy the chocolates as he decided finally.

'Before the train leaves,' his own words resonated in his ears.

Train, station- what a location to tell a love, He wondered.

After all he was going all the way to the station (Suddenly he had decided to meet her there, unknowingly)- just to say the love? Nah, not fair! How about proposing for a marriage with a ring?

Cute!

A reverie-

As always, it was getting late as in cinemas, for him to reach the station.

He started running toward the platform in which the train had already arrived and was going to move.

The announcer said, "The train departs in a minute."

She was looking outside the window for him eagerly.

As always, the station was crowded and he had to descend a staircase with a group of people clumsily and at the same time lazily moving on it.

He crossed a corridor and was reaching the staircase that was when he ran into with an old lady who was carrying a steel bucket over her head.

The bucket hit him in the head. The lady said, "Careful, beta."

He reached the staircase and started descending the steps in a rush. He ran into a man then came to the landing and was stopped by a man (Another man).

"Ticket," the man demanded.

"Who the devil are you?" he glared at him.

The man motioned him to see the batch on his chest.

"A TTE?" he could not believe it.

"Unfortunately."

She saw him coming and ran to the doors.

"Oh, see I've to see her and train is going to move. Please let me go," he pleaded.

"I can't. I've to check the tickets."

"Sorry, I don't have any. I-"

"Then I've to fine you,"

"Once I saw her, you can hang me. Now, please let me go."

The TTE looked him and smiled.

"Go ahead."

He ran toward the train and saw her.

"I want to talk to you," he said.

She smiled and waited.

"I want to talk to 'You'!"

A voice heard near them and they turned to see a man standing there.

It was irrelevant, immaterial, improper and unacceptable.

But there was none to overrule it.

Hence, he moved her a couple of steps aside and said, "I've come for you,"

Again the man spoke, "I've come for 'You'!"

They saw that he too had moved that couple of steps with them.

"Hay, what do you want?"

Arjun asked the man.

"A fight, simple."

"For what?"

The man came near him and said something in his ears.

"Can't this wait?" Arjun asked him.

The man once again reached and whispered in his ears.

"Right!"

Arjun said to her, "Wait a minute,"

"I don't have that much time."

"Then wait half a minute."

"Ok."

She took two steps away and waited.

The fight started.

They both delivered a blow each.

Equal points- a draw.

Arjun gave him a fast right hook kick and looked her.

"How many days, you'll be away?"

"Two weeks," she replied.

The man came back with a fisted hand.

Arjun clutched the fist and turned his hand behind.

"It'd be painful," he went on.

He was talking to her, but the man nodded fast. Arjun continued, " without seeing your face," the man now strained his neck and showed his contorted face over his shoulder to Arjun.

"To me too!", she said weekly.

Arjun looked her.

At that point Arjun's grip loosened a bit and the man turned fully to see Arjun.

Before he could attempt a kick, Arjun punched him in the face and the man went away.

Arjun stood before her, "I want to show you something,"

The train started moving.

"Arjun, the train is moving," she urged.

The man shook himself and jumped in the air. He came toward Arjun in flying.

Arjun knelt down before her suddenly and said, "Wait,"

"Arjun!" she exclaimed.

He clutched her hand in one hand and was searching his pocket with the other.

"I'm going," she took a step toward the train.

"Wait," he clutched her hand in other hand and searched the other pocket.

He found it.

He extended the ring toward her and asked, "Will you marry me?"

She looked him a moment froze.

Then she said, "Yes, yes! I'll,", emotionally.

She helped him to get to his feet and they saw that someone was helping the man to stand up.

They moved toward him as Arjun said, "Poor fellow, he has to get on the next train. I ran into him on my way here. He is going to see his mother..."

F.B#5 ends here.

**intermission**

Uff.. its pop-corn time dears! Go and escape from here at least for a ten seconds- nearly a WARNING!

Edited by greensakthi - 11 years ago
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Welcome Back to the show dears!

The story again starts with a F.B!

F.B#6: For her:

The previous day- in her room.

She was arranging her dresses in her suitcase.

She slowly fell into the day dream.

She was standing near the door of the train. Her friends were inside the compartment, Ragitha started, "See, she is waiting for him. If he was coming, he should have come by this, right? The train is going to depart-"

"Hey, wait Ragee, her hero will come with some special-" Shylu stopped short and said in a whisper, "Excuse!" they all laughed.

