ARIYA FF - KOSHISH - EK AASHA PART 8 PG 81 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oo! Thats the matter! She went missing in the mission!
Poor shree and chotu!
Good Arjun believes that she is safe! And flashback was sweet!
Loved the care of Jayantilal and Sumitra!
New case in Xavier clg! Cool! Update soon!
Well its good to read stories when u cant update your own! Hahahahahahaha!
Kuch toh achha hua exams ke chakkr mai!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb precap sounds interesting...wating for nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey GOLD
MIND BLOWING start 👏
RIYA missing 😲 every body missing her even ARJUN ,he want to thank her .😃
RIYA make him to eat the meetha and also received best wishes from her ARJUN SIR😳 sach hi kaha hein kisse ne AURAT KI QABILIAT PE KABHI SHAQ NAIN KARNA CHAHE YE 😳
SREE as CHARSI 🤣
GOLD ,i love that line so much where ARJUN said to SAM , kuch nahin ua hai hame bas use dhoondna hai" it touch my heart,😳update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Vampire-queen

Oo! Thats the matter! She went missing in the mission!
Poor shree and chotu!
Good Arjun believes that she is safe! And flashback was sweet!
Loved the care of Jayantilal and Sumitra!
New case in Xavier clg! Cool! Update soon!
Well its good to read stories when u cant update your own! Hahahahahahaha!
Kuch toh achha hua exams ke chakkr mai!

Vampu 🤣 wow really god
Glad u liked it
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 6jeslin

Superb precap sounds interesting...wating for nxt update

Thanks dear
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sdutta

hey GOLD

MIND BLOWING start 👏
RIYA missing 😲 every body missing her even ARJUN ,he want to thank her .😃
RIYA make him to eat the meetha and also received best wishes from her ARJUN SIR😳 sach hi kaha hein kisse ne AURAT KI QABILIAT PE KABHI SHAQ NAIN KARNA CHAHE YE 😳
SREE as CHARSI 🤣
GOLD ,i love that line so much where ARJUN said to SAM , kuch nahin ua hai hame bas use dhoondna hai" it touch my heart,😳update soon

Love u Suchita
More fun coming up
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 2 A

After a while they reached care taker house & he went back inside his house bidding arjun bye.

Arjun roamed for a while here & there went back to the daak ghar. It was near dawn when he fell asleep around 2:30 .Next morning, he wakeup by 6:30 he went to fresh up & care taker entered to check the house. Arjun came out n find out that care taker had entered n was waiting for him.

Arjun smiled n said "Are kaka Kaise hai aap?"

He said "theek hoon sahib aap kuch chai nashta leenge to main dhabe se keh ke mangwa deta hoon".

Arjun said "Nahin kaka main hi nikalta hoon gaadi leke Mumbai bhi jaana hai deer ho jaayegi" with that arjun moved towards the mechanic to check on his SUV.

Before he could reach there his phone buzzed & it was Sameer he picked up the call n said "Haan rathore kya baat hai?"

Sameer said "kuch nahin bas ye poochne ke liye ki tum aa gaye ho ya samay lagela?"

Arjun said "Rathod gaadi theek hone main yadi waqt lagega to main aaj aa jaaunga kal raat yahi ruk gaya tha kyuki koi transport nahin mila tha" .

sameer said "theek hai paunche ke bad call kar dena" ,Arjun disconnected the call after that.

He reached mechanic & checked with the SUV ,he said "Saab aadha ghante main tayyiyaar ho jaayegi aapki gaadi tab tak aap nashta kar leejiye"

Arjun nodded & went to dhaba nearby he sat saliently & ordered his tea.

After a while, when tea came he started to sip his tea slowly.

After a while when arjun had finished her tea he heard a loud scream from the mental hospital nearby he thought that there must be a patient creating a scene or something but after a while he saw some people running outside the village.

Arjun saw caretaker to running out he asked "kaka kya baat hai? Sab aise kyu bhaag rahe hai"

he said "Saab gaon main kuch loog ghus aaye hai aur loot paat kar rahe hai isliye hum yaha se nikal rahe the".

Arjun said "kahin jaane ki zarrorat nahin aap loog yahi rukiye aur local police station ko inform kijiye main unse nipatta hoon"

Care taker said "Par saab aap akele kaise?"

Arjun said "Mujhe kuch nahin hoga kaka bas aap inform kijiye" With that he clutched his gun & then moved towards the direction of that mental hospital.

