ARAKSHI: INTEZAAR (part 9 B) pg 32 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
awesome update...!!!!
sorry for late reply...:(
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
beautiful update
beginning of new journey
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Harisree001

Me firstBeautyful and yet different story...
Sakshi is a bit diff in it... But like it...
First look mein hi ACP Sahib ko Sakshi pasand aa gaya...
😳
How beautifully you described Sakshi's legs...
Kash wo mere legs hothe...

Phir Arjun's eyes... Jaldi samach gaya ki wo ek painter hai...
Then Arakshi talk... And Sakshi looking back at Arjun before sitting in Car
😉
Phir aaya jhadka... Sakshi's dad choose Arjun... Kahaani mein ek 180 degree twist...
Dipsi... The cat... Is so cute...
Then Arakshi wedding and their talks...
Everything perfect...
You have written so beautifully...
Respect Arjun for his decision...
👏
Sakshi jaldi hi Arjun ko accept karegi...
Ab wo donon kahaan jane wala hai?
Waiting for next update...
Cont soon dear...



Thanks dear
Yes never hidden anything from
Our ACP sahib
Hhhmmm
Yes sakshi is different in this story
You find out soon
Where they headed
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Arjun & Sakshi became legally wedded husband and wife. Yeh sach hai ki dost hi acche couple ban sakthe hai. Ek doosre ko samajne ke baad hi rishte ko aage badaana chaahiye. Loved the update



Yes husband and wife main friendship first
And then physical relation ho tu rishtay
Mein power aajati hay
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Liked Mr. Anand & Arjun's convo...😃😃😃
Arjun really need to give time to Sakshi & their relationship...😃😃😃
Arakshi married...😃😃😃
Sakshi's confused state is justified...
But liked the way Arjun made friendship with her...😃😃😃
Tipsy isvery intelligent...😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...



Yes after sometime
They bound with each other
In love relation
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: Rehana25



Yes dear in this story
Arjun had no past
He and sameer are best friend
Arjun parent not alive
Few years earlier his dad death and his mom death when he is child
This is first love feeling in Arjun life


thnx a lot di for clearing my confusion 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
sorry for late comment
amazing updates
part-2
arjun saves sakshi's dad
Mr.anand choose arjun as his son-in-law😃😃
arjun want sometime
part-3
lovely song
arjun ready for marriage😃😃
the cat is so cute😊
cat also like arjun
part-4
love Mr.anand n arjun convo😊
finally arakshi married 😃😃
sakshi want time n arjun ready for that
loved it
waiting for next part
cont soon
😊

Edited by aditiarakshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Different sakshi...
Loving her...
Loved the update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79


PART 5

Sakshi look very calm and satisfied...after arjun consoling sentences and clear many things...she feel bit relax...arjun feel her relax state and stand to go...then turn and said

Arjun: kiya ab main iss baat ki umeed rakhoon... kay aap apnay itnay precious ansoo zayaa nahi karain gi (he looks her wet and pink face interestingly)

Sakshi look him once but arjun eyes shine and love...make her eyes lower but she nodded yes...and arjun say bye and leave the room.

After two days...they are ready to go that place where mr anand already arrange for their residence...make a reason of some kind of undercover operation...arjun officially disappear for one day...then he comes early in the morning at sakshi place to pick her...mr anand give him car keys.

Arjun: sir...I have my own car...I didn't use ETF SUV as well...I don't need this (he want to return but stop by anand sahib)

Anand: arjun...yeh iss SUV ki keys hain...plus uss ghar ki bhi keys hain...jahan tum log raho gay (he explain him and continue) yeh SUV tumhara gift hay.