She was hearing their talk quietly and was waiting for him patiently.

Pram-Pram came there and informed, "Girls, Ma'am is coming!"

'What a ma'am can do, when two lovers are going to meet?' Sakshi thought and saw a glimpse of him coming.

Her heart thudded against her chest as she smiled at him cheerfully.

"Sakshi!!"- he called her.

She descended the steps.

"Come on!"

She ran toward him excitedly.

A scoop- High in air-Revolving- Revolving...

Her friends cried, "Hayyee!!!..."

"Splashchee!"- some kid jumped on the puddle water formed from the yesterday's rain.

Suddenly something hit her head, What, they dashed into some pole?

She blinked a moment and saw her friend Shruti was standing there- Oh, Why? What is it running down from her head in yellow?

She felt something glassy in her hands.

She returned from the day dream and looked her friend's angry face.


An explanation for the Yellow Liquid:

Her friend came inside the room with a bowl of 'Bhadam Kheer'. As she was not aware of sakshi's day dream, she called her,

"Sakshi!"

Sakshi looked her and the bowl.

Shruti said, "Come on," she extended the bowl.

Sakshi came to her and took the bowl from her- A scoop-High in air- she revolved herself an dwith Shruti's Shock and Shouting, "Hayyeey!!, she 'Splashed' the contents of the bowl on Shruti's head.

"Ouch!- Sakshi exclaimed, but complained, "Why did you hit me? It hurts!", once came out of the subway of her dream.

"Why did you pour the Kheer on me? It burns!"

"Then, it's all right," sakshi rubbed her head.


Then today morning, when she heard that the bus had punctured she calculated and concluded that they could not meet at the station.

[Here, she glared at the bus standing at one side.]

But when she heard that he had come for her now, here- her happiness had no bounds.

F.B#6 ends here.


F.B #7:For-The bus tire:

That morning- In a shed.



It started whimpering as it thought(?!) the driver's endless cursing that he knew well that it would give him up at times like this.

It was now in a shed with other waste things. Some rusted iron was itching it, continuously.

'God, What a fate! What did I do to face this? Is it the responsibility of the one who runs or rides to take care of things?

They are always scolding the mouth- less innocents, for their faults. Cunning idiots with hard mouths and bad words!...'

F.B# 7 ends here.

F.B#8:

Her father:

As it was in the past, can we call it a flash back?

When her father visited her two days back, he came with a marriage proposal.

She denied it right away and hinted, "Do I have to marry this fellow?"

Her father looked her briefly and said, "Then show me someone else!"

He smiled approvingly.

"After returning from the trip dad."

She thought, 'I've to talk to Arjun.'

F.B #8 ends here.

Present-

It seemed he had not yet said a useful or casual word with her.

When her eyes fell on the clock she could not understand that she had lost another 20Precious seconds in the flash backs.

When she saw that Arjun was searching something in the crowd gathered there to send off their daughters/sisters, she was irritated further.

He was actually thinking about how he could start the talk and a fight here.

He sifted for someone- proper for a fight, but it seemed everybody was excited and happy.

'I think, the blue shirt may fit. But how can I ask him for a fight? Perhaps, if I clutched the girl's hand standing near him, he might come to fight without asking.'

Sakshi asked, "Did you come here to see her?"

He turned to Sakshi and shook his head fast, "Just you,"

He did not think he could fight here freely like he would in a public station. Moreover he did not buy a ring to propose now and the thought dragged him to the next flash back.

F.B#9:

The previous day- In some Jewelry.

He had to admit that he could not choose a size for her, at last.

Suddenly a thought made him give up buying a ring then.

'You are becoming an idiot, Arjun. You have not yet told her your love. First, you've to say, she has to accept and after one or two duets, if possible then you two have to sit and talk about a marriage. That d be effective and proper.'

He went to his house with heavy heart. When his head hit the pillow, he thought, how soft it was, like a- a balloon. Balloon!

He decided urgently that he was going to buy some balloons and write'I-Love-You!' on them then would go to the station.

He thought how they met first in the bus stop, "Excuse me, does this bus go to 'Nandhana Kalashetra'?

He showed it.

"Excuse me, can you tell me whether this road goes to the public library?"

