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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: kreya204

Hey dii!!!
Nyc concept huh!!!
So basically its specially dedicated to d feminists!!!
I lyk it actually!!!
Bt one request/suggestion...i knw its all bout women power n all bt dnt get it along d OTT lines!!! Keep it balanced wenever possible!!!
Nyway continue soon!!! I'll wait!!! 😃

Kreya I sent u the PM
WHch OTT Lines u are talking about ?
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its amazing concept
loved it ...
plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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#43
Note of Thanks : Guys I am extremely overwhelmed with the response that u people have given me. I will post the parts soon as possible Love u all and wait for the story to unfold I want to thank all of u who have liked it 😊

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Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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PART 1 A

It was a bright sunny morning of Mumbai city & in ETF Office Arjun & Sameer were in cabins & rest team was busy in paperwork of the case.

Shree was at his desk to fetch some data & records for the case & after giving the final checks he gave the print command & brings that data to conference room & gave to Riya who was doing her work.

Shree said, "Riya ye details reports main laga doo main le aaya hoon".

Riya smiled n said, "Thanks Shree tum kitne sweet hoo".

Shree said, "Haan par kash ye main hamare do bosses ke baare main bol sakta" making a dramatic face.

All giggled & Aisha said, "Tum loog na khamkha Arjun sir aur Rathore sir ko badnaam kar rahe hoo woh hum sabka kitna khayal rakhte hai".

Shree looked at Aisha & said, "waah kya baat hai isse kehte hai ETF ki karmath aur imaandaar karamchari, yahan rooz humpe attyachaar hota hai aur tum keh rahi hoo ki woh hamara kitna khayal rakhte hai? Mujhe lagta hai ki hamare dono bosses ki shadi ho jaani chahiye tab inki biwiya hi inko control karengi".

Riya hearing this started laughing & said, "Shree kyun kisi bhali ladki pe attyachar kar rahe hoo, hamare samajhe ya samjahoon to poore sanyasi ho chuke hai roshni mam ki death ke baad toh he is out of question par haan rathore sir ke liye try kar sakte hoo par unke Dammit ko kaun bechari jhelegi".

Shree said, "sahi keh rahi hai Ri Rathore sir se panga lene ke liye kisi Durga ma ke ansh ko aana hoga koi normal ladki to sir ko nahin jhel paayegi".

Shree & riya started laughing after that.

Aisha said, "par tumhe ek baat batau Rathore sir ki girlfriends ko dekha hai maine".

All had surprise expression on their faces & Shree said, "rathore sir ki girlfriends yeh to news hai yaar waise kaun khudkushi ko bekaraar hai?".

Aisha said, "haan sir ki do girlfriends hai ek unka kaam aur dosri unki mooche " & starts laughing & all joined her too.

Shree said, "Aisha baat toh tu sahi keh rahi hai, Rathore sir jitna pyaar apne kaam aur apni mooch se karte hai yadi kisi ladki se karte to unka ghar bas gaya hota".

Chotu said, "Arey tum Arjun sir aur Rathore sir ko under estimate kar rahe hoon woh bhaav nahin dete warna ladkiyo ki line lag jaaye, woh chaya yaad hai jo Liza ke help ke liye aayi thi kaise koshish rahi thi Rathore sir ko impress karne ki aur fir coffee, aur Arjun sir woh latika yaad hai na kaise khule aam date ke liye poocha tha Arjun sir se ".

All nodded & Liza said, "Haan mujhe yaad hai par aaj tak ek baat samajh main nahin aayi ki Rathore sir ne shadi kyu nahin ki ? Arjun sir ka to hum sab samajh sakte hai bahut kuch beeta hai aur jo hua uske baad normal zindagi ke liye waqt lagega par rathore sir to poori tarah akele hai unke parents ki death ho chuki hai aur koi rishtedaar vagarah bhi nahin hai to Rathore sir ko shadi kar leni chahiye warna woh aise akele kab tak rahenge yaar?".

Aisha said with a tinge of pain in her eyes, "Akela koi kushi se nahin rehta hai Liza shayad koi aisi baat hai jo hum sab nahin jaante aur fir ye unki personal life hai hame haqq nahi hai bolne ka".

Riya said, "Aisha tum sahi keh rahi hoo, par Liza ki baat bhi theek hai yaar aur tujhe to sir waise bhi bahut maante hai, tum pata karo na shayad hum sab unki koi madat kar paaye".

