Arjun FF : Enigma (ch 24, pg57) - Page 33

Hi I am after looong ;) :P

Chap wise comments here :P J

Chapter 8: tee hee... main kya kahun. Sam beta, tu to gaya samajh :P

Pehle sirf sakshi n co the aura b Arjun uska 50% partner ban gaya hai ;)

Aisha bhi inni innocent ki phas gayi ...wah bhai wah...

Arju-rsh scene was really cute... sam ke saamne hi :O

Hehe... lage raho beta...

V & K... sikki... m gonna wait ...

Chap 9: teasing banter betn V-K was funny, intriguing thingy.

Sam ka Shree ke saath transfer...

Arakshi... :O :O :O :O

Chap 10:bang on...

M confused. Was it sakshi's dream? O sach mein happened????

An emo part... thanks to d final day at work for samm n Shree :'(

Sikki ke bacche... teri to main...

Chap 11: to finally one think I guessed turns out to b true right???

Sakshi is samrat's sis n Armeer-s senior...

Taadaa...

Sakshi is so mature at times and at the same time childish...

Sakshi bechari... feeling sorry...

Chap 12: loved the bond between samrat and his sisters...

N Arjun surprised..m not shocked.

N gud choice for samrat ;) u know at I mean ;) :P

V saw samrat dying??? He was responsible... uhuh... I feel more into it than it seems on surface.

And the level of understanding between K & V... ..

Chap 13:I was reminded of the famous poem we wear a mask

we wear a mask that grins and lies... with bleeding and broken heart we smile...' so apt for sakshi. They say never go by the brightest smile, cos it may be hiding a badly torn and bleeding heart.

Healing others heals us sometimes. True naa...

Sam n Aisha... cute. Aisha is much strauight than fattu sam ;)

And end mein wo kya ha???? :O

Chap 14:pehle jo the do dil mil rahe the magar chupke chupke, ab hogaya apne jigri dost aur sweet sis ke saamne THE proposal... n he was wise enough to cut before he corrupted the mind of his lil sis ;) :P ;)

Arjun remembering rosh n sakku remembering samrat n her mummum...

World class ka idiot certificate khud ko de daali?? Too good. ;)

Chap 16: aaj Make use of all tym u get, chahe jahan bhi ho, jiske saamne bhi ho... ;) great going sam... ;)

Air[post scene was good all in all... from sakisha, sakeer, choree, shriza, slient spectator Arjun... everything was good.

And last men censored uncensored hogaya... :P ;)

Chap 17:ting ting... hello... hehe... the two were snooping ;) I find dat sounds better than they watched recorderd version o live :P good going sakshi...aisha as well.

K & V... maan na padega. Raja se seedha dhobhi?? :D :P good going. Waqt aane par gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai... dey r making gadhe's baap ko apna baap :P

Aisha back as nadia and to sach ugalwaofy gadhe ke baap??? Nai samjhi naa??? main bhi nahin.. :P

Chap 18:Aisha se nadia wo bhi kaise.

Loved V's running commentary in bg :D :D

Shekhawat dead... someone slipped in something in his wine.

Aisha phasli re phasli...

Chotu's dialogue on liza was good...

Chap 18 B:phew. Shez out of the mess...

K & V ke gadget stolen?!

And sakshi is avoiding Arjun and he is very badly affected.

His is mood swings, anger and passion bouts just because sakshi is ignoring him ya...kuch aur bhi reason hai?

Chap 19:damn funny K & V... damn damn funny. Dey actually together invented monkey n donkey dance and christened them so... wah bhai...

Arjun's realization n his denial.

I feel something is going wrong with him.

And going to go wrong with ETF. I hope I am wrong.

And is that one in precap sikki????

Chap 20: maar mat mujhe but I am having a gut feeling that something terrible going to happen with ETF. Acp ki jaan kabhi waapas nahin aayegi... Arjun raute ko maarunga nahin... uhuh... not a good sigh...

Updates were awesome. ... as usual.

I am so sorry I am sooo late here. But hopefully I catch up rest as soon as u update.

Keep going... u r doing a great job...

Originally posted by: princess_pari

Hi I am after looong ;) :P

(Welcome back! My comments are in bold!)

Chap wise comments here :P J

Chapter 8: tee hee... main kya kahun. Sam beta, tu to gaya samajh :P

Pehle sirf sakshi n co the aura b Arjun uska 50% partner ban gaya hai ;)

Aisha bhi inni innocent ki phas gayi ...wah bhai wah...

Arju-rsh scene was really cute... sam ke saamne hi :O

Hehe... lage raho beta...

V & K... sikki... m gonna wait ...

Thank you Thank you so much!!!

Yes.. finally Arjun is coming into the picture!

Haan... Arni were a little bit from the besharam category!

I think after Arakshi marriage one can expect a good dose of romance ;)

Chap 9: teasing banter betn V-K was funny, intriguing thingy.

Sam ka Shree ke saath transfer...

Arakshi... :O :O :O :O

Even K & V have a life behind their strenuous jobs! Arakshi... hehe... I know ;)

Chap 10:bang on...

M confused. Was it sakshi's dream? O sach mein happened????

An emo part... thanks to d final day at work for samm n Shree :'(

Sikki ke bacche... teri to main...

The part when Arjun kissed her was a dream...

till the point he cornered her was reality...

bechari Sakshi kuch zyaada sochne lagi hai!!!

But obviously.. the questioning part was true...

