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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for being late again..but now i'll catch up
Chap 2, 3
Aisha' restlessness and team's concern..loved it..!
case details was nice..
Aisha saw that dream after their murder.. even i m confused now..😲😕
But this is getting interesting..
Raunak..a dead end..!
Raesha scene was nice..
case again confusing but interesting..
Chap 4, 5:
what an update, full of suspense..loved it..!
What did Aisha found and that she is so horrified..?
Niharika and her convo was something light and Aisha needed it..
hope she tells everything to the team..high time now..
so waiting to know what happens..
Aisha did took a big risk..
hope she gets help from the team..
thanks for pm and cont soon..
sorry for small comments..i m too much in story to comment..🤔
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Posted: 11 years ago
Tell me one thing Sneha...Do you have any planning of continuing this story??
Or I should launch a morcha for it??

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Posted: 11 years ago
Really sorry for the delay...I know I am updating this story after a quite long time......but I have my reasons to stop it...but let it be...No excuses...I sincerely apologize for the delay...SORRY... 😃😃😃

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Some clarifications:- Aisha didn't find anything in that house.
@fairyshah:- Aisha ne Sameer ke cabin ki cupboard ki duplicate keys nahi banwayi...balki Pallavi (jiska mjuder hua tha) ke ghar ki banwayi thi...😊

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I don't know How did I forgot to mention about Rimi di earlier for her helping me...Thank you sooo much di...🤗🤗🤗

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Warning:- Its quite long...🤢🤢🤢

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She started looking here & there, that's when she noticed that sun has not rise but soon it vll after composing herself she took her mobile, ETF tape & keys she came out of the house, locked the gate & wrapping ETF tape around the lock & looked here & there to check if someone is here or not.

After confirming that no one is present she walked out of the main gate of the house making as less sound as possible.

Taking a cab she soon reached her flat, sitting on sofa she was now in a fix that How on this earth that was there in that house.

Chapter 6

She saw watch & it shows 4 am, her eyes were drooping but her mind was reluctant to take rest, it was continuously working & trying to connect dots but no, nothing was happening.

It was like that her brain had stopped working & was replaying the incidents but she need answers.

What she vll tell others if they come to know about this???

Arjun & Rathod vll not believe her as Arjun always believe in evidences & Rathod always follows rules no matter against whom the rule is going to work.

That's when she heard of door bell ringing, she thought iss waqt kaun ho sakta hai but when her eyes went to clock she was shocked bcoz it was showing 7 am which means she was only thinking from past 3 hours & she even don't realise this.

She went to open the door & found the milk packets at her doorstep. Taking them she put them on table & went to her room bcoz having a coffee or anything is nowhere in her mind.

Whatever is going on, is all going above her head but she had to go office bcoz she need answers & answers vll be in office only.

Thinking so she took bath & soon reached to office where none was present except 5-6 staff members.

She was sitting at her desk.

Soon Rathod entered the office everyone greet him, to which he only reply with a nod. He walked towards his cabin & noticed Aisha sitting at her desk with a file in her hands but it was clearly showing that her mind was not in file but somewhere else.

He could see that she is disturbed but he couldn't figure out something, from past few days she is behaving differently everyone has noticed but no one knows why???

But before he can do something or say anything to her his mobile has started ringing.

The call was from Arjun. When he cut the call after about 20 minutes & saw towards Aisha's direction, she was still sitting in that same position.

But before he can walk towards her Sakshi came to Aisha & they started talking. Though he couldn't listen what they are talking or rather Sakshi is saying something not so serious to her. She must be talking of something like her usual chatter.

Again his mobile started ringing but this time call was from Commissioner & he walked inside his cabin to attend the call.

Somewhere else in the city

Shree, "Sir hum yahan kyu aaye hai"

Arjun, "Kyunki murder yahan issi ghar mein hua tha"

Shree muttering to himself, "Woh toh mujhe bhi pata hai"

Arjun with raise eyebrow, "Kuch kaha"

Shree with stammer, "Na...nahi toh...par Sir hum toh yahan se pehle hi search kar liya tha phir aaj wapas kyu???"

