KeHta hai Dil ........( ETF ) ... Antham.. part 7 on page 20 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Wow awsm story just read both chaps
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Awwsssmmm part
Loved it
Suppperbbb...
Feeling sad for Lipika...
was that guy Gautam???
Cont sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Awesome update
loved it
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
awesome one😊
ayesha feels jealous😉
con soon thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
awsome work...👏👏
but want some more arakshi...only if u want ...
otherwise no problem ...
is that guy is sam's bro????
con. soon...😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Awesome update...
Annu is blamed that she killed Lipika...😲😲😲
That inspector..😡😡😡
Sam as haddi between Arakshi...😆😆😆
Aisha jealous of Annu & Sakshi jealous of Naina...😆😆😆
I guess that man is Sam's informer...
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What a update
awesome kis ne usko mara yeh kisi ko ni pata n thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
fantastic,👏
amazing update.
cont soon 😊
Edited by tani.m - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
hey cool yaar ...😳👏... like it continue soon ..😉🤗... gautham sharma i like him ... 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Thank u so much for ur kind response and precious comments ... love u all ... ur response make me happy ... new part ...


Part 3 ...
sam : gautham yaha aao ... shree naina aur annu ko le jao ... hum aate hai ...
annu : lekin yahi tha wo ... sir ... mene isski ko dekhaa thaa ...
sam : me tumhari baat maan raha hu ... plzzz clam down ... i will talk to u ...
sam : gautham tum mere cabin me jao ... baki sab ... move ... aisha tum annu ke pass ruko ...
arjun : ye sab ? ...
sam : pahale hume unn gals ka statement lenaa hai ... fir baat karte hai ...
arjun : hummm ... chalo ...
sam aur arjun ( baki sab gals ka statement lete hai ... aisha annu ke sath hai sakshi aur shree ... sari statement me imp chije point karte hai ...ye sab hone ke baad )
sam : shree annu aur naina ko mere cabin me lao ...
shree: yes sir ...
gautham ... sam ke cabin me hai ...
sab waha jaate hai ...
annu : sir ye hi wo admi thaa jissko mene dekhaa thaa jisne mera piccha kiya ... aur issi ne mara hoga..
sam ; listen ye tumari friend ka murder nahi kar sakata kyoki uss time ye mere sath thaa ...
annu shocked ...
annu : matlab aap inko janate ho ...
sam : haaa ye mera bhai hai ...
annu : lekin issne meraaa picccha kiyaaa ... me jhuth nahi bol rahi hu ...
sam ; issne tumara piccha kiyaa ... kyoki ...
gautham : kyoki me tumse pyaar karata hu ...
shree cough ... arjun sakshi aisha ka muh khula reh jata hai ... sam blank face ... annu aur naina shocked ...
arjun : dimag kharab ho gaya he tumhara ... tumhe pata he ye ladki kon hai ...
gauti ; haa ye student hai aur .. aur girls hostel me rahati hai ...
aisha ; tumhe pata he iss par khoon ka ilzaam hai ...
gauti ; so what i still love her ...
arjun: tumhe pata he tum kyaa bol rahe ho ?bina kisi ko jaane usse pyaar ?
gauti : haa to me milke baat karne wala thaa ...
sakshi : wowww really sweet naa ...
sam gur kar dekhta hai ...
