Case SS :- A Dream come true...Last Chapter/Pg 45 07-11-14 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update dear
premonition hmmm nyc going on
loves that sam tell to aisha
in case of anything call me
etf was superb
good
thax for pm
u know premonition one tym happen with me also
and it came true
have it happen with u??????
btw nyc going on
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
woo hooo 😉
Finally aaj time mila mujhe ye padhne ka 😳
And I must say ... one of the most gripping case stories I have ever read on forum 👏👏
Waise to maine thoda bahut guess kar liya tha 😉 (uff... bachpan se Byomkesh Bakshi, Tehikikat, CID... ye sab dekhte huye badi huyi hoon 😃😃😃)
But narrative bahut achchha hai 👍🏼
ek reader suggestion dungi ... kyunki ye ek solo case based story hai ... isko zyada drag mat karna ... nahi to ek point par jaakar tum atak jaogi aur readers bhi bore ho jayenge 😉(mere saath aisa ho chuka hai 😳😳)
Once again... a wonderful concept.. beautifully developed 👏👏👏
Waiting for the next part 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
So she found her own footprint
Strange
An kya?will she say it to others?
If I am not wrong they were shot dead
So ballistic report shud give their result right?
I am sure you have a lot in wrap
Waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Comment for chapter 3 & 4:
How many times Do I have to say case is getting more interesting after every update.
So the lead suspect has an alibi...That's interesting.
Sam's concern & his simple convo with Ayesha was lovely.
Ayesha's scene with Niharika was a good change from otherwise dull life of Ayesha. I liked it very much.
Ok I should have been surprised by Ayesha's finding But thanks to you & vamp I didn't feel that "sitting at the edge of my seat" thing. Next time if you write any case or suspense story please make sure you don't PM me that before posting it. 🤢
Edited by laila1994 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

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@Gold.A:- Thank u di...😃...What was vll reveal later...😛...Yes Niharikha is funny...😆
@Ishitarocks015:- Thank u...😃...Yes...mujhe bhi yeh part likhne mein bohat maza aaya tha...😃...Niharikha ka khana 90% times jalta hai...😆
@NatkhattFatti:- Thank u...😃...Bataya nahi bcoz yeh meri marzi hai...😆
@Armagadon:- Thank u...😃...Tumko kya lagata hai???😕...LOL...Sameer Aisha ko night dress mein dekhega ko toh uska toh dimag kaam karna band kar dega...😆
@unishaz:- Thanks...😃
@Swara85:- Its ok...😃...Glad u liked first chapter...😃...Hope u vll catch up soon...😃
@sisodia_shefali:- Thank u...😃...Aisha is in trouble or not, u vll see that later...😃..Ur questions vll be answered soon...😃
@Arakshiya_58:- Thank u...😃...Glad that I m able to make it interesting for u..😃...What Aisha found vll be revealed soon...😃
@chulbuliannu:- Thank u...😃...Haan...Niharikha ke hath khana khane se behtar ki woh khana skip hi kar de...😆...Aisha is brave girl...😉
@Halima_zaka:- Thanks...😃
@EashYousufzai:- Thank u...😃...What Aisha found vll be revealed soon...😃
@Godly_Affection:- Thank u...😃...What Aisha found vll be revealed soon...😃
@ariyabestfan :- Its ok...😃...Aisha didn't feel that she had seen Rounak, she only want to know that whether she had been related to Pallavi in any way...that's why she was trying to recognise Rounak but she don't know him...Glad that u liked it...😃
@Rimi di:- Thank u...😃...Thanks a lot for helping me...🤗🤗🤗...Mein pagal hu kya???😕...Ofcourse mujh se jyada confused yahan koi nahi hoga...Aisha bhi nahi...😆
@skrafty:- Thanks...😃...What Aisha found vll be revealed soon...😉
@greensakti:- Thank u...😃...Dhamki...😭...Mystery vll be revealed soon...😃
@aditiarakshi, @_Nikita_ : - Thank u...😃...What Aisha found vll be revealed soon...😉
@farana786 :- Glad that u liked all the parts...😃...Thank u...😃
@Shamsad1607:- Thank u...😃...Haan meine hi likha hai...😆...Mystery vll be revealed soon...😉
@||_megha_||:- Thank u di...😃
@NATURESHIVANI:- Thank u...😃...Glad u liked it...😃...Aisha Arjun se bhi jyada case obsessed...😆
@SweetShreu:- Thank u...😃...Glad that u liked it...😃...Mere sapne bhi kabhi kabhi sach hue hai...
@bgargate :- Thank u di...😃...Glad that u liked it...😃...Mein toh khud isko jaldi se khatam karna chahti hu......iss story ki wajah se mera stalking time kitna kam ho gaya hai...😡...vll keep ur suggestion in mind...😃...I saw ur res...congo...😆
@kunchu:- Thank u di...😃...about ballistic report u vll know soon about that also...😃...one more thing don't expect something very interesting from me bcoz I m not like u..😉😛😆
@laila1994 :- Thank u...😃...Well next time mein kuch likhungi toh tumko PM karungi na...😛😉😆
@pihu_angad:- Thanks ...😃
scroll down for update...😃
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
This part is quite boring...🤢...one more thing don't expect something very interesting from me bcoz I m not like u all..😉😛😆
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And result displayed as "Correct match".