Arjun, "Kyunki mujhe pura yakin hai ki hume khoni ke bare mein yahin se pata chalega"

Shree only nodded.

They were at the crime spot meaning at the house to find something bcoz till now they don't have any clue of killer.

Soon they reached to main door & seeing the lock Arjun did notice something different but Shree had already started unwrapping the ETF tape from the lock.

Arjun, "Shree tum iss taraf dekho... kuch milta hai kya"

Shree, "Yes sir"

And both started searching the house.

After 1 hour, Shree, "Sir...yahan kuch bhi nahi mila"

Arjun, "Yahan par bhi"

Thinking something Arjun said, "Shree ...bahar chalke garden check karte hai...sayad wahan kuch mil jaye"

Shree, "Ok Sir"

And they started searching the garden. Shree in one side of garden & Arjun at other side of garden.

Arjun went towards the corner of garden while searching. When he turned back, he noticed something, he goes 2 step forward & started tapping his foot on grass.

And it was hollow like someone has dig this particular part sometime before & bcoz of heavy rain from past few days it has not became solid again.

Arjun voiced loud, "Shree"

Shree came there in a second & enquired, "Yes Sir"

"Yeh dekho...iss jagah ko abhi pichle kuch dino mein khoda gaya hai", Arjun said while pointing towards that hollow part.

After tapping his foot Shree said, "Yes sir"

Arjun, "Kuch khodne ke liye leke aao"

And Shree went to find something for digging & soon he found axe & came back to Arjun.

Arjun indicate him to start & he started digging.

After 2 minutes Arjun said, "Stop"

And Shree stopped bcoz he too realise that something is there. Both started removing sand from hands & they found a revolver.

Both Arjun & Shree looks towards each other shockingly.

Shree, "Sir, yeh..."

Cutting him short Arjun said, "Sayad issi se murder hua hai "

Shree, "Ho sakta hai sir bcoz Liza ne bhi kaha the ki goli gun ki nahi balki rebolver ki hai, toh sayad yeh hi woh revolver ho"

Arjun, "Haan, lekin khoni ne isse yahan kyu chupaya"

Before Shree can say anything, Arjun said, "Aur waise bhi yeh woh hi revolver hai jisse Pallavi aur Mayank ka khoon hua hai ya nahi ye toh ballistic report hi bata sakti hai"

Shree said , "Yes sir"

Looking here & there Arjun said, "Ek baar phir se Mrs. Chauhan se puch tach karte hai"

Shree said, "Ok sir".

And both went towards Mrs. Chauhan's house, rang the bell & were waiting for her to open the door.

Mrs.Chauhan opened the door & saw ETF members standing there. Without any delay she just asked "Sir...khoni ka kuch pata chala kya"

Shree said, "Nahi..abhi tak toh nahi...par bohat jaldi bata chal jayega"

Mrs. Chauhan invite them inside the house, all were sitting in hall.

Arjun said, "Aap hume ache se yaad karke bataiye ki Pallavi ya Mayank se koi milne aaya karta tha jo aapko ajib lagta ho"

Mrs. Chauhan said while thinking, "Nahi...mujhe toh aisa koi yaad nahi aata"

Shree, "Please ache se yaad karke bataiye"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Sir...Pallavi ka nature kafi reserved tha...woh jyada kisi se milti julti nahi thi...uske jyada friends bhi nahi the...apne pati ki maut ke baad uss par apne bete aur saare business ki jimedaari aa gayi thi...isliye socialising ke liye uske pass jyada time hi nahi hota tha...aur rahi baat Mayank ki toh bohat acha bacha tha aur kafi shaitan...(remembering Mayank's naughtiness & his heart wenching smile & than suddenly remembering his dead body has brought tears in Mrs. Chauhan eyes...after composing herself she said)...jab bhi kabhi Pallavi bahar jati thi toh Mayank ko mere pass hi chodke jaati thi...bohat hi pyaara bacha tha"