Arjun: but sir...mein yeh (his sentence cut by anand sahib)

Anand: don't call me sir...stop calling me this (he show him little fake anger...said) arjun...you are not my son in law...you are my son...and as a son you have right on me (he change his tone and said) mera koi baita nahi hay...magar aaj tum ko apna baita bana kar jo khushi mujhay ho rahi hay...woh mein tum ko bata bhi nahi sakta (he pat his shoulder)

Arjun: sir...oh sorry...dad...shall I call you dad? (He ask in slow voice)

Anand: I love it baita...sakshi always call me papa...you also call me this...(he inform him)

Arjun: ok, then I also call you papa (he decide and said)

Anand: arjun...please, say once more (he requested)

Arjun: papa (he calls him and anand sahib hug him...while arjun hug him back)

After sometime, both parted...arjun see anand sahib eyes wet...

arjunwipe his tears and said: jin kay jawan baitay hoon...un ki aankhon main aansoo acchay nahi lagtay

Anand: hhhmmm...theek kahtay ho (he pat on his shoulder...continue) accha...SUV ki boot may kaafi cheezain hain...ek dinner set aur kuch utensils hain...kai zarrorat ki cheezain hain...ram nagar ek bohat chota sa gaon hay... kuch aissi cheezain bhi rakh di hain jo wahan par tum logoon kay kaam aain gi (he start briefing arjun many things and in end...he said) sakshi ko bhi sab kuch samjha diya hay...wahan uss gaon may meray kuch aadmi hain...magar tum ko pata hay kay contact kab aur kaissay karna hay (he look him enquiringly)

Arjun: aap baifikr rahain...mein sab sambhaal loon ga (he assure him)

Both discuss some other relevant detail...then arjun eyes catch sakshi coming...she is wearing red and black contras printed suit...hairs open and look wet...she just had bath...her mangalsutra place on her chest...arjun remember the day when he put that mangalsutra in her neck...his fingers touches her back neck...arjun still feel that silkiness and softness on his finger tips...he change his sight...she look so simple and beautiful...arjun steal his glances.

Sakshi: Namaste (she said in slow voice and lower lashes...while join palms)

Arjun: Namaste (reply in slow voice...look her once and change his sight)

Anand sahib smile to see both shy figure and his heart silently pray to safe their both children from any evil eye...then he snap and ask

Anand: sakshi, baita aap ready ho (he confirm with her)

Sakshi: ji papa (she again said in slow) papa...dipsi ko lay janay dain na.

Anand: nahi baita...dipsi ko nahi...woh...yahi rahay gi...meray pass...pata nahi kaisay haalat say guzarna paray aap ko...tu yeh bay zaban...pareshan ho jaiy gi (he side hug sakshi and explain her...while she nodded and dipsi (her cat) rubbing her body with sakshi first then she go to arjun side and do same)

Arjun bend down and hold cat in his arm...cat softly meow and buried her head in his arms...arjun slowly pat on her back...anand sahib console sakshi and both talk in slow voice...then said

Anand: arjun...aab tum logo ko nikalna chahaiy (he look sakshi and sakshi hug her dad with tears)

Sakshi: papa...aap apna khayaal rakhaiy ga...please.(she request)

Arjun: ji papa...aap please careful rahaiy ga (he leave cat on floor and join sakshi sentence and said)

Sakshi look him with surprise and slowly repeat papa...anand sahib smile her confuse state and said

Anand: kyun aab mein...arjun ka bhi tu papa hoon...baita hay na yeh mera (he side hug arjun...while drag sakshi and hug other side)

Arjun and sakshi both hug him at one time...right left to anand sahib...sakhi place her palm on back of her dad and arjun palm cover her hand on back of anand sahib back...sakshi feel his hand warmth and heaviness...his warmth give her body shrill...she lower her gaze...arjun enjoy her hand softness and her shyness...then snap...say bye to anand sahib...both sit in SUV and arjun move vehicle.

This is the start of new journey...new destination...with her husband...both sit quiet...arjun close all tinted window and drive silently...sakshi sit next to him and look outside view...she look sad and feel her heart heavy...for first time in life she goes somewhere without her dad...arjun look her once and ask

Arjun: kiya mein tum ko sakshi kah sakta hoon (he ask in soft voice)

Sakshi look him and nodded yes.

