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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
The prologue is quite interesting. ...
And cs nice...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
awesome concept
but plz dnt leave in middle
plz continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dearies I am back to update my ff

But here I am slightly changing the stry

Now this stry will be depend on etf

Same characters as in show... saakshi, ayesha , liza r also there.. riya dead in xora virus case as evry1 thinks... nayee entries honge tooh u'll come 2 know during the the stry

Aage ka suspense as stry goes...😉

Chapter 1

A boy sitting on chair alone thinking about his past about the people who were the integral part of his life whom he luved so much

Flash back:

Shree: yaar ye akadu hume chain se jine nahi dega... Jab dekho tab sirf kaam pe lagadeta hai

Chotu: haan yaar... Jina mushkil kar ke rakha hai iss khadoos ne

Saakshi: lagata hai commissioner sir ka dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai...

Yaar unhone sameer ko delhi transfer kyun kardiya...

Iss samjhaaon ne tooh band bjaa ke rakha hai mera... Sameer plz come back

Aayesha: haan yaar I am missing him so much...

All stared at her

All: hooon... missing haan😳

And every1 started 2 laugh😆

Flash back ends...

a smile appears on his face remembering his swt team members antics...

{yes what u r thinking is right}

The person is arjun... and is missing his team so much...

Sorry for short update... agar aage likhti tooh secret khul jaata😛

Waise bhi I know ki aap logoon ko andaaja hai ki suspense kyaa hai

All r cute and smart detectives...😉

If u like the update and want me to cont the stry then hit the like button and leave ur valuable comment here if any 1 want pm then buddy me

Srry for any errors

If I'll get enough response then only I'll cont otherwise I'll stop the stry here only

Ok bye guys hope I tried my level best 2 entertain u people

Stay tuned 2 know more ...

Love

ni😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Wow awsm start
Loved it
Very nicely written
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
nice update
with lot of questians
so keep continuing
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
I'm confuse in concept u said arjun as business man
but now arjun as ETF member 😕
now u write riya dead in x-zora case 😕
I'm totally confused plz clear all this confusion 😭 😭
sorry if I hurt u dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
nice concept
and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
Suspicious start ,but i love it 👏
plz continue soon 😳
thanks 4 the pm 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
nice but short.. Liked it.. Thanks for pm..

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