Arjun, "Mayank se milne koi aata tha???"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Nahi...koi khas nahi aata tha bas uske school friends hi aate the"

Arjun muttering to himself, "Strange...koi bhi nahi aata tha"

Mrs. Chauhan said while remembering something, "Arey haan Sir...ek aadmi aaya karta tha...aur Pallavi ko uska uske ghar aana bilkul pasand nahi tha"

Shree, "Kaun tha woh"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Mujhe name toh nahi pata"

Arjun, "Kuch toh yaad hoga like kaisa dikhta tha, height kya thi wagerah"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Dikhne mein toh acha dikhta tha matlab gora tha, lamba tha aur bohat paise wala bhi lagta tha"

Mrs. Chauhan was still thinking about that man but Arjun indicated something to Shree & Shree showed her something from his tab.

Looking that Mrs. Chauhan said, "Haa sir, yeh hi hai woh, yehi aata tha Pallavi se milne"

Shree, "Yeh Rounak ki baat kar rahi hai"

Arjun thought "Rounak yahan aata tha, isme koi herani wali baat nahi hai..."

"Hum log chalte hai...agar aapko kuch yaad aaye toh phone kar dijiyega"... Arjun said to Mrs.Chauhan while giving her his card.

With that Arjun & Shree moved outside the house. Just when they reached to gate Mrs. Chauhan remembered something & asked them "Sir...aaplog aaj phir kya dund rahe the ghar mein"

Shree said, "Hum clues dundne aaye the"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Jab pehli do baar mein kuch nahi mila toh teesri baar mein kya milega"

Shree said with smile, "Humara kaam hai, jab tak khoni pakda nahi jata yeh sab chalta rehta hai"

After saying this Shree turned towards outside & both Arjun-Shree started walking towards SUV while Mrs. Chauhan was still standing on her house gate.

After taking few steps something striked Arjun & he stopped, seeing him stopped Shree also stopped & said, "Kya hua sir"

Arjun said while thinking, "Hum log toh search ke liye aaj dusri baar iss ghar mein aaye hai"

Shree asked with confusion, "Toh"

Arjun, "Toh Mrs. Chauhan ne yeh kyu kaha ki hum yahan teesri baar aaye hai???"

Shree, "Pata nahi Sir"

Arjun turned towards Mrs. Chauhan's house & saw her still standing at gate, he went near her & asked, "Aap ne aisa kyu kaha ki hum yahan teesri baar aaye hai"

Mrs. Chauhan looked at him utterly confused & said, "Kyunki aaplog teesri baar yahan aaye hai isliye"

Arjun, "Lekin hum yahan dusri baar hai"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Arey aap log kal raat ko bhi toh aaye the na"

Arjun said shocked, "Kal raat ko"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Haan..kal raat ko"

Shree to Arjun, "Par sir hum toh kal yahan aaye hi nahi the (after a pause Shree said with shock) Sir...kahin woh khooni toh nahi aaya tha yahan"

Arjun, "Ho sakta hai..."

Before he could say something, Mrs. Chauhan who was listening their convo said with surity, "Nahi...aap ki hi team thi"

Arjun said with confusion, "Aap itne yekin se kaise keh sakti hai"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Kyunki meine usse dekha tha"

Shree, "Kaun tha woh"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Tha nahi thi"

Arjun with more of confusion, "Matlab???"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Kal raat ko aapki team ki member yahan aayi thi...Pallavi ke ghar mein"

Shree, "Yeh aap kya bol rahi hai"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Woh hi jo meine dekha"

Arjun said, Kya dekha aapne???"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Kal raat ko jab mein washroom jane ke liye uthi thi toh aapki officer ko Pallavi ke ghar ke andar jate hue dekha tha"

Shree, "Aapne kisi aur ko jate hue dekha hoga"

Mrs. Chauhan said with surity, "Nahi"


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Flashback

In night, When Birju & Chabi wala went from the place & Aisha was standing in front of the house thinking, that time Mrs. Chauhan came to the window of her room to close it but she saw from there that someone is standing in front of Pallavi's house but soon she recognised her as one of the ETF team member bcoz she had seen Aisha with ETF when ETF first visited that place.

