ARAKSHI TS: LOVE...**Completed on pg-5**

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Hello!!!🤗

Me again..To disturb you...

Ok..Now coming to main point...I write this... A small love story...

P.S.: You heardly get conversation...Because it truly based on no words needed for love someone...

P.S.S: Sakshi is exactly opposite from show...So don't expect fun.🥱.

Sakshi's p.o.v.

Its the day when I was going to start my new journey...I wanted to happy as much as possible...But I couldn't ...And one lone tear escaped from my eyes as I entered in my new school ...After one months of years starting...Usually people say its fun to be in new place and make friends...But when this statement come on to mine I say NO!!...As I cant interact with people so easily...But I was there ..As I had no other option...Because that's order which comes from person whom I respect and love like my parents...My brother Aayush..Though we didn't share blood relation and didn't know how we belonged to each other...But it didn't matter...

With the name of god I entered in my school...I observed everything around me and tried to calm myself...I entered in my principal's office with his permeation and collect my requires..He gave me the note which had written my classroom's number and my identity details...I said thanks to him and come out from the office...My eyes were fixed on that note...I could feel others eye upon me as I was new there..That made me more uncomfortable...As I didn't used to it...Specially boys...I can't handle their staring... So I started walking towards my class as fast as I can...

As my eyes were fixed on note...I collided with someone...I didn't dare to look up...As that was exactly my fault...How could I walk like this?? Without even seeing him..I muttered sorry to him and asked him to give me space for go but to my surprised he stand at same place...I can feel his instant gaze upon me...He continuously stare at me..I can't understand what was going in his mind...I crushed myself...As at the first day Someone was ready to fight with me...May be!!

I turned other side to go but again he blocked my way...I hardly controlled myself as tears are still in my eyes...I didn't look up and wait for my punishment with lowered head...Then I noticed that everyone around us running for class as bell had rang already...So I gathered my courage and looked up...And our eye met for the first time...I looked him ...He is standing with folded arms ...I quickly pleaded ...

"Please, let me go...PLEASE..."

Then quickly looked down because I couldn't bare eye lock...As if he was waiting me to look up because as I said those word he quickly gave me side...And before anything else happened I ran towards my class not wanted to handled his stare more...Runningly my heart wish to looked back... I turned around and saw he was still at same place...But then someone come and hit his back playfully...Saying..."Let's go..We are already late...ARJUN!!!

That's the time when I heard his name for the first time...ARJUN...

Arjun.p.o.v.

I saw her running like child...Who is afraiding of not one thing but everything which is around her...Who wanted to hide herself as much as she can...Her prettiest eyes were filled with fears..For the first time I realized that a girl didn't drool on me...Something was unique in her...No not something but everything...She dressed up in our school uniform but she cover her self with scarf...Which I saw for the first time in my school...She has gorgeous face but she wasn't interested in show off like others...Her one hand had old but nice and small watch and another hand had one shining bracelets...Her voice which is like rhythm(music)...I must say she is really unique one...

I snapped out as Sam again hit me...But this time little bit hard...I gave him light punch in response...And we both headed towards our class...We were going to enter in class but sweety ..Our class SIR ...Me and Sam call him by that name...Obviously not infront of all...he said to stayed outside of the class for whole lacture as we were late..But we didn't felt bad because its not punishment for us...Punishment is that when we have to hear her pakpak for whole hour...

I mentally thanks her who was the reason of this...We happily stayed out...An hour passed we both enjoyed alote...As sir didn't came out to check us and we didn't bothered to say sorry to him... Bell rang as lacture change...And we wait for sweety to come out and gave her decipline speech once again...And exactly it happened...He came out and start his lacture and we both stand with lowered head to hide our laugh and he thought we were guilty that's why we were standing like this...

He kept blabbering but then someone from our class came out and call him from behind us...We turned around to know who was our savior and found the same girl again...I looked at her and it clearly shown on her face that she is feeling guilty ...May be she was thinking that we got punishment because of her...She looked at me and I smiled at her innocence...But then she quickly lowered her head again...Then we heard Sweety say something...And we turned around that side..

