Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Rituuu 🤗 🤗

I love Piya ❤️

Sakshi remembered her name & Arjun was sooo happy

Everyone's meeting with Sakshi was very nice... aspecially Aisha's... it was very very well written.

Piya teased Arjun 😆... helped him to select a shirt.. 😃 i just love love the Father-Daughter moments u know ❤️

Her letter & his reply... u made me speechless... its beautiful Ritu 🤗 excellent writing 👍🏼 And then... "I belong with you. Isn't it? I always had."

want the next part !!!! 😈 waiting 😆

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angelicdeepti

@angelicdeepti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#232

wow...super long update...

thanx for the PM dear...

i was so engrossed in the story while reading... beautifully written...

cant wait to rad next...

continue soon

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#233

*banging my head on the wall*

Jab bhi bi main comment karoon precisely that is the time that you don't find time to reply...

Nahi nahi... not blaming you... yeh timing hi bada ghalat hai mera!

AUr jab mujhe waqt nahi milta comment karne ke liye...

That is the time you reply to comments...

Yeh time ki bhi timing kya hai...

Chalo... before you think I am a psychopath strolling around the streets *psst.. I may be😉* let me comment on this chapter...

(Be ready to give 5 minutes of your time - the minimum... hehe... actually the effect of writing thesis!)

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**An entry music for me!**

First of all let me give my usuals...

I am in love with this update (sheesh... I am a very unfaithful lover - falling in love with every second update!)

Sorry dear - you could have made me a casanova if your updates turned out to be real humans!

That forms a splotch of my bright character!

Agh... back to my ramblings! *focus on comment!*

Oh btw... I luv the Kashaf and Zaroon ka thingy u put over there... wanted to write that ever since day 1!

Even I luv the SRK - yeah... I luv him! Well his acting thru his eyes to be precise!

But me being a shy girl... *ppl stare at me* ya... I am shy... I never really said that!

*my alter ego knocks me - time to talk about update!*

Oh ya... the update (Will try my level best to not deviate!)

You executed Arjun's happiness brilliantly! To an extent that I could imagine the scene in front of me!

The way you described the father daughter duo's happiness on Sakshi recollecting her name was amazing... simply amazing!

Ah the mini re-union... again another brilliantly executed part! Ayesha's emotions were perfectly written... that teasing voice... these small flashbacks just increases the pace of the story!

And Sameer! Wow... he has a beard now! Haha.. Unfortunately his wife - this was the stealer of the reunion...

HOw did Shriza even end up marrying!!!! 😲 Abhi tak Tom and Jerry chal raha hai un dono ke beech! Aur Chotu... bechara he is still single kya! But then... jokes apart... it was lovely!

And I loved it how she alternated looks towards Arjun every now and then... 😳

Loved the way you have described Darjeeling... really another thing I wanted to tell you since ages!

Being a girl from the Queen of Hill Stations I often pause to recollect my memory and smile as you bring out the essence of Darjeeling on my plate...

I remember how - like Sakshi I used to keep the windows open to let the cool mountain air come in... and every morning... as early as 5 o'clock... I used to stand near the French windows and watch the Kanchenjunga literally rise before me as the rays of the sun reflected on it... no matter how many times I have seen it a gasp always leaves from my mouth... be it the first time or the nth time... combine that with a classic cup of Darjeeling tea - flat ho javoge!

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*dreamy*

And wow... madam Sakshi has again fallen for her hubby dear Arjun *pat on Arjun's back* hihi 😳

I loved the way she penned her feelings... heart-touching... really...

Varun... he saved her! NIce twist I must say... really eager to know what happens on this sphere as well...

The locket... beautiful.. and the flashback associated with it... even more beautiful...

Haha... he wants her to confess first... poor Piya... loved her reaction to her papa's words! And thus came Sakshi... in a white churidaar... perfect!

Ah a letter! I completely agree with Sakshi.. there is nothing like letters... not only for romance... for many other things as well...

A smile lingered on my lips throughout the update... and trust me... the part B was a pleasant surprise...

I was like "Damn It! You had to end it here" for my power 3 glasses to realize and my mouth curve into a childlike grin and say "Hihi... this was just the beginning!"

I can't comment nor find eclectic words to describe the proposal... from giving the letter...the locket... the shirt selection!

Aww... righto... beti hai kiski! letter ke baare main pata chal hi gaya!

Wine colored shirt... nice selection! 😉 Oh ya - the song is one of my favs... so luvd the update all the more!

Waise I wanted to ask you a question... all these beautiful decorations that you have written... and yes the atmosphere that accompanies it...

Yeh sab dil ke armaan hai ya experience? 😉

Jokes apart... I was just looking into my computer lost in a world I dunno... and my maa surely thinks that I m struck for someone!

Cause I NEVER smile and blush - it's like the wonder of the world to see my slightly coy... except when I read ur, Avantika ji ya Vidya ji's stories... and my maa feels her damad is apparently going to be sourced from one of the social platforms! Perhaps it's time I make her read this... am sure she will go back on a memory lane...