Mrs. Chauhan murmuring, "Yeh toh woh hi hai jo ETF team ke saath aayi thi aur unn sab se pehle chali gayi thi"

When Mrs. Chauhan was thinking Aisha unlocked the lock & opened the door & went inside.

Mrs. Chauhan, "Par yeh itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahe hai"...after thinking she murmured..."yeh inn logo ki naukri bhi kitni ajeeb hai...jab tak khooni pakda nahi jata...tab tak inn logo ko chain nahi aata..."

Thinking this much Mrs. Chauhan went to bed.

Note:- She has not noticed Aisha's night dress bcoz she had seen her for less time & moreover first she was thinking her as stranger so her focus was only at Aisha's face & when she recognised Aisha as ETF member Aisha went inside.

After that Aisha locked the door of the house from inside.

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Shree said with utmost confusion, "Sir woh ETF member thi, matlab Sakshi, Aisha aur Liza mein se ek...par kaun...aur aadi raat ko kyun???"

Arjun said while looking at Mrs. Chauhan, "Aapne ache se dekha tha"

Mrs. Chauhan, "Bilkul ache se dekha tha kyunki pehle mujhe laga ki koi chor toh nahi hai isliye meine dhyan se dekha tha, woh ladki woh hi thi jo uss din aap logo ke saath aayi thi aur aap logo se pehle chali gayi thi"

Arjun MV, "Pehle chali gayi thi matlab AISHA...par woh aadi raat ko yahan kya karne aayi thi aur agar aayi bhi thi toh abhi thodi der pehle jab meine Rathod ko phone kiya tha aur kaha tha ki mein aur Shree yahan aa rahe hai toh usne mujhe kuch bataya kyun nahi???...Kahi kuch toh chut raha hai..."

Before Shree can speak or ask something, Arjun said to Mrs. Chauhan, "Thank you for your help"

Shree was confused that Why Arjun has not asked further but he can't do anything other than nodding him & go with him.

In SUV

Shree said with confusion, "Sir, aapne achanak baat kyu khatam kar di"

Arjun, "Agar kal raat ko Aisha wahan gayi thi toh Rathod ne yeh baat mujhe ya tumhe kyu nahi batayi???...Shree kuch toh aisa hai jo hum miss kar rahe hai"

Shree is also thinking that why Aisha went there that to be at midnight.

Soon they reached office Shree went towards forensic lab to give revolver to Liza for testing & Arjun went to Rathod's cabin.

Arjun knocked the door & opened it to find Rathod speaking to someone on phone & from his tone & answers it was clear that he was talking to higher officals.

Rathod nodded Arjun to come in.

Arjun came & sit on a chair & was waiting for Rathod to finish the call. After sometime Rathod cut the call & looked at Arjun & ask, "Kya hua kuch mila uss ghar se???"

Arjun said, "Haan"

Rathod, "Kya"

Arjun, "Uss ghar ke garden ke ek corner mein revolver ko gada hua tha...Shree gaya hai Liza ke paas revolver leke"

Rathod with interest, "Revolver!!!...matlab ab sayad humer pass muder weapon hai...(With more of confidence)...ab hum bohat jald hi khoni ko pakad lenge"

Arjun, "hmmm"

Before Rathod can ask or tell something, Arjun ask, "Tumne bataya nahi ki kal raat ko tumne Aisha ko bhi wahan bheja tha...search ke liye"

Rathod with confusion, "Kya"

Arjun with raised eyebrow, "Haan..."