"Yes dear, Any problem??"

She stayed quite only gave one look to us and again head down...She was hesitated to say something infront of us...Sweety got her action...And ordered us to go to class...We were going to enter in class..And I heared last thing that Sweety said...

"Now tell me what you want Sakshi??"

I stopped in meed way as I heard her lovely name for the first time... My heart badly wanted to hear her once again...But that Sam again pulled me into class...And crushed him under my breath...Don't know why but for the first time this unusuall things were happening to me ...Me.. Arjun...Wanted to hear a girl's voice...But I didn't thought much about that because I always believe what happened to us its for good..And atleast for me this line is very true...I became happy as someone like this was my classmet...

I kept standing on near sir's table...Waiting for her to enter in class...So I can find where was she sat...After five minutes she came in class...And quickly grabbed her seat..To my surprise she was on the last bench...Our class had four rows ...Left side's two rows for boys and right side's rows for girls...As Sweety didn't like girls-boys with each other...She is sitting in third row means exact beside boys row and that too alone...As last row's seat are occupieded...I can feel that she was hell uncomfortable there...But couldn't help her...

Sakshi's p.o.v.

After talking with Sir I came into my class...And quickly grabbed my seat ...I take my text book and start reading to engaged my mind...Then I heard a loud thud...I looked up and find that one boys hit another boy with school bag...My eyes were wide open how can they fought like that but soon I got that all boys were playing this as sir didn't came yet...After sometime I noticed that Arjun is sitting exactly besides my row...Smiling at his friends playing...He looks cute..What!! What am I thinking...Stupid!!I saw he was sitting alone but why?? He had friends na??

As if he hear my mind question he quickly looked at me...This time we share an eyelock...I couldn't understand what is happening to me...We kept looking at each other...But snapped out as we heard someone call him...

" Hey Arjun...Why are you sitting there?? Come and took your seat...You didn't like that place..So why??"

I saw him closing his eyes in frustration ...But my curiousity increased to know the reason behind it...Though I didn't look there again but heard his reply...

"Dude!! Climate had changed today...I am enjoying it...you also come ..."

It's the last line I heard that he is enjoying climate ...I turned back and found our class window is fully opened ...But nothing speciall in atmosphere ...It's still same like previous days... So what was he enjoying...Last he offered his friend to seat next to him...I smacked myself to thinking so much about someone...And again buried my face in text book...

Seven Months Later...

Arjun's p.o.v.

Years is near the edge of ending...And after two weeks vacation we were back at school...I am badly waiting to see my uniquie's face ...I couldn't believe whole seven months are over yet we didn't became friends...Everytime I went to her ...Her eyes stopped me to do that...In class she kept stealing glances...My heart also want to see her..I didn't hear her laugh yet but seeing her smile most of time...And I can say easily that her smile is unique one...Whenever She smile my heart fill with joy...I want to see her like this every time...And as if she read my find from past two months ...She always give me smile and then quickly looked away...I understand her that she didn't want to came infront of all like otherones..

Everyday she went home with private vahicles...But once I saw that one guy come to pick up her...She ran towards him and hugged him with joy...Then they both talk with each other smilingly and she went away on his bike...My heart pricked hard as I saw her smiling with someone other...That day I realize she effected me so much...I became so angry that day...

I start ingoring her in anger whenever she smiles at me I turned my face..I knew she got that I am angry but as always she didn't try to talk to me...Then one day I saw Priya with same guy...Priya is her only friend who is almost seven years old...Whenever I see with her she always looks happy...I talk to Priya and get to know that the guy is her only family ..He is her brother...Whom she loves the most...She told that she had no one in her family..And about relation with her brother... That day he came because the day before someone try to do mischief with her...I want to punch my self for being so rude to her...Another day she came I give her smile and to my surprise she she smiles back...She is not angry ...

