OS: Romeo and Juliet ~ Part 3: Pg 24 {Last part} - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Live-life

Aree cal two din pehle hi to post kiya tha ye!
itni jaldi next update!
Thoda patience my child 😉😆


mujhe phal meethe nahi honge to bhi chalenge...

ab aur intzar nahi hota...

update na
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008


mujhe phal meethe nahi honge to bhi chalenge...

ab aur intzar nahi hota...

update na

yaar tum bohut impatient ho pata hai!
pehle mujhe mera asli Romeo and Juliet assignment to complete larne do uske baad update karoongi
warna kal meri english etcher mera hello hi bye bye kar denge!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
lovely ..nice..
n shriza as always cute.haww..
writtng stle superb..
cont soon
n plz pm me next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: TINASINGHPS

lovely ..nice..

n shriza as always cute.haww..
writtng stle superb..
cont soon
n plz pm me next update

Thank you I am glad you liked it so much!
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I will pm you for sure!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
it's coming soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Hello Hello I am back with another update! God some of you are sooo impatient! ahem ahem you know who you are! 😆 So this one has Ariya...wohooo! and there is a dance sequence and the song chosen is one of my favorites! So without further delay I will leave you peeps to it! 😉 Enjoy!


OS: Romeo and Juliet ~ Part 2

Amidst drinking the Aquila shots I felt someone staring at my back and it felt weird as someone was seeing right through me. I tried to ignore it and enjoy the shots but it just kept making me feel uncomfortable so I decided to turn back and see who it is.

And I couldn't have been more surprised...it was him.

Now what was I supposed to do? I had succeeded in avoiding him for so long and now he is there again. Just how in the world are you supposed to avoid the most handsome man present in the party right now? Wearing that three-piece suit that too black just adds to his sexiness. Even wearing that mask I can tell that it is him.

Sigh

He just makes it harder and harder for me to get over him. I don't want to but I know if I tell him how I feel he will start hurting inside and I can't do that to him. Not after what he has lost. Not after he has gone through heartbreak. I want to tell him that I know how it feels. I know how it feels when you lose someone you love but I can't. I just can't.

I could feel my eyes getting wet beneath the mask and quickly turned away before he noticed. I wiped tears hurriedly as I saw Ayesha approaching.

"Riya...yahan aise khade khade kya kar rahi ho? Chalo, let's go dance. It's about to start."

"No Ayesha. I am not in the mood yaar. You go and enjoy with Rathore sir," I nudged her lightly.

"What do you mean enjoy? Huh?"

"By enjoy I mean have fun woman. Aise mauke baar baar nahi ata. Go!"

"Fine. But thoda apni dimple smile de de warna log sochenge ko to devdaas ban kar ghum rahi hai"

I laughed at that, "Ok meri ma! HERE you go," and I smiled wide, "Now go!!"

"That's like my girl" and she went away.

Suddenly it seemed like the crowd had increased where I was standing. Weird!

Oh stupid me I realized that I was standing in the middle of the dance floor. Wow Riya! So much for being invisible. As I was moving away I felt a hand grip my wrist. Ab ye kaun Besharam agaya I thought but as I turned to look at the owner of the hand I was left speechless.

It was him.

Oho Riya! Ab him him karna band kar. He has a name you know! Arjun.

Yes she was in love with the great ACP Arjun Suryakant Rawte. (Like we didn't already know that 😉😆)

It felt like everything had just frozen and time stood still as he ventured close to me and held my hand. He put his arms around my waist and my hands on his shoulders. It felt like a scene right out of a movie.

Riya filmy hona band kar. This is reality! Wakey wakey rise and shine darling!

Shutup! I know this is reality. I am just confused about why this is happening.

"Si...r...rrr...what are you doing?"

"Shhh Riya. We are in the middle of a dance floor so don't create any scene here."

That angered me! I create scenes! Look who's talking.

"Excuse me sir. I don't create scenes. I am not an actress neither am I a scriptwriter. So you better watch your words."

"Oh good God! Mein iss ladki ka kya karoon. Riya just keep your mouth shut for 5 mins will you?!"

Before I could say anything further the music started playing and I had to stop myself!

Halka Halka Sa, Gumaan Hai

Jaane Kya Mujhe, Hua Hai

Har Nazar, Dar Badar, Ajnabi..

Humko Bhi Yehi, Gila Hai

Jo Bhi Aaj Kal, Mila Hai

Har Kadam, Dum Badam, Ajnabi..

And we started moving...His eyes held me into an intense trance. He had so much effect on me that I couldn't look away!