Arjun: tum pehli dafa apnay papa say alag hui ho (he again ask in soft voice)

Sakshi again nodded yes

Arjun smile on her replying way...that she just shake head rather than speak...he said

Arjun: sakshi, itna lamba safar hay...aisay kaisay katay ga...agar tum muh say bolnay kay bajaiy...sir hilao gi (he ask in naughty way...continue) mujh say baat karo na...muh say bolo.

Sakshi: kiya boloon (she ask in slow voice)

Arjun: kuch bhi...kaho...kuch apnay baray mein batao (he ask)

Sakshi: agar mein kuch kahoon gi tu aap gussa tu nahi hoon gay (she ask innocently)

Arjun: gussa...tum par... magar kyun...aur tum say kiss nay kaha kay mein gussa karta hoon (he become surprise and asks)

Sakshi: sameer bhayya nay bataya tha (said in slow voice)

Arjun: sam nay...woh kab mila tum say (he ask)

Sakshi: woh kal raat ko aaiy thay...papa say kuch kaam tha...phir kaafi dair humaray saath bhi baithay thay...unhoon nay kaafi batain batai thi aap kay baray mein (she said in detail)

Arjun: aur un sab baton mein tum ko yeh yaad raha...kay mujhay gussa bohat aata hay (he said with light smile)

Sakshi: bohat aata hay...aur zara zara si baat par aata hay (she add more)

Arjun: sam ka baccha...meri masoom si patni ko kitna dara diya hay...accha tu iss liay tum mujh say dar kar itni door baithi ho (he taunt her sitting nearly door)

Sakshi feel puzzle but said: nahi...woh tu mein bas aissay hi...woh...woh (she can't deny his charge so after stammering she is quiet)

Arjun: accha...phir yeh batao...mujh say dar lag raha hay. (he instantly ask)

Sakshi look him once...while arjun also look her...both eyes lock for a second then arjun focus on road and repeat his question.

Sakshi: nahi...humain aap say dar nahi lag raha (she admit)

Arjun: theek hay...phir meray pass aao...aur mujhay batao kay tum itni udas kyun lag rahi ho (he said with love)

Sakshi: pehli dafa papa kay bina...kahin jaa rahi hoon...iss liay loneless feel kar rahi hoon.(she spill the truth)

Arjun: sakshi...kiya tum meray pass ana chati ho (he clear his talk) I mean agar tum apnay aap ko alone feel kar rahi ho...tu aao meray kareeb aajao (he raise his one arm towards her)

Sakshi thinking for a while...then hold his arm and pull herself near him...arjun free his arm from her hold...and slid around her waist and pull her more near him...sakshi snuggle more near him and rested her head on his shoulder...arjun breath in her fragrance...sakshi feel so relax...for first time she come this much near for any man...but she know that he is not an ordinary man...he is her husband...owner of her body, soul and thought...his rightful person...his better half...his life partner...

first she become hesitate to talk with him but then allow herself to interact with him...she also want to divert her attention...as she admit that it's been long journey and they have to being through it together...arjun friendly and soft behaviour give her strength...she is resting her head on his shoulder...and listen his talk...arjun talk with her...general and random talk...both busy in talking...arjun try to dawn the curtain of shyness...he try to feel her comfortable with him...his formal talking is slowly change her behaviour...new beginning, with his life partner...simple, beautiful and innocent wife...arjun have no idea...this journey take him where but he hopeful that he soon get his wife attention, trust, care and love...this journey is good for him.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9N7XfmueEOA

Hum jo chalnay lagay

Chalnay lagay hain yeh raastay

Hhhaan manzil say bahtar lagnay lagay hain yeh rastay

Aao kho jaiy hum...ho jaiy hum yun lapata

Aao miloon chalain jaana kahan na ho pata

Hum jo chalnay lagay ...chalnay lagay hain raastay

Sakshi and arjun drive long and then arjun see her close eyes...she still rested her head on his shoulder...while arjun one arm slid on her waist...it's being three hour for continues driving...arjun see one service sign and pull over his vehicle there.