He saw few men are harassing people & taking their belongings. Arjun in no time warned them not to do so otherwise they will be in deep trouble. They didn't listen to arjun at all & started to work again .

But this time, arjun didn't asked anything he started beating them black n blue & some of them when tried to use their gun Arjun too replied them in a good way.

After while police force arrived in the village & Arjun flashed his card saying "ETF ACP Arjun Rawte" they saluted him & arrested all the bullies who were creating nonsense in the village & torturing poor villagers.

Arjun asked to one of them "Aur kaun kaun hai tumhare saath yaha batao?" he stayed mum & arjun thrust his gun in his mouth n voiced out in anger"yadi apni zindigi pyari hai to batao warna tumhe yaha marne main mujhe time nahin lagega samjhe ya samjhaao" his eyes widen in fear & he said "Haan saab bata hoon hum chote moote daako hai hame pata chala tha ki yaha bada dimagi aspataal khula hai to hum yaha usi ko lootne aaye the hamare sardaar aur do saathi wahi hai".

Arjun slapped him hard on his face n ordered to take them away. After that in no time he rushed to the hospital where doctors as well as patients were in danger. He took few steps inside quietly clutching his gun tightly & moved forward.

After a while he saw at the cash counter 2 men are taking the cash & belongings of the hospital. He in no time fired n killed them right away.

After that only thing was to control the people there he came & said aap log dariye nahin main ACP Rawte hoon iske saath ek aur tha inka leader wo kahah hai?" They pointed towards the main room of Doctor karan Jain.

He went inside & saw that leader had took Doctor Karan jain on his gunpoint & was instructing him to take out all the cash & all his belongings too.

Doctor Karan jain was warning him not to do this as police will come any moment but their leader was not ready to listen at all. Cabin was aloof & sound proof too so arjun took a chance n entered the cabin & took him at his gun point & asked him to surrender as if he will not do that he will be dead here but in next fraction of second he hold the neck of doctor jain & asked Arjun to go otherwise he will kill Dr Jain.

Arjun didnt react & started lowering his gun towards his legs but that man was busy threatening Arjun to leave the hospital.

Arjun in next fraction of second shot a bullet on his leg, he groaned in pain & Dr Jain went away from his hold & before he could react Arjun shot him directly at his head.

Dr Jain was just stunned for a while Arjun said "Dr Jain relax ACP Rawte ETF" .

Dr jain Sighed in relief & slumped down on his chair. After a while he said "Thanks ACP Rawte aapne hame bacha liya warna ye loog to"" cutting him short Arjun replied "Dr Jain that's my duty aur yadi ye loog itna pareshaan karte hai to appne pehle shikayat kyu nahin ki?"

Dr jain said "Haan kithi par kuch politicians unhe support karte hai agle din wo phir bahar hote hai".

Arjun nodded & said "ab nahin karenge main ye case khud commissioner sir se baat karonga well aapne is choti jagah main bada accha hospital banaya hai?"

Dr jan said "Haan maine ye jagah is liye chuni ki ye sheher ki bheed se door hai aur yaha mental patients ko aaram aur sukun milta hai mere chaar saathi yaha aur hai jo mental patients ke saath normal mareez bhi dekhte hai aur ab aas pass ke gaon waale bhi yahi aate hai check up ke liye"

Arjun smiled & said "aap bahut accha kaam kar rahe hai Dr jain Wish u all the best main chalta hoon "

Dr jain said "Thanks a lot Arjun ji mujhe aur is hospital ko bachane ke liye par aap yaha kaise ?"

Arjun said "wo hum ek case ke silsile mai yaha aye the aur humari SUV kharaab ho gayi thi aur mujhe rukna pada bas thodi deer main tayyiyaar ho jaayegi aur main vaapis nikal jaaunga"

Dr jain said "Aapko bura na lage to please jab tak aap ki SUV theek nahin ho jaati aap yahi wait kar leejiye mere cabin main" Arjun thanked him & call the police inside the hospital to take over all the things.

Police came & Doctor jain got busy in clearing all the formalities & Arjun too was busy in helping Dr. Jain in clearing all formalities.

Later After 15 minutes all formalities were done & Arjun was ready to leave for Mumbai.

As soon as he started to move out of the corridor of the hospital he crashed with a girl who was running behind another person to catch him as they were playing hide & seek.

Arjun when crashed into this girl he felt that touch was of a known person he turned to see the face and was shocked to see that person in the hospital that was none other than Riya Mukherjee .

