T2: SARFAROOSH -WARRIORS OF THE NATION [COMPLETE] - Page 49

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

unres...

Awesome update di

loved it

very interesting!

everything sorted out well!

sasha friendship..then marriage..sweet!

loved the way of wishing..😆

loved all the three kids ..very cute!!

do continu a new one soon

thankx for pm😊

finally this story ends...😳

Awesome end to a brilliant story telling..😊

As i always tell you...you are a brilliant writer and there is hardly anything i would like to tell you about your writing skills...

the updates the progress of the story was brilliant..👏

loved to read a suspense story from you..its your first try...you would do better...would like to read more such stuff...😊

love you partner..😃😃

thanks for the pms...😊

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

finally this story ends...😳

Awesome end to a brilliant story telling..😊

As i always tell you...you are a brilliant writer and there is hardly anything i would like to tell you about your writing skills...

the updates the progress of the story was brilliant..👏

loved to read a suspense story from you..its your first try...you would do better...would like to read more such stuff...😊

love you partner..😃😃

thanks for the pms...😊

superb n awsm ending

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

superb n awsm ending

lovely written

loved the story

waiting 4 new one

yo yo!
and another end of a superb piece... 😳
really nice GM... 👏

pratap fled..and shehnaz ko ye baat batane me sharm aa rahi hai 😆
they were caught...and overpowered too..
i loved this story to the core!
action...suspense... relationships...perfectly balanced...and nothing seemed forced..
GM...i want more from you :-P
then the part B...that was cute... samsha became frirnds and finally decided to tie the knot...
adorable...finally ms kapoor n mr rathod se to chhutkara mila.. 😆

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

yo yo!
and another end of a superb piece... 😳
really nice GM... 👏

pratap fled..and shehnaz ko ye baat batane me sharm aa rahi hai 😆
they were caught...and overpowered too..
i loved this story to the core!
action...suspense... relationships...perfectly balanced...and nothing seemed forced..
GM...i want more from you :-P
then the part B...that was cute... samsha became frirnds and finally decided to tie the knot...
adorable...finally ms kapoor n mr rathod se to chhutkara mila.. 😆

Wow goldie dear...

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Wow goldie dear...

It's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, block buster, rocking and mind blowing ending..

Just loved it...

Yipee... thank god finally pratap came on acadmy...

So all plan to attacked shehnaz and arshad...

Lol... shehnaz don't know that pratap got save from them..

So they all attacked on them...

So samjun caught shehnaz and arshad...

But sam says to arjun we should killed them..

Yayy so finally shehnazz and arshad chapter closed...

So sam asked forgiveness from ayesha.

So sasha friendship became stronger..

Yipee sasha are married...

Awesome ending dear...

Superb...

Thanks for giving me beautiful story pm..

You rock...

And love you...

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Thanks Bhavna dear

Loved your comment 😊

Thanks for your wonderful guidance It will surely help me as your constructive feedback always guides me. well to be precise I had not dared to post this if RIMI had not helped me this is my first thriller & she helped me a lot with points other wise I was not confident enough🤢

regarding Drawbacks you mentioned let me clear maine Zameen movie nahin dekhi hai story line was framed that way 🤢 ye sirf tumne& anu ne kahah hai mujhse ab to main ye movie zaroor dekhna chahti hoon 😆 zara check karoon kya similarities hai beacause maine last scenes arjun & sam kaise react kaenge aur kaise dialogue bolenge wahi sooch ke likha tha will try & improvise for sure 😊

Keep commenting dear as such feed backs are really helpful for me 😊