Aisha's mind has stopped working, she doesn't know how to react or how to believe this, so she again started the match but unfortunately it again displayed the same.

Now Aisha head started spinning, she was murmuring, "No this can't be true, this can't be happened, it is wrong, computer is displaying wrong results, no this can't be true... no this can't be true... no this can't be true... no this can't be true... no this can't be true..."

Chapter 5

Aisha MV, "Mein Pallavi aur Mayank ko janti bhi nahi, na hi uss ghar mein kabhi gayi hu toh...toh ...toh woh wahan kaise ja sakte hai".

Till now she was scared & confused but with this sudden invention of that thing being at that house made her horrified.

She was sitting on her chair very confused & was sweating very badly.

Suddenly she thought of going at that house again but How???, she can't tell anyone about this & moreover no one vll believe her.

Now what she shud do???

She don't for how much time she was sitting there & recalling all the events that had taken recently in her life.

After lot of thinking she came to an conclusion of again going to the house, may be by going there she can find anything that may help her to reach to some conclusion.

Deciding this, she went to Rathod's cabin to take the keys of house, but when she reached the cupboard that contains all the evidences of the case the cupboard was locked.

In her tension, she forgot that Rathod always place everything in a lock self & keys of cupboard are always with him. So there is no chance she can get those keys from him.

After thinking how to get keys, she called her trusted informer whose name was Birju.

At the 7th ring Birju took the call & said sleepily, "Kaun hai abbe"

Before he can say furthermore, Aisha voiced out, "Hello Birju!!! Aisha bol rahi hu"

Birju opened his eyes fully & sat on his bed, "Madam ji...aap...iss waqt"

Then suddenly remembering he said, "Oh ho Madam ji...meine kaha tha na...jaise hi mujhe kuch pata chalega mein aapko bata dunga par abhi tak uss drug deal ke bare mein kuch pata nahi chala hai"

Aisha said, "Nahi Birju...meine isliye phone nahi kiya hai"

Birju asked surprisingly, "Toh"

Aisha said with little bit of hesitation, "Woh...kuch aur kaam tha"

"Kya kaam tha...aur woh bhi aadi raat ko", Birju said while looking at the clock which shows 1:48 am.

Aisha, "Woh...woh...mujhe ek lock ki chabi banwani hai"

Birju, "Oh...bas itna sa kaam...ban jayegi...aap mujhe kal lock ke bare mein bata dena mein ek gante mein chabi banwa dunga"

Aisha, "Kal nahi...mujhe abhi chabi hai"

Birju said shocked with wide eyes, "Abhi...aadi raat ko"

Aisha, "Haan...abhi"

Birju, "Par abhi koi chabi wala nahi milega"

Aisha said annoyingly, "Mujhe kuch nahi pata, mujhe abhi hi chabi banwani hai...kuch bhi karo par mujhe abhi hi chabi chahiye"

Birju, "Par..."

Cutting him short, Aisha said, "Mein tumhe address message kar rahi ho...jald se jald kisi chabi wale ko lekar wahan pahuncho"

Birju seeing no any other option said, "Ji...aata hu"

Both cut the call & Aisha hurriedly left from the office not before taking ETF tape, this time also she didn't even glanced at the watchman & watchman also noticed that she is much tensed.

Taking cab she soon reached the house but Birju has not reached yet.

So she started walking towards the house by opening the main gate without making any noise. She was standing at the boundary of garden.

Aisha's MV, "Bilkul waisa hi garden hai jaisa uss raat aur aaj ke sapne mein tha, sab kuch bilkul waisa hi, koi change nahi, sab kuch bilkul same, aisa lagta hai jaise kisi ne..."

But her thoughts stopped at the screeching sound of bike. She look towards road & noticed that Birju has arrived with a man who is having a big bag in his hand meaning he is the Chabi Wala.

Birju approached to Aisha & said, "Kya Madam ji...aadi raat ko aapko chabi wala chahiye"

But Aisha didn't paid any heed towards his words & said to Chabi Wala, "Woh raha gate...aap jaiye aur kaam suru ki jiye"

He nodded & went towards the door but when he reached there he turned towards Aisha & said, "Madam ji"

By listening his calling Aisha reached there & said, "Kya"

Chabi Wala said while pointing towards lock, "Yeh toh..."

The lock was covered with ETF tape, Aisha without thinking anything started removing that tape.

Birju said, "Madam jji...yeh aap kya kar rahe ho...agar kisi ko pata chal gaya toh ".

