Zinda hu tujh pein marr ke kaisa hai pyaar tera

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Posted: 11 years ago
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LOVE IS POWERFUL THEN SEPARATION/DEATH

The story starts frm Arjun's cabin he was missing her love roshni a lot sudden sakshi enters the room frm morning only he was very angry and very sad because at the of leaving the home he saw the calender.

After one month his anniversary is there total 1 year 6 months gone she left him alone

Sakshi-arjun, i know tum roshni ko bahut miss kr rhe ho but dard batane se kamm hota hai
Arjun angrily- kya jana chahati ho tum ki pehle we were so happy,ya fir yeh ki woh mujhe akela chod ke chali gyi,ya yeh ki ek pal mein sab kuch khatam ho gya kya janna chahati ho tum sakshi iam warning u age se kabhi bhi mere ghawon pein namak maat chirakana

Arjun relax himself and said polietely- sry sakshi u know n i am so short temper
sakshi - it's ok arjun waise bhi gussa nikalene se rahaat milti hai(she walks away)
then sam enters- hey buddy wats up!
Arjun- nothing get bore koi case hi nhi hai
sam- taab toh mere pass ek gud news hai ek case aaya hai hurry up we have to go to crime sceane

Before the day at yesterday's night 10:00 a girl walks in a doctor's cabin like crying

Girl- Dr. Sneha
Doc- lily wat happen y r crying 1st sit down
lily goes and sit and doc too sits beside her
doc- tell me
lily- why this happens with me kyu hamesha mere sath hi aisa hota hai

Doc-kya hoa

Lily-doc u know n ki I love a man a lot mujhe who jaan se bhi zyada pyaara hai usski baatein,uska care,uska love all comes in my dream pr problem is this ki nahi mujhe usska naam pta hai aur nahi uski shakal yaad hai.doc god mere sath aisa kyu krte hai

Doc-dekho lily I knoow tum usse bahut pyaar krti ho but agar itna hi toh fir tumhe yaad nhi pr who kabhi tumhe dhudhne kyu nhi aaya

Lily- god ne mujhse mere parents le liye, mujhse mera chilhood,mere acchi buri sare yaade hi chin le kyu aur shayad mera pyaar bhi

Doc- mere khiyaal se tumhara case bahut hi light hai agar tum kisi bhi chizz ya in saan ko dekh lo gyi jo tumhene pehle dekha ho toh tumhari memories aa jayen gi pr aai kyu nhi

Lily-I want to commit sucide

Doc- no ways lily tum aisa kuch nhi karongi kyuki jo log sucide krte hai who kayaar hote hai woh weak hote hai unke paas itni will power nhi hoti ki who log zindagi se lade and u r a strong girl

Lily-pr

Doc- pr wr kuch bhi nhi go to home directly ok

Lily- ok doc!

She left

*********************************************************************at the crime scence

Shree- sir yeh Dr. Sneha hai brain specilaist hai koi bhi problem mental ho ya injur usski

Aisha- yeh raasta usske ghar jata hai

Sam- pr yeh accident nhi lgta

Arjun- bilkul sahi kyuki accident hota toh tires pein oil nhi lga hota kisine jaan buch ke marne ki koshish ki hai

Aisha- who toh accha hoa usse sahi time pein hospital le gye wrana who marr hi jati

Arjun- shree, mujhe iski puri details chahiye family life,career,patients,frnds,records last time kise mili all records

Shree- ok

**************************************************************************

In conference room

Chotu- sir ek bahut bariinformation mili hai

Sam- kiya

chotu- sir sikander ki saare baatein puri toh nhi pr recording mili hai only voice hamara informer mara gya but usse pehle ussne saari information mail kr di

arjun- so kiska intazaar kr rhe ho chalu karo recording

Next update- Pg-3

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
awesome start dear👏
loved it
Arjun's pain
then arakshi convo👏
lily is a mystery character😉
dr.sneha dead🤢😲
sikander😡 ki info😲
waiting for next part
continu soon
Edited by Godly_Affection - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
Nice start
Interesting concept
Loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Awesome start
Intertesting concept
Loved it
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
Gr8 start... Cont soon !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
Awesome start... 😊
Thanks for pm
Con soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Awesome start
Loveit
Cont soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome n interesting start!!
Arjun's pain of loss was well portrayed
the girl's character is interesting n mysterious
hope she soon finds the missing pieces of her life
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome start
but dnt tell me ke lily riya or koe aur hai roshni hui 2 chale ga but or koe nai plz and thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

awesome start dear👏

loved it
Arjun's pain
then arakshi convo👏
lily is a mystery character😉
dr.sneha dead🤢😲
sikander😡 ki info😲
waiting for next part
continu soon

lily is a mystery chracter but 4 arjun toh i can't tell u now sikander toh kitoh mauth bakki hai dr.sneha mari nhi hai woh hospital main hai sikander marna chahta hai ussko
i will cont but u also cont reading

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