After that we kept our routine ..At recess time she always sat at backside area behind the tree...As always not wanted to catch by anyone...Me and Sam always pass from there and we exchange smiles...I realize that I start falling for her...yes..I start liking her...May be she too...I smiled at my thought...

I snapped out from memoryland as Sam again hit me...He sit next to me...I kept staring at entrance waiting for her...Sam noticed that..And start his teasing...

"So, after so much days waiting for your love ..Haan??"

"Its nothing like that" I replied..

"So what is like that...You fool ...Do you really think its just likeness??"

I didn't replied back as I also know that its not just liking..I love her ..Yes ..I love her...As if he hear my mind...Sam again say..

"Arjun ...Its time go and talk to her...In this two weeks you miss her like hell..i noticed that what evertime you kept watching in your phone..Its her pic na?? tell me??"

I stared at him with shocked..How he came to know??Ya..Its true that I was doing that but I couldn't help myself..Sam laugh at my shocking expressions...

"Arjun...Please ...Do agree with me...Go and talk to her..Its 12th ..after two weeks exams hai...We don't know that we will meet again or not...So go...Before it get too late..."You always want to see her..Want her happy...If you see with other guy you get jealous..Moreover if a girl anytime say about her you start defending her...When she get hurt you face expression changed...Tell me what is this if its not love??You miss her so much"Sam said in one breath ...

I know his each and every words are too..And I also want to confess and somewhere from deep inside my heart I also know that she loves me too...But from past three days since school started she didn't came...I became really panicked...Sam shook me...And question with eyes...

"Yes...I am going to confess...hopefully if she will come today...I try to talk to her..."I replied..

Then bell rang...We entered in class...She came from behind...And took her seat quietly...I take a deep breath ...So miss this pretty face ...My love...But I sense that something is wrong...Her face had lost her charm...She is not look like before...I want to go ask her but again Sweety come between... and start his lactures...

As recess bell rang...I waited to for sometime...As all of us go at ground that time...In some minutes whole class empty...She is sitting with lowered head...I went near her...But as I going to call her she stands up and look me..Then ran from there...One look in her eyes and I knew something is terribly wrong...

Precap:

Sakshi's truth and confession...

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sorry for grammer mistakes...English thodi weak hai...😆😆
That's it for today...Second one is last part...
Don't know how it is..But my most favourite work...And really close to my heart...

So if you like please do hit likes and comment...And if didn't like please just ignore...

Do tell me..continue or not..Please say honestly...😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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res - awesome one dear... continue it... after I complete writing my update na I will unres this :)
Appi :D

unres on pg 2!


Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey nice concept only arjun and sakshi's pov
arjun sakshi in school and whole one chapter finished and no converstion btw them
arjun satrted liking sakshi from start and sakshi is absolutly shy and introvert person
in these 7 mnths arjun have realised that he is in love with her and sakshi has started liking him
why was she sad what confession is she going to make ❓
thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So sweet ..and so cute want😳 to know what's wrong with sakshi😕 continue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwwsssmmm start
Loved it
Sooo Cute
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely start
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome ts
nice start sakhi is shyn intovert person arjun strat liking her n soon realize he love her n sakshi likes him too is they r going to make confession please tell n cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update betu.
Loved it so so much.
It was so wonderful and beautifully portrayed.
It doesn't have much dialogue but it doesn't need to.
It's complete in itself.
Loved they way show both of their POV.
So, Sakshi is a shy and introvert person.
Loved her attitude.
Whole year passed but they never talked with each other.
Arjun missed her badly.
He also kept a photo of her in his phone!!!
But last when he went to confess his feelings she ran away.
What happened to her?
Why her beautiful face lost it's charm?
What happened wrong?
Con soooniiishhh..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing start!!! love this silent type sakshi nd cute arjun... their unique relationship love it...
waiting fr sakshi's mystery to get unfold...
cntnue soon...
Edited by My_VivJaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
Great concept
Loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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