Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75 - Page 55

Voila... I am back *wink*

Alrighto amie, just for some few minutes cause am coughing like hell - can give Rakhi a run for her money when she coughed in Karan Arjun... haha...

But yeah... the fever is just too much in love with me - humari anokhi prem kahani... He can't live without me and I turn cold without him.

Yet he knows that if he stays with me, he will dissolve me into eternal solace - death. *sniff* SO yeah, a tragic love story going on with the Paracetamols acting like the forcible parents stealing me away from my lover - even though knowing that he would be the end of me...

Haha...

So by no you must have been absolutely sureee that what mood I am in eh? *stuffing a pakoda in my mouth* well, ab jab hum romance bhari chapters main comment kar rahe hai... bhai thora romanchak mood main aana chahiye... nahi na...

*slurping alcohol (apple juice)*

STATUTORY WARNING : THE AUTHOR IS CURRENTLY UNDER THE INFLUENCE OF APPLE JUICE (yeah trust me I can pull of being a sharabi with just water in my glass, I only need to know my poor victim - and hichki, my mood is on*wink*) THUS THE READER OF THE COMMENT NEEDS TO KEEP A GLASS IN HAND IN CASE SHE IS SHOCKED AND VEXED AND YES PLEASE MAKE SURE THAT THE "MAIN AUTHOR OF THE STORY" HAS NO SORT OF FLIES IN HER HOUSE AS THERE IS A SUSCEPTIBLE CHANCE OF HER MOUTH HANGING OPEN AND A FLY CONVENIENTLY MAKING A PLACE IN HER MOUTH.

WITH LOADS OF SINCERE TEASE.. OOPS LOVE.

You know who ;)

Darkness and Moonlight

*haye*

You know Ritz ever since my childhood I was sure of one thing... all the person needs for a perfect romance is white white moonlight!

The heroine must be in a white saree, it must be a full moon night... and being drenched too would be a good option (but then sneezing can be shocking event for a couple looking forward for some *hot* ahem... I mean cuddly romance!)

And my dear Ritu certainly makes sure there are no other issues hampering the loweee time eh... esmart Rituuu... *wink*

Ah, what can be more beautiful than waking up to the sensations of your loved one brushing away a lock of your hair and tracing the inner of your palm gently. Ritu - today India needs an answer... from where did you get this beautiful imagination eh? Lagta hai khyali pulao pak raha hai *yum... add some lemons and spice to the pulao (wink)*

I notice the rough stubble lining his jaw. I bite my lips, resisting the urge to touch his face

*cough cough* sote samai Sakshi ji aap kya kar rahi thi? Ache se 7-8 ghante toh araam se iss mukhde ko touch touch kar sakte the naa... oh I see... Ritu didn't allow eh? Don't worry... she has beautiful (wicked) surprises in store! Hahaha...

Now now, he has to tuck a strand behind her ear, hai na?

But trust me this is one of the sweetest romantic moments I have read, seems so natural and heartfelt... *dreamy* you write beautifully you know that!

Loved that little piece wherein you penned down Piya's emotions so beautifully, indeed it was an extraordinary day for her! Oh my my... don't I love Piya and Jun! They are the perfect dad-daughter duo! Aha, if Piya is the one advising Arjun, then I can be rest assured that the plan would be something fantabulous indeed!

(Man, I must say that Siddie will have a very happening and rollercoaster life ahead with Piya as his... better half!) *wink*

Hahahaha... for Sakshi planning a surprise is harder than the case *lol* it really got me cracked up at this point!

My my, I simply louuuvvveeed the way Sakshi was like an almost love struck teen missing the presence of her hubby... I felt like giving a kissie to you for this part...

Oh Ayesha is so like me at these moments - catching people off guard! *wink*

(Clarification - a Miss. Ayesha Kapoor... not Rathore... *wink*)

Indeed, after the things that the two have been through... with Sakshi of course to be blamed - it just makes the anniversary all the more a bigger event in her life. Loved the replay of memory out there.

Awww, the little tease convo at ETF was superb! Haha...

The relation between Piya and Arjun is just more than being a father a child, sometimes they are best friends, at times even siblings! When she was prepping up Arjun for the "surprise" it reminded me when I was grooming my bro for an important event!

It was like a replay! Gelling his hair, getting the stubble right, straightening the collars, keeping the first two buttons ready... it looked really funny as a relatively tiny girl with pink pajamas was running around to give the best look to the man in front. - And I did do a fantastic job at that! *curving my lips and blowing air on my semi long fringes*

Haha, oh yeah, even I have done the same thing for my maa on their 25th Anniversary *giggles* so you can understand my expressions and how much I was attached to this segment of the chapter!