Especially letter part... maa n papa were best friends through letters... and they just met face to face on the day of court marriage! Haye!

ANd ya... why the ji... well.. can't use Ma'am - too formal... can't call di cuz dunno their age - LOL... so ji fits perfectly! Actually same thing with u as well... and I can't use di or just call with name unless it's a nod from that side!

I am a blue blooded chatterbox - khaandani hai yeh!

And here I deviated again! I really should stop my ramblings.. umm... you awake... hihi *knock knock*

Loved the confession - I am speechless.. I don't have any words to describe it *shaking the dictionary in my hand*

Nope - no words!

This paragraph stole my heart... I literally cupped my cheeks in sheer amazement and joy...

Her gaze drifts towards the flame of the candle in my hand. For what seems like hours her eyes hold a distant look as she stares, unblinkingly, at the flame of the candle.

When she looks up, her face appears almost ghastly in the dim candlelight. Her voice sounds monotonous when she speaks my name. "Arjun."

"Kya hua?" I ask, touching her arm, gently.

She grasps my hand, facing my palm downwards and places her hand beside mine, so that our wedding rings gleam together. Her voice is a hoarse whisper as she speaks, "It's you, isn't it?"

She looks up questioningly into my eyes as I try to make sense of her words. She couldn't be trying to say...

She speaks again, this time, her voice is stronger. Her lips curve into a bleak smile as she says, "I belong with you. Isn't it? I always had."

**dreamy dreamy**

*sprinkle water on my face*

*me up!*

My God.. I loved this part...

And my lord - with this I end my crazy thesis of your story! Wait... I didn't actually write anything... I didn't speak about the literary devices nor about ... shoot! Nor about techniques... but then I don't wanna bisect your story like that...

I just love the way you write... often I leave my thoughts and head behind ands step into the world that you have created!

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Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#234

😳My dear dearest... That was one of the best chapter among all other best chapters.. hihi

That sweet simple dad-Piya moment was just a treat.

Its awesome to imagine him as a dad, and I know it very well.

Each time that they were talking were just bang on. Nothing OTT, just so natural

I loved her dynamics with Sid too.

And the Sakshi.

Her dilemma is such heartening. Imagine one day you know nothing, then from there she makes a world only to know that it was still a lie.

Just the apt way you mentioned. Just like a shadow.

Wow!!

Dairy and letter... bang on again. LOved every bit of the update along with lal ishqqq

waiting for next installment

😳

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

Pehle to ye lo:

For the first time I'll agree with your 2 partner in lollipop. This was one of the best &my favorite update till date. Aage aise update hoge to my favorite can change ha no guarantee
On a serious note, I read this update twice with the same excitement like the first time.
Papa & his daughter moments were adorable.
I must say, she got her appearance &her bubbly nature from her mom but Dimag for sure Arjun Rawte ka hai.😆😆😆 Itni saazish to daddy dearest ne bhi nahi ki hogi😆
Awwwii mumma-beti moments bhi mil gaye.Ab Papa-beti ko hug diya hai to mumma beti ko bhi dena padega na

About the letter, this is wat I have to say

I knew it. She did sensed it that the shadow in her far away memory is none but Arjun.

I Love You

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_Aditi_S

@Aditi_S

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

awesome update

ch-7

love FB

love arakshi moments

what is piya planning now???😃

ch-8

love piya's plan

poor aisha...piya ke liye kya kya karna pada😆

poor arjun

sakshi attacked him with a news paper😆

sakshi remember her real name😃

ch-9

Sakshi remembered her name & Arjun's laugh

love arakshi moments

Hope Sakshi ko jald hi sab kuch yaad aajaaye

ch-10

Arjun is so happy that Sakshi remembered her name

Sakshi met the team

she felt that Aisha is her long lost friend

sakshi n piya spent time together 😃😃

Finally Varun is found and Arjun will soon meet him

love arakshi FB

laptop se shaadi😆

Arjun wants her to confess this time

finally sakshi confessed 😃😃

arakshi are together😃😃

sakshi's last question was😲😲

loved it

cont soon

sorry for late comment

😊😊

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

Wow beautiful updates

Loved them

Very nicely written

Sorry for the late reply

Continue soon

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: Fantasia_junkie
Res.. one more.. ❤️

Laal ishq.. I'll be imagining flickering candles under the microscope today, for sure.. ☺️

Hehehe...that image is actually perfect😉

damn i wish i had a lily pond at home😳

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome update.
Loved it so much.
The way you blended the emotions and put color on it,
Hats off to you...
You touched the core of my heart.
It totally felt like magical.
Sakshi remember everything or just a mere part!!
Plissshhh con soon.
Can't wait to read more

Awwwie thanks sooo much Easha🤗

hehe, you'll see soon! 😉

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
I knw u r late but uska compensate bhi kiya hai na tumne ek lambawaala update dekar

Coming to the update it was an awesome update. Arjun n Piya r happy tht Sakshi remembers her name.