Rathod, "Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Rawte... meine kisi ko nahi bheja crime scene pe"

Arjun, "Kyu...tumhe nahi pata ki kal raat ko Aisha wahan uss ghar mein gayi thi???"

Rathod said unexpectedly, "Nahi toh"

Rathod said, "Tum kehne kya chahte ho ki Aisha crime scene par gayi thi"

Arjun, "Haan...woh bhi aadi raat ko...Mrs. Chauhan ne khud usse wahan dekha bhi aur pehchana bhi hai"

Rathod said astonishingly, "Lekin usne mujhe kyu nahi bataya...aur mujhse permission bhi nahi li"

Arjun, "Agar usne tumhe nahi bataya toh uske pass ghar ki keys kahan se aayi"

"Right...uss ghar ki keys toh iss cupboard mein hai "...Rathod said while pointing towards the cupboard..."aur iss cupboard ki keys toh mere pass thi"

Arjun, "Aisha wahan gayi hi kyu aur woh bhi bina bataye...& most importantly uske pass ghar ki keys kahan se aayi"

Rathod was also thinking the same things.

While Arjun said, "Rathod kuch toh gadbad hai"...Rathod looked at him and Arjun continues, "Jab se yeh case aaya hai Aisha ka behaviour kuch ajib sa hai...jab hum crime scene par gaye the toh achanak uska headache hone laga aur woh wahan se chali gayi...yeh hi nahi meine note kiya hai woh aajkal kahi khoi khoi si rehti hai...aisa lagata hai ki uska dhyan kahi aur hi hai..."

Rathod said, "Haan...meine bhi yeh sab note kiya hai...yahan tak ki meine uss se pucha bhi tha lekin usne kuch theek se bataya nahi"

That's when something clicked to Arjun, "Rathod aaj jab humne woh lock khola tha toh uspe ETF ki tape thi...means usne lock keys se hi khola hai aur uske pass ETF tape bhi thi???"

Rathod, "Par keys uske pass aayi kahan se...crime scene ke saare evidences iss cupboard mein hote hai aur yeh cupboard mere ya tumhare alawa koi nahi khol sakta"

Rathod said, "CCTV footage"

Arjun with confusion, "CCTV footage??? "

Rathod, "Haan agar Aisha ne iss cupboard ke saath kuch gadbad ki hogi to iss(pointing to the camera) mein record jaroor hua hoga"

Arjun, "Par sawal yeh hai ki Aisha aisa karegi kyu???...aur aadi raat ko bina kisi ko bataye, galat tarike se ghar ke keys leke wahan jane ka kya matlab hai"

Rathod, "Ab jo bhi hai hume footage se hi pata chalega"

Rathod called Shree & asked him to come to his cabin with yesterday's footage of his cabin.

Though Shree was confused why Rathod wanted his cabin's CCTV footage but could not ask him so after 20 minutes Shree was standing in Rathod's cabin with CCTV footage.

Arjun was about to play that footage but Rathod stopped him & said, "Shree tum ja sakte ho"

Shree understood his meaning that he doesn't want him to stand there so Shree went out.

After Shree's exit, Arjun played the video of Rathod cabin's CCTV footage from yesterday's morning.

Both Rathod & Arjun was watching the video in slow forward mode but they didn't find any thing suspicious till Rathod was present in the office.

Rathod said while sitting comfortably on his chair & looking onto Aisha's desk through glass plane, "Rawte iss footage mein toh aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...Aisha jab bhi mere cabin aayi mein yahan maujud tha aur usne mujhse ek baar bhi crime spot ki keys nahi mangi thi"

Arjun was about to say something but his eyes caught something on screen & he was shocked.

When not getting any reply from Arjun, Rathod turned towards him & found him looking on laptop screen, he too saw the laptop but could not saw anything suspicious & said, "Rawte kya dekh rahe ho...kuch nahi footage mein"

Arjun, "Nahi Rathod...(when Rathod looked towards him enquiringly,Arjun understood that he had not seen the footage, so he said while rewinding the footage)...Aisha tumhari absence mein tumhare cabin aayi bhi thi aur keys lene ki koshish bhi ki thi"

Before Rathod can saying anything, Arjun said, "Kal raat ko" & he played the video again & indicate Rathod to look at it.

