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Posted: 11 years ago

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"Yeh itna Jaam kyun laga hai aage?" Arjun spoke,halting the SUV abruptly.. "Ek Dargah thi yahaan aage shayad Sir..Wahi pe saal me ek baar mela lagta hai, shayad ussi ke liye ho.??" Shanaya replied.. "Waise maine bahut sunna hai iske baare me..Yahaan har ek ki muraad puri hoti hai.. Hume ek baar jaana chahiye! Hain Na Guys?" She suggested.."Hmm..Sahi hai. Tab tak shayad yeh traffic jam bhi theek ho jaye.." Liza replied.. All got down the SUV.. But Arjun was still inside.. "Aaiye na Sir?" Shanaya rqstd him.. "Tum jaanti ho ki mujhe yeh sab pasand nhi.." Arjun replied. "I know Sir! But aapko Main Andar aane ke kiye force nhi karungi..Aap baahar hi rahiega..Plz?" She insisted.. Arjun nodded and got down the SUV.. All made their way towards the Dargah.. In The Way she saw sum little Banjara girls dancing merrily.. She was happy seeing them.. Seeing her they also pulled her in.. Shanaya Too danced with them..Vasdi Vasdi Vasdi Dil Ke Dil Wich Vasdi.. Rusdi Rusdi Rusdi Bin Rove Fir Rusdi...

Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

yay! me first!! 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳

awesome update di

loved it

bhaiya ne comment ki to aap to dance hi karne lagi😲😆 par bhaiya ko pata chal gaya..nothing ever escapes the eyes of our supercop..u see😉😆

sab bore ho rahe the..to sher-o-shayari..good idea! loved the shayaris❤️😉😆 shreetu waali to jhakkas thi!!🤣 aap aur bhaiya hi genuine shayaris karte ho😉😳😆

perfect song..beautiful😳😃

order ekdum perfect tha!😳 kitna khayal rakha jaa rahe he bhaiya ka😳😉😆[pls don't hit me for this😆]

bhaiya ko deep fried n meetha pasand nahi..to bhutta😳how sweet n caring 😳😉 [not for this too😆]

kya style se manaya bhutta khane ke liye😳😆

now going to dargaah😳😳

interesting precap..waiting for next update

continu soon

thankx for pm😊

Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago

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Anika_VR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

*unres*
superb and amazing update.
Loved it a lot..
Wow..
Everyone out for Mahabaleshwar trip...
Directly na sahi,par indirectly hi tariff kiya Arjun ne Shan ka...
Ah hann...
ACP sahab aur shayari... Fits well...
Shree and Chotu ke PJs.. 🤣
wow...
Shan understands Arjun's pain really well...
Everybody praised her for her shayari...
Shan aur Arjun ki shayari was really beautifulll.
Touched my heart...
Yay..
My favorite song...
Rab ne bana di jodi...
Aww...
Shan taking care of Arjun's eating..
She ordered food for everyone..
Traffic ke wajeh se everybody got down in Mazar...
Shanaya dancing with the Banjaras...
Arjun looking at her in an awe...
Precap is really very amazing...
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm...

Edited by ...anika... - 11 years ago

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neitka

@neitka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

wow
superb fantastic update
wahh kya andaz tha arjun ka shanu ki tarif karne ka
directly nhi bt indirectly sab bol diya😛
loves it
OMG shree n chotu n their jokes
awesome 🤣
kya baat hai shanu etni shayari
mind blowing dr👏
oh ho to hamare acp shahab ko shayari aati hai
nice interesting
they r going to dargah
loved it
interesting precap
thnx for pm dr

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Shravani / Arohi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Awesome update
Loved it
Arjun indirectly complemented Shanaya😲
Loved the Shayaries
Shree and Chotu's shayaries were 🤣🤣
Loved your Shayaries Shanaya
Arjun's shayari was beautiful
it depicted his pain
Loved Shanaya's care for Arjun
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

nice dear love u lots 🤗

so all are going to enjoy with kids

shero shayeri was so good

shree & chotu ne apne type ki shayari sunayi 😆

loved Arjun ka sher ko shayari bolte pehli baar suna 😆

so bhutta ,samosas & bhajiya tumne bhook bada di dear 😆

But it was so heart warming

loved it to the core drgah scene was also nice

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Supperbbb... as always...
Loved the Shayaris... Shree-Chotu's Shayari were 🤣
Shanaya's shayaris were sooo Lovely... Beautifully written...
Loved Sher ki shayari...
Arjun eating bhutta giving by Shan n thanking her... wow!
Loved the song sooo beautifully added...
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: Bubbly_Shanaya
Thanxx Chutki..!! Love for the longg cmnt!! ❤️❤️ Wahi na..Agar mard ho toh khud samne aakar lado! Yeh kaayaron ki trah Bacchon aur Auraton par kya vaar karna?? 😡😡i agree!!😃 Woh toh hai..Itni asaani se peecha nhi chutne waala..Arjun is a daredevil!😳 Kuch bhi karta hai woh aur Chinta nhi hogi? Maana Dosti nhi rahi par Dost toh hai na..😊haan.."ye dosti..hum nahi todenge"😉for SamJun😃 Aur haan Arjun loves kids yeh hume khud show me bahut baar dekhne ko mila hai hmm..sach hai😳 Dhulaai toh ETF me sabka favorite kaam hai..😆 Shan has always respected and cared for ur Bhaiya..😉wo to he😉😆 Haan..Maaze ke baad wali Sazaa toh mast thi..🤣 I know the SYS aur damnit session mast tha..😉wo to hoga hi 😉 Hayee..Dono cute toh lagte hain..❤️sacchi!!😃 Haan..Trip to Mahabaleshwar lined up!😃 Lets See Kya Kya hota hai..😉 😳 ☺️ Stay Tuned..😊 i will😉