Piya wants Arjun to express his love bt Sakshi bt Arjun wants the opposite. Sakshi came to hotel n met Aisha, Sameer, Chotu n Shree. She faintly remembers Ayesha teasing her.

Sakshi gives a letter to Arjun n Arjun gives her silver locket. He remembers the day when he gifted her tht locket.

Piya chooses Sakshi's gifted shirt which she wants Arjun to wear when he goes to meet Sakshi. Sakshi becomes elated seeing Arjun. Sakshi ne aakhir I love u kehdiya aur sone pe suhaaga tab huwa jab Sakshi remembers Diwali night n Arjun.

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Thanks soo much for the comment!😃

Hope u like the next one😳

Originally posted by: NainaSM
Omg
so magical and romantic
i love it
kash mujhe arjun jaisa hubby mile
ufff
u write it so beautifuly
love it
continue soon

hehe thanks Naina🤗..glad you liked it😳

Originally posted by: jia03
Awesome update!
Loved it!
It was beautiful... the letter that sakshi wrote.. the flashbacks...
and finally sakshi realized that it was arjun ❤️

Thanks sooo much Jia🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Supperbbb... update
Loved it very much
Ek Dum Awwwsssmmm...
Loved Sakshi's confession... it was Sooo Wonderful... Sooo Magical...
Cont sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thanks soo much for the comment Niki😃🤗

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Beautiful update
loved every bit of this update
very well written
super excited for next part
update soon

Thank you soo much! Glad you liked it😳

Originally posted by: Areesha566
oh so beautiful and magical

fb's

pendent

letter

wine silk shirt

teasing

shy side of ACP

garden

pond and lilies

floating candles

confession

and last but not the least

SHE REMEMBERD

awesome part ritu

waiting 4 monday

thanks 4 pm deariee

Thank youu Areesha🤗

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
wow what an amazing update it was
how happy arjun was and he told piya that her mom remembered her name
it was so lovely how piya and and sakshi were spending time and piya telling her mom all abt her life when she was not there and asking the same from sakshi
how sakshi felt connected belonged to all the team
so varun saved sakshi and he is still afraid of some one
arjun proposed sakshi once and now this time he wantes her to confess first 😃 would love to see the flash back of arjun proposing sakshi 😉
flash back of sakshi being a nagging wife and arjun being a typical workoholic was cute
finally sakshi did confessed this time first and some how when arjun said he loves her he felt that he is the one who had put that ring on her
will she remember all
had almost missed siddie and piya bond but toward end they did came together 😃
thanks for pm

Thanks soo much Shefali!😳

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome update...
Arjun is so happy that Sakshi remembered her name...😃😃😃
Sakshi saw Aisha & felt a long lost friend connection...😃😃😃
Sakshi met with everyone...😃😃😃
Sakshi-Piya talked about each other...😃😃😃
Sakshi's diary entry was nice...😃😃😃
Arjun vll meet Varun...But who is this Varun???😕😕😕
Arakshi FB was 😆😆😆
Laptop se shaadi...😆😆😆
Arjun want her to confess this time...
Sakshi came & Piya started teasing...😆😆😆
Sakshi gave him a letter of confession...😃😃😃
Letter was very good...😃😃😃
Finally Sakshi confessed...😃😃😃
Now Arakshi are together...😃😃😃
Piya enjoyed being cupid...😆😆😆
Sakshi's last question was 😲😲😲

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thank youuu Sneha🤗

Your comments make me 😃😃😃

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
Arjun is so happy that Sakshi remembered her name
Sakshi met the team
she felt like she knew them for Ages especially Aisha
Sakshi felt that Aisha is her long lost friend
Sakshi and Piya spent time together😃😃😃
So Sakshi wrote a letter to Arjun😃
So Finally Varun is found and Arjun will soon meet him
FB was amazing
Laptop se shaadi😆😆😆
Arjun surprised her by giving the pendant
Arjun wants her to confess this time
Sakshi gave him the letter and he gave her the pendant😃😃
Loved the Garden scene
it was just magical
Finally Sakshi confessed
And Arakshi are together😃
and the end😲
Sakshi guessed that Arjun is her hubby😲
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thanks sooo much Shravani!🤗

Originally posted by: shreya09
Rituuu 🤗 🤗
I love Piya ❤️
Sakshi remembered her name & Arjun was sooo happy
Everyone's meeting with Sakshi was very nice... aspecially Aisha's... it was very very well written.
Piya teased Arjun 😆... helped him to select a shirt.. 😃 i just love love the Father-Daughter moments u know ❤️
Her letter & his reply... u made me speechless... its beautiful Ritu 🤗 excellent writing 👍🏼 And then... "I belong with you. Isn't it? I always had."
want the next part !!!! 😈 waiting 😆

Heyloo Shreya!😳

aww..thanks sooo much! 🤗

glad you liked it all😳

Originally posted by: angelicdeepti
wow...super long update...
thanx for the PM dear...

i was so engrossed in the story while reading... beautifully written...

cant wait to rad next...

continue soon

Thank youu so much!🤗