He was just stunned for a moment to react n after few steps she bumped into Dr Jain & he said "Anamika tum yaha aise kyu bhaag rahi hoo chot lag jaayegi"

She replied in a kid type voice "Sorry doctor bhaiyaa wo main hide & seek khel rahi thi to chupne ke liye bhaag rahi thi main to peeche jo hai unse bhi takra gayi " & starts laughing.

Dr Jain said "Accha to phir tumhe unhe bhi sorry kehna chahiye na chalo"

Riya went to arjun flashed him a smile & said " I am Sorry wo kya hai na main hide & seek khel rahi is liye bhgte hue takra gayi " with that she moved back to her room leaving stunned arjun behind.




SCROLL DOWN FOR PART 2 B 😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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PART 2 B

Arjun was standing like a dumbstruck statue there he was just frozen to see riya like this.

ARJUN'S POV :

Riya was full of life she was loved by everyone most pampered of all would be the right word Shree & chotu use to have a blast with her she was their source of life, partner in crime & their best friend sameer always use to treat her as small kid since she joined as she was new to this field work & sameer was her first chief & she too respected him as her elder & to him she was a mystery her antics, her static figures, her hygiene freakiness all use to irritate him big time but he had to admit that she had a special place in his heart due to her sweet & simple nature & a kind of respect & trust that she showed on him he had always admired her for her caring nature, her full of life attitude & her strong & determined inner soul & seeing her in this condition was very painful for him.

Dr Jains voice broke his trance when he said "I am sorry Arjun ji wo ladki meri patient hai wo apni saari yaaddasht aur apna mansik santulan kho chuki hai ye mujhe 7 mahine pehle mili thi jab main yaha aa raha tha"

Arjun in a spontaneous reply said "Riya Aapko kaise mili Doctor? Aur uski aisi haalat kaise ho gayi?"

Dr jain was bit stunned to hear this question n said "Aap ise jaante hai Arjun ji?"

Arjun said in a broken voice "Haan ye meri colleague hai Riya mukherjee ye ETF ki officer hai ek saal pehle ye undercover mission pe gayi thi iske accident ki khabar mili thi hame par ye aise-" & his words trailed off after that.

Dr jain sensed this & took Arjun to his cabin.

He said to Arjun "Arjun ji jab ye mujhe mili thi to mujhe iska naam bhi nahin pata tha is liye hum ise anamika keh kar bulate the ye bahut zakhmi haalat main hame goa ke paas mili thi zakhmi halath main mujhe ye nahin pata tha ye kaun hai kyuki main yaha ke hospital main shift kar raha tha main isse yaha le aaya aur iska illaj shuru kiya shuru shuru main isne ek shabd nahin kaha par dheere dheere ye thoda react karna shuru kiya phir sabse bahut jald ghul mil gayi par abhi bhi uska dil dimaag 10 saal ke bachhe jitna ho gaya hai uska maansik santulan aur uski yaadasht sab us accident ke saath chali gayi kyuki uske sir per gehri chot lagi thi uska well wisher hone ke naate main sirf dua kar sakta hoon ki wo jaldi theek ho par doctor hone ke naate main janta hoon ki aisa hona ek chamatkaar hoga par jis haalat main ye mujhe mili thi us haalat main ye aaj zinda hai yahi bahout hai aur main koshish kar raha hoon ki riya ka best treatment hoo"

Arjun said "Thanks Doctor jain par kya main riya ko saath le jaa sakta hoon? Main yaha use aise nahin chod sakta"

Dr jain with surprise said "Arjun ji main aapke jazbaat ki kadra karta hoon aur samajh sakta hoon ki aap kya feel kar rahe hai par Riya ka case bahut alag hai aur complicated bhi use sambhaalna aasan nahin hoga aur aap ye baat samjhne ki koshish keejiye ki aap uske liye abhi ajnabi hai wo aise kaise --?"

Cutting him short Arjun said "Dr Jain main bhi samajh raha hoon aap kya kehna chah rahe hai par Mumbai main illaj main aasani hogi r saari facilities bhi hoongi aur hamari poori team hogi riya ki dekhbhaal ke liye" .

Dr jain sighed in defeat & said "Main samajh sakta hoon par aapko sabse pehle main ye bata doon ki riya ko bahut pyar aur care ki zarrorat hai waise hi jaise ek choote bacche ko hoti hai uski zidd uska mood sab samajhna hooga aur use waise hi deal bhi karna hoga yadi riya khud raazi hai to app use le jaa sakte hai chaliye aap usse mil leejiye" with that Arjun n Dr Jain went to riyas room.

