ARAKSHI TS: LOVE...**Completed on pg-5**

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amulbaby06

@amulbaby06

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Oyehoye darling u have started one more... Its very cute & interesting...update soonnn... ;loved it :)

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

It's really nice dear
Both POV explain in very good manner
Good going soft and light story
Feel a bit sad for sakshi that what happen with her
Wait for next part
Do con soon

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_Aditi_S

@Aditi_S

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Awesome start
Nice concept
Love both povs
What happen to sakshi???
Loved it
Thanx for the pm
Cont soon

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Hi dearest princy!

Sorry for the late unres dear...

Yay me first!

First of all... I simply luvd it...

This is truly a different Sakshi...

Shy... slightly scared... somehow I could relate myself with her...

I loved the way you described her feelings... and the emotions which ran through her mind...

Really loved the brother sister connect between Ayush and Sakshi...

Sweet and pure... truly such relations do exist...

The first meeting was beautiful...

The hesitation.. shyness.. the embarrassment... awkwardness...

Brilliantly written dear...

And now coming to Arjun's POV...

So for him it was different to have met a girl who didn't drool on him...

And he appreciated that...

Beautiful... haha calling sir as sweety!

That was really funny!

But then his heart a small rhythm started playing...

Aha... so Arjun has started falling for Sakshi...

Beautifully written...

I am really looking forward as to what happened to Sakshi...

And no doubt you would complete this :D

Loved this work princy!

A big hug and take care...

Just one suggestion - a slightly bigger font!

Waiting for the confession...

~ Rockstar Appijaan :D

Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Oh I forgot to add...

A bigger and maybe different font...

Woh mobile se padhna easy hoga :)

And ya.. not only tht but also continue this...

Tera koi khair nahi agar continue na ki toh! ;) 😡

Just take care... relax and give us ur awesome stories :)

~ Rockstar Appi :D

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Devangana

@Devangana

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Please continue soon...what is wrong with Sakshi?

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jahanvi111

@jahanvi111

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

nice concept
awesome update
cont soon thanx 4 pm

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@Arakshiya_58

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
hey nice concept only arjun and sakshi's pov
arjun sakshi in school and whole one chapter finished and no converstion btw them
arjun satrted liking sakshi from start and sakshi is absolutly shy and introvert person
in these 7 mnths arjun have realised that he is in love with her and sakshi has started liking him
why was she sad what confession is she going to make ❓
thanks for pm

thanks shefali !!!!🤗
and ur answer is in next part... 😉