When he stops the car...sakshi open her eyes and sit straight...looking outside view she look him...arjun voice out and said

Arjun: kuch tired feel kar raha tha...tu socha kay chai pee loon (he clear his action and sakshi just nodded) tum kuch kaho gi (she nodded no)

Arjun honk the horn and ask vendor to bring one tea for him...then he get down from the SUV and go back...open boot and search something...then back with one box of sandwich

Arjun: papa nay bataya tha...kay tum bahar say kuch nahi khao gi...yeh sandwich aur coffee...unhoon nay tumharay liay hi rahkay hain kha lo (he give sandwich box and coffee thermos)

Sakshi held these things and start pouring coffee in mug...by the time arjun get his tea...sakshi raise sandwich box in front of him...said

Sakshi: aap bhi laiy...bhook lag rahi hogi aap ko (she insist)

Arjun take one sandwich and start eating...after that...arjun go to washroom to freshen up...he ask sakshi to go but she refuse to go...they continue drive and stop again after three hour...they had lunch and continue their journey...it's night fall...when arjun turn his SUV in one good hotel...its look like three star hotel...get one room in different name...sakshi take only one small bag with her and both comes in room.

Sakshi like the room...it's big, neat and clean with fresh look...bathroom is also very neat and clean...sakshi ask arjun if he want to go washroom but he allow her to go...he give her chance to freshen up first.

Arjun watch TV...she is laying next to him...arjun feel her uncomfortable state and ask.

Arjun: sakshi, kiya baat hay...tum ko neendh nahi aa rahi (he look her and ask)

Sakshi: woh, hum aisay kapro mein nahi so saktay (give reason of her restlessness...show her anarkali frock and pyjama)

Arjun: tu jo pehan kay soti ho...wohi pehno na (he give permission and insist to go and change...she just try to leave it but when he more insist to her...then she go and change her dress but that dress fuse arjun sense)

She is wearing baby pink colour thin silk and lace nighty...her body curves visible in full accent and skin colour match with nighty pink colour...arjun breath stuck in his throat...he forget to breath...sakshi feel his change gaze on her and freeze on her step...from childhood till now...she has a habit to sleep in loose, soft and silky fabric...she know it's difficult for him to control on his emotion...that's why she try to get sleep without changing but she can't sleep and at last she change and now stand in front of him thinking what to do?

Arjun hold him back with such a great difficulty and steal his sight...focus on TV...he try to hold his feeling and emotion...sakshi still stand on her place...arjun say without looking her

Arjun: so jao sakshi...mujh say darnay ki zarrorat nahi hay...mein still apnay waday par qaim hoon (he reminds her promise)

Sakshi come forward and laying on bed...she try to sleep...whole night her sleep was broken for many times...she feel arjun get down from bed and go to washroom...she slip in to sleep...after long time she see him with whole wet form...maybe he take bath...but why at middle of night...

sakshi is bit confuse then again sleep...poor sakshi don't know that it's a very big challenge for arjun to save his sanity...he feel his throat and lips dry...he feel himself thirsty...one cold and sweet water stream flowing in front of him but he is not authorise to drink water from that...he bound himself and he want to fulfil his bounding and keep his promise...he is not a lusty person...he want his wife with full of care and love...he don't need only her body...he need her soul...her heart with full of desire and wishes...and for getting these things...he have to wait...wait for sakshi to back to him...accept him and he know that time will come ...and come soon.

happy reading

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rehana25

Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing update...
arjun call him papa...
love their new father-son bond...
sakshi's dress is supereb...
loved her shyness...
no dipsi from now...no problem...arjun hai...
their journey describe very well...
sam ne sakshi ko dara diya...haha...
like arjun's consolation...
their hotel scene is really nice...
poor arjun...kya hoga uska???
bt must say kafi achcha control hai...
love this whole part...
eagerly waiting for next part...
plz con.soon...

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