Rathod saw the video & saying that he was shocked would be an understatement...the footage shows Aisha getting inside his cabin & trying to open that cupboard without keys but when she was not able to do that she thought of something & called someone, it was clear that she was ordering someone for something, after call she went out of his cabin...but more shocking was that she was not in her formal wear but in night dress.

Rathod was still staring the screen, Arjun's voice broke his trance & said, "Rathod ab toh bilkul clear hai ki Aisha kuch toh chupa rahi hai aur sayad woh kuch bada hai..."

Rathod while registering everything in his mind said, "Ab iska jawab toh woh hi de sakti hai"

Saying this Rathod took the landline phone in his hand & was about to call at Aisha's desk but Arjun cut the call.

Rathod looked at him angrily but Arjun said, "Nahi Rathod...agar Aisha ko kuch batana hota toh woh chupati hi kyu???"

Although Rathod wanted to know about all this from Aisha but Arjun was also right.

Thinking of something Rathos called Shree & said, "Shree...mujhe kal raat ki pure office ki CCTV footage chahiye"

Shree was sure that something has happened, so he asked, "Sir...kuch hua hai kya...I mean aap..."

Cutting him short Rathod angrily said, "Jitna keh raha hu utna karo" & cut the call.

Shree looked at the phone in his hand trying to understand what has happened??? But he had not choice other than following his boss's order.

After 45 minutes, he was again sitting at his desk & thinking confusingly, "Akhir hua kya hai???...yeh dono sher itne badke hue kyu hai???...Kal raat ko office mein kuch hua hai kya???"

Shree had given the footages to them & in Rathod's cabin he was able to feel heated atmosphere which means both RR are very tensed & angry, although he wanted to know the reason but asking any question means putting his head in Sher's mouth so he canceled his idea of asking & came out of cabin.

Inside the cabin Rathod & Arjun saw all the footages of office & they got to know that Aisha had came to office yesterday night at around 1 am but they were confused on Why Aisha had come to office that to be in her night dress.

ETF office has CCTV cameras in all the corners of office & Rathod-Arjun now know that Aisha first directly went to forensic lab where she searched for some file may be the file of Pallavi-Mayank case, she found something in that file & took pic of that thing & placed file again on its place, than she went to her desk switched on the computer, did something on computer but what??? they don't know bcoz camera's angle was such that they were not able to see what she did on computer but they were sure that whatever she did made her petrified, she was confused & was in deep thinking, than she went to Rathod's cabin & when she came out she took ETF tape from her desk & than went out of the office...they know why she took ETF tape with her bcoz so that she can again wrap it around the lock, now they are sure that she had gone to the house after getting out of house but the biggest question was WHY???

Why she did all this they don't know???

Arjun broke the silence which was prevailed after seeing the CCTV footages by saying, "Yeh toh saaf hai ki usne chabi kisi se banwayi hai aur sayad kisi chabi wale ko hi phone kiya tha usne tumher cabin se"

Rathod, "Haan...sayad???"

Rathod again said while leaning onto the table, "Par kyun???...aisa kya hua tha ya kya hua hai???"

Arjun, "Yeh sab jaan ne ke liye hume Aisha se hi baat karni hogi par uss se pehle hum ek baar watchman se baat karte hai sayad usne kuch ajib dekha ho jo hume CCTV footage mein nahi dikha"

Rathod, "Haan...chalo...abhi hi puch lete hai"

Both went outside the office to ask watchman.

Rathod to watchman, "Kal raat ko Aisha yahan office aayi thi"

Watchman was first confused that why they are asking this question but than he remembered yesterday night's event where he saw Aisha coming In & going Out of office in hurry & tensed.