Aisha, "Kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega"

Birju said a bit confused, "Madam ji...yeh aap kyu kar rahe ho"

Aisha didn't replied him but instead told Chabi Wala, "Lijiye...mein tape hata di hai...ab aap apna kaam suru ki jiye"

He once looked towards Birju & Birju nodded no.

Aisha saw this & said annoyingly , "Birju... (she realised a deep breathe & said calmly)...Mein kuch galat nahi kar rahi hu...please trust me"

Although Birju found all this a bit strange but he also knows that she vll not do anything wrong bcoz he trusted her, that's why he nodded to Chabi wala to start his work.

While Chabi wala was doing his work Birju noticed tension lines on Aisha forehead, so lighten the situation he said, "Waise... Madam ji...aapko pata hai aadi raat ko Chabi wale ko dundna aur yahan leke aane kitna mushkil kaam hai"

To which Aisha only glared him hard & he shut his mouth bcoz he got it that she is not in mood of hearing his any "Bakwaas".

After almost half an hour, in which Aisha has asked 20 times to Chabi wala, "Ho gaya kya", Chabi wala finally said, "Ho gaya"

Aisha hurriedly said, "Thank u & paid him off" & indicate Birju to leave from this place ASAP & also tell this Chabi Wala to not say anything to anyone.

Birju did got her indication & moved out of the house.

Soon Aisha heard the start of bike & its zooming away.

Now she was standing in front of the house which had made her life more confusing & scary from last few days.

She unlocked the lock & opened the door.

She look in the darkness of the house, after taking long breathe she entered the house & locked it from inside, switched on the torch which she had taken from Birju few minutes back to avoid any suspension by switching on the lights.

Using torch she had looked everywhere in the house to find any clue or more especially to know when & why she had come to this house.

Putting her dreams & confusions aside, she started searching the house only as a cop but around one & half hour of searching in the house she found nothing.

And how she can find anything when everyone has searched the house earlier also.

After getting tired she sit on a chair with closed eyes.

While thinking & thinking only she don't know when she slept there itself there bcoz of tiredness & past few sleepless nights.

But when her neck started paining a bit due to wrong position she turned her neck & opened her eyes for few seconds & than again closed them.

But in those few seconds she realised that she is not sleeping in her own house but somewhere else & she opened her eyes with shock.

Soon reality hit her head that she is sleeping at the crime spot.

She stood up hurriedly & her hands automatically have reached to her mouth.

She started looking here & there, that's when she noticed that sun has not rise but soon it vll, after composing herself she took her mobile, ETF tape & keys she came out of the house, locked the gate & wrapped ETF tape around the lock, looked here & there to check if someone is here or not.

After confirming that no one is present she walked out of the main gate of the house making as less sound as possible.

Taking a cab she soon reached her flat & sitting on sofa she was now in a fix that How on this earth that was there in that house???

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reviews plzzz...😳😳😳
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Stalking the stalker ...😉
Res 😃
unres
Boring nahi tha ... par bahut chhota tha 😉
Hmmm... jhatka to banta hai ... shoe impressions matching
Aisha took a big risk by getting duplicate keys made and entering the house 😳😳
Pakdi jaati to?
But she has found something there ... 😊
Now waiting to know what will she do now 😊
Will she tell this to anyone in the team? 😊
Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
unres
huh ittu ka part...shuru hone se pehle khatam ho gya


daredevil girl...pehle to rathore k cabin se case ki cheeze nikalne ki sochi...aur jab wo nhi hua to etf ki tape le gyi...aur crime scene ka lock open karwaya...

aur wahaan chaan been ki

but ye kya...chan been krte krte so gyi...hona hi tha...itni raaton se proper nhi soyi hai


bus ab etf me kisi ko ye pta naa chal jaaye...

ek to aisha k halat waise hi bure hai uss pr agar etf ko pta chal gya to kab kyun kahaan kaise...swalo k jawab dene padenge

chota part chota comment
Edited by chulbuliannu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!!!
Bechari Ayesha ko kya kya karna pad raha hai!

Waise nice informer she has!

Helpful type ka!

Itni saare heart attacks for Ayesha!😲

Bachi ki jaan loge kya?😆

Ek shock gaya nahi ki dusri aa tapki sar pe!😲

Sam ka bhi kuch khayal karo!

Woh ek paagal ladki ke saath zindagi kaise bitayega! 😆

But on a serious note... wow! amazing! fantastic! shocker! am just waiting for the next one!👏

BUt will she tell anything to the team? Kahi team ko bataake khud hi suspect ban gayi toh?

Awesome job👏
Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unreswa...

So my guess about the site impression was correct..
she took a big risk by going to the crime scene n tampering with the evidence...
agar team me se kisi ko bhanak v lag gyi..she will be in deep trouble...

Duplicate keys n stuff... It was too risky...
Although her informer was quite helpful...

The update was small di...
Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 11 years ago

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