Aisha said, "par kahin rathore sir ko bura na lag jaaye, woh ye na sooche ki humsab unki personal life main dakhal de rahe hai, kher main koshish karrongi sir se poochne ki jab unka mood thoda accha hoga, filhaal reports ready hai main sign karwa leti hoon Rathore Sir se " with that she picked up the file & moved to his cabin.
She knocked softly & Rathore replied with his head dipped in another file "Come in".

Aisha entered & said, "good morning sir reports complete ho gayi hai aap bas sign kar deejiye main Shree se mail karwaa deti hoon".

Rathore nodded but Aisha could feel that something is wrong he looked stressed & his fingers & palm were smoothly patting his forehead & Aisha could make out that he is having a severe head ache.

She had seen him since last night working on the report at the late hour when she left.

She took leave from Sameer after the signature & went to pantry for making coffee for him.

She went back to Sameer holding a cup of hot steaming coffee.

She went side after taking permission & placed the cup on the desk saying, "Sir aap coffe pee lijiye aapko head ache main aaram milega ".

Sameer looked at Aisha with surprise & said, "tumhe kaise pata ki mera sir dard kar raha hai maine to kuch nahin kahah tha?".

Aisha smiled & said, "Sir woh aap baar baar sir dabane ki koshish kar rahe the usse, aap thoda rest le leejiye kal bhi aapne der raat tak kaam kiya hai".

Sameer smiled & said, "Thanks Aisha par tumhe pareshaan hone ki zarrorat nahin thi".

Aisha said, "isme pareshani ki koi baat nahin sir, waise paper work complete ho gya hai yadi aapko koi help chahiye to main kar deti hoon".

Sameer in a bit hesitant way said, "Aisha yadi tumhe koi problem nahin hoo to please ye reports tally kar loogi tab tak main analysis pad leta hoon".

Aisha smiled & said "Sir mujhe koi problem nahin hai main abhi kar deti hoon ".

With that Aisha started working on reports & Sameer too started studying his analysis.

After few minutes Arjun passed by Sameer's cabin & noticed Sameer is working on analysis & Aisha is working on reports as soon as he was about to enter a voice stopped him, he turned & saw riya standing with the cup of tea for him n said, "Sir woh appki chai maine order kithi main aapke cabin main aa rahi thi dene par aap cabin main nahin the".

Arjun took the cup of tea & said, "Haan woh Rathore se kuch kaam tha par Aisha kya kar rahi hai?".

Riya said, "Sir woh main bhi Aisha ko dhoond rahi thi shayad rathore sir ne rook liya hoga kisi kaam se ".

Arjun entered & saw both of them working on the reports & discussing some data.

Arjun said, "Rathore woh Aarti Chabra waali case file tumhare paas hai kya kuch data chahiye tha".

Rathore nodded & gave him the file & Aisha smiled at him politely to wish him & he accepted it with a nod .

After that Aisha handed over the reports to Sameer & left the cabin .

After she left Arjun said, "Aisha kya help kar rahi thi reports main?".

Sameer nodded & said, "haan coffee leke aayi thi aur meri help karne lagi" then he saw a cup of tea in his hand n said "ye chai?", Arjun said "Haan woh riya ne order kiya tha" both passed each other a meaning ful smile & suddenly Sameer's phone buzzed it was from Commissioner asking about some case report.









SCROLL DOWN FOR PART 1 B 😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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PART 1 B

Sameer attended the call & gave him the required details & told him that he will submit the report in next 1 hour at his office. After that Sameer left the ETF office & all got busy in the daily activities of office.

Suddenly after 30 minutes a man came to ETF holding a parcel & said that it is for Aisha.

Peon informed Aisha about the parcel she came down did the signature & picked the parcel to her desk.

She looked at this Parcel carefully there was no sender name indicated on it.

Aisha first felt suspicious about this parcel but decided to open it to know what was exactly inside the parcel.

She opened it & was stunned to see a rope, a chloroform bottle filled with the liquid & a big knife of black & silver combination & a chit stating "I AM BACK Aisha".

Aisha eyes widen in shock & she muttered, "yeh nahin ho sakta".

Aisha slummed on her chair holding her head between her palms.

Her face color changed all off a sudden n it took few moments to register that what she saw.

Her trance was broken by Shree's voice who was calling her to have lunch.

She gathered herself quickly & said, "Main bas 5 minutes main aayi Shree".

She gathered all that n threw it in dustbin down along with parcel & went to washroom tears started rolling her cheeks, she tried to stay calm as she was in office.

She quickly washed her face & went too the pantry for lunch as Shree was calling her. Although she was not hungry but still for the sake of her friends she went there.

As soon as reached there Shree saw with her color drained face.

She was looking scared & pain was evident on her face.

Shree said to other ETF people, "yaar Aisha ko kya ho gaya achanak abhi tak to theek thi chehra utar gaya hai bilkul".

