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Hello,
Yes it's me again here to say something
Hopefully you don't mind
From beginning when I start writing your name always comes in those readers list who hit the like button After sometime you start commenting on my story and I like it and appreciate you to do more comments if you remember
But after that I find your name as a writer which is really amaze me. As I really don't know that you start writing when. I start thinking but not open your PM just ignore
I honestly say this because lack of time and many other hurdles stop me to active on forum for long time
After more than a month I open my inbox and feel dizzy
It's full of mails asking me when I gonna update my story and many my fellow writers send updates
In between I find your name as well
I start reading one by one but not open your one
Yes I ignore you I try to read ongoing stories and keep update myself and do comments on those stories then one day I open your new upcoming update and read it
I can't say anything about that as I already comments on that you read it. But that day wipe out everything from my mind
Just remember me that I must have to read this story from beginning. So, keep a side everything I start your story from beginning which comes in third thread
Wow, what the creation I must say that you do a really great job
This story is full of emotion, sorrow, pain, friendship, passion, devotion, romance, sadness, happiness and hard working
At many places make me cry like the end scene of samrat when he remember his sis and wife at very last moment when allow kappy to safe his sis rather then him
At many places I laugh aloud like when sameer call ayesha and sakshi open phone speaker and everyone hear his romantic talk with his to be wife
At many places I want to slap Arjun like when push sakshi away and ayesha give him SYS
I know many of readers confuse and ask you several question
As I see you describe and explain some of things in detail
And give answer who ask you question when they comments
But I am honestly say that I really enjoying your story with my guesses which is become true time by time
But I admit that you make ayesha sikki agent which is really not comes in my mind and I am still doubt on that girl who is sikki lover plus his wife hhhbmmm am I right his wife I forget he become marry or not but any way
You portrayed sikki like lost his love like Arjun
Is any connection Of that girl with sakshi ?
I really enjoying to see my guesses right
You use show scenes like coffin scene, arakshi first meeting, scoop up scene and with appropriate pictures which put some more effect on your story then some dialog as well remind us show. Which I really miss
Blewup whole ETF and story after that you write in good ways
Love the two yaar KV and their way of working
Thirst build up between arakshi hhhmmm
Love confess other two pair according to their character
Very nice all flash back and going back and coming present
Write in really good manner although at some places I feel something missing but overall everything proper and at place
The way u write in simple and clear way at some places you confuse us more and tangle many things but I know it's make your story more adorable
Arjun confuse state very well depicted
I know many of them do commenting chapter wise but I do comments overall as I read through out
Sorry if you feel anything bad but I say everything honestly
I forget my story and start thinking your one
So my reader who ask me and PM me every day that when I
Update my story I am late because of your story
I am not able to knit my story until you finish yours one right ( joking)
Yes it's me again here to say something
Hopefully you don't mind
From beginning when I start writing your name always comes in those readers list who hit the like button After sometime you start commenting on my story and I like it and appreciate you to do more comments if you remember
But after that I find your name as a writer which is really amaze me. As I really don't know that you start writing when. I start thinking but not open your PM just ignore
I honestly say this because lack of time and many other hurdles stop me to active on forum for long time
After more than a month I open my inbox and feel dizzy
It's full of mails asking me when I gonna update my story and many my fellow writers send updates
In between I find your name as well
I start reading one by one but not open your one
Yes I ignore you I try to read ongoing stories and keep update myself and do comments on those stories then one day I open your new upcoming update and read it
I can't say anything about that as I already comments on that you read it. But that day wipe out everything from my mind
Just remember me that I must have to read this story from beginning. So, keep a side everything I start your story from beginning which comes in third thread
Wow, what the creation I must say that you do a really great job
This story is full of emotion, sorrow, pain, friendship, passion, devotion, romance, sadness, happiness and hard working
At many places make me cry like the end scene of samrat when he remember his sis and wife at very last moment when allow kappy to safe his sis rather then him
At many places I laugh aloud like when sameer call ayesha and sakshi open phone speaker and everyone hear his romantic talk with his to be wife
At many places I want to slap Arjun like when push sakshi away and ayesha give him SYS
I know many of readers confuse and ask you several question
As I see you describe and explain some of things in detail
And give answer who ask you question when they comments
But I am honestly say that I really enjoying your story with my guesses which is become true time by time
But I admit that you make ayesha sikki agent which is really not comes in my mind and I am still doubt on that girl who is sikki lover plus his wife hhhbmmm am I right his wife I forget he become marry or not but any way
You portrayed sikki like lost his love like Arjun
Is any connection Of that girl with sakshi ?
I really enjoying to see my guesses right
You use show scenes like coffin scene, arakshi first meeting, scoop up scene and with appropriate pictures which put some more effect on your story then some dialog as well remind us show. Which I really miss
Blewup whole ETF and story after that you write in good ways
Love the two yaar KV and their way of working
Thirst build up between arakshi hhhmmm
Love confess other two pair according to their character
Very nice all flash back and going back and coming present
Write in really good manner although at some places I feel something missing but overall everything proper and at place
The way u write in simple and clear way at some places you confuse us more and tangle many things but I know it's make your story more adorable
Arjun confuse state very well depicted
I know many of them do commenting chapter wise but I do comments overall as I read through out
Sorry if you feel anything bad but I say everything honestly
I forget my story and start thinking your one
So my reader who ask me and PM me every day that when I
Update my story I am late because of your story
I am not able to knit my story until you finish yours one right ( joking)
Kumkum Bhagya
Tu Dhadkan Main Dil
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
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