Case SS :- A Dream come true...Last Chapter/Pg 45 07-11-14 - Page 31

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Posted: 10 years ago
Read both parts
Wow dear...

It's awesome, blossom, amazing, fantastic, fabulous, super duper, blockbuster, rocking outstanding, freaking, breathtaking and mind blowing update...

Just loved it...

Awesome...

The whole chapter is superb..

Beautiful...

Do continue soon...

And thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres my comment on page 43 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOw dear...
simply fantastic...

really sry for the short comment...

exams have started!

anyways... as I was saying...

damn awesome update yaar!

Hypnosis... nice theory solved...

But really... didn't expect Niharika to actually go this down...

*sigh*

Luv,

Shree

Amazing work dear...

Truly awesome!
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey can u send me pm ...
i like this story a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manurocks

hey can u send me pm ...

i like this story a lot


I will send u PM updates once I get comments from you on previous updates...I am not forcing you to comment but I have opted this from other writers to PM only those who comment on the story...😃😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Thank you much all the readers...🤗🤗🤗

I had unknowingly skipped mentioning Rimi di's name in some updates but won't forget this time... Thank you sooo much for helping me throughout the story...Thanks a lot...it means a lot to me...🤗🤗🤗

Thank you to Laila also...she has also suffered in absence of Rimi di...😆😆😆...Thank you sooo much Laila...🤗🤗🤗

And a big Thank you MWB's who had literally forced me to write this...🤗🤗🤗

Chapter 13

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Sakshi went to meet Aisha but she didn't find her in office, Sakshi called her but she didn't picked up, Sakshi tried several times on her mobile & landline but none was answered, she got panicked & asked Shree to trace her mobile, Shree did the same & found that her mobile is in office only, on searching they found it on Aisha's desk, Sakshi went to inform Arjun about the same & Shree went to Rathod.

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Soon everyone was present at Rathod's cabin & tension was visible on everyone's face. Chotu asked doubtfully, "Kahin Aisha kuch...". He don't dare to complete the sentence.

Rathod said with confidence, "Itni kamjor nahi hai woh Chotu"

Sakshi asked worrily, "Ab hum usse dundenge kahan??"

Arjun said, "Chotu check karo ki woh apni car leke gayi hai kya If yes than try to find her car"

Chotu went out after saying, "Sir"

Arjun continued, "Sakshi sayad woh apne ghar gayi ho, tumhare pass uski ki building mein rehne walo mein se kisi ka number hai kya??"

Sakshi replied, "Nehi"

Arjun said, "Than go & check, Shree tum bhi saath jao"

Sakshi-Shree went out. Arjun looked at Rathod who looked a bit lost, Arjun coughed to gain his attention & he got that attention with that.

Rathod said, "Commissioner Sir ki meeting mein tum jao, mein baad mein aata hoon".

Saying this Rathod picked his mobile & gun & started moving outside, only to be stopped by Arjun, who asked, "Meeting mein tumhe bhi aana hai...Kahan jaa rahe ho??"

Rathod replied, "Mujhe kuch kaam hai...thodi der mein aa jaunga"

But Arjun was once his best buddy, he knows Rathod in & out, so Arjun asked curiously, "Tum jante ho Aisha kahan hai??"

Rathod turned his back towards Arjun & muttered slowly, "Sayad". Witht that Rathod went out & Arjun looked at his retreating back with a small smile on his lips.

After a drive of about half an hour, Rathod was standing in front of a Luv-Khush Anath Ashram. This is the place which was mentioned by Aisha in one of their casual talks stating whenever she wants peace or she is disturbed she always come here, on asking why this place the answer never came from her side.

Rathod went inside after watchman's checking, Rathod met with one of the incharge & asked about Aisha & got to know that she is here & is in garden.

Rathod thanked the incharge & moved towards the garden which was at the backside. Reaching there he found some children playing there with ball, some playing cricket, some were enjoying swings. But his eyes were searching Aisha & found her sitting on bench in a quiet corner of garden.

He reached there, Aisha felt someone's presence beside her & looked up to see who has come & found Rathod standing there.

Rathod took the seat beside her, but for some time neither Aisha said something nor Rathod, both were seating there with complete silence seeing kids playing around them but both knew that none of them is actually enjoying seeing kids playing as their minds were lost.

Rathod started calmly, "Trust bohat badi cheez hoti hai"

Aisha looked at him when heard his voice, Rathod continued while looking at the kids, "Janta hoon ki agar ek baar tut jaye toh bohat mushkil se fir kisi pe trust hota hai, par iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki aap galat ho, galat woh hote hai jo aapke trust ko todhte hai"

Rathod looked at her & continued, "Isliye don't blame yourself"

Saying this much he sustained his silence again & so did Aisha. After good few minutes Aisha replied, "I have decided something"

Rathod looked at her confused, Aisha continued, "I will resign"

Before Rathod can say something, Aisha continued, "Jaisa Niharikha ne mujh se do khoon karwaye, waise hi koi bhi mujh se kuch bhi karwa sakta hai...anything that they want"

Had not been Sameer calm & sensible enough he would have blasted on her insensitive decision but he asked coolly, "Isse kya hoga??"

Aisha looked at him with confusion, "Jab mein ETF mein rahungi hi nahi toh koi mujhse aisa kaam kyu karwega??"

Sameer asked, "Ek sawal punchu??"