Iss Taraf Jo Hai, Udaasi

Iss Taraf Bhi Hai, Zara Si

Dil Ki Raahon Ke Do Ajnabi

Anjaana Kehne Ko Hi Tha

Mera Tha Woh Jo Bhi Tha -- Anjaani

Hai Magar Nahi Ke Tu

Hai Yahin Kahin

And he lifted me up in the air and it felt like everything disappeared around and us. We were the only two in the room.

Jab Se Jaana Ke Ab Na Jaana Hai Phir Kabhi Bhi Tujhe

Chahaton Se Kinara Kar Liya

Jab Se Socha Ke Ab Na Sochenge Phir Kabhi Bhi Tumhe

Dil Ne Koi Bahana Kar Diya

And the funny part was the lines fit perfectly to what I was feeling. I couldn't help but dwell on that.

Ho Mere Tumhare Darmiyan Mein

Jo Baatein Hui Nahi Hain

Kabhi Dua Mein, Kabhi Zubaan Mein

Kyun Tumne Kahin Nahi Hain

And for a moment I could see the same turmoil inside his eyes as well. I didn't know if he felt what I felt but I saw it in his eyes.

Kehne Ko Toh Kya Nahin Hai

Dar Pe Har Khushi Khadi Hai

Phir Bhi Kyun Lag Rahi Hai Kami

Wasn't that true! I had every joy at my feet yet it felt as if something was amiss.

Anjaana Kehne Ko Hi Tha

Mera Tha Woh Jo Bhi Tha Anjaani

Hai Magar Nayi Ke Tu

Hai Yahin Kahin

He twirled me around and brought me close again.

Ae Mere Khuda,

Door Kya Ho Rahi Hai Subah

Mil Gayi Mujhe,

Mil Gayi Tujhe Wahan

Jeenay Ki Phir Wajah

Yup I had found my reason to live. Even if he didn't accept my love I could still survive just by looking at him. God! I love him so much!

Tu Jo Keh De Toh Manzilein

Mil Jaayein Yoon Aaj Phir Hume

Tere Mere Yeh Raaste

Lag Jaaye Yoon Aaj Phir Gale

Mil Bhi Tu Tere Phiraane

Daudti Hoon Uss Kinare

Hai Jahan Pe Mera Ab Jahan

If I could just run into his arms and stay there forever...I wouldn't ask for anything else because I would have gotten my whole life. I was snapped out of the trance as he did a final lift and twirled me again.

Anjaana Kehne Ko Hi Tha

Mera Tha Woh Jo Bhi Tha Anjaani

Hai Magar Nayi Ke Tu

Hai Yahin Kahin

Anjaana Kehne Ko Hi Tha

Mera Tha Woh Jo Bhi Tha Anjaani

Hai Magar Nayi Ke Tu

Hai Yahin Kahin

As the song ended we both were breathing heavily. And I realized how close we were. So close that even air couldn't pass through us. I didn't want this moment to end but as the audience burst into a loud applauds for all the dancers he let me go.

Surprisingly! I blushed...I Riya Mukherjee blushed in front of all those people! And I think he noticed too! Oh god! Kill me now!

I quickly ran away from there to the one savior spot I had in this party. The bar! I think I need more Aquila shots! Booze always helps even though this is fake but who cares. Let's pretend it's real today!

As I ordered Aquila shots I noticed Ayesha and Shreedevi approaching me again. Oh God! Did they see that too? Please tell me I am dreaming.

"Shree tujhe nahi lagta aaj barish hone wali hai?"

"Haan Ayesha mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai. Bahar to waise bhi tufaani hawai chal rahi hai aur yahan ka bhi kuch similar haal hai nahi?"

"Sahi kaha. I think aaj kuch kuch hota hai ka sequel ban hi jayega what do you think?"

"Hailaa! Sach mein...phir to hamein mufat mein dekhne ko mil jayega! But ek problem hai bina popcorn ke maza kahan ayega?"

I blushed harder! Oh God! I couldn't take this anymore.

"Shut up Shreedevi!"

"Mujhe kyun shutup keh rahi ho, I saw what happened on the dance floor Ri! And I have it recorded on my phone! Muhahaha" He was smiling his evil smile! That Shreedevi I tell you. Khabhi mauka nahi chodta mujhe tease karne ka!

"Shree mein tera khoon pee jaongi mujhe wo mobile de!"

"No!"

"Shree I said give!"

"No, No and No!" saying that he ran from there with the mobile on his hand.

Ayesha stood there giggling. "Ab tum kyun has rahi ho? Sach mein kisne ne sahi kaha hai Har ek friend kamina hota hai'"

Saying that I ran behind Shree as I heard Ayesha saying, "Good Luck!"

To be continued...

So how did you like it? 😉

Aur haan iss baar I want longer comments please! *puuppy face*

Do like it as well!