sam ; gauti tum galat samjh rahe ho ye sirf attraction he pyaar nahi ...
gauti : aur ye tumhe kaise pata chala ?
annu : bakwasss band karo tum ... tumhi ne khoon kiyaa he ... tum hi hamara piccha kr rhe the pichle kai dino se...
gauti: me manata hu ... ki tumhara picha karta tha but .. mene koi khoon nahi kiya hai ... aur agar mene khoon kiya hota to tumhe nahi fasata ...
annu speechless ...
sam : enough ... dekh gautham ... cut by gautham
gauti : mujhe pyaar sikhaa rahe ho sam ...
sam no reply ...
arjun: tum isska piccha karna kab se shuru kiyaa ...?
gauti : woo jis din me aaya thaa uske baad se ...
arjun : hummm matlab ... lekin annu tumne kaha tha tumne report likhwayi hai ?
annu : haaa lekin ... wo to pahale ki baat hai ...
arjun ; shree tumne pata kiyaa ?
shree; sir woo ...
arjun ; shree ?
shree: sir wo inspector ne kaha tha inhone aur lipika ne jakar complaint to karwayi thi lekin ussi din sham ko lipika ne complaint ye keh kar wapas le li ki usko aur annu ko koi misunderstanding huyi hai ...
arjun : what ? ...
annu : lekin wo aisa kyo karegi ?
sam : jarur kuch gadbad he ... chotu aaya shree ?
shree : no sir ...
sam : aisha annu aur naina ko lekar jao ...
naina ; kya me kuch der ke jaa sakati hu hostel ?
sam ; hummm thik he ... pr annu ki bail nhi huyi hai to hum use tumhare sath nhi bhej skte
Naina chali jati hai
sam ; gautham tum bhi jao ab ...
gauti : waise annu ki bail kon karwaa raha hai ? uske parents ?
sam : nahi uske parents ki death ho chuki he ...
gauti : okk ...
gautham leave ...
tabhi chotu enter karta hai ...
chotu : sir sir ... wo ...
sam ; kyaa hua ? chotu ...
chotu : sir wo lipika lipika nahi hai ...
sam ; kya matlab ?
chotu : matlab lipika ne fake name aur id prove use kiyaa ...
shree: yes sir ... mujhe wo id card me ... kuch gadbad lagi to mene chotu se driving license ko RTO me check karwane ke liye kaha ...
chotu ; mene RTO se pata kiya he ... ye lisence to LIPIka ka he lekin ye ladki lipika nahi he ...
arjun ; saaf saaf bolo ...
chotu ; ye dekhiye sir real lipika ka naam aur photo ...
everyone shocked again ...
sam : matlab jo ladki maari hai wo lipika nahi hai ... to real lipika ne compliant kyo nahi ki ...
arjun ; real lipika ko bulao ...
chotu yes sir ...
...
ik ladki ETF me enter karati hai ...
shree : ji aap kon ?
gal : mai lipika rao ... mujhe yaha bulaya thaa ...
shree ; ohhh haa ... aap ayiye ...
shree sam ko bolta hai ...
sam : madam aap lipika rao ab tak kaha thi aap ?
gal ; jo actually me out of india gayi thi ... me kal raat hi wapas aayi hu ...
sam : aapka driving license gum hai ye pata he aapko ?
gal : haaa wo jis din mujhe janaa tha uss din ghum ho gaya thaa ...
sam ; to aapne police me complement nahi likhwayi ?
gal : ji linsece hi to tha ... aur mujhe waise bhi out of india jana thaa to kya fark padha ?
sam ; dammm it tumhare lisence ka kisi ne misuse kiya hai ...
gal : kyaaa ? ...
arjun : aapka license kaha gum hua kuch pata he ?
gal ; ji ... actually me naa airport ki taraf jaa rahi thi ... jo ik ladki ne mujhse lift mangi ... mene usski help ki usne bataya ki wo model hai ... aur fir woo utr gayi ... jab usske baad me ... airport pahucchi to mera purse gadi me nahi thaa ...