Riya was sitting like carefree kid playing with a stuff toy & enjoying herself arjun entered the room & looked at her with pain in her eyes.

Riya saw arjun looking at her she said "aap yaha maine to appko sorry bol diya thana aap kya ab meri doll lene aaye hoo?"

Arjun said "Nahin mera koi friend nahin hai main tumse friendship karne aaya hoon tum meri friend banoogi?" riya looked at him with questioning & thoughtful gaze

After a while said with a smile "OK Par main aapka naam nahin jaanti friendship kaise karroongi?"

Arjun said "Mera naam Arjun hai aur tumhara?"

riya replied "Anamika mere saare dost mujhe annu kehte hai accha aapka koi chota naam nahin hai?"

Arjun said "Chota naam"

Riya said "Haan jaise mera naam anamika hai aur sab mujhe annu kehte hai waise aapka bhi koi chota naam hoga na kyuki friends to ek sure ko chote naam se bulate hai"

Arjun said with a smile "par mera naam to Arjun hi hai"

Riya thought for a while & said Koi baat nahin aapka choota naam nahin hai na to main rakh deti hoon main aapko Ajju bulaungi theek hai na "

Arjun smiled n said "Haan theek hai tum mujhe ajju hi bulana par tumhe pata hai tumhara naam to riya hai jab tum tumhare doctor bhayyiya ke pass aayi thi tab kisi ko maaloom nahin tha kitum kaun hoo isliye unhone tumhara naam anamika rakh diya par main tumhe pehle se jaanta hoon to mujhe tumhara naam pata hai"

Riya said with curiosity"Accha tumhe sab pata hai mere baare main? Haan mujhe bahut chot lagi thi" pointing a deep cuts on her fore head & arms "Yaahan aur yaahah bhi tab doctor bhayiya ne mujhe theek kiya tha aur ab main ek dum theek hoon"

Arjun said "haan tabhi to main tumhe lene aaya hoon na yaha se hum mere saath chalogi na Mumbai"

Riya excitedly says "Haan main chaloongi" then all of a sudden brcomes sad & says "par ajju yaha mere bahut saare friends hai yadi mail yaha se chali gayi to sab mujhe miss karrenge na ? aur main bhi unhe bahut miss karrongi" & starts crying

. Arjun said "Are tum roo kyu rahi hoo mumbai main tumhare bahut saare friend's hai aur main sabko jaanta hoon aur yadi tum apne doctor bhayiiya ko ya in friends ko miss karogi to tum phone karke unse baat kar lena ya phir hum chutti main yaha aa jaayenge thekk hai na chalo ab rona band karo"

Riya smiled at arjun n said in an questioning tone "ajju tum sachi keh rahe hoo?" Arjun nodded n said Haan bilkul sach"

riya smiled with joy & hugged arjun tightly saying "Thankyou ajju tum to bahut smart hoo tumne sach main mere saari problem solve kardi"

Arjun smiled n said "Accha to fir jaldi se packing kar loo chalna hai naa saath main"

Riya said sweetly "Par main apne happy n tiger ko bhi saath le jaau" pointing to 2 stuff toys on her bed arjun nodded n yes n riya said pulling his cheeks "Thanks ajju tum bahut sweet hoo"

Riya got busy in keeping her stuff & Arjun went to Dr jain to complete the formalities.

Dr jain said "Main jaanta hoon arjun ji aap riya ka khayaal rakenge par as a doctor keh raha hoon riya ki medicines and therapies main koi laparwai naa hoo aap use yaha laate rahiyega & one thing more use koi sadma na lage is baat ka dhyaan rahe warna uski halat aur kharaab ho jaayegi "

Arjun nodded n riya entered n said "Ajju main ready hoon chale"

Arjun took riya & marched towards the SUV which was prepared now & they started their journey back to Mumbai.





P-RECAP : How will every one react to see Riya like this & will Arjun will be able to handle this Riya & much more 😊


So how was it guys please drop in ur comments as I write for u guys so please do let me know all ur bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love u all

EDIT CREDIT : Pravalika 😊 Good work dear 😃

Regards Goldie


Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Yipeee
I am first again
Stalking ka nateeja😉
🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
Awesome update
loved it
So finally Arjun found Riya
Poor Riya
She lost her mental stability and also her memory
Well loved this new Riya
She was too cute
Loved Ariya convo
Ajju 😆😆 nice name
Waiting for Team's reaction
Continue soon
Edited by skrafty - 11 years ago
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Wow
Superb update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

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