Love you peeps!

next part will be the last hopefully

Until laters! 😎

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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
heyee nabi🤗...cexy mamma😉
itna jaldi updated ...ur super fast girly😛
here comes dashing ..hot "Arjun suryakant rawte"😳
she recogines him even though he is in mask...Ehsaas i loved that one...bekarari she felt in presence of him...
loved the way she realised here pain in love with his "love just hurts more when u lose the love one in ur life"...nicely interconnected the pain hats off too u
riya & ayesha talk girls duo...lovely written haa
it was surprise he held her hand ...😳
loved here bit of nervousness😉 ...kaise naa nervous hongi her princes charming in front of here!!!
as usual khadoos in mood of fight😆..super cool attitude on right time *** cheers to u****
dance floor is on fire haa... i just love this song...thank u...thank u...fr this one
this song is mesmerizing one ...do dil ka baya ...hayeee...
the hottest jodi on dance floor ...
dance moves are soo passionate ..lifting an all😉... lyrics of the song aptly related their feelings . ...beautifully written i loved it to core😳...romantic haa..and hot
blush ..blush and all😆...
again Aquila shorts haaa...love trio conv ...yaaro ki yariyaan
leg pulling section nice haa😃...har ek friend kamina hota hai😆!! exactly!!!
let me see u r puppy face!!! u r looking nice😆
update soon !!!
long one too..greedy!!!!
🤗

Edited by re123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
awesome update..
nyc song
and the dance 😆
loved it
contd soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
sach kaha har ek friend kamina hota hai

jaise ki tu


itna achha likha ...and cliffhanger ki tarah adhura chod diya


haye...what a dreamy update...haye...ariya dance...i m ready to lost in ariyaland...


and cherry on cake is the fun moment of shree riya and ayesha...awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Res again!! Don't shoot me.


Unres!

Well hello again. Now that you have finally decided not to shoot me (At least I hope you've decided) I am here to drop in my useless reviews that probably will not make any sense. 😆

Part 1:

Well tbh, I loved the title of the OS in the first place. Moving on...Riya feeling his gaze was a marvellous way to start off. Then the shots, had me worried for a second because I thought she would end up getting drunk and doing something stupid but thank god that was only my imagination and that didn't happen.

Ahaan, Shree trying to coerce Riya into confessing her feelings for him. Was expected but still, their friendship is one in a million. Then her later dialogue about her life beginning and ending with him had me cooing while at the same time wanting to slap her. Uh uh.

Aww, loved how she is playing cupid for Liza and Shree by bribing the spotlight guy and forcing them to share a dance together. Romeo and Juliet indeed. 😆

Okay, not a big fan of Taylor Swift but I can totally see why you would choose this song. Seems to really go with the flow so kudos for the song pick. 👍🏼 Aw, she's happy that Shree and Liza have found each other. That's so sweet! Now after the Shree and Liza hug, I definitely saw Nabi's little input. Only you would ever say "chaching" and that had me smiling at my laptop screen.

The best way to end the first part with the most sweetest bond of friendship. Like I said, I've always admired their friendship and for some reason, that friendship reminded me of the friendship you and I share. 🤗 I wuv yooo! ❤️

Onwards ho!

Part 2:

Oho, so now someone is being ogled at by the hot-headed smoking sexy beast of a man, Arjun. Good point, how indeed are you supposed to ignore a handsome man in the party? Specially when that said man is the aforementioned smoking sexy cop Arjun Suryakant Rawte...Gutter mind, go away...ah, my rationality is back.

Lol, Riya and Ayesha's convo made me laugh. Ayesha trying to be subtle and innocent but failing miserably in front of Riya. Although I do have to say, Riya's thought "I know how it feels when you lose someone you love" was a bit cryptic and had me going "Hmm, kuchh toh chhut raha hai" 😆.

Well I was awaiting the dance, but I wasn't expecting them to end up on the dance floor like that. I was thinking Arjun would either drag her onto the dance floor or be forced into dancing with Riya by the undeniable Forces of Attraction 😆. But nonetheless, that was the best.

Another good choice in picking the song. Truly a wonderful one and the aftermath of the dance was even better! The tension between the two, the sizzling chemistry, the unrequited love (for now), and most importantly, the desire to stay in each other's arms.

Then came the teasing session which once again had me giggling. Shree and his techno savvy wit with recording the entire dance sequence. Now if only I can get my hands on that phone and watch it 😆

Then another glimpse of Nabi as Ayesha uttered the words "Har ek friend kamina hota hai" because if I'm not mistaken, I've heard that coming from you many a times.

❤️ 🤗❤️ 🤗❤️ 🤗❤️ 🤗


Edited by AWriterAtHeart - 11 years ago

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