Riya said "Haan main bhi dekh rahi hoon bahut pareshaan lag rahi hai".

Riya stepped near Aisha & asked her, "Aisha tum theek hoo? Ye achanak kya hua ?".

Aisha said, "woh kuch nahin mujhe ek important kaam hai main ghar jaa rahi hoon aur main Arjun sir ko bhi bata doongi baaki Rathore sir ne ek file mujhe complete karne ko dee thi woh main kar chuki hoon please yadi maange to de dena" with that she ran to Arjuns cabin to ask him to leave.

She entered Arjun's cabin in a huff & said, "Sir can I leave for the day its very urgent & personal hai waise saara kaam complete hai".

Arjun looked at her face which only showed fear n pain.

Arjun knew Aisha well she had maintained cool in the toughest situations & seeing her like this was really astonishing for Arjun but he didn't probe further as it was her personal matter.

He just said, "theek hai jaoo aur koi zarrorat ho to call kar dena".

Aisha nodded & went outside the ETF building taking her stuff & called Punjab police station after taking a cab.

She asked, "hello Iman chauki Punjab police, main senior inspector Aisha kapoor bol rahi hoon ETF Mumbai se".

Man replied, "yes mam kahiye",

She said, "Mujhe aapki jail main band Karanbeer Singh ke baare main jaana chahti hoon".

The man replied her, "Ji woh toh bhaag gaye hai jail se 48 ghante pehle".

Aisha cell droped from her hand as her nightmare becoming true.

She asked the driver to drive fast & he took her to her apartment.

Here Sameer came back from the meeting he was exhausted too.

He went to his cabin and relaxed for few minutes & then started searching for Aisha as he has given her a report to prepare.

He went to her workstation & found her missing & got surprised at this.

He saw Shree passing by & asked him, "Shree tumne Aisha ko dekha hai kya ? maine usse report di thi banane ke liye kal submit karna hai usse".

Shree said, "Sir woh toh chali gayi kuch urget kaam aa gaya tha usse, Arjun sir ko bata ke gayi hai aur reports ke liye mujhe bataya tha ki uske desk par rakhi hui hai main aapko de doon ".

Sameer nodded & said, "aisa kya kaam tha sab theek to hai na".

Shree said, "Sir woh thoda pareshaan thi shayad koi personal reason hoga main report le aau".

Sameer sai, "nahin main le loonga mujhe Rawte ke saath reports bhi discuss karni hai".

Shree nodded & left the place.

Sameer now started to search for the reports which he found laying on her table, he picked up the report & was about to move when a pen from her desk fell down on the floor.

Sameer bend down to pick the pen & his eyes got widen in shock to see stuff in the open bin of her desk it contained knife, a bottle with liquid n a rope tied like a trap.

Sameer called everyone there in loud voice & all were bit surprised to see their composed chief losing his temper all of a sudden.

Shree asked him in a shaky voice, "Kya hua sir aapne aise kyu bulaya ?".

Sameer almost yelling at them & showing them the stuff he got from Aisha's bin said, "iss liye bulaya ab aapme se koi mujhe ye batayega kiye yeh sab ander kaise aaya ?".

All were rooted to the spot for a while & then riya spoke, "Sir dopeher ko Aisha ko koi parcel aaya tha aur uske baad woh jaldi hi chali gayi, hum mein se kisi ko usne kuch nahin bataya".

Sameer yelled, "Dammit! Nahin bataya matlab kya hota hai, yadi woh pareshaan thi to tumme se kisi ne poocha nahin ki kya hua hai?".

Arjun said, "Rathod maine poocha tha par usne kuch personal matter kaha aur chali gayi isliye hum mein se kisi ne jayada poochna sahi nahin samjha, hum mein se kisi ko bhi ye andaza nahin tha ki aisa ko koi dhamki de raha hai ".

Sameer said, "Rawte jahah tak main jaanta hoon Aisha aise khookle dhamki se nahin darti ye kuch bahut bada hai aur yeh sab dekh ke lagta hai she is in danger, let's move fast".

All clutched their guns n belongings & moved towards Aishas place to check if everything is all right.

Sameer took the driving seat & drove very towards her house.

As soon as they reached there they found a lock on her main door & there was no sign of anyone in the house.

Suddenly a middle age lady in neighbor looked at them & said, "aap kise dhoond rahe hai?".

Sameer replied, "ji jo yaha rehte hai Aisha Kapoor hum unke team hai".

Lady nodded & said, "par woh toh abhi 1 ghanta pehle jaldi main apni maa ke saath bahar chali gayi hai maine poocha tha par usne jawaab nahin diya".