He showed it.

When they met the third time they laughed and started acquainting each other.

He slowly went to sleep with a smile on his lips.

./

./

./

His mobile rang. His hands searched under the pillow even if he was in sleep.

He found it at last on the bed near his foot.

Geetee was saying, "Arjun, plan changed," Arjun opened his eyes then.

"The bus's punctured and they are going to the station on time. You can't meet her there."

"Then I'll meet her in the Kalashetra campus. The security informed me. Before the bus is ready, I'll-"

"Unfortunately, it was past tense. Now the bus is ready. You've to get out of the bed and house then-"

"You must be an enemy!"- Arjun declared.

"Thanks!"

Arjun looked the alarm clock which was on the- Why, Where is my alarm?

He saw the time in his mobile; it said 07:30 am.

In the name of justice, I won't leave whoever took my alarm, once I returned,' he swore and left the room.

The alarm clock which was lying under the cot went to a flash back from there itself.

F.B #10:

It was a reliable alarm and it was wide awake all the night for him. As instructed when the hand touched the right time it screamed out at the top of its voice, It's time, it's time, it's tamm-uu-um-mm," Arjun had rolled on the cot and shut it out.

The alarm clock rolled under the cot, "Ouch!!Gee..." something cracked, "Trrr...itt!"

"Oh, my back!"

The alarm clock thought sadly, why should these people have to use all of their fingers to shut its mouth, when a little finger was enough to cover the button easily?

Even last month, when the battery went weak, the master took care of it nicely. Oh, Aag.. I don't understand what is happening to them after they slept- Cut, cut, cut!

See, what is happening when we let them speak.

F.B #10 ends here.

Back to F.B #9-

Before Arjun could reach there, the students were back from meeting their parents and were filling the bus.

F.B#9 ends here.

Present-

The last 10 seconds:


The second last 10 seconds were over unfortunately.

He said slowly, "I didn't buy you the balloons too, Sakshi," as he saw her head.

"Am I looking like a kid?" she asked sharply.

"No, but you didn't have a flower in your hair."- he was planning to tell her with a flower from her hair.

"Flower? What flower? What are saying Arjun?"

It was when, she, in the corner of her eyes saw that the ma'am was coming.

She lost her temper suddenly. She clutched his shirt and shook him.

5 seconds more!

"Arrjuun!!", she shouted at him.

He knew she was angry, but did not expect in this class. He was stunned at her outburst. Then she started pouring,

"Can't you understand that I've to go? You are wasting my time! You are standing here idly and are saying nothing relevantly. I thought you d at least say a, 'Happy journey, All the best.' But nothing- nothing you are saying Arjun! I'm going! Now are you going to say that?-"

"I love you!"

He said calmly.

"Go to hell!" she gnashed her teeth.

2 seconds-

He put his hands on her shoulders and said, "Behind you my dear!"

After a moment both of them smiled at each other, beautifully.


-THE END-


Thanks,

K-..

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How was it gals? Do tell me!!

Going away for two days, see u soon dears!!

Edited by greensakthi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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me first
nice update
loved it
see u soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I really have no words
It was great
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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVED IT shakti typical aarakhi
too good
Last wala was to mast
GO TO hell & behind you my dear 😆👏👏
kya baat hai loved it
Thanks for the PM
keep writing😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome OS...
It was as fast as Rajdhani Express...🤣🤣🤣
End was superb...🤣🤣🤣
Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update
really intersting
arjun and sakshi conversation is nice
1 min vala concept supub
fb are also nice
flowers,chocolate, balloons want an idea
the end is good
and thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
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dil toh pagal hain ya nahi pata nahi but u r that 😆 itne sare flashbacks
arjun sakshi ke flash back toh thik tha but yahan toh tyre ka alarm clock ka dad ka etcc...ka flash back bhi tha 😆 chalo yehi ganimat hain ki gates , bus, station, train etcc...ka flashback nahi tha 😆😆
but was very nice ek i love u balne ke liye itne sare flashbacks
aur arjun ka toh jawab nahi i love u bolne ke flashback main bhi mardhad karne ke bare main soch rahan hain 🤪
but that was nice i love u and then sakshi's go to hell 😉
but then best was arjun's after u 😆😉
thanks for pm


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fab fantastic awesome
loveitt
thanks for pm

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