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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
very interesting update 👏
loved it

sikander😡tujhe tere iraade me kamyaab nahi hone denge😉

arjun remembering roshni😭😭

loved arjun lily's convo..dono ne ek dusre ka chehra nahi dekha😉

lily ko amensia he..[see the correct spelling😉]

if lily is roshni then arjun should have felt it in her eyes..her way of talking..her voice😕

well..nice going👍🏼

continu soon

thankx for pm

thanks 4 the correct spell😃

nhi dekha toh accha hai na wrana dono ko heart attack aajata waise toh nhi arjun toh shocked ho jata usse lgta woh sapana dekh rha hai

😲

usse shag hua tha but how's it possible uske saamane sik ne roshni ko mara tha pr every thing is possible in luv and war my new thought😉

thanks 4 liking my fiction😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
oh dats gr8 then definetly mai yeh story follow karun ge thanks meri confusion clear karne ke liye

anyways

awesome update
full of mistery nyc story
w8ng 4 next n thanx 4 pm

ur wait is over read the story and thanks 4 liking it

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Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome start...

Arjun's pain...😭😭😭

Lily is confusing...😕😕😕

Dr. Sneha's accident...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

i had continued u continue to comment😛 and thanks

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Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Very Interesting start. Update soon

thank u😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: rizwanaa
awesome update
Arjun n Lily's meet which turned into a friendly bond was nice
thanks for pm
cont soon

thanks 😊 yay i know it was very nice ab aapani story toh acchi hi lgi gi na

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: rizwanaa
awesome update
Arjun n Lily's meet which turned into a friendly bond was nice
thanks for pm
cont soon

thanks😊

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Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
Sik planning a bomb blast
Loved Arjun-Lily convo
great part
waiting for the next one
continue soon

thank u😊

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Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: farana786
HEY sweet shreu waise i am not i a fan of arni neither arakshi😡 i am fan of ariya😉 but i loved reading your this story. its different and beautifully written .and i hope to read more too.
do continue soon

aosum piece of work i must say 😊

arjun roshni ki yaad mei khoya tha 😭😭 and sakshi barged in and he got angry 😡

idhar lily ko sab kcuh yaad ata hai par uska pyar kaun hai wh yaad nahi 😭😭😕,shayad yeh roshni hai nah

amazingly written😊

thank u 4 appriectiating my work👏

lily ko kuch nhi yaad aaya she forget every person of his life😭

jab usse hosh aaya usse yeh bhi nhi pta woh kone se desh mein hai😲

thanks once again😊