P-RECAP: Some untouched parts of Aisha Life & a very interesting case arrives at ETF & much more 😉

So how was it guys please drop in ur comments as I write for u guys so please do let me know all ur bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love u all

EDIT CREDIT : Sneha 😊 Good work dear 😃

Regards Goldie & Rimi 😊😊


Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aarrrgghhh...😡😡😡...samajh nahi aata Cliffhanging mein kiska naam sabse upar hai aapka ya Rimi di ka...😡😡😡

Anyways I m so happy...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
U know what I was reading with big smile...😃😃😃..but when that line "I m back Aisha" came I was like
Awesome start...
Agar starting hi itni dhamakedar hai toh aage kya kya hoga...
Shree wanted his bosses to get married...😆😆😆...bache tumhari yeh wish jaroor puri hogi...🤣🤣🤣
Sameer ko handle karne ke liye Durga maa ka ansh chahiye...🤣🤣🤣
Chotu is right...yeh Sam-Arjun hi kisi ko bhaav nahi dete warna toh bohat si ladikiya unn par fida hai...examples toh khud ETF mein hai...🤣🤣🤣
Par baat toh sahi hai...Rathod ne shaadi kyu nahi ki...😕😕😕
Oh ho...bina bole Sameer ki mann ki baat samajh gayi Aisha...😉😉😉
Sameer taking help of Aisha...😉😉😉
Waww...Riya bhi Arjun ke mann ki baat samajh gayi...😉😉😉
What was that parcel means & indicate???...Rope, Chloroform & Knife???😲😲😲
Why Aisha was so scared seeing that parcel???
Arjun also guessed something is wrong...🤢🤢🤢
Who is Karanbeer Singh???😕😕😕
Why he is related to Aisha???😕😕😕
Sameer found that parcel in dustbin...
All know that she is in danger...
Where did Aisha went with her mother???😕😕😕
Continue soon...soon matlab soon...plzzz plzzz...warna wahan aake aapse update likhwaungi...😆😆😆...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: zubiya92

Wow
Awewome update
Love it
Cont soon


Thanks Dear Zuby
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res..
bt sneha di kaha se tapki?

sorry..i totally 4got abt d res here!

ok..what a start goldie di... superb 👏

rathod ..uska kam...mooche..perfect bond... 😆

aww...rathod...alone... so sad 😭
the team is so gud...they take care of each other..
ria chai...aisha coffee...bosses ki seva..hmmm...

then comes d scary part...wo kya tha?
chloroform...knife...it scared me!

n Who is back...


why is aisha so scared..n aise bina bole kyu gyi??

update soon
Edited by IshitaRocks015 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Aarrrgghhh...😡😡😡...samajh nahi aata Cliffhanging mein kiska naam sabse upar hai aapka ya Rimi di ka...😡😡😡

Anyways I m so happy...🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳 🥳
U know what I was reading with big smile...😃😃😃..but when that line "I m back Aisha" came I was like
Awesome start...
Agar starting hi itni dhamakedar hai toh aage kya kya hoga...
Shree wanted his bosses to get married...😆😆😆...bache tumhari yeh wish jaroor puri hogi...🤣🤣🤣
Sameer ko handle karne ke liye Durga maa ka ansh chahiye...🤣🤣🤣
Chotu is right...yeh Sam-Arjun hi kisi ko bhaav nahi dete warna toh bohat si ladikiya unn par fida hai...examples toh khud ETF mein hai...🤣🤣🤣
Par baat toh sahi hai...Rathod ne shaadi kyu nahi ki...😕😕😕
Oh ho...bina bole Sameer ki mann ki baat samajh gayi Aisha...😉😉😉
Sameer taking help of Aisha...😉😉😉
Waww...Riya bhi Arjun ke mann ki baat samajh gayi...😉😉😉
What was that parcel means & indicate???...Rope, Chloroform & Knife???😲😲😲
Why Aisha was so scared seeing that parcel???
Arjun also guessed something is wrong...🤢🤢🤢
Who is Karanbeer Singh???😕😕😕
Why he is related to Aisha???😕😕😕
Sameer found that parcel in dustbin...
All know that she is in danger...
Where did Aisha went with her mother???😕😕😕
Continue soon...soon matlab soon...plzzz plzzz...warna wahan aake aapse update likhwaungi...😆😆😆...Thanks for PM...

Thanks Sneha dear
Glad u liked it
Sabra karo agli update main bahut kuch pata chalega 😉😉
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awsm updt👏
1st updt me hi itne sare confusions chalo koi bat nai😊
updt soon n thnx fr pm😛

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