arjun ; kyaa aapne uss ladki ko bataya tha ki aap out of india jaa rahi hai ?

gal : haaa hamari thodi bhaut casually baat huyi thi.. apana naam aur thodi bahut formally baatein btai thi... mene to usko card bhi diya tha apana ... kaffi achhi ladki thi woo ...
arjun ussko pic dihata hai .. kya yahi thi ?
gal ; haaa lekin ye to ...
arjun : maar chuki hai ...
sam : haaa usss acchi ladki ne aapki identity chura li ..aur usska khoon ho gaya hai ... jayiye aap ...
gal : sorry ...
gal left ...
arjun : matlab wo ladki apani identity chupa ke reh rahi thi ...
sam ; right ... lekin kyoo ?
arjun : shree lipika ka bag laaye ho naa tum...
shree ; yes sir ... baki saman bhi ...
arjun : lekar aao ...
sab conference room me ...aisha aur baki sab saman ... check kar rahte hai ...
aisha ; ye dekhiye sir ... itne saare paise ..
sakshi : aur ye bottle mili hai ...
lizaa ; dikhana ... sir mujhe issko lab me check karna padegaa ...
arjun : lizaa postmortem report me kya aaya ?
liza ;sir iss ladki ko ..kisi ne bohot buri tarah maaraa he ...aur marne se pahale issne khood ko bacchane ki koshish bhi ki lekin kissi ne isska muh par hathh rakha tha issiliye chillaa nahi saki ...
sam : hummm thik hai ...
lizaa ; sir aur ik baat ... iss ladki ki body par kuch purane nishaan bhi hai jaise kisi ne issko maara pita ho ...
sam ; hummm thik hai ... tum iss bottle ka analysis karo .
liza : ok sir ...
..
...
aisha .. sakshi ... shree and chotu ...
sakshi ; its so bold naa gautham ne kaha sabke samne ki wo annu se pyaar karta hai ...
shree; rathore sir ka bhai he to daring to hoga hi ...
aisha ; huh itnai daring kabhi sam ne bhi nahi dikhaii ...
sakshi ; chill yaar ...aisha
chotu : haa lekin annu ko bhi to mannan chahiye naa ...
aisha : i hope wo maan jaye aur haa bol de ...
shree : tumhe itani jaldi kyo he ...
sakshi ; areee shree ... agar wo gautham ke sath ho gayi to sam ka piccha chod degi naa ...wink
chotu and shoree : ohhh aisa ...
...
sam ; yaar ye gauthm ne hadh kar di ... sabke samne ... mujhe laga thaa ye serious nahi he ...
arjun : serious to wo hai ... lekin manana padega tere jaisa darpok nahi he ..
sam : arjun kya yaar ...
...
knock on door ...
sam : come in
liza ; sir me aapko kuch batana chahati hu ...
sam : bolo
liza : sir wo drugs to bag se mila wo hallucination drug hai ...
sam : what ?
liza ; yess sir ... isske baad person ko ... ajeeb ajeeb chijo ka dikhayi denaa ... yaa kabhi kabhi confusion bhi ho ta hai ...
sam ; lipika ye drug leti thi ?
liza : no sir uski body me koi drug nahi thaa ...
sam ; to fir ye ?
liza : sir me annu ka blood test karu ?
sam : okk ...
liza left ...
naina ETF me enter karati he ... usske piche pcche gautham bhi ...
naina ;wo mujhe annu se milnaa hai ...
shree ; ok ik min me pucchta hu ...
arjun sam ke cabin se bahar niklta hai ...
arjun naina ki side jaata hai ...
naina ; wo mujhe annu se milna hai ...
arjun : okk ...shree
shree nodes ...
naina ka pair fir se kisi chij me atakta he fir arjun ke upar ...
arjun ; angry ; dekh ke chala karo ..
naina bina kuch bole shree ke sath ...
naina to annu ..
naina ;sorry annu me tumhari bail nahi karwaa saki shayad aaj raat ko tumhe yahi rukna padegaa .
annu ; koi baat nahi ... tumne koshish to ki naaa ...
naina ; haa me bhi tere sath yahi rukungi ruko me permission lekar aati hu rathore sir se ...
gautham ; usski koi jarurat nahi ... annu ki bail ho gayi hai ... saare papers mene sam ko de diye hai ...
naina ; lekin mene bhi try kiya thaa .. pouting .. little angry with gautham ..
gautham : tum dono ko hostel chhod deta hau ...
annu ; lekin ...
sam enter ... : tum gautham ke sath chali jao ... ye tum dono ko chod dega .. aur haa apana khayal rakhnaa ...
annu : thik hai ...
annu naina and gautham left ...
annu to gautham : thank you... gautham noded
parking ..gautham suv ...
naina jaan bujh kar aage baithti hai ... gautham smiles ... annu bhi smiles...
gautham mirror adjust karta hai ... annu aur gautham mirror ke through eye lock ..
naina : tum aage dekh kar gadi chalao ...
gautham : hummm ...annu tum thik ho ?
naina : haa wo thik hai ... aur agar nahi hogi to mujhe batayegi tumhe nai . samjhe tum ...
annu : naina ... tum bhi naa .. i m fine sir ..
gautham : ji mera naam gautham hai ... dont call me sir ...
annu : hummm ... gautham me thik hu bas thodi si weakness hai ..
naina ; weakness hai to hostel jakar dinner kar lenge ...
gautham ; if u dont mind ... aaj ka dinner meri taraf se ?
annu : nooo thanku ...
naina ; ok thik hai ... ( in mind ab dekho kaise paise kharcha karwati hu tumhare )
annu ; lekin naina ..
naina ; aree yaar hostel ka khana kon khayega ... ye to kisi acche wale restaurant me le jaayenge hainaa ?
gautham : sure ...
annu : lekin ...
naina : no lekin ...
annu ; accha meri maa ... .
Naina :tab tak ik kaam kar ye chocolates le ... i know tujhe chocolates psnd hai...teri drawers se chocolates layi hu...ye le kha le...(naina annu ko chocolates deti hai...aur annu kha leti hai)
... kuch minute ke baad ...
annu ; ahaan .. gautham i m not feeling well ... ahaann ...
naina : kyaa huaa ? annu ...
suv stop ...
naina get down ...
naina ; ye to behossh ho gayi hai ...
gautham aur naina ... annu ko hospital me admit karnte hai ...
naina crying ...
gautham : dont cry she will be fine ...
gautham ETF ko inform karta hai ..

so howzzz it ... agar pasand aaye to like aur comment jarur karnaaa ... errors ke liye maafi ... silent readers (tum log maat sudharna) 😆 should i continue this ? let me know ... bbye tc

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