Hmm Shree (not me 😆) and Sam! Don't worry even I am with you in finishing off Sikki!

Chap 11: to finally one think I guessed turns out to b true right???

Sakshi is samrat's sis n Armeer-s senior...

Taadaa...

Sakshi is so mature at times and at the same time childish...

Sakshi bechari... feeling sorry...

Yup...Samrat is Sakshi's bro...

Sakshi in this story truly is a different piece...

I am glad you too loved it!

Chap 12: loved the bond between samrat and his sisters...

N Arjun surprised..m not shocked.

N gud choice for samrat ;) u know at I mean ;) :P

V saw samrat dying??? He was responsible... uhuh... I feel more into it than it seems on surface.

And the level of understanding between K & V... ..

Heheh... glad u liked the choice for Samrat ;)

I totally get what you mean ;)

Nope... you didn't see him dying...

You just saw the part when Samrat left for his mission...

His death would be shown later...

Who do you mean by he? I didn't get tht... (there are many he's in this story!)

Chap 13:I was reminded of the famous poem we wear a mask

we wear a mask that grins and lies... with bleeding and broken heart we smile...' so apt for sakshi. They say never go by the brightest smile, cos it may be hiding a badly torn and bleeding heart.

Healing others heals us sometimes. True naa...

Sam n Aisha... cute. Aisha is much strauight than fattu sam ;)

And end mein wo kya ha???? :O

You are so right...

This poem just fits the situation of Sakshi!

Ayesha had to be straight na...

If both were fattu toh phir in dono ka milan would have been impossible..

Chap 14:pehle jo the do dil mil rahe the magar chupke chupke, ab hogaya apne jigri dost aur sweet sis ke saamne THE proposal... n he was wise enough to cut before he corrupted the mind of his lil sis ;) :P ;)

Arjun remembering rosh n sakku remembering samrat n her mummum...

World class ka idiot certificate khud ko de daali?? Too good. ;)

Hahah!!!!

So true... waise if he tried to hide THE proposal - toh sis se laath milti!

He had to cut the call... maybe Sakshi would have taken a minute to figure out...

Arjun toh would have understood straight away ;)

And with Arakshi being in the same car... well I leave the rest ;)

Chap 16: aaj Make use of all tym u get, chahe jahan bhi ho, jiske saamne bhi ho... ;) great going sam... ;)

Air[post scene was good all in all... from sakisha, sakeer, choree, shriza, slient spectator Arjun... everything was good.

And last men censored uncensored hogaya... :P ;)

Oh God! Seriously the first line was pakka right!

Well I tried to make the departure not much senti!

Lagta hai the love side of Sam got the better of him ;)

Chap 17:ting ting... hello... hehe... the two were snooping ;) I find dat sounds better than they watched recorderd version o live :P good going sakshi...aisha as well.

K & V... maan na padega. Raja se seedha dhobhi?? :D :P good going. Waqt aane par gadhe ko bhi baap banana padta hai... dey r making gadhe's baap ko apna baap :P

Aisha back as nadia and to sach ugalwaofy gadhe ke baap??? Nai samjhi naa??? main bhi nahin.. :P

Well thanks for liking this chapter :)

Well har kutte ka din aata hai - something like that!

Haha! Gadhe.. baap! Haha!

Nahi... thodi samjhi - par naa ke barabar!

Chap 18:Aisha se nadia wo bhi kaise.

Loved V's running commentary in bg :D :D

Shekhawat dead... someone slipped in something in his wine.

Aisha phasli re phasli...

Chotu's dialogue on liza was good...

Glad u luvd the commentary!

Yup.. Shekhu ki tata goodbye!

Glad u luvd Chotu's line!

Chap 18 B:phew. Shez out of the mess...

K & V ke gadget stolen?!

And sakshi is avoiding Arjun and he is very badly affected.

His is mood swings, anger and passion bouts just because sakshi is ignoring him ya...kuch aur bhi reason hai?

Koi KV ke saath kaam kare and not be safe? Impossible!

Yup... their gadgets also tata goodbye!

I don't think Sakshi's ignorance is causing a havoc in him... I think it's... ;)

Aur yeh baat kya hai aap samjhe ya... ;)

Chap 19:damn funny K & V... damn damn funny. Dey actually together invented monkey n donkey dance and christened them so... wah bhai...

Arjun's realization n his denial.

I feel something is going wrong with him.

And going to go wrong with ETF. I hope I am wrong.

And is that one in precap sikki????

Well K & V remain to be funny even in the most tensed situations!!!

Well in love... everything goes wrong with everyone.. why should Cupid spare him ;)

ETF... yes even I think so..

Yes abt the precap you are right... Sikki...

Chap 20: maar mat mujhe but I am having a gut feeling that something terrible going to happen with ETF. Acp ki jaan kabhi waapas nahin aayegi... Arjun raute ko maarunga nahin... uhuh... not a good sigh...

Even Arjun is having a gut feeling about something...

So don't worry, nahi marne waali hoon...

But K & V hai na... Hope they work out wonders!

Updates were awesome. ... as usual.

I am so sorry I am sooo late here. But hopefully I catch up rest as soon as u update.

Keep going... u r doing a great job...

Well Pari I can't thank you enough for your beautiful comments! It's ok... anyone can be late! Well next update I truly have no idea! Thank you so much.. I'll try to keep up the level!

~ Chashmish :D

Originally posted by: Armagadon