Aisha was looking at him in confusion, on getting no response from her he asked, "Tumhe kya lagta hai ki Niharikha ne tumhe apna hatyaar kyu banaya...sirf isliye kyuki tum ek police officer ho??"

Aisha replied instantly, "Nahi...she used me bcoz I know shooting & no one will suspect me for the murders"

Sameer replied, "Exactly"

Aisha was in confusion again & was losing her calm gradually, so Sameer continued, "Toh tumhare resign karne se kya tum gun chalana bhool jaugi??"

Aisha was silent bcoz she knows that whatever he is saying he is right, Sameer continued, "Tumhare ETF mein hone ya na hone se kisi ko koi fark nahi padta, jise jo karna hai woh woh hi karega...Than what's the use of you leaving ETF??"

Aisha asked irritated , "Toh kya karun??"

Rathod know that she is very disturbed & needs some time to cope up with the revelations but he also knew that she must use her time in thinking & taking right decisions bcoz in such states people take wrong decisions & regret it later just like him.

Rathod replied, "Woh hi jo aaj tak kar rahi thi??"

Aisha looked at him confused, Rathod continued, "Jurm ke khilaf khadi raho, aur khud ko itna majboot banao ki phir koi tumhara istemaal na kar sakhe"

Aisha was not still fully confessed so Rathod continued, "Tumhe logo ki handardi chahiye??"

Aisha instantly replied, "NO"

Rathod stood up & replied, "Toh phir chalo aur waise bhi ETF mein cases ki kami nahi hai"

Saying this he went from there & Aisha fall in thinking & concluded that he is right, she will make herself more stronger. With that she also went out of ashram & found Rathod waiting for her in ETF SUV.

After that case was filed in court but due to the involvement of Aisha in the case Commissioner Sir didn't allowed Aisha to work with ETF till the decision from court arrives.

It took 2 & half months for the court to complete it procedures & gave Niharikha punishment of to be hanged till death, but for this time Aisha was not internal part of ETF but she was working with them unofficially.

THE END

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With this I end DCT here. Readers can take this update as a last part or epilogue.😛😛😛

Thank you soo much everyone for reading this story. 🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update...
humm to rathore ko pta nhi hoga to kise pta hoga k aisha kahaan jaa skti hai
aisha ne etf chodne ki sochi 😲
but rathore ne sambhal lia ...and he is right...k etf chodne se wo gun chalna thodi bhul jayegi
a balanced update...
nice ending...
Edited by chulbuliannu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Okay fine...i am commenting on both the parts...🤔
i have told you a number of times...but publically bolne bhi banta hain..you have improved a lot in your writing skills and trust me..they are just getting better with each of your updates..hats off girl ⭐️⭐️

the way your have depicted aisha's confused yet broken state at the sudden revelation of niharika being the killer was a brilliant piece of work..

she had trusted and believed in niharika like her own family and losing the only family she was close to..is a heart breaking stuff and it was well visible in aisha's anger, her frustration and her pain...

the fbs..an insight to the relationship she had shared with niharika..the reason why she was feeling shattered with the sudden truth..it shows she was still dealing with believing it..

the closeness she shared with niharika during the different blunders they had cooked together..all were just giving me the hurt and pain ayesha was going through..
she was consolling herself...blaming herself for the mistake of choosing a wrong friend..but then again truth is stranger than fiction...and it happened as the reality of her life when the gravest truth came in front of her..

niharika used her to take her own revenge...i was actually feeling the helplessness in aisha, much more than her anger.. in this part..
the reason she left everyone and walked away alone..
niharika was a friend whom she was dependent on..much more than any one else in the city...yet that same friend betrayed her, used her trust, misused her care and destroyed her...no pain could have been more than this..

its said...you come to know of your real friends only during the dark hours...ETF stood by her..but the pain and distress she had been stabbed with was much more than the consoling words from anyone at that point of time..

but finally Rathod manages to get the aisha back to her wild cat avatar...
though i respect her decision of resigning..but again rathod wasnt wrong...leaving the problem doesnt solve it...sometimes facing it is difficult but the best way to solve it too..

Aisha was and will always be an asset for any team..either ETF or any other..and an unknown sudden weakness couldnt make her to leave her passion, her work or her career...

there is always a light after the deepest darkeness..thus Aisha's mistake was justified...Aisha kapoor is back...😊

finally an Awesome story and more beautifully written...(awesome update,
awesome update,awesome update)🤣🤣

frankly i have not done anything except exclaiming an 'fantastic update' or confusing you to the core at times...so please dont thank me...then ill try my level best to confuse you more..till the time i live..😈

ab aur kitna long likhu..bas bohot ho gaya..

waiting for your next story..nehi diya to dekh lena..😡

forgot to mention thank you for the pms

thank you for the pms
thank you for the pms
thank you for the pms
thank you for the pms

🤣
Edited by rimi_invisible - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it Sneha
awesome update
I just loved the way sam consoled Aisha 😊
& made her understand things
a wrong decision in haste is a regret later
End was justified & to the point 👏
but it was not aishas fault at all
I must say intelligent work Sneha 😊
Thanks for the PM
Awesome End 👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome end Sneha!
Really bang on :)

Sensible and perfect...

Aha A certain MR. RATHORE knows where Ayesha is 😉

But no... all in all... beautiful update... :)

~ Shree 😊

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