Watchman, "Haan sir...Aisha madam kal raat ko office aayi bhi thi aur kafi pareshan bhi thi"

Arjun, "Tumne pucha nahi???"

Watchman, "Sir...mein puchna chahta tha lekin woh bohat jaldi mein thi...jab aayi thi tab bhi jaldi mein thi aur jab gayi tab bhi jaldi mein thi...unhone meri taraf dekha bhi nahi jabki kal se pehle aisa kabhi nahi hua tha...par sir woh kafi pareshan lag rahi thi...(after remembering something he said)...aur haan sir woh apne roj wale kapdo mein nahi aayi thi balki raat ko sone wale kapdo mein aayi thi"

Arjun & Rathod only nodded to him & went inside again.

Inside cabin both were in deep thinking & many questions were revolving in their mind...

Rathod said breaking the silence, "Rawte...ho sakta hai Aisha Pallavi ko janti ho???"

Arjun, "Ho sakta hai...but yeh baat usne chupayi kyu??? Aur sabse badi baat woh without permission crime scene par gayi, woh yeh toh janti hai ki bina apne senior ke permission ke off duty crime scene par jana ek crime hai"

Rathod said while thinking, "Ho sakta hai usse wahan se kuch mila ho???"

Arjun, "Ho sakta hai...lekin usne abhi tak tumhe ya mujhe iss bare mein report bhi nahi ki hai"

Arjun murmures, "Kahi kuch toh chut raha hai"

Rathod, "Saare sawalo ke jawab sirf aur sirf Aisha ke pass hi hai".


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I think it was quite long...😛😛😛

Reviews plzzz...😃😃😃

Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Res on your story I'm first quite long take time to read sorry dear
Unres sorry for the late
What is this Ayesha condition is becoming worse day by day
N in last Sam n Arjuna know about her
Damnit
What will happen next please
Cont soon dear
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unres...

first dont thank me..thank your lucky stars who kept you alive from our iching fingers who wants to grab you and make you write another raesha story..🤢

but reading this...i can say finally you are back with a dhamakedar update...it was extremely intriguing and interesting..

the initial concern in Rathod's gesture for his team member's abnormal behavior was presented well...😳

Arjun is still on the look out for clues at the murder spot...finally he gets what he desires...👏

Mrs Chauhan has seen and recognised Aisha and she informs that to Arjun too...

they have got the gun...the murder weapon...hopefully that could prove aisha innocent..😉

gorillao ne cctv footage pe aisha ko dekh liya?? omg..ab kya hoga??

gabbu brilliant writing and amamzing narrative of the progress in the story...you have kept the suspense element well build up...loved the update...

do continue...thanks for pm..😳

Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
reswa
unres..
ohkay... aisha is still confused n doesnt know how she landed up at that house..
her worry was quite evident because she knows that she wont have any answers to their questions ...
She herself is confused..
hein!?? she was thinking frm 3 hrs...omg..she definitely needs rest...
Rathod noticed her odd behaviour...

Shree tumhe agr sab pata bhi hai to chup raho zara..kyu arjun ke SYS ko bhadkate ho?
They found d murder weapon..great...i mean at least i hope that its the murder weapon..

Mrs chauhan... itna bolne ki kya zarurat thi??? ab iske chatter k wajah se aisha fasegi..

cctv footage me bhi pakdi gyi...ab to gayi...
ab aisha ki interrogation...bolegi.
kya wo..usko to khud hi nehi pata...
updt soon..nehi to morcha... 😛
Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
now Sam n Arjun came to know that aisha 's hiding something😲
ab aage kya hoga??
waiting to know it
do continu soon
thankx for pm
Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
samjun saw the cctv phootage
abh aisha ka kya hoga
woh bata bhi nahi sakthe
plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres...
It was a very interesting update.
RR's anger & confusion; Shree's helplessness...all was written brilliantly.👏
While reading the update I couldn't stop feeling excited. 😛
You are improving by every update & that is evident in your update.
One question, how can you write such a long update??? Please share some tips with me
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago

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