Funny thing ; you know what? I helped my maa in an ivory white saree which had little stones in them, while my bro helped my father to be in a pure black suit. Sounds... so so familiar! Haha... yeah...

Sam to the rescue, sometimes I dunno why but I find the Rathore family becoming Man Friday for Rawte plans!

Aww... Piyu so exicted on "udawing" nini for Siddie, I am sure that will happen - the house would be in a ruckus indeed, but then ten to twelve years down the line... if what we all think happens, then Siddie would be in charge of "udawing" nini of Piya... hai na *evil smirk*

Poor Rathore family, ek toh Siddie tha hi, uske upar Piya... haahahaha

Guess I have been very sweet and "innoshent"as of now... haha... so... let the devil come fore...

Aha Ritz... Majnu aur Romeo toh marr jayenge with the surprise that a particular Arjun Rawte has for his wife!

Blindfold eh... not bad... not bad, I mean... semi kidnapping your willing wife into the yacht is a beautiful thing indeed...

Waise, he could have made her walk to, but then I guess Ritz wanted to make sure whether Rawte is working out or not, hence the entire DDLJ carrying in arms... *hihi*

*sniff*

Piano + Tum Hi Ho + Romantic Date + Anniversary = *cough cough* heavy heavy heavy dose of romance!!!! Haye itni mithaas leke main diabetes se kaise nahi mar gayi!!!

Though... I loved this part... really!

Uffo... the next few lines, it's sooo sweet and romantic... hayeee... especially when he pulls her and she falls straight into her lap...

Miss Ritu, yeh nahi ho sakta tha na that he made her sit beside him eh??? Seedha godh pe...

Uhu uhu...

And Miss Ritu the great...

You just wrote it in first person.

IN. FIRST. PERSON.

IN.

FIRST.

PERSON.

FIRST PERSON...

OH EM JEE...

THAT MEANS... OH WAIT OH WAIT...

From the kissie to the... all in friggin first person *anyone heard that! she wrote in frist person... iska matlab*

I close my eyes as my lips touch against his

*dhak dhak* so Miss Ritz... *raise an eyebrow* care for a more an explanation of this??? Kahi... Sakshi ke jagah waha Ritu toh nahi lag gaya na... and Arjun toh hai hi... perhaps... another scene with...

... Sky *translate in hindi* *wicked smile*

Me so evil... haha...

And what matters most is that, you wrote the she first person *kuch toh choot raha hai*

Aww, Ritz, the W*F/OMG/ Shree ur dead/ She is crazy/mouth open/ *semi angry semi amused* expression on your face is truly priceless!

Hmmm... Sakshi is referred to as hopeless romantic, so is someone whom I seem to know quite well quotes herself as a hopeless romantic! So ki re Ritu dear, kahi na kahi this lines seems like as if he referred it to you... wah wah Ritu... kya baat kya baat kya baat!

By the way one question... did Arjun place his blazer on the floor before placing Sakshi on it... because you know... while... *my fingers are so hesitant to be shameless on the keyboard!* that, she would be needing a slightly soft fabric under her spine na...

*ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL*

But this was truly... magical...

Now now Ritu... your source of inspiration for this foot kisswas *haila* I must say that you indeed have very active imagination... *haha, i just can't believe I wrote that*

I know... sachai besharam... I mean kadvi hoti hai... hahahaha...

They say what is being written is a reflection of the writer's mind...

So Ritu darling... explain the lines below...

He reaches for my wedges, slowly removing them from my feet. A soft moan escapes me as he plants tender kisses on the arch of my feet. He then crawls atop me, his piercing gaze sending shivers down my spine.

Haye... *dhak dhak* *dhak dhak* *dhak dhak* waala part tha... thank God no one saw my facial expressions! I was reddd...

Ritu! This was not at all fair yaar! You should have allowed them to sleep for at least an hour after that *fanning self* bechara kaise jage hue the ya!

Physical exhaustion bhi kuch hota hai na! *evil grin* orr... I got it... you etched out a moment of tranquility... basking in glory of the aftermath of...

Haan got it, pehle to Rawte was injured... isliye kuch ho nahi paaya...

Now toh... wah wah... wah wah... wah wah... it's a good thing they were out in the waters, the airs must have absorbed all the sounds *Wink* I must say Ritu, tune toh bohot thande dimaag se sochke aur planning karke likhi hai...

Hmm... waha Shree Chotu ko chida raha tha yaha main Chida rahi hoon

Now a song dedicated for you...

Hoo, updates bhi... hote hai Ritz ke armaan...

Updates bhi... hote hai Ritz ke armaan...